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 Translator: NekoHime
 Editor: Tester
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 Previously
 
 He met Erika at Kuromorimine Academy when he was learning about maintenance.
 He then met Erika again in university. They started going out and they got married.
-He lives a fulfilling life every day as the head of the family.
+He lives a fulfilling, everyday life as the man of the family.
 After she gave birth, Erika was recuperating at home as she waited
 for him to return home hastily from his business trip.
-The Nishizumi sisters who are active in international competitions dropped by
+The Nishizumi sisters, who are active in international competitions, dropped by
 and they all had dinner together.
-To Erika who entered university to pursue Sensha-Dō,
+To Erika, who entered university to pursue Sensha-Dō,
-the time she spent with the Nishizumi sisters is special.
+the time she spent with the Nishizumi sisters was special.
-Seeing Erika in that condition, her husband who is deeply in love with her couldn't
+Seeing Erika in that condition, her husband, who is deeply in love with her, couldn't
 hold his libido back anymore since he had been restraining himself during her pregnancy.
 He talked Erika into having sex right beside the sleeping Nishizumi sisters,
 but Maho was woken up without being noticed by them as they made love.
 A certain change has occurred after that day...
 
 1. What took you so long? // You said you'd come right after parking the car in the garage, didn't you?
-2. So I'm the one responsible for parking the car into the garage, huh? // Is everyone here already?
+2. So I'm the one responsible for parking the car in the garage, huh? // Is everyone here already?
-3. People under 18 are prohibited from buying or reading this book. Posting and copying without permission are prohibited.
+3. People under 18 are prohibited from buying or reading this book. Posting and copying without permission is prohibited.
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 (Note to ED: No need to clean this one. Just typeset the English lyric below the original lyric. I think it looks better this way.)
-Back at home, there lives a little maiden
+Back at home there lives a little maiden,
 and she's called Erika.
 That girl is my faithful little darling
 and my joy, Erika!
 When the heather blooms in a reddish-purple,
 I sing her this song in greeting.
 On the heath, there blooms a little flower
 and she's called Erika.
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 1. Haah...
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 1. Sign: Caution
 2. Haah x2
 3. BL: Aaah...
 4. BL: Good morning, Senpai!
 5. BL: Kyah! ♥ It's Maho-senpai in the flesh...♥
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 1. Squeak
 2. Phew...
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 1. Good job on the report.
 2. Speaking of which...
 3. How would you like to reply to that previous matter?
 4. ......
 5. It's fine if you're not especially interested. // I'll just let them know that you'd like to focus on being an international competitor from now on.
 6. Good job. You may leave now.
 7. Yes...
 8. Family History 釣書
 9. ......
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 1. Aaaaaaaaah~
 2. Haah...
 3. Aaah~ // Let's just get a simple meal to eat, I guess?
 4. BL: She's still not answering the phone, after all.
 5. Haah x2
 6. Huh?
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 1. You're Maho-san, aren't you?
 2. What are you doing here on such a hot day?
 3. BL: Good afternoon.
 4. I see. So you're in the middle of a walk, huh?
 5. By the way, that child...
 6. doesn't seem to be doing well...
 7. Heh x2
 8. Seems like it needs a little break...
 9. ...
 10. Since you came all the way here, how about you come in and take a break too, Maho-san?
 11. BL: You're sweating bullets.
 12. Th-That's...
 13. Don't be shy. The head of the family gave us this house, to begin with.
 14. Alright...
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 1. They're already warning people about the high temperature outside, but it seems like you didn't know, huh?
 2. Aaah... Yeah.
-3. You shouldn't do any outdoor activities during a day like this...
+3. You shouldn't do any outdoor activities on a day like this...
 4. Speaking of which, have you eaten lunch yet?
 5. No. I haven't.
 6. I was just thinking about eating out. // Would you like to have lunch together?
 7. Is that alright...?
 8. Of course. // I don't like to eat by myself so this is perfect~
 9. Is there anything you would like to eat?
 10. I'm fine with anything...
 11. Since it's so hot today, let's eat something cool~
 12. Rip
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 1. Have you contacted Erika?
 2. Ah... No... Well... // She hasn't answered the phone.
 3. Even when we see each other at the dojo, her eyes tell me "Don't talk to me"...
 4. Have you tried to find her at the Itsumi household?
 5. No. Because... // Erika's Nee-san is scary too...
 6. I see... Since it's the most vital period for Erika right now, she's probably recuperating her body at her parents' home while she focuses on her studies.
 7. BL: She'd lose face if she kept making others around her concerned.
 8. Background bubble: You're about to cum when I thrust it upward like this, right?
 9. Background bubble: It's fine to be a little more honest, Erika.
 10. I already told her that I'll be careful next time, but... // when did things become like this...?
 11. Oh, that, huh...?
 12. Yes?
 13. N-No... It's nothing!
 14. Anyway, it might be inappropriate to say this now, // but congrats on the second baby.
 15. Th-Thank you so much.
 16. You two should make up asap for your children's sake.
 17. Yeah... You're right.
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 1. We got plenty of rest thanks to you.
 2. The meal was really delicious too.
 3. Don't worry. It's not a big deal. // I usually have lunch at home. Feel free to drop by and have lunch together from time to time.
 4. Then... I'll take you up on your offer.
 5. Yes! // Please do, Commander.
 6. BL: Please, come in.
 7. BL: Uwaaah
 8. BL: Maho
 9. *TL Note: A thermal flask is called "Mahobin" in Japanese. (Maybe put this in the bottom right corner)
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 1. Thank you for the meal.
 2. Lunch was superbly delicious today as well.
 3. No. Don't be absurd... You're complimenting me too much.
 4. Let me help too.
 5. No. You don't have to. It's fine. // Please sit down~
 6. Making meals is worth the effort since you always enjoy them so much. // There's no way I'd make this much if I was eating alone.
 7. BL: You're also paying for the ingredients.
 8. How about Erika? When she was staying here.
 9. Erika is already a picky eater to begin with... // So making meals that she likes has always been difficult. // Then she was affected by her morning sickness. // I had to consider the nutritional value, but she kept complaining about how she didn't want to eat this or that...
 10. I thought her morning sickness was starting to get to me too. //  It was really tough~
 11. BL: ......
 12. BL: Nishizumi~ x2
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 1. Nishizumi!!
 2. Hello~ Nishizumi~ Are you listening?
 3. Jeez! // You haven't been listening to me, right!? // Who were you thinking of?
 4. Ignoring Anchovy-sama like that...
 5. We were talking about what a rough time Mika had the other day, right...?
 6. ......
 7. Kuuh! Forget it!
 8. ......
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 1. More importantly, let's talk about you.
 2. You've been making this weird expression for a while now~
 3. [red]Don't tell me[/r] [white]that you've been[/w] [green]seeing a guy[/g]?
 4. For real!!?
 5. Is he handsome?
 6. Who is he? Is he someone I know!?
 7. Is he good at cooking!?
 8. W-We're not in that kind of...
 9. Heeh~ That Nishizumu is actually...
 10. Anyway, do your best! I don't know who you're seeing,
 11. but love and romance are always wonderful!
 12. Heeh~ // You're the one who should start seeing someone, Nee-san.
 13. BL: It's nice of you to come here all the time, but...
 14. Shut up! Shouldn't the cook stay in the kitchen!?
-15. So, Nishizumi... // Don't tell me you've been wearing those kinds of clothes for your dates, are you?
+15. So, Nishizumi... // Don't tell me you've been wearing those kinds of clothes for your dates, have you?
 16. BL: That Nishizumi is making that kind of expression...
 17. BL: Suuuuck...
 18. ......
 19. Kuuh! I've had enough!
 20. I know! // Let's head to our shop! // I'll personally choose some clothes for you!
 21. BL: Nice! Let's call this Operation Macaroni, shall we~!?
 22. ......
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-1. Huh~!? It's already this late so who'd come here?
+1. Huh~!? It's already this late, so who'd come here?
 2. BL: Is Erika back!?
 3. Yes~ Coming~
 4. Eh...!? Maho-san...?
 5. ......
 6. Maho-san... Why are you here this late...?
 7. I happen to have a good bottle of wine...
 8. I want to return the favor for the meals you've made for me... // Is that alright...?
 9. O-Of course! Please, come in!
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 1. BL: Sorry for the long wait~
 2. I'm the one who should be sorry for bothering you this late in the evening.
-3. Not at all. I like to drink with someone from time to time as well. // It was very good of you to come.
+3. Not at all. I like to drink with someone from time to time as well. // It was very nice of you to come.
 4. Oooh... It's Riesling! It looks great!
 5. Changing the position of the tracks is not a big deal~
-6. That was the first time I saw someone managed to break the inner shaft~
+6. It was the first time someone managed to break the inner shaft~
 7. Erika must have thought she was driving // a light tank instead of a heavy tank!
 8. BL: Kuku...
 9. BL: That's because Erika is so restless.
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 1. By the way, where did you go today?
 2. Eh?
-3. No. Well... // You feel different from usual.
+3. No. Well... // You feel more different than usual.
 4. Anzai made me wear them. // I'm not sure... whether I look good in these or not.
 5. You look stunning.
 6. This is the first time I've seen Commander Maho dressed up so much.
 7. I-I see...
 8. You're not aware of how charismatic you are, Commander. // I couldn't even talk to you when I was at Kuromorimine.
 9. It's understandable why Erika and the rest admire you so much...
 10. Because I was like that initially too...
 11. BL: Aaah... Erikaaa...
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 1. Doze...
 2. Hey... // If you sleep here...
 3. BL: Ah...
 4. Hah...
 5. Haah~
 6. Rub x3
 7. Haah...
 8. Smooch...
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 1. Uh~
 2. Erikaaa...?
 3. Have you returned home~?
 4. Erikaaa! // It was all my fault!!
 5. Erikaaa~
 6. Ah...
 7. BL: Drowse... x2 むにゃ
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 1. Vrooom~
 2. BL: Wheeee~
 3. BL: Immelmann turn~
 4. BL: Maho-san hasn't dropped by at all recently. // It's dangerous to walk here during this rainy season, after all.
-5. I made so much curry so what should I do if it goes bad...?
+5. I made so much curry, so what should I do if it goes bad...?
 6. Come to think of it... // She hasn't come over ever since we drank that wine together...
 7. BL: I had a weird dream that day...
 8. Huh? Someone's here?
 9. Who is it?
 10. Eh?
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 1. Maho-san...
 2. Eeeh!?
 3. Co-Commander!?
 4. Ma-Maho-san...
 5. Maho-san, ho-hold on...
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 1. Haah
 2. Hah
 3. Haah x4 はあ
 4. Aah
 5. Mph
 6. Haah
 7. Throb
 8. ! // Mph
 9. Hah x2 はっ
 10. Aaah...
 11. Squelch
 12. Thrust
 13. Haah
 14. Guuuh // Aaaah
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 1. Hah x3
 2. Haah...
 3. Slide
 4. Twitch
 5. Maho-san, this might be... a little too rough on you...
 6. Hah
 7. Aah x2
 8. Delete two つ
 9. Ma- // Maho-san!!?
 10. Throb
 11. Hah
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 1. ......
 2. I'm sorry... // Umm... Your first time was...
 3. Every time there's a rainy night like this...
-4. I'll become insecure and scared and I won't be able to sleep.
+4. I become insecure and scared and I won't be able to sleep.
 5. Although I'm the one who said Miho and the rest are walking their own path...
 6. I wonder if I'm nothing at all when I'm not driving a tank...
 7. Maho-san...
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 1. But I'm really nothing without that.
 2. I'm sorry... // I don't even know what I should do.
 3. BL: Ma-Maho-san...
 4. Just until this rain stops...
 5. Please...
 6. Bottom right: Hah x2
 7. ...Aaah...
 8. Haah
 9. Hah
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 1. Wa-Wait... // Doing that there... is weird, isn't it...!?
 2. Hah x2
 3. BL: It's gotten so wet...
 4. It's beautiful.
 5. N-No way... // Aaaagh
 6. Aaah
 7. Hah
 8. Haah
 9. Hauuaaaamh
 10. Aaaah...
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 1. Maho-san... is this really alright...?
 2. BL: Hah
 3. BL: Haah
 4. Hah...
 5. Aaah... // I want you...
 6. BL: Haah x2
 7. Come...
 8. Breathe slowly // and relax.
 9. Okay...
 10. Insert...
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 1. Does it hurt...?
 2. I'm fine...
 3. Haah x3
 4. I want you to do whatever you like...
 5. Maho-san...
 6. Thrust
 7. Hauh
 8. Aah // Haah
 9. Fuah
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 1. Aah
 2. Haah
 3. Hah
 4. Hah
 5. Haah
 6. Haah~
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 1. Haah
 2. Hah x2
 3. Haaamh
 4. Co-Commander...
 5. Is this... really your... first time...?
 6. Spurt x2
 7. BL: Le-Let's take a small break...
 8. Haah
 9. Hah
 10. Ma-Maho-san, what are you...?
 11. Eeeh!?
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 1. More...
 2. BL: Haah x2
 3. Wait! Wait! // The condom will break if you do that!
 4. Co-Commander!!
 5. BL: Haah...
 6. Hold... // on...!
 7. Haah...
 8. Hah~ x2
 9. Aah
 10. Uwaaah
 11. BL: Haaaah...
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 1. Ma-Maho-san...
 2. I'm gonna cum... // Pull it out now!
 3. Da-Darn it...
 4. (Black bubble) Uwaaaaah
 5. Aaaah
 6. Haaaah // Aagmh
 7. Spurt~
 8. Spurt // Spurt
 9. Aah x2
 10. Haaaah~
 11. Mph... // Hih...
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 1. Haaaah... // This condom's sturdiness saved us.
 2. Ma... // Maho-san!?
 3. Fuah...
 4. Uuh... Uwah
 5. Ah...
 6. ......
 7. I-I'm sorry! I'll go and get something to wipe it off...
 8. ......
 9. Lick
 10. Grab
 11. Shh~
 12. Com- // Commander...
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 Afterword
 
 Hello. Long time no see. I'm Hankotsu MAX.
 
 Thanks to everyone, I managed to finish the draft this time smoothly as well.
 
 I was working on this draft as I looked forward to the release of GuP's final chapter.
 Personally, I want to see Erika getting more screen time.
 This story began in spring, and now it's reached summer and now approaching autumn.
 Please look forward to the next chapter as well. Please continue to support me next summer if you'd like.
 
 I thank everyone involved in the publication of this book
 and everyone who bought this book from the bottom of my heart.
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 1. BL: Haah... x2
 2. Maho-san... // I can't... take this... anymore...
 3. Just... // a little more...
 4. The Nishizumi Style... is terrifying...
 5. When is... the rain going to stop...?
 6. BL: To Be Continued...
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