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| 1 | [Makinon TM/Koruri] MHholic [CN] | |
| 2 | http://www.mediafire.com/?i36ey889dyv1148 | |
| 3 | ||
| 4 | ===PG03=== | |
| 5 | ||
| 6 | Table of Contents | |
| 7 | ||
| 8 | A Wedding Ceremony for Two | |
| 9 | Makinon TM | |
| 10 | 5-14 | |
| 11 | ||
| 12 | As Newlyweds, It Can't be Helped | |
| 13 | Koruri | |
| 14 | 15-24 | |
| 15 | ||
| 16 | ===PG04=== | |
| 17 | ||
| 18 | : Ah-... | |
| 19 | A Wedding Ceremony for Two | |
| 20 | ||
| 21 | - | : It's beautiful... |
| 21 | + | : How pretty... |
| 22 | ||
| 23 | : Madoka... | |
| 24 | ||
| 25 | ===PG05=== | |
| 26 | ||
| 27 | - | : Madoka will look amazing in this... |
| 27 | + | : Madoka will look perfect in this.. |
| 28 | : A wedding dress... | |
| 29 | : ...Madoka will get married one day... | |
| 30 | : I will have to send her off with a smile... | |
| 31 | ||
| 32 | - | : Homura-chan will look amazing... |
| 32 | + | : Homura-chan will look perfect... |
| 33 | : In a wedding dress... | |
| 34 | ||
| 35 | - | : Black hair and beautiful... fitted with a white dress.. |
| 35 | + | : Black hair and beautiful... set in a white gown.. |
| 36 | : She'll definitely be the prettiest bride in the world... | |
| 37 | ||
| 38 | : Yet... It feels so... | |
| 39 | - | : Lonely... |
| 39 | + | : lonesome... |
| 40 | ||
| 41 | ===PG06=== | |
| 42 | ||
| 43 | ... | |
| 44 | ||
| 45 | - | Try on okay! |
| 45 | + | Try on OK! |
| 46 | : Ah! | |
| 47 | ||
| 48 | - | Madoka: Homura-chan! Let's go try them! |
| 48 | + | Madoka: Homura-chan! Let's go try it! |
| 49 | - | Homura: Eh! But we are only middle schoolers? |
| 49 | + | Homura: Eh! But we are only in middle school? |
| 50 | - | Homura: And who's trying it on... |
| 50 | + | Homura: Besides, who will be wearing... |
| 51 | ||
| 52 | Madoka: Why not both of us! | |
| 53 | ||
| 54 | Homura: Eh! Wait, Madoka! | |
| 55 | - | Madoka: Excuse us! |
| 55 | + | Madoka: Excuse me! |
| 56 | ||
| 57 | ===PG07=== | |
| 58 | ||
| 59 | - | Homura: Small... wedding dress... |
| 59 | + | Homura: They even carry... |
| 60 | - | Homura: They even carry this... |
| 60 | + | Homura: A dress... this small... |
| 61 | ||
| 62 | - | Homura: ...I can't believe I am wearing it... |
| 62 | + | Homura: ...I can't believe that I wore it... |
| 63 | - | Homura: I just want to see how Madoka look in a wedding dress... |
| 63 | + | Homura: I only want to see Madoka in a wedding dress... |
| 64 | ||
| 65 | - | Homura: ...It's, |
| 65 | + | Homura: ...It's |
| 66 | - | Homura: A bit too big... |
| 66 | + | Homura: Still too big... |
| 67 | ||
| 68 | Madoka: Homura-chan! | |
| 69 | ||
| 70 | ===PG08=== | |
| 71 | ||
| 72 | Madoka: Sorry for the wait! | |
| 73 | ||
| 74 | Homura: Ma...doka... | |
| 75 | ||
| 76 | - | Madoka: Is it a bit childish? |
| 76 | + | Madoka: Maybe too childish? |
| 77 | - | Homura: Not at all! Very pretty! |
| 77 | + | Homura: Not at all! It's very pretty! |
| 78 | ||
| 79 | Madoka: Thank... you, Homura-chan... | |
| 80 | Homura: ...! | |
| 81 | ||
| 82 | ===PG09=== | |
| 83 | ||
| 84 | - | Madoka: Oh- Miss Akemi Homura, |
| 84 | + | Madoka: Ahem- Miss Akemi Homura, |
| 85 | Homura: ...Eh? | |
| 86 | ||
| 87 | - | Madoka: According to God's holy law, in the presence of God I make this vow... |
| 87 | + | Madoka: In the presence of God I make this vow... |
| 88 | Homura: Ehhhh? | |
| 89 | ||
| 90 | Homura: M-Madoka...? | |
| 91 | Madoka: For richer, for poorer... | |
| 92 | ||
| 93 | Madoka: In sickness and in health... | |
| 94 | ||
| 95 | Madoka: To love and to cherish... | |
| 96 | ||
| 97 | - | Madoka: till death us do part...? |
| 97 | + | Madoka: till death us do part... |
| 98 | ||
| 99 | ===PG10=== | |
| 100 | ||
| 101 | Homura: ...! | |
| 102 | Homura: ...Ma...do..ka. | |
| 103 | ||
| 104 | Madoka: Do you...swear...? | |
| 105 | ||
| 106 | Homura: I... will... always... | |
| 107 | ||
| 108 | Homura: Always... | |
| 109 | - | Homura: Love Kaname Madoka... |
| 109 | + | Homura: Love Madoka... |
| 110 | ||
| 111 | Homura: I do...! | |
| 112 | ||
| 113 | ===PG11=== | |
| 114 | ||
| 115 | : You may... | |
| 116 | : Kiss the bride... | |
| 117 | ||
| 118 | : Kiss... | |
| 119 | ||
| 120 | : Excuse me! Do you like the dress-? | |
| 121 | ||
| 122 | ===PG12=== | |
| 123 | ||
| 124 | - | Madoka: Aha - What a rush! |
| 124 | + | Madoka: Ahh - Such a rush! |
| 125 | - | Homura: It's not something you get to do everyday. |
| 125 | + | Homura: You don't get to try it everyday. |
| 126 | ||
| 127 | Madoka: Oh yeah, Homura-chan. | |
| 128 | ||
| 129 | Madoka: Where we left off, | |
| 130 | ||
| 131 | Homura: Eh... | |
| 132 | ||
| 133 | Homura: ! | |
| 134 | ||
| 135 | ===PG13=== | |
| 136 | ||
| 137 | - | Madoka: Ehehe... thus, we are now married.... |
| 137 | + | Madoka: Ehehe... This seals our vow.... |
| 138 | Homura: Ma...doka... | |
| 139 | ||
| 140 | Madoka: This is our little secret, | |
| 141 | Madoka: Homura-chan. | |
| 142 | ||
| 143 | Homura: Oh, em. | |
| 144 | ||
| 145 | : I truly believe a miracle | |
| 146 | - | : Will come one day. |
| 146 | + | : Can come one day. |
| 147 | ||
| 148 | ===PG14=== | |
| 149 | ||
| 150 | As Newlyweds, It Can't be Helped | |
| 151 | ||
| 152 | ||
| 153 | Homura: Madoka, | |
| 154 | ||
| 155 | Homura: Good morning. | |
| 156 | ||
| 157 | ===PG15=== | |
| 158 | ||
| 159 | - | : We end up sleeping |
| 159 | + | : We slept way |
| 160 | : Too late last night. | |
| 161 | ||
| 162 | - | : Oh... |
| 162 | + | : Yawn... |
| 163 | ||
| 164 | Madoka: Eh, Homura-chan. | |
| 165 | - | Don't know who made this noise. |
| 165 | + | Don't know who's growled. |
| 166 | Guu~~~~ | |
| 167 | ||
| 168 | Madoka: Ahah. | |
| 169 | ||
| 170 | - | : Let's go eat. |
| 170 | + | : Let's eat. |
| 171 | ||
| 172 | Homura: Hehe. | |
| 173 | ||
| 174 | ===PG16=== | |
| 175 | ||
| 176 | Madoka: I'll go make breakfast. | |
| 177 | Homura: Ah... Madoka. | |
| 178 | ||
| 179 | Madoka: Don't worry, Homura-chan. | |
| 180 | ||
| 181 | Madoka: Take your time. | |
| 182 | ||
| 183 | <- Low blood pressure | |
| 184 | ||
| 185 | : Ouch! 'It's not a dream...' | |
| 186 | ||
| 187 | ===PG17=== | |
| 188 | ||
| 189 | - | Madoka: 'Ah' Homura-chan, wait a little more. I'm almost done. |
| 189 | + | Madoka: 'Ah' Homura-chan, please wait a little more. I'm almost done. |
| 190 | ||
| 191 | Homura: M-Madoka, let me help too. | |
| 192 | Madoka in aprons... | |
| 193 | ||
| 194 | Homura: Eh, but-but, | |
| 195 | Madoka: Today you get to eat my cooking! | |
| 196 | - | Madoka: Come come, Homura-chan, sit sit! |
| 196 | + | Madoka: Come-come, Homura-chan, sit-sit! |
| 197 | ||
| 198 | ===PG18=== | |
| 199 | ||
| 200 | Madoka and I... | |
| 201 | Got married. | |
| 202 | ||
| 203 | Madoka... | |
| 204 | ||
| 205 | : I want to hug her from behind. 'Madoka is so cute...' | |
| 206 | ||
| 207 | ===PG19=== | |
| 208 | ||
| 209 | Madoka: Sorry for the wait, Homura-chan! | |
| 210 | ||
| 211 | Homura: I waited like you asked, Madoka! | |
| 212 | Sweat | |
| 213 | Sweat | |
| 214 | ||
| 215 | Madoka... | |
| 216 | Breakfast: ~Fried Eggs~ | |
| 217 | Made this! | |
| 218 | ||
| 219 | TOUCHED | |
| 220 | Homu... | |
| 221 | Wow... | |
| 222 | ||
| 223 | Homura: 'Eh?' Madoka, where's yours? | |
| 224 | - | Ah, I forget! What do I do! |
| 224 | + | Ah, I forget! |
| 225 | What do I do! | |
| 226 | ||
| 227 | ===PG20=== | |
| 228 | ||
| 229 | Homura: Madoka, | |
| 230 | Homura: Sit with me. | |
| 231 | ||
| 232 | Madoka: Oh. | |
| 233 | ||
| 234 | Madoka: Homura-chan. | |
| 235 | Ah--- | |
| 236 | ||
| 237 | : We have some bread too, so let's eat together. | |
| 238 | ||
| 239 | Homu grin | |
| 240 | ||
| 241 | Madoka: 'Hu' ----Homura-chan is being tricky! Give me the fork! | |
| 242 | - | Madoka~a |
| 242 | + | |
| 243 | Madoka~ | |
| 244 | Homura-chan! | |
| 245 | ||
| 246 | Homura: How am I tricky? Hey, wait! | |
| 247 | ||
| 248 | ===PG21=== | |
| 249 | ||
| 250 | Thank you for the food. | |
| 251 | ||
| 252 | Madoka: It's delicious, Homura-chan. | |
| 253 | - | Madoka: Feeding each other is good too. |
| 253 | + | |
| 254 | Madoka: Feeding each other is nice too. | |
| 255 | - | A smile that cute should be made illegal. |
| 255 | + | |
| 256 | A smile that cute should not be legal. | |
| 257 | ||
| 258 | ===PG22=== | |
| 259 | ||
| 260 | Homura: You have bread crumbs | |
| 261 | Homura: On your face. | |
| 262 | ||
| 263 | ===PG23=== | |
| 264 | ||
| 265 | Homura: Madoka. | |
| 266 | ||
| 267 | Beep- | |
| 268 | ||
| 269 | Beep- | |
| 270 | Beep- | |
| 271 | - | That's too bad... |
| 271 | + | |
| 272 | Too bad... | |
| 273 | ||
| 274 | Madoka: Let's leave the rest | |
| 275 | Madoka: For tonight, Homura-chan. | |
| 276 | - | What's going to happen tonight... |
| 276 | + | |
| 277 | What'll happen tonight... | |
| 278 | ||
| 279 | [END] | |
| 280 | ||
| 281 | ===PG24=== | |
| 282 | - | Whether it's "nice to meet you" or "hello again," I am Makinon TM. |
| 282 | + | |
| 283 | "Nice to meet you" or "Hello again," I am Makinon TM. | |
| 284 | - | For attending Madoka's and Homura's wedding. |
| 284 | + | |
| 285 | - | Truly, thank you. |
| 285 | + | For coming to the wedding of Madoka and Homura. |
| 286 | Sincerely, thank you. | |
| 287 | ||
| 288 | Even though they're still in Middle School, | |
| 289 | - | They can definitely form a family family together. |
| 289 | + | |
| 290 | They can definitely form a happy family together. | |
| 291 | - | From today forth, |
| 291 | + | |
| 292 | - | Please watch out for them as you always have, |
| 292 | + | From this day forth, |
| 293 | - | Let me thank you in advance. |
| 293 | + | Please care for them as you always had, |
| 294 | Allow me to thank you in advance. | |
| 295 | ||
| 296 | - | This time I have the chance to publish a doujin with Makinon TM together. |
| 296 | + | |
| 297 | This time, I have the chance to publish a doujin with Makinon TM together. | |
| 298 | - | In parallel worlds, anything can happen. |
| 298 | + | |
| 299 | With parallel worlds, anything can happen. | |
| 300 | ||
| 301 | If it's HomuMado, it can't be helped! |
