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 Colorful Days Chapter 2 TL
 
 1
 To my future producer...
 
-I would do anything for an opportunity to sing.
+I would do anything for a chance to sing.
-For example, there is an opening in one of this play's scenes.
+In fact, there is a place for a song in one of this play's scenes.
 
 If there are people over there...
-Who would lend their ears to me, then-
+Who would lend me their ears, then-
 
 2
 Over there...
 
 Everyone, be good!
 Okay!
 
 People....
 
 Wait, why are we perfomring this at a kindergarten!?
 Eh, you don't like it?
 
-Everybody knew about this!?
+Everyone knew about this!?
 Well, yeah, we read the instructions.
 Mhm!
 
-I was focused on the singing part so I didn't notice...
+I was so focused on the singing part I didn't notice...
 Is she okay...?
 
 3
 Kinderidols
 
 4
 (Scene 1:
 Kotori-san, is this really okay!?
 The President's script goes blank halfway through! What should we do...
 
-Didn't the President write the script for you guys?
+Didn't the President write the script for you girls?
-Ah... Oh wait, so that's how it was.
+Ah...Oh wait, so that's how it was.
 
 "I couldn't think of anything, so please improvise and continue!" He said...
 Woah, how cheap!
 
 A-Anyways, it's almost show time!
 
-Once upon a time, there were two sisters that were close to starving to death...
+Once upon a time, there were two sisters who were close to starving to death...
 My stomach can't take it anymore!
 
 They were a pitiful pair...
 
 5
 
 Onee-sama! I can't take it anymore!
 N, nee-sama?
 
 Wah!
 
 What happened, Shijou-san!
 For realism, I didn't eat anything yesterday....
 
 The rest is...
-Up to you....Yukiho
+Up to you....Yukiho...
 
 Shijou-san!
 
 Leave it to the prince!
 
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 When the prince heard the tale of the unfortunate sisters, he came to the rescue!
 Helping young maidens in need is one of the prince's duties nano!
 
 Helping maidens...
 
 I can't be....
 K-K-Ki...
 
-Even in a play, this is horrible to do~
+Even in a play, you can't do something so horrible~
-Here, a Ramen-flavored onigiri!
+Here, a ramen-flavored onigiri!
 
-This! This is deliciousness is not of this Earth!
+This-! This deliciousness is not of this Earth!
 I'll leave the rest to you, Yukiho!
 
-And so, the older sister left with the prince while leaving her younger sister alone...
+And so, the older sister left with the prince, leaving her younger sister alone...
 
 7
 Scene 2: "The End of Her Journey"
 
-The poor sister wandered around, until she encountered a large piece of meat.
+The poor sister wandered around, until she found a large piece of meat.
 
 This is mine!
 Come near it and I'll eat you too!
 But there was a frightening "monster" guarding it.
 
 Kya~ Someone help me!
 
 A passing hero of justice, Hibikiman, appeared!
 I'll do something to help'ya!
 
 Let me help you.
 But then the magical angel, Chihayelf also came to the rescue!
-They sure have changed the script... (Retrans this line, doesn't seem right)
+They sure have changed the script... (Retrans this line please, doesn't seem accurate.)
 
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-The angel and the hero started to argue about who would help the poor girl
+The angel and the hero started to argue about who would help the poor girl.
 I should be enough!
 No, let me do it!
 
 What will become of this fight?
-It's ad-lib after this
+It's ad-lib after this...
 
 ...Huh? When am I supposed to sing?
 (Chihaya?)
 
-Speaking of which, I practiced so much yet I don't know where I can sing...
+Speaking of which, I practiced so much yet I don't know where I sing...
-Is it because the song is in the ad-lib part....?
+Is it because the song is in the ad-lib part...?
 
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 Anyways, I'll go and help her!
 Eh!?
 
 Hibikiman! This is my place!
 (I just want to sing!)
 
 Don't ya worry! I'm an expert in handling animals!
 No, let me do it!
 
 Don't ya have something else to do!?
 I have no such thing! (Apparently these lines need to be retranslated?)
 
 Then, how are we going to solve this!?
 Looks like they're getting side-tracked...
 What should we do?
 
-This going to be bad if we keep going like this! Let's stop'em together!!
+It'll be bad if we keep going like this! Let's stop'em together!!
 Ah, Haruka-chan, don't mo-
 
 10
 The sets are going too!
 Eh?
 
 The hell are you doing Haruka!?
 Yayoi, guys, are you okay!?
 
 Yukiho saved us!
 
 And so, the pitiful sister and the "monster" became friends.
 Thanks for the food!
-And they devoured the meat together and lived happily ever after. The End.
+And they devoured the meat together and lived happily ever after.
 The End.
 
 That's not how it goes!
 
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 Scene 3: "Kindergartenize"
 
 It was no good...
 I can't say the play was completely unwatchable, but I can't call it a big success...
 
 Anyways, we're all going to play with the kids now, make sure they have fun!
 W-Wait! Ritsuko!
 
 We're going to play together...
 So why are we wearing these uniforms!?
 
 Well, they'll feel closer to you if you wear the same uniform as them, right?
 Then why do Haruka and others have the normal kind?
 
-But sadly there weren’t enough, so the youngsters get them first.
+
 But sadly there weren’t enough, so you youngsters got them first.
 
-Mmm, seems like everyone's having fun.
+
 Mmm, seems like everyone's having fun!
 
-Okay, coming!
+
 Okay, I'm coming!
 
 Ah, Haruka!
 
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 Chi-chan! It isn't just Haruka, it's Haruka-sensei!
 Look, you have to pretend when you call me!
 
 It can't be helped...Ha.....
 Haruka...sensei.....
 
 Aw, don't be so shy in front of the teacher, Chihaya-chan!
 That's because you made me do it!
 
 Scene 4: "Innocently Playing"
 
 Ara~ Hibiki, you brought your pets with you?
 Mhm! I thought ya'll would have fun with them!
 
 Hm?
 
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 Wh-Wha Hibiki!!
 Hm?
 
 Kya-!!
 
 What's wrong?
 J-Just now your crocodile was.....
 
 Waniko is a nice kid so don't ya worry!
 Kyaaaaaa-!!
 
 15
 Scene 5: "Makoto's Worries"
 
 Azusa's really popular with the kids nano!
 Looks like it.
-She really does look like a real mother...
+
 She really does look like a mother...
 
 Makoto-kun, don't talk bad about Azusa!
 Huh...I didn't mean that way.
 
 Hmm, she isn't a wife after all....a better way would be...
 (I wonder if I look more mature like this...)
 I know!
 
 Holy Mother Azusa-san!
-Makoto-chan is horrible!
+
 Makoto-chan is terrible!
 
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 Scene 6: "The Charisma of kindergarteners"
 
 Wow~ Yayoicchi is becoming quite a lady~
 
 Ami!
 I can feel the charisma of these kids!
 Yep!
 
 Un-Un! I feel like I can relate to them!
 Ehehe, maybe it's because of my brothers and sisters at home...
 
 Uu-Uu- Onee-chan, come here!
 Hai-Tachi!
 Yay!
 I found 5 yen!
 I found a bean sprout!
 Coming!
 What great charisma...
 
 17
 Scene 7: "The Revealing of Special Techniques"
 
 I dug so many holes!
 
 Do something too, Chi-chan!
 Eh! Me? What shou....
 
 Oh, that's it!
 
 I will-
 Sing for everyone!
 
 (I practiced so much after all...)
 Chihaya-chan really wanted to sing, eh?
 
 It's a ghost! Everyone, run!
 (Waaahh!)
 (Eh!? Please wait!)
 Ah, she was interrupted again...
 
 18
 Scene 8: "Karaoke Box?"
 Well then, it's the time to say goodbye!
 Thank you very much, nee-chans!
 
 Mmm, what a great bunch of kids!
 (Onee-san's so...)
 
 We'll support you when we grow up!
 I'll support you even when you're a grandma!
 I wonder if I would still be an idol at that age~
 
 Chi-chan! Come again!
 
 Yeah!
 
 Let's come again, Chi-chan!
 Haruka, shut up...
 
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 Chihaya-chan looks a bit sad...
 
 It must because she didn't get to sing at all.
 
 Chihaya-chan!!
 I'll listen to you!
-We'll go to a place where no one can interrupt you!
+
 We'll go someplace where no one can interrupt you!
 Eh? What? Wait, Yukiho!
-Um..Yukiho...
+
 Um...Yukiho...
 
 It's okay!
 I will definitely listen to you!
 
 I can't sing in a place like this...
 But no one can interrupt....Hm?
 
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-Because of this outfit, of course!
+
 Because of this uniform, of course!
 
-If you want to be helpful, open up, Yukiho!!
+
 If you want to help, Yukiho, open it!!
-Dear 765 Pro,
+
 To Everyone at 765Pro,
 We had a great time at the play.
 
-The kids thought about it very hard, and they thought that this was a prefect gift.
+
 The kids thought about it very hard, and they thought that this would be a prefect gift.
 
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 We didn't have enough smocks before,
 So we gave you 6 more for you to wear...
 
 I wonder if we'll get a chance to wear this....
 It's unfortunate, but it sure doesn't look like it.
 Y-Yeah...
 
 What are you saying?
 It's a present after all!
 There's no harm in trying it out!
 
 22
 Right? Haru-chan~!
 
 Let...!
 
-It's not Chihaya, it's Chihaya-sensei! Put it on already!
+
 It's not Chihaya-chan, it's Chihaya-sensei! Put it on already!
 
 I-I'm not at the age where I can wear a smock anymore~!
 Haruka-san, it looks cute on you!
 It kinda makes ya look like a baby again~~
 I don't want to be a baby!
 
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 In the end, we sealed it away...
 It was too dangerous...
 Sorry! Everyone from the kindergarten!