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 Colorful Days Chapter 2 TL
 
 1
-To producers of the future
+To my future producer...
 
-I will do anything to get a chance to sing
+I would do anything for an opportunity to sing.
-For example, one scene in this play is one of the chances
+For example, there is an opening in one of this play's scenes.
 
-If there are people who
+If there are people over there...
-would lend their ears to me over there, then-
+Who would lend their ears to me, then-
 
 2
 Over there...
 
 Everyone, be good!
-Okay
+Okay!
 
-people....
+People....
 
-Wait, why are we doing a play in a kindergarten!!
+Wait, why are we perfomring this at a kindergarten!?
 Eh, you don't like it?
 
-Everybody knew this!?
+Everybody knew about this!?
-Well, yeah, we read the instructions
+Well, yeah, we read the instructions.
-mhm
+Mhm!
 
-I was too into the singing part so I didn't notice...
+I was focused on the singing part so I didn't notice...
-Is she okay...
+Is she okay...?
 
 3
 Kinderidols
 
 4
 (Scene 1:
-Kotori-san, is this really okay!
+Kotori-san, is this really okay!?
-The President's scripts were left blank starting from midway, what should we do...
+The President's script goes blank halfway through! What should we do...
 
-Didn't President wrote the script for you guys?
+Didn't the President write the script for you guys?
-Ah... Oh wait, so that's how it is
+Ah... Oh wait, so that's how it was.
 
-"I couldn't think of anything, so please ad-lib to continue!" He said...
+"I couldn't think of anything, so please improvise and continue!" He said...
 Woah, how cheap!
 
 A-Anyways, it's almost show time!
 
-Once upon a time, there were two sisters that are close to being starved to death
+Once upon a time, there were two sisters that were close to starving to death...
 My stomach can't take it anymore!
 
-They were a pitiful pair
+They were a pitiful pair...
 
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-Dear sister! I can't take it anymore!
+Onee-sama! I can't take it anymore!
-S-Sister?
+N, nee-sama?
 
 Wah!
 
 What happened, Shijou-san!
 For realism, I didn't eat anything yesterday....
 
 The rest is...
-up to you....Yukiho
+Up to you....Yukiho
 
 Shijou-san!
 
-Leave it up to the prince!
+Leave it to the prince!
 
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-When the prince heard the tale of the unfortunate sisters, he came to the rescue
+When the prince heard the tale of the unfortunate sisters, he came to the rescue!
 Helping young maidens in need is one of the prince's duties nano!
 
 Helping maidens...
 
 I can't be....
 K-K-Ki...
 
-Even in a play this is horrible to do~
+Even in a play, this is horrible to do~
-Here, a Ramen-flavored onigiri
+Here, a Ramen-flavored onigiri!
 
-This! This is unworldly tasty!
+This! This is deliciousness is not of this Earth!
 I'll leave the rest to you, Yukiho!
 
-And so, the older sister left with the prince while leaving her younger sister alone
+And so, the older sister left with the prince while leaving her younger sister alone...
 
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 Scene 2: "The End of Her Journey"
 
-The poor sister wandered around, until she encountered a large piece of meat
+The poor sister wandered around, until she encountered a large piece of meat.
 
 This is mine!
-Go near it and I'll eat you too!
+Come near it and I'll eat you too!
-But there's a frightening "monster" guarding it
+But there was a frightening "monster" guarding it.
 
 Kya~ Someone help me!
 
-And then, a hero of just, Hibikiman, passed by and ran into them
+A passing hero of justice, Hibikiman, appeared!
 I'll do something to help'ya!
 
-Let I help you
+Let me help you.
-But then, a magical angel, Chihayelf also came to the rescue
+But then the magical angel, Chihayelf also came to the rescue!
-They sure have changed the contents
+They sure have changed the script... (Retrans this line, doesn't seem right)
 
 8
-The angel and the hero started to argue about who will be helping the poor girl
+The angel and the hero started to argue about who would help the poor girl
-Me should be enough
+I should be enough!
-No, let I do it!
+No, let me do it!
 
 What will become of this fight?
 It's ad-lib after this
 
-...Huh? Where's the part in which I sing?
+...Huh? When am I supposed to sing?
 (Chihaya?)
 
-Speaking of which, I practiced so much yet I don't know where I could sing
+Speaking of which, I practiced so much yet I don't know where I can sing...
 Is it because the song is in the ad-lib part....?
 
 9
 Anyways, I'll go and help her!
 Eh!?
 
-Hibikiman! This is the place of I!
+Hibikiman! This is my place!
 (I just want to sing!)
 
-Don't ya worry! I'm an expert of animal taming!
+Don't ya worry! I'm an expert in handling animals!
-No, let I do it!
+No, let me do it!
 
 Don't ya have something else to do!?
-I have no such thing
+I have no such thing! (Apparently these lines need to be retranslated?)
 
 Then, how are we going to solve this!?
-Looks like they are going off track
+Looks like they're getting side-tracked...
 What should we do?
 
 This going to be bad if we keep going like this! Let's stop'em together!!
-Ah, don't move Har-
+Ah, Haruka-chan, don't mo-
 
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 The sets are going too!
 Eh?
 
-The hell are you doing Haruka!!
+The hell are you doing Haruka!?
 Yayoi, guys, are you okay!?
 
 Yukiho saved us!
 
-And so, the pitiful sister and the "monster" became friends
+And so, the pitiful sister and the "monster" became friends.
-Thanks for the food
+Thanks for the food!
-and they devoured the meat together and lived happily ever after. The end.
+And they devoured the meat together and lived happily ever after. The End.
 
-It doesn't go like this!
+That's not how it goes!
 
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 Scene 3: "Kindergartenize"
 
 It was no good...
-Can't say the play was completely unwatchable, nor I can call it a big success...
+I can't say the play was completely unwatchable, but I can't call it a big success...
 
 Anyways, we're all going to play with the kids now, make sure they have fun!
 W-Wait! Ritsuko!
 
 We're going to play together...
-So why are we getting these kind of clothing!
+So why are we wearing these uniforms!?
 
-Well, they would feel closer to you when you wear the same uniform as them, right?
+Well, they'll feel closer to you if you wear the same uniform as them, right?
-Then why are Haruka and others have the normal kind?
+Then why do Haruka and others have the normal kind?
 
-Sorry! Was going to let you all wear these
+Sorry! I was planning to have all of you wear them,
-But sadly there weren’t enough, so the youngsters get them first
+But sadly there weren’t enough, so the youngsters get them first.
 
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-Mmm, seems like everyone's having fun
+Mmm, seems like everyone's having fun.
 
 Sensei! Haruka-sensei!
 Okay, coming!
 
-Ah, Haruka
+Ah, Haruka!
 
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 Chi-chan! It isn't just Haruka, it's Haruka-sensei!
 Look, you have to pretend when you call me!
 
 It can't be helped...Ha.....
 Haruka...sensei.....
 
-Aw, don't be so shy in front of the sensei, Chihaya-chan!
+Aw, don't be so shy in front of the teacher, Chihaya-chan!
 That's because you made me do it!
 
 Scene 4: "Innocently Playing"
 
 Ara~ Hibiki, you brought your pets with you?
 Mhm! I thought ya'll would have fun with them!
 
 Hm?
 
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 Wh-Wha Hibiki!!
 Hm?
 
 Kya-!!
 
 What's wrong?
 J-Just now your crocodile was.....
 
-Waniko is a nice kid so don't ya worry
+Waniko is a nice kid so don't ya worry!
 Kyaaaaaa-!!
 
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 Scene 5: "Makoto's Worries"
 
 Azusa's really popular with the kids nano!
-Looks like it
+Looks like it.
 
-She really does look like a real mother
+She really does look like a real mother...
 
-Makoto-kun, don't talk bad about Azusa
+Makoto-kun, don't talk bad about Azusa!
-Huh...I didn't mean that way
+Huh...I didn't mean that way.
 
-Hmm, she isn't a wife after all....a better way should be
+Hmm, she isn't a wife after all....a better way would be...
-(Wonder if I look older like this...)
+(I wonder if I look more mature like this...)
 I know!
 
 Holy Mother Azusa-san!
-(I don't think it's about the way to call her...)
+(I don't think it's about what you call her...)
 Makoto-chan is horrible!
 
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-Scene 6: "The Charisma of the kindergarteners"
+Scene 6: "The Charisma of kindergarteners"
 
 Wow~ Yayoicchi is becoming quite a lady~
 
 Ami!
 I can feel the charisma of these kids!
-Yep
+Yep!
 
 Un-Un! I feel like I can relate to them!
 Ehehe, maybe it's because of my brothers and sisters at home...
 
 Uu-Uu- Onee-chan, come here!
-Hai Tachi!
+Hai-Tachi!
 Yay!
 I found 5 yen!
 I found a bean sprout!
 Coming!
-What a great charisma...
+What great charisma...
 
 17
-Scene 7: " The Revealing of Special Techniques"
+Scene 7: "The Revealing of Special Techniques"
 
-I dug so much holes!
+I dug so many holes!
 
 Do something too, Chi-chan!
 Eh! Me? What shou....
 
-Oh yes!
+Oh, that's it!
 
-I will
+I will-
-sing to everyone!
+Sing for everyone!
 
-(Practiced so much after all)
+(I practiced so much after all...)
 Chihaya-chan really wanted to sing, eh?
 
 It's a ghost! Everyone, run!
-(Waaahh)
+(Waaahh!)
-(Eh! Please wait!)
+(Eh!? Please wait!)
-Ah, she got interrupted once again...
+Ah, she was interrupted again...
 
 18
 Scene 8: "Karaoke Box?"
-Well then, it's the time to say farewell!
+Well then, it's the time to say goodbye!
-Thank you very much, Nee-chans!
+Thank you very much, nee-chans!
 
-Mmm, what a bunch of great kids!
+Mmm, what a great bunch of kids!
 (Onee-san's so...)
 
 We'll support you when we grow up!
-I'll support you even when you are a grandma!
+I'll support you even when you're a grandma!
-I wonder if I would still be an idol that age~
+I wonder if I would still be an idol at that age~
 
 Chi-chan! Come again!
 
-Yeah
+Yeah!
 
 Let's come again, Chi-chan!
 Haruka, shut up...
 
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-Chihaya-chan looks a bit blue...
+Chihaya-chan looks a bit sad...
 
-Must because she didn't manage to sing at all
+It must because she didn't get to sing at all.
 
 Chihaya-chan!!
-I will listen!
+I'll listen to you!
 
-We'll go to a place where no one could disturb you!
+We'll go to a place where no one can interrupt you!
 Eh? What? Wait, Yukiho!
 
 Um..Yukiho...
 
 It's okay!
 I will definitely listen to you!
 
-I can't sing in a place like this
+I can't sing in a place like this...
-But no one can disturb....Hm?
+But no one can interrupt....Hm?
 
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 Why are people gathering around here-!!
-With this kind of outfit, of course!
+Because of this outfit, of course!
 
 Please don't look here!
 If you want to be helpful, open up, Yukiho!!
 
 Dear 765 Pro,
-We had a great time at the play
+We had a great time at the play.
 
-We wanted to give a present
+We wanted to give you a present.
-After the kids thought about it very hard, they thought that this is a prefect present
+The kids thought about it very hard, and they thought that this was a prefect gift.
 
 21
-We did not have enough smocks before,
+We didn't have enough smocks before,
-so we gave 6 more for you guys to wear...
+So we gave you 6 more for you to wear...
 
-I wonder if there will be a chance to wear this....
+I wonder if we'll get a chance to wear this....
-It's unfortunate, but it sure doesn't look like it
+It's unfortunate, but it sure doesn't look like it.
-Y-Yeah
+Y-Yeah...
 
 What are you saying?
-It's a present after all
+It's a present after all!
-No harm to try it out
+There's no harm in trying it out!
 
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-Right? Haru-chan
+Right? Haru-chan~!
 
-Let....
+Let...!
 
 Please let me go, Chihaya-chan!
 It's not Chihaya, it's Chihaya-sensei! Put it on already!
 
-I- I'm not at the age where I can wear a smock anymore~
+I-I'm not at the age where I can wear a smock anymore~!
 Haruka-san, it looks cute on you!
-It might make ya look like a baby again~
+It kinda makes ya look like a baby again~~
 I don't want to be a baby!
 
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 In the end, we sealed it away...
-It's dangerous...
+It was too dangerous...
 Sorry! Everyone from the kindergarten!