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-Well, somehow it appears you are destined to do something great, otherwise you'd probably be dead before this even began. You are driven by some reason to make ends meet, or to make ends tear in the end of the world, or perhaps even conquer the end over all the odds, and maybe even the world. In the wide world of Amaranth currently, there is quite the number of events all piling up to bring about the end of time, and as a mercenary, you're up for hire, and plenty of people need your assistance! Currently, you folk are in the province of Oakran, helping the Holy Knights hunt down an unholy abomination that has been plaguing the city of Ysmirath from the woods and corrupting the beasts within. Large cracks have appeared in the ground, covered in an odd dark purple liquid that seens to be corrupting the land.
+Name: Atos Laaksonen
 
 Race: Tribal Human/Ghoul
-Name: (What's your name?)
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 Religion: GODS ARE MERELY SOMETHING THAT CAN BE STRUCK DOWN.
-Race: (What are you?
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 Magic: Bestial
-Religion: (Who's your holy/unholy lord, if any?)
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 Equipment: Basically a mesh of leather and loose-fitting robes, with a pair of hooked bracers at the wrist for disarming/tearing into his opponent. He wears a set of metal bracers around his shins as well, both of which have an axe blade at the front for lethal kicks.
-Magic: (Do you have epic mind powers?)
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 A-LA this http://i.imgur.com/sheNopY.png except with longer sleeves and bracers/shinguards
-Equipment: (Talk to DM)
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 Artifact: N/A
-Artifact: (None unless DM gives consent, but you can come up with your own and suggest.)
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-Age: (Dependant on Race)
+Age: Stopped aging at 32
 
-What is your goal?:
+Personality: A bit brusque and to the point, Atos is a man of action, not words. While he's always positive and seldom shows any sign of pessimism, he's got a pretty darwinist mind: The weak should be eaten, the strong should kill the strong.
 
-Appearance: (what do you look like)
+What is your goal?: To create a completely darwinist world. Basically, the whole world will become one big arena, where only the strongest survive.
 
-Backstory: (what is your life story?)
+Appearance: Grey'd skin, but no real sign of being undead save for his pitch black eyes. He has a pretty strong face, with a squared jaw and oddly sharp teeth. Atos has the unique ability to devour flesh and regenerate wounds, however, going on without this will actually cause his body to steadily rot over time.
 
-Location: Ysmirath, Oakran.
+Backstory: Atos can't quite remember why he is or who he was, all he can recall was him awakening within a dark, cold crypt deep beneath the earth, and eventually clambering himself up into the over world.
 
-Skills (you have 100 points)
+In all seriousness though, Atos' past was that of a simple tribal human; they believed that only the strongest can survive the harshness of the world, and there lies a prophecy among them that their kind will one day rise above the gods and strike them down, so that the world may become their hunting grounds.
-Wisdom: 0 (How effective your spells are)
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-Intelligence: 0 (How many spell uses you have and general knowledge check)
+Location: Wherever the party is
-Vitality: 0 (How durable you are)
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-Faith: 0 (How much your god loves you)
+Skills (You get 10 points) (This is only to give me an idea of what your character excels in, and will be put into an actual system, and used. There are advantages and disadvantages to everything, so be careful :^)
-Endurance: 0 (How long until you tire.)
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-Strength: 0 (How strong you are)
+Magic: 3
-Dexterity: 0 (How fast and agile you are, along with stealth)
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-Luck: 0 (Charisma, random chance, better loot)
+Intelligence: 0
 
 Strength:5
 
 Dexterity: 3
 
 Charisma: 0
 
 Luck: 0