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-Dear my future producer,
+Dear future producer,
 
-All humans are prune to change,
+It is normal for people to change...
 I am no exception...
 
 (KIRA!)
 
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 Chapter 10: "The Drip From the Moon"
-Takane-san looked scary and troubled
+
-while holding a knife!
+
 Takane-san was holding a knife-
-Perhaps...
+And looked really frustrated and scary!
-(Takane)
+
-she was cleaning up the evidence...?
+
 But, it's true that Takane's been acting kind of strange lately.
-There's no way, right!?
+
-(Kidding, kidding)
+Maybe,
 (Takane...)
 It's some dark secret that she can't reveal...
-However, Takane　does seems really suspicious these days.
+
 There's no way it's like dat!
 (It's a joke, a joke!)
 
-let's just hear what Takane gotta say!
+
 Let's just hear what Takane's gotta say for herself!
 
-Ladies,
+
 Miladies,
 welcome back.
-Why're ya dressed that way!?
+
-Something's wrong with Takane-san after all!!
+Why're ya dressed like that!?
 There's something wrong with Takane-san after all!!
 
-Hold on, everyone!
+
 Everyone, wait!
 Kotori-san!
 
 Takane-chan has an important announcement to make.
 Announcement...?
-I, Shijou Takane is going to
+
-leave for my hometown tomorrow.
+I, Shijou Takane, will...
 Return to my hometown tomorrow.
-I can no longer walk the path to the top idoldom along with everyone.
+
 I can no longer walk the path to Top Idol-dom with everyone else.
 You're...gonna quit being an idol!?
 
 ...It's unfortunate...
 
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-but we should hold a farewell party for Takane-chan.
+
 But we should hold a farewell party for Takane-chan.
 
-Really...
+
 No way...
 
-I cannot meet them ever again...
+
 I will not meet them ever again...
 
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 What should we get...
-We can probably meet up again,
+
-so cheer up.
+
 Really, it's not like this is the last we'll see of her!
-Yeah!
+so cheer up!
-If Takane sees us like this
+
-then she'll be even sadder!
+Dat's right!
 If Takane saw us all like this,
 Then she'd be even sadder!
 
 (Hibiki...)
-I'm savin' these tears for the end!
+
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 I'm savin' these tears for the very end!
-Yeah, Hibiki has some points.
+
-Oh right, Makoto-kun!
+
 (Ara ara)
 Well, Hibiki does make a good point.
-Good idea!
+
 Oh yeah, Makoto-kun!
 
 Since we're holding a party, how about getting some presents for Takane?
-Something that Takane loves, eh?
+Great idea!
 
-How about...
+
 But, what should we get?
 Something that Takane loves, right?
 
 I guess. How about...
 
-...Ramen
+
 Ra-
 
 Ramen...
-(Girls!?)
+...Ramen.
 Ramen?
 
 We don't know Takane at all!
-I...
+(What's wrong, girls!?)
-gotta get
+
-...a present for her too!
+
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-You should.
+Me too...
-I'm sure Takane-chan will be happy.
+I gotta...
 ...Get one too!
-Miss Kotori...
+
 That's right.
 I'm sure Takane-chan will be very happy.
-Is it okay to do this?
+
 Kotori-jyou...
 
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 Is this...alright?
 Of course! This is all for Takane-chan!
 
 Yes, but a party is a bit too...
-Leave it up to your old sis!
+
-Hold up, Piyoko!
+
 
 Just go with the flow!
 Leave it up to your Onee-san!
 Hold it, Piyoko!
-Ah,
+
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 Whatcha doin' to Takane?
 (We're back!)
 Ah!
 Welcome back.
-wearing this outfit makes it too heavy for me to move around.
+
 Why're ya just sittin' there?
 That's because...
 
 This regalia is too heavy for me to move around in.
 Why wouldja wear it in the first place?
 
-Anyways, shouldn't we start already?
+
 Hibiki sure is energetic.
 
 That's because Takane-chan's here.
-'Kay...
+Anyway, shall we being?
 The farewell party!
-How gloomy!
+
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 Yep...
-We can't go ahead like this.
+
-Oh well.
+So Depressed!
 
 (Yukiho, it's spilling!)
 We can't continue it like this.
 But oh well...
 
 Takane-chan, listen...
-Ladies,
+
 
 Understood.
-Up until now, I obtained many valuable experiences
+
-every day here at 765 Pro.
+
-I got to know many things that I never knew before.
+
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-Don'tcha cry...
+All this while, every day here at 765 Pro,
 I have  had many precious experiences.
 I learned many things that I never knew before.
 
 Don'tcha cry now...
 
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 Everybody,
-I really...
+
-not seein' ya again is a big no from me!
+
 
 No...
 I really can't...
-Me either.
+I ain't gonna let ya go!
-Count me in too!
+
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-Don't go...
+
-No!
+Me either!
-Don'tcha dare leavin'!
+I won't too!
 
-Don'tcha ever,
+Please don't go...
-ever,
+You can't!
-forget about us!
+Don'tcha dare leave!
 
 You can't!
 CAN'T!
 Ever forget about us!
-I too do not want to leave.
+
-With the fact that we cannot ever meet again...
+
 
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-Why are we
+I too do not wish to leave.
 The fact that we cannot ever meet again...
-shedding tears in this occasion?
+
 Why...
-Why....
+Why are we...
 
 Shedding tears on this occasion?
-It's because Takane is shedding tears too, is it not?
+
 Why...
 
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 It's because Takane-chan is shedding tears too, is it not?
 
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 What I am feeling is...
 
 I wanna go too!
 Hibiki...
 Tell me where your hometown is!
 
-Cut!!
+
 My hometown is-
 
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 CUT!!
 
 Perfect job, Takane-chan!
-(Stare)
+
-Don't forget these feelings...
+
-I won't!
+
 
 (Stunned)
 Don't forget those feelings...
 Yes!
-Truth is
+
-that Takane-san is auditioning for a drama show,
+
 Explain ya'self, Piyoko!
-but she didn't know how to act out the tearful farewell scene.
+
-She tried out lots of techniques, but...
+Well, actually,
-(That time too!)
+Takane-chan is auditioning for a drama show,
 
 But she didn't know how to act out the tearful farewell scene.
-When I saw her situation,
+She tried all sorts of techniques, but...
 (Ah, that time!)
-I tried to help.
+
 
 When I saw her like that,
 (I'll take care of it!)
 I tried to help out.
 
 Good thing it turned out well!
 Indeed.
-But, everybody was not acting, were they?
+
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 It is thanks to everyone that I obtained this feeling.
 
 But, were the others acting as well?
 Nope! That was the most important part to make this work!
 
 But that means I just tricked everyone into...
 
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 That's okay, everyone understands...
-Thank god~~~
+(RUMBLING)
 
 Th...
-That was friendship...
+
 
-I still have lots to learn, yes?
+THAT'S GREAT~~~
 
-Ah Kotori-san, please pay the fee we used to buy the presents, alright?
+
-(We supported you all the way after all.)
+This is friendship...
 
 I suppose I still have a lot to learn.
-You have to.
+
-(Kotori-san! It's a treat!)
+Ah, Kotori-san! Please pay us back for the presents, alright?
 (We supported you all the way, after all.)
 T-That's a bit too much...
 
 You will.
 (Kotori-san! It's her treat!)