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 BY THE BLESSING OF THE COMMISSARIAT, BY COMMAND OF HOLY TERRA IN THE NAME OF THE IMMORTAL GOD EMPEROR, HAIL THE IMPERIUM
 
 TRANSLATED USING PRIMARIS SIFTER 019:A4;A TO LOW GOTHIC.
 
 PRIMARY COGNITATOR FIRMWARE 49:23:A:13 ONLINE
 
 SEQUESTERED AND REGISTERED COMMISSARIAT PERSONAL COGITATOR AUTHORIZED PERSONS ONLY
 
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 Welcome to private workstation cogitator unit 54:G FRAMEWARE 24;14;145;56;F;A
 
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 >OPEN CASE FILE: 163;266;72;A:D23/4
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 To: Artistan Johnatius, a communique
 
 Carried by Guild Astropathica (Hive World Primaris) via meme‐wave 45~a.645.4 triple intra, spectrum protected.
 
 PATH DETAIL:
 
 ORIGIN: Danacant, <Error name not found> Sub 81281
 
 ORIGIN DATE: Meme-wave error, 34~~a.beta, designation: Warpstorm, ORIGIN DATE UNKNOWN
 
 (relayed: divergent M‐12ʹOstall VII)
 
 RECEIVED: Artistan Johnatius, Ophian Sub city, sector: 52981.4
 
 RECEPTION DATE: 123.345.M42
 
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 >You wanted it John, here it is, my personal logs.
 
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 http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive.html?tags=Commissar+quest
 
 
-You are Otto Schulte, a twelve year old girl on her way to destiny.
+You are Otto Schulte, a twelve year old girl on her way to destiny. Having left your home among the stars, you've now come to the world of besvir, this is your third visit to a planet, and the only one you can remember clearly - the last two being but wage memories in the back of your head. The world is still new and strange, but you are slowly beginning to understand it.
 
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-You are an average  girl of twelve years(148.40 cm) that puberty have not yet put its claws into. You've got  pale skin - and fierce red hair let lose but cut incredibly short, a boys haircut. Your face is round in shape, a small nose coupled with the freckles that crown it would have left you with a rather cute appearance if not for your eyes - hard, inquisitional pure white irises that glare at the world coldly.
+You are an average  girl of twelve years(148.40 cm tall) that puberty have not yet put its claws into. You've got  pale skin - and fierce red hair let lose but cut incredibly short, a boys haircut. Your face is round in shape, a small nose coupled with the freckles that crown it would have left you with a rather cute appearance if not for your eyes - hard, inquisitional pure white irises that glare at the world coldly.
 
 Stats: (Base stats hidden!)
 
 Current training points remaining(for this week): 10
 
-Logical - Earned by a past spent reading on your spare time you've gained a particular knack for logical thinking - spurned by Uncle Eric's urgings to always think before you leap. It have left you emotionally distant in some regards, tending not to easily get grilled up. (GM note: No, not socially awkward - you do feel emotion its just not always showing - think Spock)
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-Cognitator knack: Earned by a life spent onboard vessels of the void, and more recently a day spent serving them you've got a rather firm basic understandings of these wondrous machines - much more then the average citizen of the imperium may state.
+Logical: - Earned by a past spent reading on your spare time you've gained a particular knack for logical thinking - spurned by Uncle Eric's urgings to always think before you leap. It have left you emotionally distant in some regards, tending not to easily get grilled up. (GM note: No, not socially awkward - you do feel emotion its just not always showing - think Spock)
 
 Cognitator knack Rank 1: Earned by a life spent onboard vessels of the void, and more recently a day spent serving them you've got a rather firm basic understandings of these wondrous machines - much more then the average citizen of the imperium may state.
 
 Void traveler: - For the better part of your life you've been onboard vessel of the void, the nature of your admittance to the ship is fuzzy and wage - but from what you know, you where born while your mother was traveling to the scholia, for purpose unknown. This have left you with a certain knack for traveling on void-ships, things like losing gravity, or otherwise don't really bother you to much.
 
-Figthan: A life onboard a ship is not easy, especially for a none-void-born among the voidlings, coupled with your unusual appearance (Not your skin, nor eyes - but rather the hair) have left you with a basic understanding on the rise and fall of glorious kids-fighting, more so recently when entering into sparring with Nikkobar. (Gm note: No, you can't fight for shit outside of kid fighting levels really)
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 Figthan Rank 1: A life onboard a ship is not easy, especially for a none-void-born among the voidlings, coupled with your unusual appearance (Not your skin, nor eyes - but rather the hair) have left you with a basic understanding on the rise and fall of glorious kids-fighting, more so recently when entering into sparring with Nikkobar. (Gm note: No, you can't fight for shit outside of kid fighting levels really)
 
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 Base planet info:
 
 Planet Function: Military junktion/staging ground -
 space port.(Hive world)
 Government: Lord Imperial governor: Ralak'tal III
 Planet Type: Terrestrial
 Terrain: Wetlands
 Gravity: 0.95 Imperial Standard
 Atmosphere: Type I (Breathable)
 Length of Day: 15 Imperial standard hours.
 Length of Year: 255 local day
 Hydrosphere: Moderate
 Temperature: Temperate
 Population: Inestimable, records outdated pending Administratom review per article 13.41:A
 Starport: Massive Imperial 19:131:STANDARD
 
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 BY THE BLESSING OF THE ADMINISTRATUM, BY COMMAND OF HOLY TERRA IN THE NAME OF THE IMMORTAL GOD EMPEROR, HAIL THE IMPERIUM
 
 TRANSLATED USING PRIMARIS SIFTER 019:A4;A TO LOW GOTHIC.
 
 PRIMARY COGNITATOR FIRMWARE 19:41:1:13 ONLINE
 
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 Welcome PASSENGER-02013, You may proceed.
 
 >Open Case file: 102:ad;eb;24:Sh keyword: "Besvir"
 
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 >Besvir, three alternatives found.
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 >Planet: Besvir
 >Hero of Lanraluk wars: Besvir The Great
 >Imperial Besvir-III-Pattern reinforced boots.
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 >Planet: Besvir
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 >Segmentum Obscurus: Sector: Gillimas Subsector: Adelorum, System: Rakriuam, Planet: Besvir
 
 Planet Function: Military junktion/staging ground -
 space port.(Hive world)
 Government: Lord Imperial governor: Ralak'tal III
 Planet Type: Terrestrial
 Terrain: Wetlands
 Gravity: 0.95 Imperial Standard
 Atmosphere: Type I (Breathable)
 Length of Day: 15 Imperial standard hours.
 Length of Year: 255 local day
 Hydrosphere: Moderate
 Temperature: Temperate
 Population: Inestimable, records outdated pending Administratom review per article 13.41:A
 Starport: Massive Imperial 19:131:STANDARD
 
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 >Schola Progenium. Planet: Besvir
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 Schola Progenium:
 
 Size: Standard Imperial.
 Population: Inestimable, records outdated pending Administratom review per article 13.41:A
 Military status: Active and serving.
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 Military Garrison: Two companies of Imperial Guard service men. Honorable band support Kristik 23:th and auxiliary light Iarlu 141:th
 Adepta Sororitas: Order of the Argent Shroud: Additional information - restricted.
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 Primary export: Storm Troopers.
 Additional information: Famous Lord-Commissar Arkilam the unwavering have returned for teaching in late
 902.M41
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 Current date: 922.M41
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 >Scholia Progenium: Nature/Culture
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 >One match found, open introduction logs by Joralm Achil
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 HERESY GROWS FROM IDLENESS
 
 >The Schola you are now destined to become part of dear student is one of the oldest in our segmentums history, with nearly a century of educating the emperors best and brightest.
 
 >You are to become one of those, your duty is simple: Learn, and become more then you are - but beware, those that are found wanting, will be left behind in the dust.
 
 >As a member of the schola you will be provided for, but always expected to earn that privilege - failure to meet standards will result in privileges cut, dear student.
 
 >Do not ask what you want to become student, know that those wiser then you will answer that question for you.
 
 >Now... (The following 103 pages are covering the history of the schola and its famous people.. .you won't have time to read it it all, do we try and download it to a data slate for later?)
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 >Check out lord-commissar Arkilam
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 > Lord-commissar Arkilam: 134 Standard years, famous for his battle in the Uptivan Crusades against the chaos marauder Xinl-Kinl, retired from active service: 900.M41
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 >Cognitator powering down.
 
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