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 Manga Time Kirara Magica
 Volume 5 Serial
 
 Homura's Revenge #5
 by Golden Pe Done
 
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 ---1---
 
-:  Oh..
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-:  After all, I found my wish.
+
 
 :  Mm..
 :  Well, I found my wish.
 :  But...
 
 :  If that can happen to Mami-san...
-:  With Mami-san gone
+
-:  Who will protect this city?
+
 
 :  With Mami-san gone, who will protect this city?
 :  Besides--
 
 ---2---
 
 
-Two lives with their destinies interwoven--
+
 
 Two interwined destinies--
 
 Homura's Revenge
 Mahou Shoujo Madoka Magica
 #5    Golden Pe Done
 
-:  Even if someone else took the job
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-:  She'll be just after the Grief Seeds, no?
+
 :  Even if someone else took the job, she'll be just after the Grief Seeds, right?
 
 :  Like that transfer student!
 
-:  She'll go after the Witches too!
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 :  She goes after the Witches too!
 
 :  Hold on!!
 :  How can you be so sure, Madoka!?
 
 ---4---
 
 :  You only met the transfer student recently, how can you know?
 
 :  That...
 
 :  I will never trust her!!
 
 :  Mami-san was her fault too!
 
 Ah!
 
 :  Madoka...
 
 :  Any... ways!
-:  So you shouldn't get involved in this anyways.
+
 :  So you shouldn't get involved in these stuff.
 
 :  You can count on Magical Girl Sayaka-chan to take over for Mami-san!
 
 ---5---
 
 :  --Anyways
 :   I've gotta get going.
-:  Huh? Do you have something to do?
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 :  Do you have something to do?
 :  You could say that.
 
-:  That's good of Kamijou-kun.
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-:  Eh... Yeah
+:  Good for Kamijou-kun.
 :  Eh... heh
 
 
-:  Oh
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 :  Em
 
 ---6---
 
 :  Sayaka
 
 :  Kyubey?
 :  Ah
 
 :  I have someone I'll like you to meet today.
 
 ---7---
 
 :  Homura-chan, I'm sorry...
-:  I didn't make it in time to stop Sayaka, even though I knew she'll contract...
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 :  I didn't stop Sayaka in time, even though I knew she'll contract...
 
 :  This isn't your fault, Madoka...
 :  I should have thought about it sooner.
 
 ---8---
-:  Even worse...   Sayaka seem to refuse to trust you...
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-:  ... Em
+:  Even worse...   Sayaka seem to refuse to trust you at all...
 :  ... Correct
 
-:  Even so Homura-chan obviously tried to save Mami-san, Sayaka refuses...
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 :  Even so Homura-chan obviously was trying to save Mami-san, Sayaka won't...
-:  That can't be helped.
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 :  It can't be helped.
 
 :  If I didn't show up back then
 :  Mami Tomoe might still be alive.
 
 :  ... Madoka
 
 
 ---9---
 
 :  You and I need to keep our distance.
 
 :  Eh?
-:  If you continue to work with me like this, your relationship with her can only deteriorate.
+
 :  If you keep working with me like this, your relationship with that girl will only deteriorate.
 
 :  But...
 
 :  Homura-chan, are you okay with this?
-:  Even though you tried so hard for everyone,
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-:  No one will understand you...
+:  Even though you try so hard for everyone,
 :  No one understand you...
 
 ---10---
 
 :  ... That was true once.
 
 :  But
 
 :  Now
 :  Madoka knows.
 
 
 ---11---
 
 :  Ah...
 
 :  Madoka!?
 :  Sayaka-chan
-:  Going on patrol?
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 :  Going on patrol today?
-:  -- That's why, it's time for you to go and follow Miki Sayaka.
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 :  -- That's why, you need to go and follow Miki Sayaka.
 
 ---12---
-:  At least protect her Soul Gem from becoming a Grief Seed.  Follow her closely.
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-:  If something happens to you, I'll jump in and help.
+:  Protect her Soul Gem from hatching into a Witch, so follow her closely.
 :  If something happens, I'll jump in and help -
 :  Take me with you!!
 
 :  Madoka...
-:  But I... the transfer student...
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 :  But I... and the transfer student...
 :  Sayaka-chan...
 
 :  Am I a bother?
 
 ---13---
-:  No.
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 :  No no
 :  Thank you, Madoka!
 
 :  It's pathetic, but I feel kind of helpless by myself...
 :   Having someone by my side would make me feel a lot better!!
-:  Sayaka!
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 :  Sayaka-chan!
 
 :  I swear I'll protect you. So relax and just follow me.
 :  Let's go get those witches!!
 
 ---14---
 
 :  Madoka
-:  Aren't you concerned about Sayaka?
+
 :  Are you concerned about Sayaka?
 
 :  If such an awful thing could happen to Mami.
 
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-:  I'm also worried about Sayaka, so I made some preparations for her.
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-:  Preparations?  What does you mean...
+:  I'm also worried about Sayaka, so I made some preparations.
 :  Preparations?  What do you...
 
-:  EH!?
+
 :  Eh!?
 
 :  It's here.
 
 :  Let's go, Madoka!!
 
 ---16---
 
 :  This Barrier was probably made by a familiar.
 
 :  You hear that?
 
 ---17---
 
 :  Sayaka-chan!  Over there!!
 
 :  Leave it to me!
 
 ---18---
 
 :  I'm here!
 
 ---19---
 
 :  Where are you going!!
 
 ---20---
 
 :  So fast!
 
 :  Ah!  It's running away!!
 :  What!
 
 :  No yet!
 
 ---21---
 
 :  How about...
 
 :  This!!
 
 ---22---
 
 :  Got it!!
 
 ---23---
 
 :  You did it, Sayaka-chan!
 
 :  Sakura Kyouko didn't interfere this time.
 
 ---24---
 
-:  Just as it said.
+:  Just like it told me.
 :  Someone being all sneaky back here.
-:  Just like with Mami, right?
+:  Just like that time with Mami, right?
 
 ---25---
 
 :  Sakura Kyouko...
 
 ---26---
 
-:  Pssh--
+:  Heh--
 
-:  You even know about me.
+:  So you even know about me.
 :  Ha!
 
 :  But you thought wrong.
 
-:  Eh!
+
 
 --27---
 
 :  Or else I can't even take on Witches.
 : Transform
 
 ---28---
 
 :  Calm down
 
 :  What!!
 :  Sakura Kyouko
 
-:  Yet... you say you don't' wish to fight me.
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 ---29---
 
-:  I am not that easy to get along with, like Mami was.
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 :  Yet... you don't wish to fight me.
 
 :  Who would believe that!
 
 :  I am not an easy person like Mami was.
 
 :  I heard something!
 
 :  Madoka!?
 
 ---30---
-:  Leave this place quickly.
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 :  Homura-chan, what's this!?
 
 :  This has nothing to do with you.
 
 :  Leave this place, quickly.
 
 ---31---
 
-:  What?  First come first served.
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 :  - Miki Sayaka
 
 :  This is my opponent.
 :  What?  I found her first.
 
 ---32---
 
 :  How do you know each other!?
 :  Sayaka-chan!
 
 :  Homura-chan!!