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 p1
 >It's been so long that I no longer remember the reason or what caused it.
->But one day I just notced
+>But one day I just noticed
 >I couldn't avert my eyes
 >as she walked away while being pulled by Ayako-san's hand.
 >That's all it was.
 
 >>whoosh
 
 p2
 >Oh.
 >You're awake.
 >Jun.
 >Rui.
 
 >Do you two have a moment?
 >What's all this so early in the morning, Mom?
 >Rui's still asleep...
 
 >...Come on, Asuka.
 >Say hello to Jun-kun, won't you?
 
 p3
 >This is Mori Asuka-chan.
 >She's the same age as Rui and starting elementary school this year.
 >Starting today, we'll be in charge of her while Ayako-san is working downstairs.
 >So make sure you look after her properly during spring break, okay?
 >Jun.
 
 >It's been ten years since then.
 >Even now
 >I still haven't given a name
 >to these feelings.
 
 >Jun-nii.
 >Y'see...
 
 p4
->I'm in love
+>I love
->with my Mom.
+>my Mom.
 
 >...Huh?
 >Um...I'm already aware that you're a huge mothercon.
 
 >What does that have to do with our current conversation...?
 >Well, that reaction is to be expected.
 
 p5
 >Like I said.
 >>caw caw
->I love Mom!
+>I am in love with Mom!
 >In the romantic sense.
 
 >....~~~~~?? ~~~~~! ~~~... ~~~~!?
 >Could you...
 >...give me a moment...?
 >Take your time.
 
 >...This has gotta be a joke, right...?
 >Are you and Rui playing another trick on me or something...
 
 >No
 >Even I know the difference between a good joke and a bad one...
 >It's nothing even funny...
 
 p6
 >...Are you serious?
 >Yeah.
 >It's really...
 >that kind of love?
 >...Yeah.
 
 >I see...
 >>glance
 
 >...You grossed out?
 >Hah
 >Never mind grossed out. I'm still trying to understand it.
 
 >Now that you say it, all of our previous conversations suddenly make sense...
 >Does Ayako-san know about this?
 >...Ah...
 
 p7
 >...Well...
 >>fidget fidget
->Earlier... on that day when we had our fight...
+>Earlier... on the evening of that day when we had our fight...
 >I kissed her...
 >and then pushed her down.
 
 >Huuuuuuuuuuuh!? No, no, no, you shouldn't do that even if she isn't your parent...!!
 >It's a crime!
 >We better go home now.
 >I-I mean, I've been living with that every single day, right!? The frustration was making me go crazy...!!
 >Uwaaaaah! Stop it! I don't want to hear that kind of relation about your relatives...!!
 >And with your mother no less!!!
 
 >...Why are you always so straight forward about strange stuff like that!?
 >You should try to
 >think about the consequences a little...
 
 >As you are now,
 >if something like that were to happen
 >would you be able to take responsibility?
 
 p8
 >...I know that...
 >But...
 >But I can't help it...
 >Because...
 
 >I love her...
 >after all...
 >>twitch
 
 >No.
->That's no what I meant.
+>That's not what I meant.
 >>snap snap
 >It's not like
 >I'm trying to lecture you or something...
 
 p9
 >...
 
 >...Hey.
 
 >Can I... ask you one thing?
 
 >When was it that you realised it?
 
 p10
 
 >When did you start
 >looking at Ayako-san like that?
 >...Eh?
 
 >When, you ask...?
 >Asuka
 
 >Asuka.
 >That's...
 >Hey, does it feel good?
 
 p11
 >Asuka-chan?
 
 >...
 >>swish
 >Ah...
 
 >I don't really remember...
 >Why do you ask?
 
 >...No.
 
 p12
 >It's not something that can be understood so simply.
 >The borderline representing love between people is pretty vague.
 >Especially when it's with your mother.
 >Aren't you scared?
 
 >What if she rejects you?
 >What will you do if the relationship you've had until now changes?
 
 >Wouldn't it be better
 >to keep things as they are...?
 >...
 
 >...Well, I get what you're saying.
 >Sorry
->for blabbering about become independant from your parents.
+>for blabbering about become independent from your parents.
 >Jun-nii.
 
 p13
 >...But still.
 
 >I'll just say this.
 >You're a complete moron who is completely ignorant of the ways of the world.
 >>point
 >What the!?
 >What's this all of a sudden!?
 
 >This isn't a joke, so listen up.
 >Even under normal circumstances, your face always shows what you're thinking.
 >Don't carelessly expose your weakness. Choose your words carefully when talking to others.
 >Who knows what might happen because of your stupidity.
 
 >If that happens
 >it'd be a problem for me.
 
 >...
 >...Why...?
 
 p14
 >Why haven't I...
 >realized it until now...?
 >There's no reason for falling in love with someone.
 >The way they express it is different from person to person.
 >Just using words all the time
 >isn't the right answer.
 
 >...Thanks.
 >Jun-nii.
 
 >...
 >Hmm...
 
 p15
 >The childhood friend onii-san and his sister's best friend...
 >When you put it like that...
 
 >you do see that combination a lot in society.
 >Jun-kun has always been a good boy.
 >He would always let me know if something happened...
 >Hey!
 >Rui, no bullying children in the house!!
 >Eh~ We were just playing?
 >No, no, no! Look, she's clearly crying!!
 >Waaah! Mommy~
 
 
 >>gloom gloom gloom
 
 >>vrr vrrr
 >Yes.
 >Hello, Akira...
 >Ah, you there, Ayako~?
 >I just got sent a whole bunch of hair crabs from my kouhai at the Hokkaido branch.
 >They're not gonna fit in my fridge so do you mind if I send you so-
 >>boop
 >>Mori Akira.
 
 
 p16
 >>vrr vrr vrr
 >Why'd you hang up on me!?
 >Sorry. I'm not in the mood to talk with you right now, Akira.
 >Hah...
 >Aren't you being pretty harsh today, Ayako?
 >Did something happen?
 
 >>sparkle
 
 >...H-
 >Hey, Akira.
 >There's
 >something I want to ask you.
 
 >...Eh?
 
 p17
 >Have you noticed anything different about Asuka?
 >Hah
 >It's cold.
 
 >Anything different...
 >What is it? Did that girl do something again?
 >Ah...erm...
->It's not nothing, but it's not what you're thinking...
+>She did some things, but it's not about that...
 
 >I mean, Asuka's already in high school, right?
 >She probably has some things she wouldn't tell me.
 >Besides...
 >You're also a lot like a parent to her too.
 
->She hasn't...
+>So I wonder...
->told me any...thing...
+>if you know...anything...
 >Hm?
 
 >What's wrong, Ayako?
 >You're not usually one to dodge the question.
 >Is there something you want to know about Asuka?
 >Uh
 
 >That's cos...
 >Um...
 
 p18
 >It seems like that girl...
->has someone that she's d-dating...
+>had someone that she was used to d-date...
 >>mumble mumble
 
 
 >...
 >Phew...
 
 >...Hey, Ayako, just to check,
 >are you really not aware?
 >...Hm...
 
 >I'm aware that I'm overprotective at times, if that's what you're asking?
 >That's not
 >what I meant.
 >But I can't help but be curious...
 
 >Well
 >if you haven't realised it yet then forget it!
 >I'm kinda pissed off for some reason.
->I'm not gonna go out of my way to send salt to my enemy. [TN:Japanese proverb meaning "show humanity, even to your enemy"]
+>I don't wanna go out of my way to help my enemy.
 >?
 
 p19
 >Don't worry about it.
->What do you mean by that?
+>What do you mean
 >by that?
 >As far as I'm aware
 >There has never been a single moment where that girl has showed an interest in any human being besides you...
 
 >...Aah.
 >But there was that weird phase for a brief moment.
 
 >You remember, right?
->Back then, that girl was strangely well-behaved.
+
->She was acting kinda distant...
+>Back then, that girl was strangely quiet or rather,
 >she was acting kinda distant...
 
 p20
 >She seemed back to normal when I got back so I totally forgot but
 >what was that all about in the end?
 >Adolescence??
 
 >....
 
 >>bubble bubble...
 
 >>glance
 >Hmm?
 
 >Geh, she scribbled on my notes.
 >...
 >Now that she mentions it...
 
 p21
 >I think it was around... the winter of the second year of middle school.
 >It really lasted for just a moment so I had forgotten, but...
 >She did seem kind of absent-minded.
 >As if...
 
 >she was looking at a far away.
 >>bubble bubble...
 
 >...Hm?
 >sniff...
 >....
 
 >Hey!
 >>turn
 >Mom, is something burning!?
 
 >Eh?
 >>smoke smoke smoke
 
 p22
 >Woah!
->Geez, Mom, are you feeling alright, today?
+
 >Geez, Mom, are you feeling alright today?
 >Want me to take over?
 >To Mori Ayako-sama