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-Name:
+Name: Kumi, The Whisper of Night
-Race: http://pastebin.com/svidM0rw
+Race: Frost Queen
-Religion: http://pastebin.com/QxjHSYD9
+Religion: Valkyr
-Age:
+Age: 34
-Appearance:
+Appearance: For a Frost Queen, Kumi is noted to be quite tall, standing at 6'6". Her skin is a pale snow-white, and her eyes nearly a pure white, with a light grey-blue eye color. Her skin is a dark black that trails behind her, reaching her hips. Her hair is often braided into a bun, with two trailing tails with twisted lace. Her skin is often, or always, adorned with a charcoal paint, two lines trailing along her hairs, then a sign for death placed on her forehead with a crescent moon over it. Her body otherwise is lithe, and thin, like many of her people.
 
-Weapons:
+Weapons: Desutoroiyā: A large bow, made of a light wood with a simple, yet elegant design. It stands at 9 feet long, made as a traditional Yumi, asymmetrical, larger above the user, with a heavy pull weight, made for long ranged attacks.
-Armor:
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-Misc. Equipment:
+Quiver: 30 arrows in total, made long to fit her bow, made to be 4 feet long.
-Riches: Gold, silver, copper, gems, etc.
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-	(5 silver is the average cost of a night in an inn) (20 copper per silver, 20 silver per gold)
+2 Tantos: Two small blades, hidden beneath her kimono normally, that she uses for a sneak attack at close range with foes that suspect that her to be defenseless up close. They have a bare wooden handle and sheath.
 
-Notable Skills: (Skills like Swordsmanship, Magic, Horseback riding, Climbing, Haggling, Alchemy, etc.)(5-9 is recommended)
+Armor: She wears a heavier chainmail over her torso, as a vest, with intersecting plates of metal. Over that armor is a mesh of silk fibers for stabbing weapons or arrows. Over her armor is then a large, samurai's kimono with a flower print of cherry blossoms, and rims of pink. Her armor is made for protection from enemy attacks, both up close, but particularly with arrows. However, it sacrifices speed. The kimono covers her armor though, making enemies suspect she has none.
-	(Things you're especially skilled at should be noted with roman numerals (higher numbers meaning more skill), up to III without special permission.)
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 Misc. Equipment: Tea Set, Brush, Ink, Scrolls of paper, Light Cooking Equipment, Bamboo Mat
-Magical Specialty: http://pastebin.com/9uy1k1is (Be sure to mention if you're a pyromancer, healer, etc.)
+Riches: 0
-Spell Components: (How do you use your magic? Playing instruments? Read out of a spellbook? Carve runes? Etc.)
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-Spells and Abilities: Two or three spells per skillpoint in Magic skill. Other abilities as needed.
+Notable Skills: Archery III, Knife Fighting I, Cooking I, Poetry I, Painting II, Enchanting I
 
-Backstory: Anything you wanna put down can be added to later, just not replaced.
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-Family:
+Magical Specialty: Enchanting
 Spell Components: A rune placed onto a paper seal, then wrapped around the object, storing mana fora single use, but powerful enchantment.
-Example character sheet: http://pastebin.com/c10PSJjh
+Spells and Abilities:
 
 Ice Enchantment: An enchantment that when the weapon hits an object, freezes the area hit.
 
 Mirage Enchantment: An enchantment that creates phantom images of the weapon and/or wielder. If on an arrow, in the air it burns up creating multiple arrow images, confusing the target on which arrow is the real one and feigning multiple archers. In a melee attack, it makes the wielder appear to have multipler arms and weapons, confusing them on which one is the real weapon to block.
 
 Exploding Enchantment: An enchantment that explodes on hit. Rather unwieldy on a melee weapon.
 
 
 Backstory: Kumi grew up in a mild noble family. Her mother groomed her for marriage since she could stand and talk, and only wanted the best for her, setting her up with a richer family with an elven man that was already in his thirties, waiting until she was of age. However, she herself had different wants in life. Her ancestors gained their nobility within the lands due to their services in war, with her great grandfather being an ancient archer renowned for her massive bow and arrow and shooting from the farthest distances imagined. She made many of battles turn their favor to his side, and was granted land and power in his old age to raise her family. Now the bow, her arrows, kimono, and armor are relics of the past that Kumi and her family worship at for blessings of their ancestors and from their god Valkyr.
 	For years she practiced with a bow she stole from the market until a day. When she was to be wed when she was 20, she stole the relics and ran away from home to find her own destiny.
 
 Family: Tori, her mother.
 
 Kamale, Ex-Fiance