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 As an adult, as an idol...
 
 Producer
 
 (Konomi-san took a break from Mixnuts lessons all of a sudden...  In the phone call she said she's in this room...)
 
-(Konomi-san whose taking a break from Mixnuts' all of a sudden.  she said she is in this rome in our phone call...)
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 (For now, lets just talk with Konomi-san first.)
 
 (Door opening)
 
-(For now, let just take with Konomi-san first)
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 Uuu...  If it's in this formation here, I have to find a way to bring everyone's cuteness out more...
 
 Konomi
 
 And since it's Mami-chan's main song here...
 
-Hmm~...   If it this composition, I've to find a way to bring everyone's cuteness out more...
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 Is that so...  Konomi-san is trying to plan the live's composition by herself.)
 
 Producer
 
 (It looks like she's so focused she didn't even notice me enter the room...)
 
 Konomi
 
-(I see... So Konomi-san try to plan live composition all by herself)
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 Konomi
 
 ...Waa!...  Producer, when did you get here...?
 
-(Look like she so concentrated, she didn't even notice me enter the room...)
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 Just now.  I'm sorry, since you looked so focused I didn't want to disturb you...
 
 Konomi
 
-Then, how about use this song first...hm?
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 Producer
 
 Since you just disappeared all of a sudden everyone from Mixnuts is worrying about you, you know?
 
-..Wah!...Producer.  When did you get here...?
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 That might be so...  Looks like I owe those kids an apology.
 
 Konomi
 
-Just now.  I'm sorry, since you look so concentrated, I'm don't want to disturb you...
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 Producer
 
 Is that so...  Even then, you don't have to bear it alone like this...!
 
-No, It's fine.  Anyway...sorry to made you worry.
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 I apologize, but I thought I had to think about it thoroughly; what kind of live Platinum Star Live should be...
 
-I think this is pretty good but a triple or quadruple check or whatever we're on at this point wouldn't hurt.
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 As the leader of Mixnuts, and as an adult...  It's my responsibility!
 
-...Since you just disappeared all of a sudden everyone at Mixnuts is worry about you, you know?
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 Konomi-san...
 
 Producer
 
-I guess so...  Look like I'm does those kid wrong.*
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-*Or "Look like I'm own those kid an apologies" if that sound more natural
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 Let's go drink together
 Let's think together
 
 >Let's go drink together
 
 Producer
 
 Ne, Konomi-san, would you like to go out for a drink now?  It'll be my treat.
 
-That might be true...  but even so, you don't have to bear it all alone like this...!
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 ...Eh?
 
 Konomi
 
-I'm sorry.  But I thought that I have to think about it thoroughly.  About what kind of live should I make Platinum Star Live 4th into...
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 Producer
 
 But there's no way a good idea could come out like this, right?
 
-As a leader of Mixnuts, and as an adult..., It's my responsibility!
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 Never forget to have fun together with the fans...  Isn't that what 765PRO live theaters are?
 
 Producer
 
 If you just worry about it like that there's no way you could think of a fun idea!  You need to be more relaxed!
 
 Konomi
 
-(Look like Konomi-san really troubled by it.  Here, I'll..)
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 Konomi
 
 If I don't take it seriously, those kids won't be able to shine...!
 
 Producer
 
 (Konomi-san truly has a strong sense of responsibility...  She worries about the members more than herself...)
 
 Producer
 
-Konomi-san, Let's go drink together.  It's my treat.
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 Konomi
 
 N..no use?  Are you not worried about those kids, Producer?
 
 Producer
 
 ...Of course, I'm worried about everyone, but those girls aren't the only one I'm worried about.
 
-W...what did you just say?  I've a duty as a leader... There no way I have anytime for that...
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 ...Konomi-san.  I'm also wishing for you to shine on the stage as well.
 
 Konomi △
 
-But there no way you could think of a good idea like this, right?
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 Producer
 
 It's true that you're the leader, the one who has to take care of everyone, and an adult.  But...
 
-never forgot to have fun together with the fans...  Isn't that what we, 765PRO live theater are?
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 To me, you are also one of the important idols that I have to protect at all costs as well!
 
 Konomi
 
-If you just worry about it like that, there no way you could think of a fun idea!  You have to relax more!
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 Producer
 
 If an important idol I'm in charge of has trouble against an obstacle...  Even if there's nothing I can do, at least I want to worry and relax together with them...
 
-E..even so...!  We don't have luxury to just take it easy and talk about relaxing or enjoying...!
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 If I can't do even that, I will be a failure as a producer...!
 
 Konomi
 
 Producer...  ...Thank you.
 
 Konomi
 
-(Konomi-san really have a strong sense of responsibility...  She worry about about unit's members more than herself...)
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 Konomi
 
 And Producer is also busy with taking care of the other younger idols...
 
-It's true that we don't have much time.  but there no use in become desperated.
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 I thought that as an adult I had to lead everyone by myself...
 
 Producer
 
-N..no use?  are you not worry about those kids, Producer?
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 Konomi
 
 But...I see.  To you, I'm also an idol like those kids...
 
-...Of course, I'm worry about everyone.  But, those girls aren't the only one I'm worry about.
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 Yes.  I'm 765PRO theater's, Mixnuts'... and idol Baba Konomi's producer after all!
 
 Konomi
 
-...Konomi-san.  I'm also wish for you to shine on the stage as well.
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 Producer
 
 Of course!  You don't have to worry about being the oldest, please rely on me anytime you want.
 
 Producer
 
 When compared to your age you look sma- I mean, you look younger, so it won't look out of place even if you rely on me a little.
 
-It's true that you're a leader, the one who have to take care of everyone, and an adult.  But...
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 ...Producer, thank you truly.
 
 Konomi
 
 ...I'll pretend I didn't hear you almost say "small".
 
 Producer
 
 Uuu...so you heard it...
 
 Konomi
 
-If an important idol I'm in charge have a troubled against a obstacle...,  even if I can't do anything, at least I want to worry and relax together with them...
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 Producer
 
 Konomi-san...you don't have to hold back, you know!?
 
 Konomi
 
 It's alright, I'm not holding back.  It's just that...
 
 Konomi
 
 I thought that the one who knows the best about what kind of unit Mixnuts, and what kind of stage they want to make, is me.
 
-I have thought, that as an adult, I've to become someone who everyone can depend on..., that I've to be an adult before idol...
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 ...Konomi-san.
 
 Konomi
 
 ...It's fine!  Since while it might be tiring to be serious with those kids, it's also really fun!
 
 Producer
 
-I thought that, as an adult, at least I've to lead everyone by myself...
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 Konomi
 
 Yes, leave it to me!  Fufu, I have someone to depend on...  Just knowing that my heart is feeling so much lighter♪
 
 Konomi
 
 I will rely on you when the time comes that I can't do it alone, ok?
 
 Producer
 
 That's what I'm here for after all.  I'll help anytime, so please don't worry about anything and just think.
 
-Of course...!  I'm 765Pro theater's Mixnuts'..., and an idol Baba Konomi's producer after all!
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 ...Then, I'll return to Mami and everyone now.
 
 (Door open)
 
-...Then, c..can I also depend on you, or show my weaker side to you...?
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 ...Hn?  There's a plastic bag hanging on the door knob.  It wasn't there when I arrived here...  What's in it?
 
 Producer
 
 ..............
 
 Konomi
 
-When compare to you age you look sma..., I mean, you look younger, so it won't look out of place even if you depend on me a little.
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 Producer
 
 ...Konomi-san, it looks like I'm not the only one who wants to support you.  Here.
 
-...Producer, Thank you.
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 What is this?  ...A snack, a bento, an apple, a drink... even a side dish.
 
 Konomi
 
 And...what's this...a letter?  but from whom..?
 
 Mami
 
-Uh...so you hear it...
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 Hinata
 
 Konomi-san I'm sorry that I've troubled you a lot.  I'll give you an apple from gramp's farm so that you won't overdo it and catch a cold.
 
-...But for this time, I want to think about it all by myself.  No matter what.
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 We're always helped by Konomi-san who's good at taking care of everyone!  If you want to use the home delivery service just give Satake restaurant a call!  We'll deliver it to you free of charge~♪
 
 Iku
 
-Konomi-san...you don't have to holding back, you know!?
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 Konomi
 
 ...Everyone... *sniff/sob sound* ...Ufufu...thank you!
 
-It's alright, I didn't holding back.  It's just that...
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 Ok!  I feel really great now!  Let's go!  Big sister will give it her all now~!
 
 Producer
 
-I thought that the one who know the best about what kind of unit Mixnuts is, and what kind of stage they want to make, is me.
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 Producer
 
 (Me, and all the members of Mixnuts, are believing in you Konomi-san...  Konomi-san, please do your best...!)
 
 >Let's think together
 
 Producer
 
-...It's alright!  Since while it might be tiring to be serious with those kids, It's also fun.
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 Konomi
 
 ...Thank you, Producer, but it's fine.  You have more important work to do, right?
 
-...Understood.  If you really sure about that, Then...I'll believe in you.
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 I heard it from Kotori-chan.  The paperwork for Platinum Star Live is falling behind schedule because we can't decide on our concept...
 
 Producer
 
-Just leave it to me!  Fufu, I've someone to depend on...  Just by knowing that, My heart is feel so much lighter♪
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 Konomi
 
 Right?  I'll be fine by myself.  I'm the leader after all.  I can handle this much!
 
-I'll be sure to depend on you when I'm really can't do it all alone.
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 ...About the other work, we have Otonashi-san and the president so we will manage somehow.  Ritsuko will also help us.
 
 Producer
 
-That what I'm here for after all.  I'll help you anytime so please don't worry about anything and just think.
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 Producer
 
 Right now, I have work I must do as a producer.  It's to support the troubled idol in front of me...to support Konomi-san with all my might!
 
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