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 p2
 >If possible, I would like
 >to remain your most important person forever.
 
 >>slide
 
 >Be seated.
 >I'm handing back your tests.
 >>No, not supplementary lessons~
 >>Gya
 
 >>rustle
 
 p3
 >Woah.
 
 >>snatch
 >Hey!
 
 >Don't just go peeking at other people's test scores!
 >>Mori Asuka
 
 >Man. Looks like you got great scores again, huh, Miss Top-of-the-class!
 >Same as ever!
 >Hehe
 >I suppose.
 
 >Hmm, but there's always that one question I can never understand no matter what.
 >I get it wrong even if I've heard it before.
 >When's Jun-nii coming back next?
 
 >Aah...
 
 p4
 >I thinks he's coming home in a week or so? What with it being Winter break.
 >I'll let you know when that happens.
 >Thanks.
 >>Mizuno Jun
 >>Rui's older brother who's in university.
 
 >Well, if I tell him you're waiting for him, Asuka, he'd probably come back as soon as tomorrow.
 >>mutter
->Hm? Did you say something
+>Hm? Did you say something(?)																								(1)
 >Nope. Just talking to myself.
 
 >Excuse me. We're about to be using this classroom for supplementary lessons.
 >Would you mind moving to another classroom?
 >Ah
 >Sure.
 
 >That aside, you're sure love studying.
 >Is there something you have in mind for a future career?
 
 >Nah.
 >I haven't really thought that far ahead...
 
 p5
 >It's just something I've liked doing since long ago.
 >Sitting at my desk, studying by myself.
 >>[clang]
 >>[slide]
 >Hmm.
 
 >You're something of an odd-ball, aren't you, Asuka.
 >You think so?
 
 >Ah?
 
 >Hey, Mori is all well and good, but you, Mizuno...
 >You've got SUPPLEMENTARY LESSONS IN ALL SUBJECTS, don't you?
 >Where do you think you're going?
 >That's the wrong way
 >isn't it?
 >Tch.
 
 >So with that said, let's run for it!
 >>fwish
 >>turn
 >Eh!? What did he say just now!?
 >All subjects!?
 
 p6
->Well, you helped me out somehow last year, so I figured you could so something about it this year too.
+
 >That excuse again!? You almost dropped out last year because of that!! Quit screwing around and study!!
->You're trying to get me do all of your homework again!?
+>Well, you helped me out somehow last year, so I figured you could s(d)o something about it this year too.						(2)
 >I'm counting on you.
 >You're trying to get me do all of your homework again!?
 >And anyway, this is becoming way too much of a habit for you, Rui! At least try to be a little more diligent...
 >Yeah yeah, later, okay?
 >>step step step step
 
 >...Ah...
->>Mizuno Medicin Preparation and Pharmacy
+
 
 >>Prescriptionist Office
 >>Mizuno Medicin(e) Preparation and Pharmacy																					(3)
 >>Medicine
 
 p7
 >Director.
 >Geh.
 >Ayako-san...
 >...Oh?
 
 >What is that you've got in your hands, I wonder?
 >>rumble rumble
 >>stagger stagger
 >Ah, no, it's not what you think. This just happened to be in my pocket.
 >I was just about to throw it away...
 >Ah...
 >>yoink
 
 >>click
 >>ignite
->You'll get told off by Jun-kun, y'know?
+
 p8
 >Just this once, okay?
 >You'll get told off by Jun-kun (again), y'know?																					(4)
 
 >..
 >Aight.
 
 >And also
 >Quit calling me that.
 >It makes me feel all the responsibility at once.
 >Hah...
 >Fufu
 >Are your parents well?
 
 >Yeah, they're fine. A little too well, if you ask me.
 >They're all like "It's such a relief that Ayako-chan is working here."
 >"Now we can enjoy our retirement to its fullest."
 >I'm here too, y'know.
 
->Yeah, I mean, they want on a trip last month and still haven't come back yet.
+
->>Please don't contact use - Your parents
+
 
 >Yeah, I mean, they want (went) on a trip last month and still haven't come back yet.											(5)
 >>Please don't contact use (us)  - Your parents																					(6)
 >Eh? Is that really alright?
 >They sure are energetic.
 
 p9
 >They'll be fine.
 >[It's nothing I can do anything about]
 >But enough about my family.
 
 >How's Asuka-chan doing?
 >Eh?
 
 >You're making that "something happened" look on your face.
 >Did you fight or something?
 >...
 >Ah...
 
 >Erm...
 >Well...
 >It's not a serious problem or anything, but...
 
 >It feels like my daughter...
 >is a bit of a mothercon...
 
 p10
 >Ah... Yeah...
 >So you are aware of that, I see...
 >I thought that childish behavior would be okay while she was still in middle school... But recently, it's gotten a bit...
 >I was thankful that she didn't enter a rebellious age while I was raising her, but I'm not sure what to do about all this clinginess.
 >Even now, she still wants to sleep together with me, y'know?
 
 >Maybe...
 >> February																															(7)
 >> Pharmacology																														(8)
 >it's because I didn't pay enough attention to her when she was little...or something...
 
 >...
 
->Geez, I was worried about what happened, but I'm glad nothing bad  happened.
+
 >Ah, that's it?
 >Eh?
 
 >Is that all it was?
 >Geez, I was worried about what happened, but I'm glad nothing bad happened.
 >Like Asuka-chan suddenly running off or something!
 >Huh...?
 >What are you talking about...?
 
 >Well, it's not like she's doing anything bad or anything.
 >Asuka-chan's a good kid.
 >There's nothing in particular to cause you that much worry, right?
 >...Yes...
 
 >>dunk
 >...Besides.
 
 p12
 >Now's the only time we have so little to worry about.
 >The time when parent and child can be closest to one another...
 >will be over in the blink of an eye, after all.
 >>flinch
 
 >...
 
 >...That's...
 >right, isn't it...
 >?
 
 p13
 >Wheeze...
 >I ran so much that I feel queasy...
 >You really have no stamina, do you, Asuka?
 >You alright?
 >Oh.
 >Speak of the devil.
 
 >>shine
 >Ah, she's all better.
 >Ah!
 >Mom!
 
 >I'm home!
 >Hey there.
 >Welcome home, you two.
 >Long time no see, Rui-chan.
 
 >Well then, Keiko-san. I'll be taking my leave first.
 >Yeah. Take care.
 >Bye-bye, Asuka-chan.
 >>nod
 
 p14
 >Make sure you change clothes when we get back.
 >Okay.
 >...
 
 >What's wrong, Mama?
 >We should head home, too.
 >Hm? Nah, it's nothing.
 
 >And then
 >she made me run all the way with her for some reason.
 
 >She's gonna get such a telling off when we get back from winter break...
 >I'll give her a smacking next time.
 
 >>space out
 
 >...
 
 p15
 >Mom?
 >Hah
 >Ah...
 >Sorry.
 >Did you say something just now?
 >>smile
 >No.
 >It's nothing.
 
 >>brr
 >Woah, it's so cold. I should probably start wearing a coat soon...
 >...
 
 >The one who doesn't want to let go...
 
 >is probably...
 >But the one I have for school is so lame. I don't wanna wear it...
 
 >>throb
 
 >>grab
 
 p16
 >...
 >!?
 >>startle
 
 >Eh...?
 >Ah...
 >Oh crap.
 >I just kinda...
 >M-
 >Mom...?
 >Eh? Eh?
 
 >Um...
 >You don't want to...?
 
 >>woosh
 
 p17
 >I-
 >It's alright...!!
 >Fufu
 >Really?
 >Your hand is so warm, Asuka.
 
 >Man, I wonder if I said a bit too much?
 >Did I just add fuel to the fire?
 >Ayako-san might've taken that seriously.
 >It's fine, isn't it? It sounds interesting.
 >>beep
 >>bonk																														(9)
 >>Mizuno Household
 >Well, that's true, too.