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-I swear I hear violins - gf tries to confess how hopelessly smitten she is (or something idk)
+[F4A] I Swear I Hear Violins - Girlfriend Takes You Out To Tell You How Hopelessly Smitten She Is [GFE] [Picnic Date] [First L-Bombs] [Kisses] [Sweet] [Mushy]
 
-summaREEEEEEEE
+You planned a lovely picnic date to confess your love to your S.O. Things go a bit downhill early into the date, but you recover and spend your time together fawning over them before you try and drop that l-bomb.
 
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 [SFX: car door opening]
 
 Ok, I'm back! I'm sorry that I made you wait in the car, I had to get everything ready first!
 
 [tiny bit frantic] What? Are you serious? Where are you looking? I know I set it up behind the tree!
 
 [pouty] Oh. You big liar, don't do that.
 
-I know *I* can't see it from here, but you never know! Also, I'm nervous, ok? I, um...I've been planning this for a while.
+I know I can't see it from here either, but you never know! Also, I'm nervous, ok? I, um...I've been planning this for a while.
 
-Just get out of the car, you big goof. And keep your eyes closed.
+Yes, I'm *sure* that I didn't need the help. I appreciate the offer, but I was more than happy to do this myself.
 
 Come on, I can show you that my hard work was worth it.
 
-Hey! Eyes closed, mister! (or could adjust that for f4a)
+
 
-Ok, just mind the step here first.
+Hey! Eyes closed, you!
 
 Oh! Actually, let's hold hands!
 
 I always like holding hands with you. But that's not the point right now. You need to keep your eyes closed until you see the surprise, so I'll lead you there!
 
-[whiny] Don't guess what it is! Even if it's obvious, don't ruin it!
+[whiny] Don't try and guess what it is!
 
-[SFX: stepping until the long pause]
+And you better keep those peepers closed, you hear me?
 
-No, please! Keep them closed. We'll work on an honour system, ok?
+
 
 Yeah, so...so no falling today! I don't want to hurt myself. [nervous chuckle]
 
-Yeah, so...so no falling this time! I don't want to hurt myself. [nervous chuckle]
+
 
 Yeah, I said it's all behind that tree over there!
 
 [laughs] You can't see where I'm pointing, can you?
 
 Nooo, don't open them!
 
-Nooo, don't open your eyes!
+[playfully stern] No! Just keep walking!
 
-[playfully stern] No! Just close them and keep walking!
+
 
 Now why would I do that, baby? You're the one that teases *me*.
 
 But no teasing now. It's serious business.
 
-No teasing now. It's serious business.
+I mean...maybe? I think it's serious. I wanted to do all this for a reason.
 
-I mean...not *really*, but I wanted to do all this for a reason.
+I'll tell you later, promise.
 
-I'll...I'll tell you later, promise.
+We're almost there, come on.
 
-Hm?
+Yeah. Like three steps.
 
-No, no one's going to steal the stuff! [whiny] I said no teasing, why are you doing this!
+
 See? Here we are! Wait, don't see just yet.
-Stop laughing! If I keep looking at you, I'm not looking at the ground! Do you *want* us to fall?
+
 I need to...adjust how you're standing...
-Exactly. So just- whoa!
+
 It's gotta be perfect! Let me do this!
-[like an "I told you so" tone] Mm-hmm. What did I say?
+
 Ok, you can open your eyes now!
-Good. We're almost there, come on.
+
 Surprise! I set up a picnic for us!
-Yeah, it's like right here. Like three steps.
+
 Aww. Thanks baby. [kiss] Come come come. Let's sit down!
 
-See? Here we are! I mean, don't see just yet.
+I am *very* excited! I made so much food!
 
 And I also brought this speaker. I wanted to play some music for us. I have a whole playlist ready and everything and I-
 
 [puzzled] Wait a minute. (can put in some button clicking SFX here)
 
 [whiny] No-o-ooo. You can't be serious! Did I not charge this?
 
 [sigh] The one thing I had to go and forget about!
 
 It was going to be so romantic! You would have loved it.
 
-I'm *very* excited! I made so much food!
+
 
 You're right, we don't need music!
 
 Yeah, let me show you everything I brought.
 
-Nononono. [whiny] You can't be serious! Did I not charge this?
+So, here's some sandwiches, because you know you can't have a picnic without them, of course.
 
-I can't believe I forgot about it!
+I made a bunch of your favourites! And I also baked some cookies...
 
-[sigh] Ok well now I can't set the mood.
+
 
 [chuckle] Yeah, it is kind of like a valentine's thing. You saw I put some roses down as well, didn't you?
 
 It's a special day, so I wanted to make it super romantic.
 
-You're right. We don't need music.
+Like I said, I'll tell you why it's so special a bit later. We need the right mood~
 
-Yeah, let me show you everything I brought!
+Also, you're ok with me spoiling you like this, right? I know I tend to go a bit overboard when it comes to doing all this lovey-dovey relationship stuff with you. [nervous chuckle]
 
-So, here's some sandwiches, because you know you can't have a picnic without them, of course. I made a bunch of your favourites! And I also baked some cookies...
+Yay! [excited clapping] I'm so glad you like these things I do. [kiss]
 
 Um, so, I have some other food in the basket as well...and I made some fudge, and...well, you can see as I take all of it out.
 
 I *did* make a lot of sweets, isn't that great?
 
 Oh, and I brought champagne!
 
-Like I said, I'll tell you why it's so special a bit later.
+[scoff] No, I'm not going to propose! [laughs] But here, I'll let you open it. The popping always scares me.
 
-You're ok with me spoiling you like this, right? I know I tend to go a bit overboard when it comes to doing all this lovey-dovey relationship stuff with you. [nervous chuckle]
+
 
-Yay! [excited clapping]
+
 
-Um, so, I also have some other food in the picnic basket, and I made some fudge, and...well, you can see as I take all of it out.
+
 
 
 Are you ok? Your shirt isn't too wet, is it?
 
 [inward hiss] Ok. It's fine. We're still fine.
-[scoff] No, I'm not going to propose! But here, I'll let you open it. The popping always scares me.
+
 Yeah...I'm good. Thanks for being such a sweetheart.
 
 Oh, *I'm* the sweetheart? Aww. [kiss]
 
 I wanted to try feeding you as well, but, uh...that seems like a bad idea waiting to happen. [nervous chuckle]
 
 It *would* have been so cute! It's ok, though. If you enjoy what I've made, that's more than enough for me.
 
 Mhm, try some!
 
 I am *quite* the chef, aren't I?
-I wanted to try feeding you as well, but that seems like a bad idea waiting to happen.
+
 At least something is going my way today.
-Right? It would have been so cute! It's ok, though. If you enjoy what I've made, that's more than enough for me.
+
 Oh, stay like that. Let me get a quick picture of you...and...got it~
 
 [giggle] You looked really cute, I couldn't help it.
-[smug] I am *quite* the chef, aren't I?
+
 Ooh, don't move again. I'm just going to...lie down on your lap. All this bad luck is taking it out of me.
 
 [contented sigh]
-Oh, stay just like that. Let me just get a quick picture of you...and...got it~
+
 Can you pass the strawberries please?
-You looked really cute, I couldn't help it.
+
 [whiny] But I wanna eat the sweet stuff!
-Ooh, don't move again. Let me just...lie down...on your lap. All of this bad luck is taking it out of me.
+
 [coy] How about we make a deal then?
 
 Let's say...I'll eat some sandwiches first if you...give me all of your strawberries!
 
 I *know* it's not fair~ [giggle]
-Thanks baby.
+
 I'll eat something filling, don't worry. And I won't steal your strawberries either.
 
 It's really nice out today, isn't it? Lucky for us~
 
 I did plan this outing, but the weather is fickle. I'm glad it decided to work with me.
 
-I mean...doesn't everybody deserve to get spoiled once in a while? Especially you. You always take my sappy antics in stride.
+Hm? Sure, go ahead.
 
-I really enjoy doing all these little romantic things with you. I like that you let me do all of it with you.
+
 Well...we've only been on like one picnic together, haven't we?
-Do you want to know what else I like about you?
+
 Yeah. So I wanted to do it again. Spoil you a bit, y'know?
 
 I mean...doesn't everybody deserve to be spoiled once in a while? Especially you.
 
 Well, you always indulge me with all these little romantic things I want to do with you.
 
 As much as it's me spoiling you, you should know you're also spoiling me. So thank you.
 
 [chuckle] You're welcome too, babe.
 
 
-You're very welcome, babe. Here, give me a high five. [giggle] [SFX: clap. for the high five lol]
+[satisfied sigh] Isn't it great to just relax and look at the sky?
 
-I also like the way you laugh, and how you look at me when I was the one that made you laugh~ [wistful sigh]
+You're right, that cloud does look like a butt. [giggle]
 
-And you're running your fingers through my hair, I like that too~ [giggle]
+Wait what are you making me say?! I'm trying to be...this isn't the time for *that*! [laughs]
 
 No! I wanted to tell you a bunch of things I like about you!
 
-Thanks babe. I'm happy you feel the same.
+
 
-I'm not sure...it's so easy to say all of this to you. That's another thing I like. All of this...I just...I love you so much.
+
 
-[absentmindedly] Baby? Why'd you stop stroking my hair? [realising what you said] [flustered] Umm, oh...I said- I mean...[nervous chuckle]
+
 
-I guess I did say that, huh? Is that...is that ok?
+
 
-Say it again?!
+
 
-I- wait, what?
+You're very welcome, babe. Here, give me a high five. [giggle] [clap] /for the high five lol/
 
-Ok. Ok. [deep breath] I love you. I really, *really* love you.
+I also like the way you laugh, and how you look at me when *I* was the one that made you laugh~ [wistful sigh]
 
-[squeal] Come here, you! [lots of short kisses]
+And how you're running your fingers through my hair now, I like that too~ [giggle]
 
-Yes, that's why today was so special! I didn't mean for it to slip out like that, but it worked out fine!
+[squeal] Ohhh, baby why are you so sweet? I'm supposed to be the one saying all these nice things!
 
-I hope *you* felt like it was a special enough occasion.
+Come on, lean down and let me kiss you. [kiss]
 
-Thank goodness.
+
 
-I guess...I don't know how many people would consider this a big thing. But I'm me, and you're you, and I'm just so head over heels these days it's crazy.
+[laughs] It's like...when I'm with you, I don't know...I swear I hear violins.
 
 It's also a bit too easy for me to say all of this to you. Which...[nervous chuckle] sometimes that's bit dangerous.
 
-Yeah. These days it's easy to be cynical. But I want things to be magical. Even if it's only a tiny bit. You're kind of the reason for that. You make me want to make things magical.
+You heard what I just said, right? Was that violins thing not super cheesy?
 
-[laughs] It's like...when I'm with you, I don't know...I swear I hear violins. And I love you for that. [kiss]
+See? Things like that. The way you just...go with everything I say so readily...like you like it as much as *I* do. It makes it...honestly I think I might be falling a bit too fast. [chuckle]
 
 I don't think it's a bad thing, really. I love feeling this way. It's kind of the reason I wanted to do all of this for you.
 
 It's...what I've been meaning to say is...god, why am I getting flustered now after all this build up? Yeah, so...
 
 [stunned pause]
 
 [flustered, regaining your senses] I...What? Wait, did you say that because you were finishing my sentence, or...
 
 What? Really?
 
 [squeal] I love you too!
 
 Who cares about who said it first? Steal my thunder like that whenever you want! Say it again!
 
 [squeal] I love you I love you I love you!
 
 Come here! [lots of short kisses]
 
 Yes! That's why today was so special! I wasn't planning on you saying it first, though!
 
 I hope you felt like it was a special enough occasion for all of this.
 
 Oh my god you're such a sweetheart.
 
 I guess...I don't know how many people would consider this a big thing. But I'm *me*, and you're *you*, and you know...I'm just so head over heels these days it's crazy. [laughs]
 
 So I'm sorry if I go overboard with all this mushy stuff, or if I do things a bit over the top. I know that it's not everyone's cup of tea.
 
 Yeah. These days it's easy to be cynical.
 
 But you know what I'm like. I want things to be magical. Even if it's only a tiny bit. You're the reason for that. You make me want to make things magical.
 
 [laughs] Like I said, when I'm with you...I swear I hear violins. And I love you for that. [kiss]