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 1: “I won’t let you go ever again.” “So don’t go anywhere.”
 2: As he spoke those words, his arms strongly embracing me were trembling ever so lightly.
 
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 1: Thank you, // Yuma...
 2: Y-Yuma, what’s wrong?!
 3: Are you... // all right...?
 
 PAGE 4:
 
 1: Yuma...
 2: You’re crying...
 3: I’m so sorry
 4: for making you go through so much.
 
 PAGE 5:
 
 1: Yuma......
 2: Has Yuma Tsukumo fallen asleep?
 
 PAGE 6:
 
 1: Yes.
 2: It seems that he’s quite exhausted.
 3: Eliphas...
 4: It’s all because a certain someone made him run all over the place.
 5: There was no helping it.
 6: At the time, I had no means of identifying him as anything but a fragment of Chaos.
 
 PAGE 7:
 
 1: ...No matter.
 2: Anyway, I want to let Yuma rest for now. // Is there any suitable place for him to rest?
 3: I shall arrange for that.
 
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 1: (the text is fragmented so I can’t make sense of it completely but I’ll translate what I can)
-Yuma is a human so you need to make sure he has a proper room and bed to sleep in. I have to say though, now that I’m holding him like this, I’ve realized how warm and soft human bodies can be. He’s so small and frail too, I’m surprised he was able to reach me all the way here with a body like this. I can’t believe you were cruel enough to chase away such a pure and honest child. Yuma will likely forgive you for this, though. Actually, he doesn’t even think about the concept of “forgiving”, he simply accepts every single person for who they are. You could say that’s one of his charms, but honestly, he never thinks about how much trouble he causes me. I know he doesn’t mean to do any of that, of course... Anyway, have you finished arranging for the room yet, Eliphas? Hurry it up, Yuma needs to rest.
+Yuma is a human so you need to make sure he has a proper room and bed to sleep in. I have to say though, now that I’m holding him like this, I’ve realized how warm and soft human bodies can be. He’s so small and frail too, I’m surprised he was able to reach me all the way over here with a body like this. I can’t believe you were cruel enough to chase away such a pure and honest child. Yuma will likely forgive you for this, though. Actually, he doesn’t even think about the concept of “forgiving”, he simply accepts every single person for who they are. You could say that’s one of his charms, but honestly, he never thinks about how much trouble he causes me. I know he doesn’t mean to do any of that, of course... Anyway, have you finished arranging for the room yet, Eliphas? Hurry it up, Yuma needs to rest.
 2: ...So this is Chaos..
 
 PAGE 9:
 
 1: I feel a gentle hand...
 
 PAGE 10:
 
 1: Who is it...?
 2: Oh...
 
 PAGE 11:
 
 1: Astral...?
 2: Yuma.
 3: I see you’ve awakened.
 4: How are you feeling?
 5: Do you feel strange anywhere?
 6: Yuma...?
 
 PAGE 12:
 
 1: Astral!
 2: Astral!
 3: Yuma...
 4: That’s really you, right? // This isn’t a dream or anything, right?
 
 PAGE 13:
 
 1: Yes, I’m right here.
 2: Astral...
 3: By the way,
 4: what is this place?
 
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 1: You’re slightly below the area where you dueled against Eliphas. Right around here.
 2: Oh yeah?
-3: But man, I didn’t expect the Astral World to have beds, too.
+3: But man, I didn’t expect the Astral World to have beds too.
-4: The towns are pretty normal, and everyone wears clothes, too... // ...so why exactly are you naked?
+4: The towns are pretty normal, and everyone wears clothes too... // ...so why exactly are you naked?
 5: I’m afraid I don’t have the answer to that.
 6: Why not?!
 7: My memory hasn’t completely returned yet.
 8: Oh, right.
 9: Hey, can I look outside?
 10: That’s fine.
 
 PAGE 15:
 
 1: I didn’t really get a chance to look at it before I met up with you again, // but this place sure is pretty, huh?
 2: (bubbleless) I see!
 3: I’m going to hit you after this, Eliphas.
 4: So...
 
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 1: So this...
 2: is your world, huh?
 3: It’s...
 4: such a beautiful place...
 5: Yuma...
 
 PAGE 17:
 
 1: Yes.
 2: If you were to refer to the place where you were born as your “world,”
 3: then yes, you could say that this is my world.
 4: Right?
 5: However, // personally speaking,
 6: I would not call such a dull and uninteresting place my “world.”
 7: What do you mean by that...?
 
 PAGE 18:
 
 1: To me, my world // only exists within your arms.
 2: That’s what I’m trying to say, Yuma.
 3: Huh?
 
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 1: Why are you saying that embarrassing stuff out of nowhere like that?!
 2: You’re the one who said it first.
 3: You said // that I’m your everything.
 4: W-Well, that’s...
 5: I feel the same, Yuma.
 6: You are my everything,
 7: in other words, my world.
 
 PAGE 20:
 
 1: You’re
 2: never letting go of me again, right?
 3: Astral...
 
 PAGE 21:
 
 1: Yeah. // I’m not letting you go ever again...
 2: Thank you, Yuma.
 3: Mm...
 4: Hmm?
 
 PAGE 22:
 
 1: A-Astral,
 2: what are you doing...?
 3: Yuma.
-4: I want to fully take you in.
+4: I want to take you all in.
 5: Huh...?
 6: I’ve always wanted to touch you, and now that I finally get to do so...
 7: I don’t want these annoying clothes to get in the way.
 
 PAGE 23:
 
 1: You’re not going to say
 2: that you’re against that, right...?
 3: Well, Yuma...?
 4: ...Idiot...
 
 PAGE 24:
 
 1: I feel the same way, obviously...
 2: So there’s no way // anything like that...
 3: Right. Thank you, Yuma.
 4: You’re not supposed to say thanks to something like that...
 5: Mm...
 6: Mm...
 
 PAGE 25:
 
 1: Mm...!
 2: Mm...!
 3: Astral...
 4: Yuma. // Hold down your clothes for me.
 5: Huh? Like this...?
 
 PAGE 26:
 
 1: Eek!
 2: Nnah! // Fwah...!
 3: Ah...
 4: suck
 5: suck
 6: Astral...!
 7: Hyau!
 
 
 PAGE 27:
 
 1: Ah! Ah!
 2: Wait, stop! Astral! // Don’t touch me there...!
 3: No!
 4: Au!
 5: Ah!
 6: Yuma...
 7: Hyah! Ah, ah! // N-No! I’m gonna...!
 8: Fwaah...!
 
 
 PAGE 28:
 
 1: Hah..
 2: Haah
 3: I said stop, didn’t I...?
 4: I’m sorry.
 5: But I had to do this in order to avoid putting any unnecessary strain on you.
 6: ...Ah!
 7: Huh?
 8: twitch
 
 PAGE 29:
 
 1: Ah... Ah...
 2: squish
 3: squish
 4: Hah
 5: Au...
 6: Mm
 7: Wah!
 8: W-What? What’s the matter, Astral...?
 9: I’d rather you not look at it so much.
 10: Huh? Look at what...?
 
 PAGE 30:
 
 1: A-Astral, this...!
 2: Eek!
 3: Ah!
 4: I’m sorry, Yuma... I can’t connect with you without doing this.
 5: ...I’m sure it’s rather hideous to a human, right? // That’s why I don’t want you to look at it.
 6: ...!
 7: You idiot...!
 
 
 PAGE 31:
 
 1: There’s no way I’d think of you that way!
 2: You’re completely blue,
 3: see-through,
 4: sparkling or something,
-5: and you’re floating, too!
+5: and you’re floating too!
 6: If I was bothered by stuff like that,
 7: I wouldn’t even grow to like you in the first place...!
 
 
 PAGE 32:
 
 1: Yuma...
 2: Yuma.
 3: I’m glad // I fell in love with you.
 4: I love you so, so much...
 5: Idiot...
 6: I’m the same way...
 7: Yuma.
 8: I want to connect with you deeper than anyone else.
 9: ...Is that okay?
 10: ...Yeah.
 11: Ah!
 12: Uwah!
 13: Eek!
 14: Uu!
 15: ...!!
 
 PAGE 34:
 
 1: ...Ah! // Astral...!
 2: Au
 3: Ah...
 4: squish
 5: squish
 6: Yuma, are you all right? // Does it hurt at all? Tell me.
 7: Idiot...
 8: It doesn’t matter if it hurts or anything...
 9: After all...
 10: I get to be connected with you...
 11: Hah <3
 12: Mm
 13: squish
 14: squish
 15: I’m happy that I...
 16: get to be so close to you...
 
 PAGE 35:
 
 1: ...?!
 2: Auu! // Ah, ah!
 3: That was so sudden...!
 4: Wha...?!
 5: Yuma.
 6: Ah!
 7: Ah!
 8: Astral...!
 9: Ah!
 10: Mm
 11: Yuma... // Yuma...!
 
 PAGE 36:
 
 1: Eek!! // W-Wait! No, stop, Astral!
 2: Ahh...!
 3: Ah!
 4: Fwaah...!
 5: I-I’m gonna...!
 6: squish
 7: squish
 8: It’s gonna come out...!
 9: I don’t mind, Yuma.
 10: Ah!
 11: Ah!
 12: Eek!
 13: Fwaah
 14: Let it out...
 15: Ahhhhh!
 
 PAGE 37:
 
 1: Haah
 2: Astral...
 3: Mm
 4: Ah
 5: Haah...
 6: Mm
 7: Mm...
 8: Hah
 9: kiss
 10: ...Yuma.
 11: Just like how // you promised me you’d never let me go again,
 
 PAGE 38:
 
 1: I swear to you as well.
 2: I will never let you out of my grasp again.
 3: Astral...
 4: So I want you...
 5: to keep that in mind.
 6: ...
 7: ...Idiot...
 
 PAGE 39:
 
 1: I wouldn’t have it any other way!
 
 PAGE 40:
 
 Congratulations on your marriage, Astral and Yuma!
 
 When I saw the Barians attack at the end of Episode 121, I felt like screaming out “You idiots!!! That’s where Yuma and Astral are supposed to spend the night together!!!! He’s supposed to have sex with him at his hometown!!!! Can’t you take a hint?!?!?!?!” (More like I actually did scream that) and then I decided to harness those feelings onto paper. I’d be overjoyed if you enjoyed it in even the slightest.
 
-But then I got so caught up drawing some Astral x Yuma lovey-dovey sex scenes that I went “Oh...” after realizing that I forgot the reason why I even started drawing it. Also I regret not having Yuma take Astral’s tentacles through his own volition and start sucking on them. The love between Astral and Yuma is so profound and deep.
+But then I got so caught up drawing some Astral x Yuma lovey-dovey sex scenes that I went “Oh...” after realizing that I forgot the reason why I even started drawing it. Also I regret not having Yuma take Astral’s tentacles of his own volition and start sucking on them. The love between Astral and Yuma is so profound and deep.
 
 All right, so the biggest thing to point out about this doujin is probably how his clothes wouldn’t fall down even if he didn’t press on them, but you know how it is.
 It was really fun drawing Yuma’s nipples...
 It was when I finished shading that I realized I should have just taken all his clothes off. Man, it’s too late to fix all these things...
 
 PAGE 41:
 
 ~One day on twitter~
 
 “Draw a sex scene where Astral goes ‘Yuma, if you don’t want this, then we can stop’!”
 “If you give me a storyboard then I’ll do it.”
 “Seriously? I’ll draw it up right now.”
 “Can you make the size around 350? 600 is too much.”
 “The color size, right? Do you mind if I color it? And can it go in the winter book?”
 “Hmm, sure.”
 
 So there you go, the colored Astral x Yuma adult manga that we've all been waiting for is finally on the way thanks to a certain someone! Yaaaay!!!! (prostration position)
 
 PAGE 42:
 
 1: ...
 2: ...!
 3: Mm...
 4: Mm...
 5: Astral...!
 6: Yuma.
 7: Ah!
 8: Ah!
 9: Mm
 10: Fwah
 11: Ahn...!
 12: No, // that’s...
 13: Stop...!
 
 
 PAGE 43:
 
 1: Yuma,
 2: if you don’t like this, then we can stop.
 3: Huh?
 4: Huh? Wha? What made you say that all of a sudden?
 5: It looked like you didn’t like it, so I didn’t want you to force yourself.
 6: T-That’s not true at all! We’ve already gone this far, you know?!
 7: But didn’t you just say “stop” earlier?
 8: Well, that was...
 9: That was what?
 10: ...Anyway!
 
 PAGE 44:
 
 1: It’s not like I don’t want to do it with you...
 2: so you don’t... have to stop...
 3: ... // All right, I understand.
 4: I doubt he understands at all...
 
 PAGE 45:
 
 1: Ah...
 2: W- // What?
 3: ...!
 4: Mm
 5: Kuh
 6: Eek...!
 7: A-Ah...!
 8: Ahh!
 9: No, it’s so... deep...
 10: Fwah
 11: Wait, stop...!
 12: Stop?
 
 PAGE 46:
 
 1: Yuma.
 2: Do you not like this?
 3: We can stop if you don’t.
 4: What’ll it be?
 5: ......
 
 PAGE 47:
 
 1: Y-You’ve...
 2: become // kind of a bully...!
-3: And you’ve gotten less honest about yourself.
+3: And you’ve become less honest about yourself.
 4: Idiot...