View difference between Paste ID: Xwve7w5U and 5WvMvegB

 [個人製作][魔法少女小圓][シャングリラ]ハニー·トラップ
 http://www.mediafire.com/?v3hooccykdqg3m0
 
 [Kodou (Shangri-la)]Honey Trap
 
-Pampered
+
 
 I am Always Watching You (Episode 2)
-I am ALways Watching You (Episode 2)
+
 : Don't worry, I am here to protect you.
-: I am here to protect you, so don't worry.
+
 
 :  With Mami-san here, we can feel safe now!!
-:  With Mami-san protecting us, we can feel safe now!!
+That's our Mami-san!!
-As expected of Mami-san!!
+:  Mami is strong and elegent, and gentle too!!
-:  Mami is so strong and elegent, yet also gentle!!
+
 
 :  Ah, but changing and going to restroom might be a bit embarrassing...
-:  Ah, but in change room and restroom may be a bit embarrassing...
+But if it's Mami-san...
-But if it's Mami-san,
+:  Em~  If it's Mami-san, I don't mind letting she sees everything~
-:  Em~  If it's Mami-san, I don't mind if she sees everything~
+
 
 Both of them really like Mami-san.
 
 : I won't go that far.
 Sorry
 :  Eh...
 
 Everyone loves Mami-san!
-Everyone love Mami-san!
+
 ---004---
 
 * I'll Not Forgive You
-* I Will Not Forgive You.
+
 :  You just don't learn, do you?
-:  I already said,
+:  No matter how many time you try, killing me is pointless,
-:  No matter how many times you kill me is useless,
+
 
 :  I know that.
-:  I know already.
+
 :  What's important is turning you into something Madoka will guard against.
-:  What's important is turn you into something that Madoka will be afraid of.
+:  I didn't expect you can be so cruel.
-:  I didn't imagine you can be so cruel.
+:  Why don't you just drown me in a gutter instead?
-:  Why don't you drown me in a gutter instead?
+
 ---005---
 
 :  Make a contract with me and become a magical girl!!
 
 :  Yahhhh
 :  SKULL-!?
 * A Japanese metal band
 
 :  I am your biggest fan ♥
-:  I am your biggest fan <3
+I don't have money for a contract,
-For contract I don't have any money,
+But how about some desserts instead?
-How about some desserts first?
+
 :  Why... did this happen?
-:  How... did this happen?
+The killer is right in front of you, yet you let down your defenses.  Why are you so naive, Madoka...?  My love!
-The killer is right in front of you, yet you're completely defenseless.  Why are you so relaxed, Madoka...!  My love!
+
 ---006---
 
 I Also Brought a CD Today ~ (Episode 4)
-I Brought a CD Today ~ (Episode 4)
+
 : Hey... Sayaka...
-: Ugh... Sayaka...
+: Are you torturing me?
-: Are you punishing me?
+: Huh?
-: Eh?
+
 :  I just thought that you loved music!
-:  But these are all your favorite music!
+And I brought so many with me today.
-And I brought so much today.
+
 :  I don't want to listen to anything anymore!
-:  I don't want to hear anymore!!
+
 :  Why do you keep making me listen to Boy Love CDs?  Why?
-:  Why do you keep giving me Boy Love CDs?  Why?
+
 :  It's fine!  Don't give up, one day you will...
-:  It's fine!  Don't give up, one day...
+:  Will what!!?
-:  What!!?
+Love it...
-Turn into...
+
 :  Pssh~  Kyousuke isn't happy about something.
 "Typical life" is popular right now.
-"Normal life" is popular right now.
+:  Maybe bring him a medical-themed (BL related) one next time?
-:  Maybe bring him medical themed (BL related) one next time?
+Doctors or nurses!!
-Doctors and nurses!!
+
 Madoka, NICE!!
-Madoka, nice!!
+
 Kyousuke is a victim of a scheme.
-Kyousuke is victim of a scheme.
+
 ---007---
 
 Episode 7
 
 :  Come out for a bit.
-:  Can you come out?
+:  We need to talk.
-:  I need to speak with you.
+
 :  Where should we go~
-:  Where to go~
+
 Chew
 
 :  Where should we go...
-:  Where to go...
+
 Chew
 :  Ah~ yummy apples.
-:  Ah, apples are tasty.
+
 Chew
 Chew
 : ...
 * Two hours later.
 
 Ha!
 :  Ah?  Now I think about it, is this a date!?
-:  Ah?  Is this a date!?
+Thump Thump
-Doki
+
 :  Not good, we walked so far already...
-:  Not good, we have walked so far already...
+
 :  A huge difference in mood
-:  Mood changed
+
 It's a long walk to her church!  So this counts for a date!!
-There's a long way to go still to her church!  So this counts as a date!!
+
 {left}  Because Kyouko is a magical girl from the next town over, so... the church is in over there too...
-{left}  Because Kyouko is the neighboring city's magical girl, so... her church is in the next city over too...
+
 ---008---
 
 Unable to Convey
 
 :  Want one?
 
 I like you
 : ...
 Oo..mph
 
-:  I don't want it.
+:  No.
 Strike - Out
 
-An abrupt confession
+A sudden confession
 
 ---009---
 
-Homu Homu Watching
+Homu Homu is Watching
 
-: Don't waste food!
+: Don't ever waste food!
-:  I will kill you!
+:  I'll kill you if you do!
-:  Ahh, what are you doing!?  Don't touch me!!
+:  Ahhhhh, what are you doing!?  Don't touch me!!
-:  Oh no, I said it out loud...
+:  Oh no, I said that out loud...
-:  We're off topic.
+:  What are you talking about!?
 
-<-- Come to check out what happens.
+<-- Come to check out the situation.
 Quietly
 ... Apple
-:  You brought me so far out here to violate me!?
+:  You brought me so far out here to try something funny!?
-:  Ahhh!?  I don't think like that about you...
+:  Yahhhh!?  I don't thinking that way about you...
 
-:  ---... In here no one will bother us,  'but still'
+:  ---... Well, no one can bother us in here,  'Still'
 :  No, no, no!  That's not right, say it again!!  That wasn't my plan!!
 I like your thighs.
 
-:  Less love rivals!!  'Oh, even though I know...'
+:  One less love rivals!!  'Oh, even though I already knew...'
 Yes!
-<-  Not worried
+<-  Not a concern
-Couple
+Form a couple
-Now that KyouSaya are a couple, Madoka is mine alone!  Perfect!
+Now that KyouSaya are a couple, Madoka is mine alone!  Excellent!
 
-In summary, don't write your confession on apples.
+In conclusion, don't write your confession on a apple.
 
 ---010---
 
-* Battle for Skinship
+* War of Skinship
 
 :  ....
 
 Uehehe
-:  Sayaka-chan, Sayaka-chan!  'I like-'
+:  Sayaka-chan, Sayaka-chan!  'I love you---♥'
-:  You are playful today <3
+:  You are awfully playful today ♥
-To such a extend
+Gone this far
-:  Yeah--
+:  Yeah-- ♥
 
 ... What?
-:  Hugging Sayaka playfully.
+:  Getting pampered in Sayaka's arms.
 :  Really?
-So jealous!!
+I'm so jealous!!
 
-Next page
+On the other hand
 
 ---011--
 
-:  I need to talk to you, Sakura Kyouko.
+:  We need to talk, Sakura Kyouko.
 :  Ahhhh!  Where did you come from?  Are you a ghost?
 
-:  Do you want to get closer with Sayaka?
+
-:  Saying those things out loud...
+:  I thought a face-to-face talk is more appropriate than telepathy for this.
 
 :  Do you want to become closer with Sayaka?
-:  I thought talking face-to-face is better than telepathy.
+:  Saying such things out loud...
 
-:  Then team up with me.
+
-:  Let's fight together.
+:  Then work with me,
 :  and let's fight together.
 
 ---012---
 
 :  First this, then this.
-:  Madoka,
+
-:  Madoka is so cute.
+
 :  Madoka's so cute.
 :  Madoka
-:  If it's like this, then...  'basically this'
+
 :  In this situation, then...  'Basically that'
 
-: Divide and conquer,
+: Divide and conquer.
-: Then act cool to get her to like you.
+
 : Act cool to garner her attraction.
 
 :  Got it!
-:  Let us begin.
+
 :  Then, let's begin.
-----...But,
+
 ----...But, what
-What kind of battle is this...?
+
 Kind of battlefield is this...?
 
 ---013---
-:  Ah!
+
 :  Yah!
 :  Ahh?
 Time Stop
 :  Madoka!?
-:  Madoka went over to Homura's.
+
 :  Madoka went with Homura.
 :  They're busy.
 
 :  Eh... Is that so?
 She could have told me...
 
-:  I have something to tell you...
+
 :  We need to talk...
 
 ---014---
 
 :  Eh... Em...
 
 :  Ho... Homura-chan?
 :  Something wrong?
 This.. is a bit...
 
 :  Kaname Madoka
-:  Feel free to be playful with me.
+
-*  Homura-chan is serious.
+:  Let me pamper you with my bosom!
 *  Homura-chan is dead serious.
 
 Eh!?
 
 ---015---
-:  If
+
-:  You feel tired and want to hug someone,
+:  When
-:  No matter when, I am here for you.
+:  You feel tired and want to be pampered,
 :  I will always be there for you.
 :  I just...
-:  Want to see you smile,
+
-:  That's all.
+:  Want to see you smile.
 :  That's enough for me.
 ... Homura-chan
 
-:  Mine...
+
 :  My...
 :  Eh!?
 
 :  Eh...
 :  M-Madoka!?
 :  I...
 
-:  I am more concerned about Homura-chan.
+
 :  I am more worried about you, Homura-chan.
-:  You are always trying your best by yourself quitely.
+
-:  TO protect me, you are full of scars...
+:  You always try your hardest in silence.
-:  Yet you will never show yoru softer side.
+
 :  To protect me, your body is full of scars...
-:  So,
+
-:  You are welcome to hug me whenever.
+:  Yet you never show an ounce of vulnerability.
 :  That's why,
-:  I can't do much.
+:  please let me pamper you whenever you like.
 
 :  I can't do much,
 :  Ma...doka...
 
-:  Ahhhh
+
 
 :  Argh!
-Don't damage the trees.
+
-:  I want to play in Sayaka's hug...
+
-:  I can't say it.
+Don't hurt the trees.
-That guy only care about her battle with Madoka...
+:  I want Sayaka to pamper me..
 :  But the words won't come out.
-:  What?
+That guy, she only cares of her battle with Madoka...
 
-Sits down nonchalantly
+
 :  Nothing!
-:  You want to play in my hug?  'Isn't it?'
+Sits down casually
-You say nothing, but your heart is hopeful, so it's making you all stres~
+
 :  So you want to get pampered?  'Don't you?'
 Your mind says no, but your heart says yes.  It's making you all stressed out~
-:  I am not thinking about it at all!  'I am not tired at all!'
+
 Hahah!?
-: Ahha, is that so.
+:  I don't want that at all!  'I am not even tired!'
 :  Honesty!!
 : A hah! I knew it.
 
 ---018---
 
-:  Ah--- This doesn't feel too bad!  'Fluffy'
+:  Then pamper me instead!  'like this~'
-:  Then let me be pampered!  'like this~'
+
 :  Wooh
 :  'Ah—' This doesn't feel bad at all!  'Fluffy~'
-:  Getting pampered once a while is not bad too!  'Ahaha'
+:  Hey...
-:  No backsies.
+
 :  Getting pampered every once a while feels pretty good too!  'Ahaha'
 :  We can take turns.
----...Ehm?
+
-Is is boring...
+
-Weird...
+——...Ehm?
 Are we done...
 It's weird...
 :  It's fine.
 
-:  If it's Sayaka...
+
 
-:  Feel free to pamper yourself in my arms anytime.
+:  If Sayaka wants to...
-Kyouko-chan's points rising.  Go go, timing is here.
+
 :  I'm happy to pamper you in my arms anytime.
-:  Only for you...
+Kyouko-chan's points rising.  Go go, this is it!
 
 :  But only for you...
 :  That...
 :  Emba...
 
 ---020---
-:  Madoka's voice!?
+
 :  Yaaaaah!
 :  That's Madoka!?
 
 Let's go.
-:  Madoka 'Transfer student!?'
+
 
 :  Madoka    'Transfer student!?'
-:  Homura-chan, she...
+
 
 :  Homura-chan, her...
 
-:  Start nosebleeding then passed out...
+
 
 :  nose started bleeding, then she suddenly fainted...
 Waa----
-:   I have no more regrets...
+
-:  Thank you, Madoka.  Ah?  Is this a dream...
+
-:  Hang in there, Homura-chaaaaaah.
+:   I have no regrets...
-:  Ya... Put yourself together... (Kyouko)
+:  Thank you, Madoka.  Ah?  Was it a dream...
 :  Hang in there, Homura-channnnn.
-:  I am so worried, Homura-chan is dying...
+:  Ya... Hang in there... (Kyouko)
-Madoka, get yourself away from her.
+
 :  Help, is Homura-chan dying...
-:  You... Why... would you do this...
+Madoka, get away from her!
-Instant recovery
+
 :  You... Why... would you tell her...
-:  As expected, getting pampered by madoka is the best.
+Sudden recovery
-Ahha-  There's a curve, Madoka's growing~
+
 :  As expected, getting pampered by Madoka is the best.
 Ahha-  You're growing.  Madoka is becoming curvy~
-:  Alright, alright~  'It's becoming harrassment~'
+
-Euhehe, this is reverse from teh usual~
+
 :  That's enough~  'Anymore will be harrassment~'
 Euhehe, this is opposite of the usual~
 
 ---022---
 
 :  Eh... Eh.. Madoka?
-:  Nose bleed again is very dangerous.  'Sorry'
+
 STOP
-:  And, you?
+:  Nose-bleeding is very dangerous.  'Sorry'
 
-:  What do you think?
+:  What about you?
 
 :  Is that it?
 
-:  No thanks~  'It was a good experience'
+
 
 :  No thanks~  'It was a valuable experience'
-:  I'm fine now!!
+
-:  Alright~
+
 :  I'm good now!!
 :  Ah~
 
-:  Sayaka is an idiotttt!
+
-:  Looks like those two are on the same wavelength.
+
-:  Even so, I still love you, Madoka~
+:  Sayaka is an idiot!  Wooooo~
 :  I never expect them to be so in sync...
-:  Is this okay, Sayaka-chan?
+:  I still love you, Madoka~
-Seems like I interrupted something.
+
 :  Is that alright, Sayaka-chan?
 Was I interrupting something?
-Pamper a little is what girls are about--
+
 :  Not at all.
 Getting pampered is what being a girl is about—
 :  Besides..
-:  'For some reason'  was beating very fast.
+
 
-:  I can't relax
+:  'For some reason'  Was beating fast.
 
-Ahha
+:  I couldn't relax
 :  At all.
 Ahah
 
-Sayaka-chan, how~ cute~~
+
-What? Why are you smiling?  Madoka--?
+
 Sayaka-chan, how— cute—♪
 What? Why are you smiling?  Madoka—?
 
-:  Of course, Mami-san's bosoms are the best!!
+
-:  Mami-san is the best!!  'How bouncy'
+
-:  'Seriously'  What's up with you two today?
+:  Of course, Mami-san's are the best!!
 :  Mami-san is the best!!  'So soft'
 :  'Really'  What's with you two today?
 
-That's right!  "Your Heart Belongs to Me"  Battle!
+
 
 That's right!  A "Your Heart Belong to Me"  Battle!
 
-Cute, curly hair
+
-:  Oh!  So attractive.
+
 Cute, curly hair!!
-:  ---.. So that's it,
+:  Oh!♥  How attractive.
-:  for our next battle, Kyouko.
+
 :  ——.. So that's it.
 :  Next time, Kyouko,
 :  Ah!?
-What do you plan tot do?
+
-:  Just agree with cooperate with me! 'Take resposnbility!'
+
-And elope with Sayaka and Mami.
+What do you plan to do?
-:  What are you saying!!
+:  Just agree with me! 'Have some responsibility!'
-Speaks from the heart
+Go elope with Sayaka and Mami.
 :  What are you talking about!!
-:  Eh...  I think long, black hair fits Homura-chan better...  'fits your personality'
+Speaking from the heart.
 
-And... it became like this...
+:  Eh...  I think long, black hair fits Homura-chan better...  'Your personality'
 Eh?
-It's curly~
+And... it turned out like this...
 Ahahahahahah~
 It's drilly~
 
-* I'll Never Forgive You
+
 
 * I'll Not Forgive You
-: I told you already (laughs)
+
-:  No matter what you do,
+
-:  It won't matter.
+: I told you already (laughs).
 :  It won't matter,
-:  You may have won last time, but don't get too proud, asshole.
+:  No matter what you do.
-:  I will not lose.  I will definitely not lose.  I just chose the wrong character.  This is within my estimates.
+
 :  You may have won last time, but don't be so proud, you monster.
 :  I will not lose.  I refuse to lose.  I just chose the wrong character.  It was within my estimates.
 :  You don't get it do you!
 :  Just drown me in a gutter already!
 
 ---027---
 
-Yaaaaaaaah.
+
-Takuro-sensei
+
-Apologies to fans of Takuro-sensei.
+: Yaaaaaaaah
 : Takuro-sensei
-:  Don't come near me.  "Someone... call the cops...'
+With apologies to fans of Takuro-sensei.
 
 :  Get away from me.  "Someone... call the cops...'
 Just as planned
 Serve you right
 
-I love red tea ever since I was very young.
+
-A leisurely sip can calm the heart.
+
 I love tea, ever since I was very young.
-That's why--
+A gentle sip can calm the heart.
 
 That's why—
 * Reason
 
-:  Wow
+
-:  Amazing, so amzing!!  How cool!!
+
-:  Mami-san looks so cool--
+:  Wooooow
 
 :  Amazing, that's amazing!!  'How cool!!'
 :  Mami-san is so cool--
 — Cool?
 
-:  Am I...
+
-:  Going to lose...
+
-Exhausted, sluggish, battered, life's threatedn at every moment.
+
 
-:  I am...
+:  Will I...
-Honestly... I am so... scared that I can't stop shaking.
+:  Will I lose...
 Exhausted, sluggish, battered, life hangs on by the moment...
-:  D...
+
-:  o,
+:  Is...
-:  ne...
+I am so... scared... so scared that I can't keep still.
 
-Trying to escape from the life of battling alone.
+:  this...
 :  it,
 :  For me...
 
-But if I die, no one will be left to fight off the Witches.
+I don't want to fight alone anymore.
 
-I need to stay calm.
+
 
 But
 if I die,
 no one will fight off the Witches.
 
 Only this
 remains clear to me.
 
-:  Can do it!
+
 :  Fine...
-: I can still fight!
+
-How can I fall now?
+
 
 :  ... It's fine...
 :  I
-:  But why red tea!?
+:  Can!
-Red tea falls from teh sky, how cool!
+
-Mami-san really likes red tea!
+: I will keep fighting!
-That's why this cup of red tea is a winning magic trick.
+How can I fall here?
 
-:  Because it's elegant <3  'just kidding'
+
 
 :  But why tea!?
-To remind my weak self, put yourself together!
+A tea cup from the sky, how cool!
 Mami-san really likes her tea!
 This tea is my best magic trick.
 
-Thank you for reading this far, this is Kuodo!
+:  Because it's classy ♥ 'just kidding'
-So, what do you think!  I been thinking about Madoka day-and-night (or KyouSaya to be more precise) has become part of my daily life!!!  Because of episode 5 after their battle it has become very popular, then I become a loyal KyouSaya shipper by episode 9 \[]/
+
-Why would Kyouko-chan want to get pampered!! I want to see!  WHy is Sayaka-chan's magical girl costume so exposed!!?  Then KyouSaya KyouSaya KyouSaya \[]
+
-Honestly though, I love all of them!!  Like the slightly vulnerable Mami-san, and the cool Madoka that said to Homura "keep this a secret from oru classmate," and the Moemura that becomes hardened.  I love them all!!  Love-love!!
+To remind myself when I'm weak, put yourself together!
-Especial love KyouSaya go get married already~~~~
+
 end
-This was the material I was thinking about but I end up didn't draw any of it \o/?
+
-To make this doujin more enticing... so... I will leave the material I didn't draw until later!  That's the plan!  Forget my doujin, this time I successfully contracted 3 big deal customers.  Didn't I do well!!!  Even though this time there's no guideline for drawing, but ti end up all KyouSayaa!!! \o/
+
-Everyone are so cute so cute, ahya, this is KyouSaya is fine or rather this is KyouSaya to begin with!!  That's right, that's it!  Love!!  Everyone can heal.
+
 Thank you for reading this far, this is Kodou!
-Finally, I draw a bit relating to Episode 2 scene when red tea drops from above.  I want to study her thoughts a bit more \[]
+So, what do you think?  Thinking about Madoka day-in and day-out has become part of my daily life!!!!  After their Episode 5 battle, KyouSaya has become very popular.  By Episode 9, I also became a loyal KyouSaya shipper too \(*^p^)/
-It must be something darker, that's ym though?  I want to draw =oroiginally fragile then becoming stronger kind of feeling.  And Red Tea is good for settling the mind, for the fragile Mami-san it's perfect.  That's why it's red tea~~
+In what situation would Kyouko-chan like to be pampered?!!  I wanted to know!  Why was Saya-chan's magical girl costume so showy?!!! And SayaKyou Sayakyou SayaKyouko \(^p^)
 Honestly though, I love all of them!! The secretly vulnerable Mami-san, the cool way Madoka told Homura, "Keep this a secret from our classmates," and Moemura transforming into a bad-ass.  I love them all!!  Love-love!!
-Even though I am very excited, but I enjoy making the draft and will alugh at myself.  I'll keep drawing this kind of shoddy doujind, eh, shddy...Em.
+Especially KyouSaya, they should get married already~~~~
 
-I regret nothing at all!
+This was the material on my mind while drawing, yet none of it end up in this doujin \(^p^)/ Eh?
 To make it more enticing... So... I'll leave the material I missed for next time!  That's the plan!  Forget the doujin, I managed to successfully contract with 3 major costumers!  Did I do good!!!! \(^p^)/?!
 
 The last bit was based on the scene in Episode 2, when Mami-san made a tea cup falls from the sky.  Watching it in detail inspired me to draw this \(^p^)
 Maybe a sign of inner darkness?  With that in mind, I drew how she found strength from fragility.  Tea can calm the mind, so it makes sense from a frail Mami-san.  That's why it's tea~~
 
 Even though I was full of various emotions, I couldn't stop laughing at my original draft.  I guess I'll draw more second-rate doujins like this, eh, second-rate... Em.
 
 I regret nothing!