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 >>cast
 >>Mori Asuka (16)
->>Protagonist of this manga, high school freshman.
+>>This manga's protagonist, a high school freshman.
->>The only child in a fatherless family and a huge mothercon. Her father died in the traffic accident before she was born. She is a serious and stupidly honest type who has her thoughts show on her face right away. A talented one who kept a first place among her school year since about middle school, but hardly have any physical strength, like she got a fever on the day before high school entrance exams. Have a feelings of "romantic affection" towards her real mother Ayako.
+>>The only child in a fatherless family and a huge mothercon. Her father died in the traffic accident before she was born. She is a serious and stupidly honest type whose face easily shows what she's thinking. A talented girl who has been first in her school year since middle school, but lacks any physical strength, and she caught a fever on the day before her entrance exams. Has feelings of "romantic affection" towards her real mother, Ayako.
 
 >>Mori Ayako (37)
 >>Asuka's mother. Working as a pharmacist.
->>She married Asuka's father Mori Atsushi who she was tutoring while studying in university, but right after that he died in the incident and she became a single mother. [She used to be a beauty who doesn't look at anyone, and didn't really care about people.] She conduct herself in gentle manner, but her real character is relatively dry. [She can't help but love dearly her only daughter Asuka.] [for her] she is a kind mother who's good at cooking.
+>>Married Asuka's father Mori Atsushi, who she was tutoring while studying in university, but became a single mother after he died in an accident shortly afterwards. She's a beauty who turns everyone's head, but really couldn't care less. She conducts herself in a gentle manner, but her real character is relatively dry. She can't help but show affection for her only daughter, Asuka. A kind mother who is good at cooking.
 
- >>Mori Akira
+>>Mori Akira
->>She works at a foreign pharmaceutical company. [The so-called Balli Carri - is it homage to "All-care"?] A blood-related older sister of Atsushi i.e. Asuka's aunt.
+>Works at a foreign pharmaceutical company. The so-called Bali Cari. Atsushi's blood-related sister. i.e. Asuka's aunt.
 
 >>Mizuno Rui
->>Asuka's childhood friend and best friend. Otaku who has aloof and living at her own pace personality. Have a habit of teasing and pulling pranks on Asuka.
+>>Asuka's childhood friend and best friend. An otaku who is aloof and lives at her own pace. Has a habit of teasing Asuka and pulling pranks on her.
 
 >>Mizuno Jun
->>Rui's older brother, university student. Secretly care about Asuka without any reward. Do you best, Jun-kun. [no, actually, don't]
+>>Rui's older brother. A university student. Secretly cares about Asuka without wanting anything in return. Hang in there, Jun-kun.
 
 p2
 >>The story until now.
 >>The person who is half of me.
->>Protagonist Mori Asuka is a mothercon high school girl who started to love her real mother Ayako. But not only this feelings are towards blood related parent these are also a feelings of romantic love.
+>>Mori Asuka is a mothercon high school girl who has started to love her real mother, Ayako. Not just platonically, but romantically towards her blood-related parent.
->>Close relative, same gender and one sided love. Feeling sense of guilt and desire to monopolize towards Ayako, jealousy towards surrounding people, the day Asuka's uneasy feelings and desire reached a limit, she pushed down Ayako who came back home very drunk. Ayako who was surprised shake off Asuka's hand by reflex.
+>>Blood relative. Same gender. One-side love. The sense of guilt and desire to monopolize Ayako. The jealousy towards other people. All these uneasy feelings and desires reached their limit when Asuka pushed down Ayako after she came home drunk. Ayako, who was surprised, shook off Asuka's hand by reflex.
 
->>Feeling rejected by Ayako, Asuka was hurt. Ayako having received a surprising confession from her daughter initially was bewildered, but once she really realized that Asuka was troubled by such complicated worries, hugged her gently. But such gentleness from Ayako made Asuka completely aware "that she can only be a daughter", and hurt her even more. [So Ayako and Asuka missed each other feelings.]
+>>Asuka was hurt following her rejection. Ayako was initially bewildered from being confessed to by her daughter, but came to realise Asuka was troubled by complicated worries and hugged her gently. However, Ayako's kindness only further hurt Asuka, who believed that "she could only be a daughter to her". Ayako and Asuka's feelings passed by each other.
 
->>At that time that person came back suddenly...
+>At that moment, that person suddenly returned...
 
 p3
 >>~Volume omake manga~
 >Hey
 >Akira-chan.
 >Hm?
 >>Ipad
 
->Akira-chan, [when your first appeared] everyone thought that you are Mom's Mother.
+>When you first appeared, people thought you were my Mom's mom.
->here, see for yourself
+>See?
 >>Comments from pixiv
 >Huh!?
 
->Eh... that's really hurts, but...
+>Eh... that certainly hurts...
-> I should be seen as an older sister at least...
+>At the very least I'm an older sister...
 >>Akira
->How old did they think I am...
+>How old do they think I am, anyway?
 >...
 
 >Mom.
->Ayako, will you stop with bad jokes too.
+>Don't hop on the bandwagon, Ayako!
 
 p4
 >>Profile 3
 >>Mizuno Keiko (40)
 >>Height 160 cm 	Aries, blood type B
 >>Pharmacist
->>Tobacco's brand of choice is Mevius
+>>Favorite brand of cigarettes: Mevius
->>[Prefer quantity over quality in both sake and tabacco]
+>>When it comes to alcohol and cigarettes, she prefers quality over quantity.
->>[Likes South Korean drama]?
+>>Enjoys Korean drama.
 
 >>Mori Akira (38)
->>Height 175 cm 	Leo, blood type A
+>>Height 175 cm Leo, blood type A
 >>Works at human resources in foreign pharmaceutical company
->>Likes snacks like daifuku and red bean paste
+>>Likes sweets such as daifuku and red bean paste.
->>Doesn't drink even one drop of sake (have that kind of physiology that wouldn't let her get drunk)
+>>Doesn't drink any alcohol. (Has the kind of physiology that won't let her get drunk.)
 
 p5
->>afterword
+>>Afterword
->>Hello, this is Tayaki.
+>>Hello, this is Taiyaki.
 >>Thank you for buying 1 x 1/2 volume 3.
 >>When this book came out, volumes 1 and 2 started to be delivered by national wide publishing agency Melonbooks and digital publishing agency Kindle, so please definitely check these too.
 
 >>Let me note two things.
->>Firstly, which actually happened last month, this manga got a drama CD! Amazing! I'm so happy! Asuka-chan is so cute! Ayako-san is so sexy!!!(?) Producer Kokoro-san, and everyone in the cast created such a wonderful product [so I really can't rise my head]. This DL version is available on circle head Kokoro-san's BOOTH site for public, so I would be certainly happy if you'll take an interest to hear it and compare it to manga. Who knows maybe second edition would be possible...?
+>>Firstly, which actually happened last month, this manga got a drama CD! Amazing! I'm so happy! Asuka-chan is so cute! Ayako-san is so sexy!!! I bow down to the wonderful product created by producer Kokoro-san and all the cast members, and it probably won't come back up. The downloadable version is publically available on circle head Kokoro-san's BOOTH site, so I would be certainly happy if you'll take an interest to hear it and compare it to manga. Who knows? Maybe they'll make a second one...?
 
->>[second edition open for public!]
+>>Volume one on sale!
->>[there is also an audition!!]
+>>You can listen to it too!
 
 >>The second note.
->>If you are following my twitter I presume you are already aware that pixiv serialization was completely moved to [this web manga and kindle]. [I will try my best for all subscribers to have more fun so please continue to support me].
+>If you're following me on Twitter, you're probably already aware that this web manga has now completely moved from Pixiv serialization to Kindle. I'll keep doing my best to make things even more enjoyable for all you readers, so please continue to support me.
 
 >> Well then, I'll see you again in volume 4.