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 Full name  :Ren Kimani
-Full name:Ren Kimani
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 Gender:male
 
 Age: 16
 
 Nationality:seemingly Japanese
-Nationality:seemingly japenese
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 Technique:Shadow Manipulation
 
 He has the ability to manipulate the shape, form, and size of the shadows around him.
-He has the ablity to manipulate the shape, form, and size of the shadows around him.
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 Technique Drawbacks: his shadow is severely weakened by bright light (when exposed to bright enough light it will temporarily be destroyed but will reform ~30 minutes later or faster when in darkness), if he looses control over his shadow (due to being distracted or being knocked unconscious) his shadow will slowly crawl up bis body and will eventually reach his neck and strangle him (this will not happen when he falls asleep normally though)
-Technique Drawbacks: shadows are severely weakened by bright light, if he dosent keep his shadow under controll it will crawl up his body and strangle him to death
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 Affiliation: sorcerer
 
 Class [ A, B, or C | Only fill this in if you're a student. ]:
 
 Personality : He is an anti-social freak who will refuse to acknowledge the existence of anyone he dosent respect. when he is alone he will normally spend his time daydreaming or playing with his shadow, when he is with people.... he will still daydream and play with his shadow. once he opens up to someone they will notice that he is very childish, stubborn and will often fall into mild depression. he is also very protective over those he cares about
-Personality : He is an anti social freak who will refuze to acknowledge the existence of anyone he dosent respect. when he is alone he will normally spend his time daydreaming or playing with his shadow, when he is with people.... he will still daydream and play with his shadow. once he opens up to someone they will notice that he is very childish, stubborn and will often fall into mild depression. he is also very protective over those he cares about
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 Backstory: he was orphaned very early in life because his parents were abusive drunks who were killed in a bar fight (this resulted in him becoming homeless aswell), he survived by stealing and begging. at age 11 he found out that be could make shadows wave at him, eventually he learned to make them move however he wanted, and more.
-Backstory: has been orphaned and homeless for his entire life, he survived by stealing and begging. at age 11 he found out that be could make shadows wave at him, eventually he learned to make them move however he wanted.
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 Interests:shadow puppetry
 
 Weight:104 lb (47 kg)
-Weight:130 lb (59 kg)
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 Height:5'9" (170 cm)
 
 Appearance: short black hair, somewhat thin but not bone thin. seemingly grey eyes but apon closer inspection they look more like extremely light blue
-Appearance: short black hair, somewhat thin but not bone thin. seemingly grey eyes but apon closer inspection they look more like extreemly light blue
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 RP sample: *he walks into the bustling city market, eyes darting around for something to steal. he is hungry and he knows that the baker will normally be in the back room of his shop for a few minutes while he restocks.
 
 *he quickly walks up to the counter and checks that the people around him arent watching, he then grabs a small pastry and hides it in his sleeve. he then walks through the crowd twords an alleyway to eat this newly acquired snack.