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 Name: Kaze no naka no primrose (The primrose within the wind)
-Artist: Ceui
+    Artist: Ceui
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-kyoushitsu no madobe de nagameru yasashii yuugure no sora
+    kyoushitsu no madobe de nagameru yasashii yuugure no sora
-The gentle sunset sky that extends outside the window of the classroom {I'm guessing he's looking at this scene and looking back on the memories etc in the next lines. -sm}
+    The gentle sunset sky that extends outside the window of the classroom {I'm guessing he's looking at this scene and looking back on the memories etc in the next lines. -sm}{Only line I can't come up with an alternative wording for right now - Fyurie}
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-furimukeba kimi ga egao de kocchi wo miteta
+    furimukeba kimi ga egao de kocchi wo miteta
-When I turned around, you smiled and looked this way
+    When I turned around, you smiled and looked toward me.
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-isshoni kaeba itsumo toomawari wo shinagara
+    isshoni kaeba itsumo toomawari wo shinagara
-While returning home together and taking the longer route,
+    While returning home together and taking the longer route,
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-mada sukoshi todokanai yubisaki ga tada setsunakute
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-I couldn't barely reach that fingertip; it's painful.{It's painful that the fingertip was where I barely can't reach it yet}
+    mada sukoshi todokanai yubisaki ga tada setsunakute
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+    Your fingertip(s)/hand(s) was/were so painfully close, but I couldn't reach it/them.
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-ano hi kimi to meguriaeta kara takusan no yume wo mitsuketanda
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-I found many dreams ever since I met you that day
+    ano hi kimi to meguriaeta kara takusan no yume wo mitsuketanda
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+    I've continued dreaming ever since I met you that day.
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-nakitai toki demo itsumo soba ni ite kurete doumo arigatou
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-Thank you for being there beside/for me even when I wanted to cry
+    nakitai toki demo itsumo soba ni ite kurete doumo arigatou
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+    Thank you for being there beside me when I wanted/needed to cry.
-mou koko ni kaita himitsu no peeji wa tsugi kaizu ni itta kotoba{Not sure of hearing of this line}
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-The words which you said and I didn't write on this secret page/diary{TLC}
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+    nooto ni kaita himitsu no peeji wa zutto iezu ni itta kotoba
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+    In this page of my secret diary are the words which I could never say to you.
-ugokase no naka zutto sasayaku yo
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-I always murmur them to myself and they move me, you know.
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+    ugokase no naka zutto sasayaku yo
-ne kiite kimi ga daisuki dayo
+    I {always} murmur them to myself and they move me, you know.
-Hey, please hear it; I love you.
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     ne kiite kimi ga daisuki dayo
     Hey, please hear this; I love you.{I think that "this" is more appropriate here.}