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-[Continuing morning petite drama: Everyone’s commercial - Ami/Mami and Koami/Komami- chapter]
+[The continuing morning petite drama: everyone’s commercials - Ami/Mami and Koami/Komami- chapter]
 
-MC: P was in charge of making twelve volume commercials.
+MC: P's in charge of making commercials for all twelve volumes.
-MC: After the fourth photo shoot with Haruka ended, next up is a commercial for noisy twins.
+MC: After the fourth photo shoot with Haruka ended, next up is a commercial for the noisy twins.
 
 Ami: Hey, wait a second, Crater-san over there!!! We're not noisy at all.
 MC: Ehh. Err, are you talking to me?
 Mami: C'mon, Ami. You're embarrassing Elevator-san by getting his name wrong.
-Ami: Oh, was it? My bad. So, Escalator-san, let's be frank and introduce us as nice ladies.
+Ami: Oh, is that it? My bad. So, Escalator-san, be frank and introduce us as nice ladies.
-MC: I'm involved for the first time.
+MC: I'm interfered with for the first time.
 
-P: Well then, next one is a commercial for Ami and Mami.
+P: Well then, next up is a commercial for Ami and Mami.
-Amami: Ah, Nii-chan is here. Morning, Nii-chan.
+Amami: Ah, Nii-chan's here. Morning, Nii-chan.
-P: Oh, Ami Mami, here you are. You come at the right moment.
+P: Oh, Ami Mami, here you are. You showed up at the right moment.
-P: Fufufu. The thing is, I have something to surprise you.
+P: Fufufu. The thing is, I have a surprise for you.
-Amami: Heh, really? What is it? Did you win the first prize from lottery? Something like that??
+Amami: Heh, really? What is it? Did you win first prize in the lottery or something??
 P: Ah, no, well...
-Amami: No, it's got to be something more surprising, right?
+Amami: No, it's gotta be a bigger surprise than that, right?
-Amami: Nii-chan was reformed by evil organization, and now he can do something like shooting a beam!
+Amami: Like Nii-chan was revamped by an evil organization, and now he's capable of doing things like shooting a beam!
-Amami: Nope, nope, nope! If Nii-chan says that he has good news, then it's not just that.
+Amami: Nope, nope, nope! If Nii-chan says that he has good news, then it's not going to be as simple as that.
 Amami: He'll tell us that the office can transform into a mighty robot or something of that level!
 Ami-Mami: Hey, Nii-chan, what exactly is it !?!
 P: Ehh, ahh, I doubt I can meet your expectations...
-MC: Seems like the hurdle is raised too high
+MC: It seems like the hurdle was raised too high.
 
-Amami: Hey, Nii-chan, don't put yourself on airs.
+Amami: Hey, Nii-chan, don't put on airs.
 Amami: Yeah, yeah.
 Koami: Toka
 Komami: Chi~
-P: No, I'm not giving myself airs. The thing is, I'm thinking about having you shoot a commercial at an amusement park.
+P: No, I'm not putting on airs. What I was going to tell you is that you have a commercial shoot at an amusement park.
 Ami-Mami: Ehhhhh !?!
 P: Wahh. I knew it'd let you down.
 Ami: Yeah ! It's an amusement park, Mami!
 Mami: Uh-huh. Nii-chan, Mami is very happy.
 P: I-Is that so?
 Ami: Hey, Nii-chan, can we bring Koami and Komami along?
 Koami: Toka
 Komami: Chi~
 P: Yep, that's fine. We'll shoot a commercial that makes everyone want to go to an amusement park.
 Amami: Yeah, Wooo!
 Amami: Nihihi, Nii-chan, thanks a bunch!
 P: Oh... ahh.
 Ami-Mami-Koami-Komami: Cheers! Cheers! Cheers! Cheers! Cheers!
-MC: Everything seems to go well.
+MC: Everything seems to be going well.
 
 Kotori: That's good for you, Producer-san. Everyone is delighted.
 P: Yeah.
-Kotori: By the way, this time, is the shooting location really an amusement park?
+Kotori: By the way, is the location for the shoot this time really at an amusement park?
-Kotori: Don't tell me that it's the park again. If so, then it'd be terrible.
+Kotori: Don't tell me that it's that park again. If so, then it'd be terrible.
-P: Otonashi-san. You don't think a place with lots of playground equipments
+P: Otonashi-san. You don't think a place with a lot of playground equipment
-P: would be thought of as something big like amusement park, do you?
+P: would be big enough to be considered an amusement park, do you?
 Kotori: No, I don't.
 P: Right?
 MC: And so, the commercial shoot this time will actually take place at an amusement park.
 Amami: Alright, everyone, let's go!
 Koami: Toka
 Komami: Chi~
 
-P: Alright, everyone, we're now at the amusement park.
+P: Alright, everyone, now we're at the amusement park.
 Ami: Hey, Nii-chan, what should we ride first?
 Mami: Me, me, me! Mami suggests the jet coaster!
 P: C'mon, we're here for work today. We'll play around next time.
 Ami: Hehhh, then what's the point of coming to an amusement park?
 P: Eh?
-Mami: Right. Since it's a commercial for amusement park, you gotta shoot it while we're having fun.
+Mami: Right. Since it's a commercial for an amusement park, you gotta shoot it while we're having fun.
 P: That makes sense. Alright, let's go with that.
-Mami: Hooray ! So, it's decided we start off with jet coaster!
+Mami: Hooray ! So, it's decided, we'll start off with the jet coaster!
 Koami: Toka
 Komami: Chi~
-P: Hey, don't pull me! I'm here only for the shoot. Why should I get on the ride with you?
+P: Hey, don't pull on me! I'm only here for the shoot. Why should I get on the ride with you?
-	Ami: You’re someone that needs to be at the scene of the crime, right? Let's go, Nii-chan.
+Ami: You need to be present at the scene of the crime, right? Let's go, Nii-chan.
- 	P: I think you want to say “attend with you”. Wait, Koami, Komami, we can't take both of you.
+P: I think you meant to say I need to “attend with you". Wait, Koami, Komami, we can't take both of you.
 Ami: Yah, that was fun, Nii-chan.
-P: Umm, ahh. Good greif, I couldn't shoot anything.
+P: Umm, ahh. Good grief, I couldn't shoot anything.
-MC: It's dangerous to take a film on jet coaster, so good kids, please don't ever try it .
+MC: It's dangerous to try and film on a jet coaster. So kids, be good and please don't ever try it.
 
-MC: Afterward, the shoot continues at places such as haunted castle and roller coaster.
+MC: After that, the shoot continued at places like a haunted castle and a roller coaster.
-Amami: Haaa, so much fun. So, what will we play next?
+Amami: Haaa, so much fun. So, what should we play with next?
-	P: So you're just playing around. To that extent is bad, but I wonder if I could take it? I do have good strength and guts.
+P: So you're just playing around. To this extent is tough, I wonder if I can handle it? Well, I have strength and guts.
-Amami: Nii-chan, you're putting up a nice fight. But it's not over yet. What'd be next?
+Amami: Nii-chan, you're putting up a nice fight. But it's not over yet. What will it be next?
 Koami: Toka
-Amami: Huh, Koami, Komami, you said you want to ride something? But there might be height restriction.
+Amami: Huh, Koami, Komami, you said you wanted to ride something? But there might be a height restriction.
 Komami: Chi~
-Amami: Coffee Cup ? Ah, if it's that one, then surely there's no problem for Koami and Komami.
+Amami: Tea cup ride ? Ah, if it's that, then there won't be a problem for Koami and Komami.
-P: Well then, I'm going to buy some drinks, can I leave my camera with you?
+P: Well, I'm going to buy some drinks, can I leave my camera with you?
 Amami: Roger! Let's go, Koami, Komami!
 Koami: Toka
 Komami: Chi~
 
 Mami: Alright, it's starting to spin. Yayayayayayaya!
-Ami: Wooo, it's spinning. The spinning is getting faster and faster.
+Ami: Wooo, it's spinning. The spinning's getting faster and faster.
 Koami: Toka
 Komami: Chi~
-Ami: Koami and Komami seem to enjoy it. Mami, go with max rotation!
+Ami: Koami and Komami seem to enjoy it. Mami, let's go with max rotation!
 Mami: Here we go! Rararararara!!!
 Koami: Toka, Tokaaaa!
 Komami: Chi, Ch-Chi, Chii~
-	MC: Oh? The Puchis are…
+MC: Oh? The Puchis are…
 Koami: Tokaka, Toka, Tokaaaa!
 Komami: Chi, Ch-Chi, Chi, Chi, Chii~
-Mami: Ahaha, you'll fly if you don't grab it tight.
+Mami: Ahaha, you'll fly away if you don't grab on tight.
 Koami: Tokaaaaa.....
 Komami: Chiii....
-Ami: Ah, they did fly.
+Ami: Ah, they flew away.
 
-P:　So, now I got juices for everyone, but how are they doing?
+P:　So, now I have juice for everyone, but I wonder how they're doing?
 Koami: Tokaaa...
 P: Hmm, that voice is... Koami? How?
 Komami: Chiiii...
-P: What's that? She looks panic in the sky and... Whoaaaa!
+P: What's that? She looks panicked in the sky and... Whoaaaa!
-Amami: Wow, Nii-chan, that's a nice endurance catch!
+Amami: Wow, Nii-chan, you endured for a nice catch!
 Amami: Koami, Komami, are you all right?
 Koami: Toka
 Komami: Chi~
-	MC: It seems the Puchis have the pressure like fifty thousand high intensity attractions.
+MC: It seems the Puchis are delighted from the intense attractions.
 
-P: So the commercial was completed with no issue.
+P: So the commercial was completed without issues.
 Kotori: Producer, don't you feel tired?
 P: Not at all. Well then, CM start!
 
 Ami: Hey, Nii-chan, hurry up!
-Mami: Nee-chan too, quickly!
+Mami: Nee-chan too, quickly quickly!
 Koami: Nii-chan
 Komami: Nee-chan
-	Mami: Ehehe. Nee-chan looks funny riding, huh?
+Mami: Ehehe. Nee-chan looks like she's having fun riding it, huh?
-Ami: Uh-huh. Amusement park is really
+Ami: Uh-huh. An amusement park is really
 Ami-Mami: The best!
 
-P: Otonashi-san, how is it?
+P: How is it, Otonashi-san?
-Kotori: Ermm, I feel like there's a scream before I've heard from someone throughout the CM.
+Kotori: Ermm, I feel like throughout the CM, there was a familiar scream I've heard before from someone.
 P: That's your imagination.
 Amami: Ufufu. Nii-chan, it was fun today. Thank you, Nii-chan.
-P: Well, if it was enjoyable for everyone, then my endurance catch did pay off.
+P: Well, if it was enjoyable for everyone, then the catch I endured paid off.
 Koami: Toka
 Komami: Chi~
 P: Oh, did you two have fun?
 Koami: Toka
 Komami: Chi~
 P: I see. Next time, let's take everyone there without having to work.
-Mami: Really? Hooray! Hey, Ami, next time let's have Nii-chan ride the jet coaster 100 rounds non-stop!
+Mami: Really? Hooray! Hey, Ami, next time let's have Nii-chan ride the jet coaster 100 times, non-stop!
-Ami: Nah, we better have him ride the Human Punishment Helmet!
+Ami: Nah, we better have him ride the Human Bazooka launcher!
 P: Please spare me...
-MC:　It looks like P will continue to suffer.
+MC:　It looks like P's suffering will continue.
 
 Kotori: I was wondering how the CM with both Ami-chan and Mami-chan would turn out,
-Kotori: But you did think it through about the world of mirrors style of being too far-sighted.
+Kotori: But you did think it through and made it look like something out of the world of mirrors.
-P: Right? I noticed that while editing, and I confused it with CG.
+P: Right? I noticed that while I was editing, and I confused it with CG.
 Kotori: That didn't go as planned?
 P: Insight is important... right?
 Kotori: Producer-san, we have to talk! Kneel over there!
 P: Okay...
 MC: So, let's see what the next commercial will be.