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-To grant everyone dream!
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 To grant everyone's dream!
 
 Producer
 
 (The concept and stage composition that Konomi-san had stayed up all night to plan.... will be present to us today.
 
 (The concept and stage composition that Konomi-san stayed up all night to plan...  It will be presented to us today.)
 
 Producer
 
 (The conclusion that Konomi-san had reached...what it will be, I wonder?)
 
 (The conclusion that Konomi-san has reached...what will it be, I wonder?)
 
 Konomi
 
 Sorry to made you all waiting, everyone!  and sorry to made your all worry about me.  but I'm alright now!
 
 Sorry to make you all wait, everyone!  ...and sorry to make you all worry about me, but I'm alright now!
 
 Konomi
 
 Surprise!!  The live composition that include everyone's ideas is complete!
 
 Mami
 
 Ehh!?  Our idea...  didn't all of those got rejected?
 
 Ehh!?  Our ideas...didn't all of those get rejected?
 
 Konomi
 
 It's true that we couldn't use all of those idea as it is
 
 It's true that we couldn't use all of those ideas as is...
 
 Konomi
 
 But they all have an aspect of them that is possible to realise!...it took me sometime before I could find the common ground though.
 
-But they all have aspects of them are are possible to realize!  ...It took me some time before I could find the common ground though.
+But they all have aspects of them are possible to realize!  ...It took me some time before I could find the common ground though.
 
 Producer
 
 (Konomi-san...that must be very tiring.  But she look so satisfied right now!)
 
 (Konomi-san...that must be very tiring, but she looks so satisfied right now!)
 
 Konomi
 
 First, Minako-chan.
 
 Konomi
 
 While the diner show is impossible...  how about open the "Special! Satake restaurant" booth in the shop area instead?
 
 While the dinner show is impossible...  How about opening the "Special!  Satake Restaurant!" booth in the shop area instead?
 
 Minako
 
 I see, So I just have to serve the food only to anyone that want it♪
 
 I see, so I just have to serve food only to anyone that wants is♪
 
 Minoko
 
 Well then, I'll think of menu that could be easily eat even it the live hall!  Like the spring roll, or the pork buns!
 
 Well then, I'll think of a menu that could be easily eaten even in the live hall!  Like a spring roll, or pork buns!
 
 Producer
 
 I see...And since the fans would be burn the calories off during the live for sure, you could put a bit more lard into it!  I'll leave it to you, Minako!
 
 I see...  Since the fans would burn the calories off during the live for sure, you could put a bit more lard into it!  I'll leave it to you, Minako!
 
 Minako
 
 Roger!  I'll be sure to made them extra large calories!
 
 Roger!  I'll be sure to make them extra large calories!
 
 Konomi
 
 Next,  About Hinata-chan's idea "Live with a lot of flowers"...
 
 Next, about Hinata-chan's idea of "Live with a lot of flowers"...
 
 Konomi
 
 We had decide that it will be very difficult to prepare the flowers, right?
 
 We had decided that it will be very difficult to prepare the flowers, right?
 
 Hinata
 
 Yes, that right.  since the real flowers is very expensive...  So I've give up.
 
 Yes, that's right, since the real flowers are very expensive... So I've given up.
 
 Konomi
 
 Then, how about instead of a real flower, we let a flower shaped confetti fall from above the audience seat?
 
 Then, how about instead of real flowers, we let flower shaped confetti fall from above the seats in the audience?
 
 Hinata
 
 A flower shaped confetti...?...  Wah~, that would be really beautiful!
 
 Producer
 
 I see,  since it's a paper we don't have to worry about the cost or keeping them flesh, and if we use a lot of color it would be like a flower field...!
 
-I see...  Since it's paper we don't have to worry about the cost or keeping them fresh, and if we a lot of colors it'd be like a flower field...!
+I see...  Since it's paper we don't have to worry about the cost or keeping them fresh, and if we use lots of colors it'd be like a flower field...!
 
 Konomi
 
 ...and since it wouldn't have any smell on it own, I've ask Karen-chan what her recommended aroma.
 
 ...and since it wouldn't have any smell on its own, I've asked Karen-chan what her recommended aroma is.
 
 Hinata
 
 Konomi-san...., thank you for thinking about my idea so seriously.
 
 Konomi-san...  Thank you for thinking about my idea so seriously.
 
 Hinata
 
 A confetti with an aroma smell, I'm sure the fans will be surprised.  It sound like a really great idea!
 
 Confetti with an aromatic smell, I'm sure the fans will be surprised.  It sounds like a really great idea!
 
 Producer
 
 I'm agree.  It's a nice idea, Konomi-san!
 
 I agree.  it's a nice idea, Konomi-san!
 
 Konomi
 
 fufu..that a leader job after all♪
 
 Fufu...that's a leader's job after all♪
 
 Konomi
 
 the next is about Iku-chan's proposal, the " lives full of animal"...
 
 The next is about Iku-chan's proposal, the "live full of animals"...
 
 Konomi
 
 We really couldn't bring an animal to the live after all.
 
 We really couldn't bring animals to the live after all.
 
 Iku
 
 Yeah...  I know...
 
 Konomi
 
 But I've an idea...
 
 Konomi
 
 Isn't sound like fun if we talk like an animal as a mini corner during the song!?
 
 Does it sound like fun if we talk like animals as a mini-corner during the song!?
 
 Konomi
 
 In another word, we will become the animals ourselves!
 
 In other words, we will become the animals ourselves!
 
 Iku
 
 Wah...!
 
 Iku
 
 That sound like it could be fun! Ehehe, I want to become a cute animal~.  I'm really look forward to it!
 
 That sounds like it could be fun!  Ehehe, I want to become a cute animal~.  I'm really looking forward to it!
 
 Producer
 
 Me too.
 
 Konomi
 
 Ufufu...me as well♪ and about Iku-chan's another idea, "reaching even the audience at the back"...
 
 Ufufu... me as well♪ and about Iku-chan's other idea, "reaching even the audience at the back"...
 
 Konomi
 
 I have found a hit to realise it from Mami-chan's idea! that right, the "space"!
 
-I have found a (hit?  bit?  something else?) way(?) to realize it from Mami-chan's idea!  That's right, the "space"!
+I have found a hint about how to realize it from Mami-chan's idea!  That's right, "space"!
 
 Mami
 
 Ehh!?  Konomin, you also will use Mami's idea too!?
 
 Ehh!?  Konomin, you'll also use Mami's idea too!?
 
 I'm not sure if stacking "also," with "too," in the same sentence is preferable, but I think, grammatically, it scans just fine.  At 3 AM it just doesn't sound quite right is all.
 
 Konomi
 
 Of course!  It's an idea a from important member after all.
 
 Of course!  It's an idea from an important member, after all.
 
 Mami
 
 ...Konomin, thank you~!
 
 Mami
 
 but, how would you realise that space idea~?
 
 But...how would you realize the space idea~?
 
 Konomi
 
 It is with...wire action show!!
 
 Everyone
 
 ...Wire action show~!?
 
 Konomi
 
 That right, we will hang in the air with the wire, and fly around the audience seat.  ...like a space walk!
 
 That's right, we will hang in the air with the wire, and fly around the audience's seats. ...like a space walk!
 
 Producer
 
 I see, so we can do it that way too!  we could indeed reach even the fans at the back seat like that!
 
 I see, so we could do it that way too!  We could indeed reach even the fans in the back seats like that!
 
 Mami
 
 Uwah~...!  that, that! that make Mami really exited~!
 
 Uwah~...!  That, that!  That makes Mami really excited~!
 
 Konomi
 
 fufu! Isn't it, Mami-chan!
 
 Fufu!  isn't it, Mami-chan!
 
 Producer
 
 You really did united all those idea beautifully.  As expect from you, Konomi-san!
 
 You really did unite all those ideas beautifully.  As expected from you, Konomi-san!
 
 I like sasuga, though.
 
 Konomi
 
 This is an adult's leadership!...ufufu.  I'm glade that everyone seem to like it.
 
 This is an adult's leadership!....ufufu.  I'm glad that everyone seems to like it.
 
 Producer
 
 ...Hm, please wait a minute.  Konomi-san, is this really all of everyone's idea?
 
 ...Hm, just a minute.  Konomi-san, is this really all of everyone's ideas?
 
 Minako
 
 Ah....!  I..it true that this plan have everything that we want to do...,  but isn't it still lack Konomi-san wish?
 
 Ah...!  I...it's true that this plan has everything that we want to do...but isn't it still lacking Konomi-san's wish?
 
 Konomi
 
 Fufu, It's alright, Minako-chan and Producer.  I'm already did what I want to do.
 
 Fufu, it's alright, Minako-chan, Producer.  I'm already doing what I want to do.
 
 Konomi
 
 What I want to express is the adult me...  in another word, the leadership of an adult!
 
 What I want to express is the adult me...  In other words, the leadership of an adult!
 
 Everyone
 
 ...The leader ship..of an adult...!?
 
 ...The leadership...of an adult...!?
 
 Konomi
 
 To lead everyone and create a live that all could enjoy!  That what I want to do the most.
 
 To lead everyone and create a live that all could enjoy!  That's what I want to do the most.
 
 Konomi
 
 That why, this is really a live that have all of our dream in it♪
 
 That's why this is really a live that has all of our dreams in it♪
 
 Producer
 
 (Konomi-san have give us a plan that she could enjoy it herself and made all members shine at the same time.  I'm really sure it'll be a success...!)
 
 (Konomi-san has given us a plan that she could enjoy herself and made all the members shine at the same time.  I'm really sure it'll be a success...!)
 
 (Skip to the rehearsal of PSL)
 
 Producer
 
 (Mixnuts is rehearsal for Platinum Start Live right now.  After that day, everyone had practice the concept that Konomi-san give us really hard...)
 
 (Mixnuts is rehearsing for Platinum Star Live right now.  After that day, everyone has been practicing the concept that Konomi-san gave us really hard...)
 
 Mami
 
 Nii-chan!  Mami's rehearsal for the wire action is really fun~!  It's just like being in a amusement park, this look like it'll become a really excited live~!!
 
 Nii-chan!  Mami's rehearsel for the wire action is really fun~!  It's just like being in an amusement park, this looks like it'll become a really exciting live~!!
 
 Producer
 
 That good!  if you could also enjoy performing it yourself , I'm sure this will become a live that all of the fans could enjoy it as well!
 
 That's good!  If you could also enjoy performing it yourself I'm sure this will become a live that all of the fans could enjoy as well!
 
 Mami
 
 Really!?  Alright~, Mami will delivery the joy to the fans!  Hey, can Mami do the rehearsal one more time~?
 
 Really!?  Alright~, Mami will deliver joy to the fans!  Hey, can Mami do the rehearsal one more time~?
 
 Producer
 
 Haha...  I'm glade that you have fun but... you will have to fly around until you're sick of it at the actual live, so let don't overdo it right now...okay?
 
 Haha...  I'm glad that you have fun but...  You will have to fly around until you're sick of it at the actual live, so let's not overdo it right now...okay?
 
 Iku
 
 Producer-san!  I'm also enjoy the rehearsal too!
 
 Producer-san!  I'm also enjoying the rehearsal too!
 
 Producer
 
 Ohh, Iku. you don't feel nervous?
 
 Ohh, Iku.  You don't feel nervous?
 
 Iku
 
 Not at all!  I usually feel really nervous at these time...  But I'm alright today!
 
-Not at all!  I usually feel really nervous at times like these...but I'm already today!
+Not at all!  I usually feel really nervous at times like these...but I'm alright today!
 
 Hinata
 
 Me too.  It must because I'm with everyone today.
 
 Me too.  It must be because I'm with everyone today.
 
 Hinata
 
 When I'm with everyone, it's made me feel secure as if I'm with gramps and grams.
 
 When I'm with everyone it make me feel as secure as if I'm with gramps and grams.
 
 Minako
 
 That right, I'm also feel it too♪ I feel like I could do anything if I'm with everyone!
 
 That's right, I'm also feeling it too♪  I feel like I could do anything if I'm with everyone!
 
 Producer
 
 Everyone...you all are doing good!  I'm sure we will be succeed!
 
 Everyone...you all are doing good!  I'm sure we will succeed!
 
 Producer
 
 (It's seem that everyone become close to each other during the Platinum Start Live.  ...and it all because Konmi-san do her best as a leader.)
 
-(It seems taht everyone's become close with each other during the Platinum Star Live.  ...and it's all because Konomi-san did her best as a leader.)
+(It seems that everyone's become close with each other during the Platinum Star Live.  ...and it's all because Konomi-san did her best as a leader.)
 
 Konomi
 
 Look, Producer. Look at those kids' smile.  ...Just by seeing those smile, it's made me glade that I'm a leader.
 
-Look, Producer.  Look at those kids smile.  ...just by seeing those smiles, it's made me glad that I'm a leader.
+Look, Producer.  Look at the smiles of those kids.  ...just by seeing those smiles, it's made me glad that I'm a leader.
 
-Was that supposed to be possessive or just plural?  ie, kids' vs. kids.  (I'm not looking at the video this time around)
+
 
 ...Konomi-san.  It still too early to get all sentimental now.
 
 ...Konomi-san.  It's still too early to get all sentimental now.
 
 Konomi
 
 ...I know. We still have a live to do, after all. ...but there nothing we have to worry about.
 
 ...I know.  We still have a live to do, after all.  ...but there's nothing we have to worry about.
 
 Producer
 
 Well, that might be true.  Since everyone look so confident and don't feel nervous at all.
 
 Well, that might be true, since everyone looks so confident and don't feel nervous at all.
 
 Konomi
 
 That right.  that why It'll be alright. ...Look like it's time.  Everyone, please gather here!
 
 That's right.  That's why it'll be alright.  ...Looks like it's time.  Everyone, please gather here!
 
 Konomi
 
 Well...  It's the time now.
 
 Well...  It's time now.
 
 Konomi
 
 ...I don't have anything special to said here and now.  Since I'm sure that all of my feeling have already reached everyone.
 
 ...I don't have anything special to say here and now, since I'm sure that all of my feelings have already reached everyone.
 
 Konomi
 
 ...Producer, don't you have something you want to told everyone?
 
 ...Producer, don't you have something you want to tell everyone?
 
 Producer
 
 ...Yes.  What I want to say is...
 
 Choice
 
 >Have fun with the live
 >Feel some pressure
 
 >Have fun with the live
 
 Producer
 
 Have fun with the live!  today live is what everyone had created together after all!
 
 Have fun with the live!  Today's live is what everyone has created together after all!
 
 Mami
 
 Of the course~!  if We couldn't have fun ourselves, there no way we could entertain all of the Nii-can and Nee-chan!
 
 Of course~!  If we couldn't have fun ourselves there's no way we could entertain all of the nii-chans and nee-chans!
 
 Minako
 
 Producer-san, please enjoy the live yourself too!
 
 Hinata
 
 If you don't mind, you could also go singing and dancing together with us too.
 
 Producer
 
 No...I'll have to decline that...  but thank you, everyone.  I'll enjoy the live myself too.  Let's do our best together!
 
 No...I'll have to decline to that...but thank you, everyone.  I'll enjoy the live myself too.  Let's do our best together!
 
 Konomi
 
 ...Well then, Producer, we will go then! △
 
 ...Well then, Producer, let's go then!
 OR
 ...Well then, Producer, we'll go then!
 
 Producer
 
 Roger, and good luck!
 
 Producer
 
 (The Platinum Start Live 4th had finally begun...!  I'm believe in Mixnuts and all of it member...!)
 
 (Platinum Star Live 4 has finally begun...!  I believe in Mixnuts and all of its members...!)
 
 
 >feel some pressure
 
 Producer
 
 Look like everyone is feel really relax right now...  But it might be better if you all feel some pressure.  You could do better with a right amount of pressure after all.
 
 Looks like everyone is feeling really relaxed right now...but if might be better if you all feel some pressure.  You could do better with a right amount of pressure after all.
 
 Iku
 
 It hard to feel pressure all of a sudden though...
 
 It's hard to feel pressure all of a sudden though...
 
 Mami
 
 That right~!  and you always told us to just relax~!
 
 That's right~!  And you always told us to just relax~!
 
 I know we're not supposed to start sentences with And or But but for Mami and Mamispeak it seems acceptable.
 
 Hinata
 
 They said that just imagine the audience as a vegetable if you feel nervous.
 
 They said that just imagine the audience as vegetables if you feel nervous.
 
 Hinata
 
 Is that mean...we just have to do the opposite if we want to feel pressured...?
 
 Does that mean...we just have to do the opposite if we want to feel pressured...?
 
 Mami
 
 Hmm!?  Like imagine vegetables as people?
 
 Mami
 
 ...Uauaa~!  It sounds so gross~!?
 
 Producer
 
 Hmm~...  Not even a shred of pressure...
 
 Minako
 
 But that what us...the "Mixnuts" are, Producer-san♪
 
 But that's what we...the "Mixnuts," are, Producer-san♪
 
 Producer
 
 Minako...  ...You're right.
 
 Producer
 
 You all really just fine the way you are right now. go and enjoy the Platinum Start Live!
 
 You all are really just fine the way you are right now.  Go and enjoy the Platinum Star Live!
 
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