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 Manga Time Kirara Magica
 Volume 4 Serial
 
 Mahou Shoujo Homura ★ Tamura
 ~Parallel Worlds Do Not Remain Parallel Forever~
 #4
 by afro
 
 ---1---
 
-:  It's here...
+:  This is it...
-:  We have a new transfer student today-
+:   I'd like to introduce a transfer student-
 
-:  It's here, it's here..
+:  This is it, This is it..
 
-:  now, please introduce yourself!!
+:  Why don't you tell the class your name—!!
-:  That person...
+:  Her...
-:  It's here, ti's here, it's here!!
+:  This is it, this is it, this is it!!
 
-:  It's finally here--!!
+:  The one I have been waiting for-!!
 
 Mahou Shoujo Homura ★ Tamura
 ~Parallel Worlds Do Not Remain Parallel Forever~
 #4
 by afro
 
 Akemi Homura
 
-* An introduction unlike ever before
+* An initial greeting unlike ever before
 
 ---2---
 
-:  My name is Akemi Homura, I'm in your care.
+:  I'm Akemi Homura. It's a pleasure to meet you.
 
-:  It has been a while since I said that line...
+:  It's been so long since the last time I said this line...
 
-:  My first time meeting Madoka
+:  My first meeting with Madoka
-:  Was in this classroom as well...
+:  Was in this very room as well...
 
-:  Ehm, Akemi-san?
+:  Ehh, Akemi-san?
 
-:  Indeed, with all these strange timelines
+:  That's right, with all these strange timelines recently
-:  One close to the original world is hard to find.
+:  One so close to the original is a rare find indeed.
 
-:  The parallel world!!
+:  The proximity world!!
 
-:  When was the last time for a world like this..
+:  How long has it been since the world was like this..
-:  I will definitely reach the best ending here!!
+:  I will definitely reach the best ending in this one!!
 
-:  I'm in your care, Tamura-chan!!
+:  Nice to meet you, Tamura-chan!!
-:  Even if it's only a parallel world.
+:  Even if it's only the proximity world.
 
 ---3---
 
 :  I'm not Tamura or Chimura or Dumura--  But that's only the smallest of issues.
 :  Getting unreasonably riled up
 
-:  Ah... it's been so long since I met a normal Madoka..
+:  Haha... it's been a while since I met a normal Madoka..
-:  Odd Homura
+:  Abnormal Homura
 
-:  Wait, no, if I don't follow the original path...
+:  Wait, no, if I fail to follow the standard path...
-:  Madoka, can you take me to the nurses office?
+:  Madoka, Could you take me to the nurse's office?
-:  Oh, count on me, Tamura-chan.
+:  Oh, sure thing, Tamura-chan.
 
-:  Tamura is a cool name!!
+:  Tamura sounds kind of cool!!
-:  Hehehe, yes.
+:  Hehehe, sure.
 
-:  To first beat this timeline, I  need to identify what's wrong with it..
+:  To conquer this timeline, I need to first identity what's different with it..
-:  Over here.
+:  This way
 
-:  Error #1 Madoka
+:  Difference #1 Madoka
 : Tamura-chan
-:  Got my name wrong
+:  Always gets my name wrong.
 
-:  Error #2 Sakura Kyouko
+:  Difference #2 Sakura Kyouko
 : Want some?
-:  Only eats fish rolls
+:  Only eats fish rolls.
 
 :  Error #3 Mami Tomoe
-:  Is dead
+:  Is already dead.
-: What, again?
+Here Lies Mami Tomoe
 : Really, again?
 
 ---4---
-:  Oh well, everything's within acceptable parameters...
+
-Not acceptable!!
+:  Oh well, that's within acceptable parameters...
 No, don't accept it!!
-:  Next I need successfully capture all the key flags!!
+
 :  Then I just need to successful capture all the key flags!!
 
-:  Yes, after cumolating so much experience!!  I know exactly what must be done!!
+
 :  That's right, with all the experience I have accumulated!!  I know exactly what needs to be done!!
-PERFECT
+
 PERFECT-!!
 :   She's not well..?
 
-:  and Sayaka (turning into a witch is troublesome) from contacting Kyubey.
+
 :  and Sayaka (her Witch is troublesome) from get in contact with Kyubey.
-:  Alright, you two, listen closely.  This talking cat
+
-:  named Kyubey is in fact a secret biological weapon from another country.
+:  Alright you two, listen closely.  The talking cat
 :  named Kyubey is actually a secret, foreign bio-weapon.
-:  Due to this Kyubey, the number of victims have been increasing rapidly.
+
 : The number of people victimized by this "Kyubey" have been on rapidly on the rise.
-:  What can this cat-thing really do?
+
 :  What's the worst that this cat-thing can do?
-:  That pale and smooth skin is an harbors over 600 disease antigens... Get it now?
+
 :  Its pale and smooth skin incubates over 600 deadly pathogens... Understand now?
-:  Nasty!!
+
 :  Disgusting!!
 :  That should do it...
 
 ---5---
-:  Kyubey, it's been a while since I seen this face.
+
-:  W-what is it?
+:  I haven't seen Kyubey looking like this for a while either.
-:  Kyubey's looks
+:  W-what?
 :  Actually, how Kyubey looks
-:  Is the best way to determine how close the current world is to the original
+
-:  What's up with you?
+:  Is the best indicator for
 :  What's wrong?
-:  **
+
-:  Makea contract with me!!
+:  Divergence with the original timeline.
 :  Make a contract with me!!
-:  It looks totally different if the world's too great
+
-:  Enclosing your Soul in a Soul Gem is covered in page 207 of your contract document.  To complaint about it now, I don't get it at all.
+:  His looks change drastically when the divergence is too great.
 :  Enclosing your Soul in a Soul Gem was covered in page 207 of your contract.  I don't get why you're complaining about it now.
-:  Even this have happened before...
+
 :  Even this has happened before...
 :  Madoka!!
 : !?
 :  Who is it?
 
 :  Who!?  Who is it!?
 :  Madoka!!
 
 : !
-:  What, it's a dog.
+
 :  Oh, It's a doggie.
 :  Woof
 :  Woof
 
 ---6---
-:  Flag #2  Stop Kyubey's movements
+
-:  Anyone want to contract-
+:  Flag #2  Restrict Kyubey's movements
-:  Anyone want to contract--
+:  Anyone wants to contract-
 :  Anyone wants to contract--
-:  Even if I kill this one, another Kyubey will appear.  I'll stun it first...
+
 :  Even if I kill this Kyubey, another one will just appear.  That's why I'll stun it first...
 :  Ah!!
-:  Then tie this to its tail.
+
 :  And tie this to its tail.
-:  Madoka!! Contract!! Contract!! Madoka, wait!!
+
-:  That's all!!
+:  Madoka!! Contract!! Contract!! Madoka, wait up!!
 :  That's that!!
 
 :  And finally the last flag
 
 :  How to beat Walpurgisnaught
-:  Why haven't I noticed it before...!
+
 :  I can't believe I never noticed this until now..!
 :  The reason I can't beat the Walpurgisnaught... was...
-:  relying too much on weapons!!
+
 :  my over-reliance on weapons!!
 
 ---7---
-:  HGow come I didn't thought of it sooner?
+
 :  Why did I didn't realize it sooner?
-:  I always thought timestop and modern weaponry are my most important weapons.
+
 :  I always assumed that time-stop and modern weaponry are my greatest weapons.
-:  But I never thought that trained fists can even exceed best of modern weapons!!
+
 :  Yet trained fists easily trump over both!!
-{Book} Battle Comic
+
 {Book} Battle Manga
 
 :  Just Watch, Madoka!!  This time...
 :  I'll definitely protect you!!
 
 ---8---
-:  Madoka!! Hurry!! Run away!!
+
 :  Madoka!! Quickly!! If you don't leave!!
 
 :  Ahh!!
 
 :  Tamura-chan!!
 :  Sorry for the wait, Madoka... Stand back.
 
 :  Tamura-chan--!!
 
 ---9---
-:  How pitiful... Compared to your full power
+
-:  My inner magic after training exceed yours by several times...
+:  How pitiful... If that was your full power
 :  With my special training, I am now many times more powerful than yours...
-: This much power should be enough.
+
 :  This much should be enough.
 
 :  !?
-:  Although we have spent a lot of time together, this time will be the...
+
 :  Although we have spent a long time together, this time will be the...
 
 :  Last!!
 
 ---10---
 
-:  Finally, it's all...
+
 :  it's finally...
 
 :  Tamura-chan
 :  Madoka..
-: This doesn't feel magical girl-ish.  Try again?
+
 : This doesn't feel magical girl-like at all, so try again?
-Homura Controller
+
 Homu Remote
 :  Eeh!?
-:  Flag #4
+
 :  Difference #4
-:  Madoka is the director
+
 :  Madoka is the director.
-{right}  After all that training, Homura finally reached... a completely unexpected ending.
+
 {right}  After special training, Homura finally reached... a completely unexpected ending.
 
 * To be Continued Vol.5*