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 ---p3
 
 Producer
 Yayoi and Iori's owner.
-Unreliable but gets things done when he needs to.
+He's unreliable but when he needs to, he gets things done.
 
 Yayoi
 A lovable and energetic puppy.
-Her cry is "Uu-uu!".
+Her cry is "Uu-uu!"
 
 Iori
 Her beauty is a weapon in the idol world,
-a celebrity kitten who has made her debut.
+a celebrity kitten who's made her debut.
 
 Hibiki
-An idol who has transferred to 765 Productions.
+An idol who's transferred to 765 Productions.
 No worries!
 
 Ryou
 Ritsuko's cousin from 876 Productions.
 Does he have 'one?'
 
 Ai
 876 Productions' newbie dog idol.
-She isn't called "Mini Tank" for nothing!
+She isn't called the "Mini Tank" for nothing!
 
 Eri
 876 Productions' newbie cat idol.
-Looks up stuff on her iPad, then hides her face.
+She looks up stuff on her iPad, then hides her face.
 
 Makoto
 An idol from 765 Productions.
-Hugged me unexpectedly
+She surprised me with a hug!
 
 Ritsuko
 765 Productions' idol/producer.
 She's producing Ryuuguu Komachi.
 
 
 
 ---p4
 
 Alright Yayoi,
 Here, have a donut!
 
 I'll mess with her a little...
 Come on
 Yayoi, say aaah!
 
 Yayoi! I'm sorry!
 I'm sorry I teased you, so please come out!
 
 
 
 ---p5
 
 Ah, good morning
 Hm?
 Ah, if it isn't Ritsuko's cousin,
 Akizuki Ryou-chan from 876 Pro.
 
 Yes!
 This is Eri-chan
 
 and she's Ai-chan.
 
-Wait, Eri-chan, don't hide in my skirt!
+Wait, Eri-chan, don't hide behind my skirt!
 Aah, Ai chan, don't just run off on your own!
 
 
 
 ---p6
 
 Saving!
 
 Uu-uu!
 
 Save Complete!
 Uu-uu!
 
 ---p7
 
-Somehow Iori-san is so gorgeous?
+How is Iori-san so gorgeous?
 *Imagination
 I'm sure she has some sort of secret?
 
 You want some of this?
 Huh? Why do I have to drink something like that?
 
-If you want me to drink something you'd have to go buy 100% orange juice
+If you want me to drink something, you'll have to go buy 100% orange juice for me.
 Understood…
 
 A natural born queen!?
-Is this our difference in ability…?
+Is this the difference in our abilities…?
 
 
 
 ---p8
 
 That's a bit…
 Why don't you join 765 Pro now?
 
 Conference
 There is…
 Yeah...
 
-What are you two talking about?  Can I  join?
+What are you two talking about?  Can I join in?
 
 Still Under Review
 Is there…?
 
 
 
 ---p9
 
 I went jogging with Makoto this morning.
 
 Fuu
-That was a good sweat! You did well too, Yayoi!
+That was a good workout! You did well too, Yayoi!
 
 Not to mention
 You're so cuuute!
 
 Ahaha
 Hey
 That tickles!
 
 
 
 ---p10
 
 On that day
-Everyone was making a big racket since morning.
+Everyone was making a big racket since this morning.
 
 Aah, Yayoi
 Sorry, but my hands are full right now. You'll have to eat by yourself. I left the food over there.
 Ritsuko will be back soon.
 
 Producer
-seems to be afraid of Ritsuko
+Seems to be afraid of Ritsuko
 
 Haa
 
 
 
 ---p11
 
-I know you're  busy, but how come I don't get a greeting?
+I know you're busy, but how come I don't get a greeting?
 
 Ah, Ritsuko! You're back!
-I was buzzing the intercom for a while now. ...So, are the preparations done?
+I've been buzzing the intercom for a while now. ...So, are the preparations done?
 
 Aah… Well, I just need a little more-
-Geez! What the heck are you doing? I won't forgive your slowness today!
+Geez! What the heck are you doing? I won't forgive your tardiness today!
 
 Goodness…
 Well, where is Iori?
-She should be just about finished changing. Hey! Iori!
+She should nearly be done changing. Hey! Iori!
 
 
 
 ---p12
 
 Ooh!
 
-I knew my eyes were perfect!
+I knew I spotted something perfect!
 Fufufu
 Iori-chan is so pretty!
 Praise me more
 Keep it coming
 
 Those two hours spent setting it up was worth it.
 
 Ah
 
-Wait, why are you making her wear her stage outfit! Put on her regular clothes!
+Wait, why are you making her wear her stage outfit! Put her in regular clothes!
 Aah! That's right!
 
 
 
 ---p13
 
 Alright,
 we're leaving, Producer.
 
 Hey, you're also a producer now, right?
 Ah… That's right.
 
 Iori-chan……
 
 Don't worry, Yayoi. I'll do my best.
 
 Well then,
 we're off.
 
 
 
 ---p14
 
 Then
-Iori-chan made her Idol Debut.
+Iori-chan made her idol debut.
 
-She appeared on TV and in magazines a lot.
+She appeared a lot on TV and in magazines.
-Iori-chan doing her idol work
+Iori-chan, when she's working as an idol,
-looks truly beautiful and makes me happy.
+truly looks beautiful--it makes me happy.
 The cat and Afuu have joined forces~♪
 
 But
 Iori-chan's amazing!
 
-The time I can spend together with Iori-chan is decreasing
+I spend less and less time together with Iori-chan.
 It makes me really sad.
 
 
 ---p15
 
 Don't worry, Yayoi.
-I'll make sure to have you and Iori-chan working together. So let's keep giving it our all.
+I'll make sure you and Iori-chan get to work together. So let's continue giving it our all.
 
-To become an idol like Iori-chan
+So I can become an idol like Iori-chan
 I'll try my very best too.