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 Ufu♪
 I feel great!
-Ufu
+
-I’m feeling great.
+<Itami> {Name tag}
 
-Itami
+How many centuries have passed since I last enjoyed being with a man?
-How many centuries has it been since there was another man who I enjoyed being with this much.
+
 Itami Youji.
 A man from another world.
 He may be bland, but there is something captivating about him.
 
-________________________________
+
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 The few remaining decades until I ascend to godhood...
 
 If it’s with Youji-
-The few remaining decades until I ascend to godhood…
+
 Rory... Hey, Rory.
 Wake up, it’s closing time.
 Nnn...
-Rory, hey Rory.   Wake up, it’s closing time.
+
-Nnn…
+
 
 
-_______________________________
+
 Ah-
 Nng...
 
 Ready?.
-Ah.
+
-Nng…
+Be gentle...
 
 Aaahn!
 
-don’t be rough.
+Please
 Don't be so rough....
-Aaahn
+
 
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-be gentler.
+
-____________________
+
 
 Youji,
 let’s talk until morning...
 
 
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 ...At least, that was how it should have been.
 
-let’s talk until morning.
+I was getting him drunk at a good pace.
-___________________________
+
 But you...
 You had to...
 
 Treat me, Rory Mercury...
-…At least that’s how it was supposed to go.   I was getting him drunk at a good pace.
+like a brat!
-But   but you had to come and…
+
 What’s she thinking!?
-Treat me, Rory Mercury…
+
-like a brat.
+
 
 It’s going to rain blood!
 
 She must be a newcomer. She'll probably be dead before she realizes she picked a fight with a
-She must be a newcomer. She will probably be dead before she knew that she picked a fight with a demigod apostle.
+
-_________________
+demigod apostle.
 
 
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 Nearly 300-year old dark elf woman,
-Dark elf woman, around 300 years old.
+
-Showing off that voluptuous body that men must love…
+Showing off that voluptuous body that men must love...
 
-Who are you?   What’s your business here?
+Who are you?
 
-I’m Yao Haa Duchy.   Daughter of Dehan, Duchy clan of the Schwarz forest
+Why have you come to Alnus?
 
-_______________________
+I’m Yao Haa Dushi.
 
 Daughter of Dehan, of the Dushi clan of Schwarz Forest.
 
-Smirk
+
 
 
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-That man won’t let me stop drinking.
+sfx:smirk
-He keeps saying, “Are my drinks not good enough for you”, and won’t let me stop.
+
 Please save me!
-…Eh?   Eeeh!?
+
 That man keeps making me drink!
-______________________
+He keeps on saying “Are my drinks not good enough for you!?”
 
 ...Eh?
 Eeeh!?
-Eeeeh
+
 Me!?
 
-You were planning to take advantage of this girl after she had passed out.
+
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-Yes, he was planning to make me his plaything.
+
-And use me until I’m broken…
+You were planning to take advantage of this girl after she'd passed out.
 
-It’s okay, you don’t need to fear no more.
+Yes, he was planning to make me his plaything,
 And use me until I was broken...
-I shall not forgive a scoundrel like you.
+
-______________________
+It's alright now, you don't have to be afraid any more.
 
 I will not forgive a scoundrel like you!
 
 
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-your punishment right here.
+
 your punishment right here!
-Young girl, rest at ease.
+
 Young girl, be at ease.
 
-________________________
+
 
 
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 See you around, old man!
 Put it on my tab!
 
 Sure!
 A~s expected of master Itami, he sure knows how to run.
 
 ...Good.
-…Good.
+
 
 You can rest in peace -huh?
 
 That kid should learn some manners.
-That kid could learn some manners.
+Judging from her outfit, she might have been a trainee acolyte of Emroy...
-I think she was Emroy’s priestess trainee judging from her clothes…
+
-__________________
+
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 Hey, you! Did you come to just bother our customers?
 Or are you going to order something?
 
-Hey, you! Did you come to just bother our customers?   Or are you going to order something?
+
 
 That was my intention.
 
-Whoa
+<Whoa>{small text to the left}
 
-That man was wearing the same clothes as them…
+That man was wearing the same clothes as them...
-Customer, what would you like?
+
-Something grilled and some kind of alcoholic beverage, please.
+What would you like?
 
 Ah! Something grilled and some kind of alcoholic beverage, please.
-What’s that
+
-Howdy, newcomer.
+
-______________________
+
 <What is that?>
 Yo, newcomer.
 
 
-So you came to look for the People in Green?
+
 So you came looking for the People in Green?
-You have some reason for it? Feel like talking?
+
-Oh, sure.
+Feel like telling us why?
 
-I have arrived to here to lend the People in Green’s power.
+S-sure.
 
 I have come to borrow the People in Green's power.
-So, that’s why Rory put up that act.
+
-As payback for treating her like a brats.
+
 
-You just pointed a sword at those people in green- at master Itami
+So that’s why Rory acted like that.
-________________________
+
 As payback for treating her like a brat.
 
 My condolences.
 
-…I’m not sure
+You just pointed a sword at those people in green- at Master Itami, you know!
-if that is possible.
+
 
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 ...I'm not sure
-Why not? I have that the People in Green are of noble disposition.
+if that's possible.
-If that’s the case, then they wouldn’t refuse a troubled person-
+
 That’s right, nyaa.
 
-You can continue,
+Why not? I have heard that the People in Green are of a noble disposition.
-after you have had something to eat.
+
 If that’s the case, then they wouldn’t refuse a person in need-
-Yes… so, this is beer?
+
 Here’s your food!
 
 Anyway,
 You can continue after you've had something to eat.
-________________________
+
 Yes... This is beer?
 
 Nm, delicious!
 
-It’s a rough diamond.
+
-If it isn’t enough, I’m ready to offer my body.   I have already said farewells to my relatives.
+
 I don’t expect them to do it for free.
-Diamond in kanji = diamond in katakana  (so just ignore this line)
+
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-A diamond the size of a person’s head!? You could buy yourself a noble rank with a fief with that.
+This is an uncut diamond!
-Me, me!
+
-Just the amulet of Haadi alone, skilfully crafted by dark-elves, alone is worth a fortune! On top of that your body!
+If that isn’t enough, I’m ready to offer my body!
 
 I have already said farewell to all my relatives!
 
 {Ignore small font, just pronunciation notes for Japanese readers}
 
-The extermination of a wounded flame dragon.
+A diamond the size of a person’s head!? You could buy yourself a noble title with a landed fief
-________________________
+
 with that!
 
 Pick me!
 
-Few months ago
+An amulet of Hardy, skillfully crafted by the dark elves, on it's own is worth a fortune! And your
-Schwarz forest-
+
 body on top of that! {This was the spelling used in the subway chapter.}
-We left our village behind during the sudden attack of the flame dragon, and escaped to the nearby canyons and mountains.
+
-But the flame dragon sniffed out the hiding places, and kept on eating our brethren.
+
-The lands that had been our hunting grounds became the hunting ground of the flame dragon-
+
-_____________________
+
 
 What are you going ask them for?
 
 To slay a wounded flame dragon.
-Endless days of starvation and curses.
+
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-There were some who fought back with swords of magic and mithril arrows.
+Several months ago
 In Schwarz Forest-
-All they achieved was adding another sword
+
 We fled our village when a flame dragon suddenly attacked, and took refuge in the mountains and
 
-Faith in Haadi, king of the underworld, changed to obsession.
+canyons nearby.
-The smile of despair and futility kept spreading among our people…
+
 But the flame dragon sniffed out our hiding places, and continued to eat our brethren.
 
-Don’t give up! That arrow stuck in the flame dragon’s eye!
+The lands which had been our hunting grounds became the hunting ground of the flame dragon-
-It’s a proof that there was a miraculous elf.
+
 
-Look at the arm it has lost! Someone had to do that!
+
-According to the rumours “People in Green” blew it with a magic wand called “Rod of Steel” to save a human village.
+Amidst endless days of starving and cursing,
 
-____________________
+There were some who fought back with swords of magic and mithril arrows
 
 All they accomplished was adding another sword
 To the field of swords in the flame dragon’s nest.
 
 Faith in Hardy, lord of the underworld, changed to obsession.
 The smile of despair and futility spread through our people...
-Yao Haa Duchy.
+
 During those times-
-Your skills with swords and in manipulating spirits, your sharp wits,   and especially that sincerity of yours are the reason why we give you this task.
+Don’t give up! That arrow was stuck in the flame dragon’s eye!
-Request the help of People in Green to save us from certain destruction.
+It’s a proof that there was a miraculous elf who hurt it!
 
-Gladly.
+Look at the arm it lost! Someone had to do that!
--But why would you ask this from a woman like me?
+
 According to the rumors, "People in Green" blew it away with a magic wand called the "Rod of Steel"
 
-That is- because you are a woman.
+and saved a human village...
-________________________
+
 People in Green!?
 
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 The People in Green are our last hope-
 
-Are you ready for it?
+Yao Haa Dushi.
 
 Your skill with the blade and in manipulating the spirits, your sharp wits...
 And most especially, the sincerety you hold, are the reasons why we entrust this task to you.
 
 Request the help of the "People in Green" to save us from certain destruction.
-Sorry… but is there a problem with me being the messenger?
+
 Gladly!
-If the flame dragon can be slain by offering my body, then so be it.
+-Butm why would you ask this of a woman like me?
 Thodolm is stronger than I am.
-…You know, Yao’s luck, especially with men is infamous?
+
-Her boyfriend was NTR'd by her best friend.
+It is- Because you are a woman.
-The next man died a night before their wedding. Another man who tried to court her died in an accident…
+
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-Don’t mention it.   She’s the last one we can trust to do this…
+
-____________________
+Are you prepared?
 
 Of course.
 
 Really? Are you sure?
-Flame dragon extermination…
+
 Yes.
 
 They might be really ugly.
-Impossible. Even trying is suicidal.
+
-Maybe a god or apostle could stand a chance.
+Um... Isn't it fine if I'm the messenger?
-You, you should take this to the People in Green…
+
-_______________________
+If the flame dragon can be slain through the sacrifice of my body, then so be it.
 
 ...But, isn't Yao's bad luck with men rather infamous?
 Her boyfriend was stolen by her best friend, {I really want to keep NTR in there...}
 The next man died a night before their wedding, and another man who tried to court her died in an
-But…
+
 accident...
-I don’t know. I can understand only few words of what they are saying.
+
 Don't talk about it.
-You sure have terrible luck…
+She’s the only one we can trust to do this...
-It’s my first time tasting this, but it’s delicious.
+
-_______________________
+
 Slaying a flame dragon...
 
 Do you think you could do it?
 
-There are no US army or civilian planes here.
+Impossible! Even trying would be suicide!
 
 Only a god or apostle would stand a chance.
 
 Y-you should take this to the People in Green...
 
-You are free to fly around as long as you don’t hit the ground or birds.
+
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 But...
-__________________________
+
 
 Who knows. I can only understand bits of what they're saying.
 
 You sure have terrible luck...
 <It’s my first time tasting this, but it’s delicious!>
 
-…Right, I had to camp outside because the inns were full.
+
-Seem like there could be other elves around here. It’s a nice forest, and spirits of wind are-
+
-_______________________________
+There aren't any US Air Force or civilian planes here!
 
 The sky is all ours, Kurihama!
 
 Just make sure that we don’t get lost.
 
 Who do you think I am, Kamikoda?
 
-They are behind us!
+
 
 You're free to fly around as long as you don’t hit the ground or birds.
 
 680, copy.
 
 320, copy.
-________________________________
+
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 This is-
 
 Ah.... I had to camp outdoors because the inns were full.
-Silver sword flying through the sky…
+It seems like there might be other elves around here. It’s a nice forest, and the spirits of wind
 
 are-
 
 
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 Take that!
 
-They can surely defeat the flame dragon easily!
+
-___________________________
+
 They're behind us!
 
 Break to right!
 
-Several kinds of traditional handicrafts and modern tools… hey, you have sake in there too.   High grade mid-winter plum?
+
-No one could tell if one bottle went missing.
+
 Heyy! I got your ass!
 
-You sure you aren’t drinking these by yourselves?
+
 
 
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-They are the ones we asked you to buy from the living community.
+Silver swords flying through the sky...
 -No.
 
-We can get those unhappy with the current ruling body on our side by using money.
+
-The very basics of diplomacy.
+
 
-I’m sure that works with officials of a developing country.
+
-______________________
+
 I'm sure they could easily defeat the flame dragon!
 
 
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-I think that bribes and intimidation are the basics of diplomacy.   China is a typical example of this. With both the Chunxiao gas field and Senkaku islands, they are immediately threatening with armed forces.
+Several kinds of traditional handicrafts and modern tools... Hey, you have sake in there too!
-Hot-
+<High grade mid-winter plum?>
-Even if only once, I would like to tell them, do it if you can.
+
 No one'll know if one bottle goes missing.
 
 Don’t even joke about it, Yanagida-san. These are weapons for us diplomats.
 
-We are living in the 21st century. This isn’t the age of imperialism of the 19th century.
+You sure you aren’t drinking it by yourself?
 
-There is a possibility that we can maintain the current constitution of the Special Area. We don’t want to create any grudges.
+
 
-_________________________
+Yeah.
 
 They're the ones we asked you to buy from the living community. {Would Village be a better TL?}
 
 Women, food and drinks.
-Itami, I leave them in your hands.
+We can get those unhappy with the current ruling body on our side with the power of money.
 
-Leave it to me.
+That's the fundamental of diplomacy.
-____________________________
+
 I’m sure that works well with the officials of a developing country.
 
 
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-We will stop to refuel at Italica, and get off in the mountains near the Imperial City.   After that it will be half a day on foot.
+I think that bribes and intimidation are the basics of diplomacy.
-I hope that none of you are wearing leather shoes.
+China is a typical example of this. They threatened us with military deployments over the Chunxiao
 
-No need to worry, Itami-san.   Most of us already have experience under our belts from Africa or Middle East.
+gas field and the Senkaku Islands.
-_______________________
+
 <Hot->
 Just once, I'd like to tell them "Do it if you can."
 
 Why don’t you do that here?
 
 I can’t do that.
 
 We're living in the 21st century. This isn’t the 19th Century's Age of Imperialism.
 
 There is a possibility that we can maintain the current governance of the Special Area. We don’t
-Now that I have seen all this,
+
-there probably isn’t anything that People in Green can’t do.
+want to create any ill-will.
-_____________________________
+
 Our biggest priority now is to increase the size of the anti-war faction.
 
 
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 Itami, I'm leaving them in your hands!
 
 Leave it to me!
 
 
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 We'll stop at Italica to refuel, and disembark in the mountains near the Imperial City.
 After that, it'll be half-day journey on foot.
 
 I hope none of you are wearing leather shoes.
 
 No need to worry, Itami-san.
 Most of us have already gained some experience in Africa and the Middle East.
 
 
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 Rod of Steel
 
 Flying Sword
 
 Flying Ark
 
 With everything I've seen,
 
 There probably isn't anything those "People in Green" can't do.