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 http://www.mediafire.com/?8fzf9tlf44hmmxx
 KyouMami, Chinese,  SFW,
 [Torinone] Glare
 
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 Glare
 
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-{chinese disclaimer on top, should erase}
+{chinese disclaimer, erase?}
 
-This story is based on the Farewell Story Audio CD.
+This story is set after the events of the Farewell Story audio CD.
-If you haven't heard it yet, know that Kyouko and Mami split up because of differences in witch-hunt strategy.  Knowing that is enough.
+If you haven't listen to it yet, Kyouko and Mami seperated over differences on how to hunt Witches.  Knowing that is enough.
 
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 :  Glare
 
 ---4---
 
-:  ... Doesn't even look like her.
+:  ... That doesn't even look like her.
 
 ---5---
 
-:  Oh, Kyouko, is something bothering you?
+:  Ah, Kyouko, is something bothering you?
 
 :  What do you want?
 
 :  Oh, no!
-:  Looking after magical girls' health is also part of our responsibility.
+:  Keeping tabs on mental health of magical girls is also one of my responsibilities.
-:  You can say a lie like that with a straight face.
+:  I'm impress that you admit that.
 
-:  Is this about Mami?
+:  Is this about Mami Tomoe?
-:  What?
+:  Huh?
 
-:  You keep turning around in the past few days, thinking you saw someone.
+:  In the past few days, you keep turning around like you saw someone you know.
-:  Who else but Mami can elicit this reaction from you?  Even without emotion, I can figure that out.
+:  Who else but Mami can elicit such behavior from you?  I don't need any emotion to figure that out.
 
 ---6---
 
 :  So what?
 :  It's not like I can go back to Mitakihara anymore.
 
-:  You said "I can't."  In other words,
+:  You said "I can't."  In other words
 :  "I'd go back if I could." Isn't it, Kyouko?
 
-:  You creep..  What are you saying?
+:  You creep..  What are you getting at?
-:  Ah, please be gentle.
+:  Oww, be nice.
 
 :  If both of you wish to normalize your relationship,
 :  Why not just apologize?
 
 ---7---
 
 :  Even if you say so...
 
 :  Wait, Mami too!?
 
-:  Ever since you two split up, Mami has been struggling.
+:  Mami has been struggling ever since the break-up.
-:  Besides, didn't she try to stop you?  That's why I believe it's natural that she wants to make up with you.  Why she is hesitating, i don't get it at all.
+:  Moreover, She did tried to stop you.  It's only natural to assume that she would want to make up with you.  Why she is hesitating, I don't get it at all.
 
-:  In summary,
+:  In short,
-:  I can only advice you this, absent-minded words are dangerous.
+:  My advice to you is beware of absent-minded words.
 
-:  That Mami... She obviously don't care about me...
+:  That Mami... She has no reason to care about me...
 
 :  Tsk tsk, whether Kyouko or Mami, they're both so troublesome.
 
 ---8---
 
-:  Damn.. This Witch... She runs away so quickly!  'And disgusting too!!'
+:  Damn..! This Witch... runs so fast!  'And disgusting too!!'
 
 :  !  The Barrier...!
 
 :  !
 
 ---9---
 
 :  Mami...
 
-:  -- This is already Mitakihara.
+:  -- This is Mitakihara
 
 :  ... Leave!
 
 ---10---
 
 :  ---
 
 :  Hey!
 
 :  !
 
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 :  Let me go!
 
 :  No!
 
 :  I said "let me go!"
 
 :  I won't!
 
-:  ...Remember this feeling, Mami-san?
+:  ...Isn't it nostalgic, Mami-san?
-:  ... Arg!
+:  ...Wat-!
 
 ---12---
 
-:  So listen to me already!  Fighting both Witch and Familiars are impossible!
+:  Didn't I told you!  You'll never hunt down every Witch and Familiar!
 
-:  But... That's not what is clouding my Soul Gem.
+:  No... That's not what clouds my Soul Gem.
 
 :  Ah?
 
-:  This... is from within.
+:  This darkness... is from within
-:  A curse.
+:  A curse
 
 :  Your
 :  Curse...?
 
-:  I can't remove this darkness
+:  I can't erase this darkness
 :  Anymore.
 
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-:  Will I stay alone like this forever?
+:  Will I be alone forever?
 
-:  Doomed to die without anyone realizing?
+:  Will anyone know when I die?
 
-:  As soon as these thoughts float in my head, my Soul Gem begins to darken.
+:  The more I think about it, the darker my Soul Gem becomes.
 
-:  S-some day, another person will appear to be your partner.
+:  S-some day, you'll find someone else to team up with you.
 :  ... Maybe not today, but someday!
 :  ... Yes.
 
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-:  Do you know... How lonely I was since tha day...?
+:  Do you know... How lonely I have been since that day...?
-:  Every night I cry myself to sleep... And every morning I go to school with my eyes red, even my teachers are worried.
+:  Every night I cry myself to sleep... Every morning I go to school with my eyes swollen.  My teachers are getting worried.
 
-:  I have no appetite.  Even cake and tea have lost their flavors...
+:  I can't eat anymore.  Even cake and tea have become tasteless...
-:  I can't handle it without you...
+:  I can't make it without you...
 
 ---15---
 
-:  ... I'm sorry.
+:  ... I'm sorry
 
-:  ... Back then, I said some hateful things and left you behind by yourself.
+:  ... I said some hateful things back then.  I left you alone by yourself.
-:  I thought you'll be your usual strong self.
+:  I assumed you'll remain tough as always.
 
 :  I have no right to say this, but please don't forget who you are, Mami-san.
-:  What you done so far isn't useless.
+:  What you did aren't worthless.
 
 :  Woo... Em...
 
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 :  Mami-san!
-Growl -
+Growl --
 
 :  ... Hehe
 
-:  Ops... The worst timing...
+:  Ops... Now's not the time...
 
-:  First thing's first.
+:  First thing's first
-: Ah?
+
 
 :  ... But that's yours...!
 
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-:  ... It's fine.
+:  ... It's fine
 :  Papa once said... Always help those in need.
 
-:  Darkness..
+:  The darkness..
-:  It's dispating...!
+:  It's dissipating...!
 
-:  You overdid it!  What will the town do if its hero of justice falls?  Rest a little, God will forgive you!
+:  You are overdoing it!  What will Mitakihara do when its hero of justice fell?  Try to rest once a while!  Even God will forgive you!
 :  T-thank you...
 
 ---18---
 
 :  ... Eh, will you come home with me?
-:  I made cheesecake...
+:  I have some cheesecake...
 
 :  !
 :  ... Really?
 
 :  Isn't this nostalgic?
 :  How about we have a new start?
 
 :  ... Sure.
 
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 Tightly
 
 :  !
 
 Tightly
 
 ---20---
 
 :  Tsk tsk..
 
-:  I didn't expect them to get back together...
+:  I didn't expect them to actually make up...
-:  Looks like lecturing Kyouko was a mistake.
+:  Looks like pushing Kyouko was a mistake.
 
 :  Don't underestimate us.
 
-:  Akemi Homura.
+:  Akemi Homura
 
-:  If you dare to do this again...
+:  If you dare to try this again...
-:  I'll abuse you until I'm out of ammo.
+:  I'll hit you with everything I got!
 
 :  Oww!
 
 ---22---
 
-:  Oh...
+:  Ugh...
 
 :  What is it?
 :  Ah, Mami!
 
-:  I can't get the potato!
+:  Theh taro keeps slipping!
-Baked Potato
+Baked Taro
 
 :  Eh... Sakura-san?
-:  Yes?
+:  Yo?
 
 Wrong
 :  You're holding your chopsticks all wrong.
 
 :  Does it matter?
-:  No, holding it all wrong, even your rice will taste wrong.
+:  No, if you hold it all wrong, even rice will taste bland.
-:  That's bad.
+:  That's bad
 
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-:  Here, I'll show you.
+:  Here, let me show you.
-:  Eh, oh.
+:  Eh, oh
 
-:  Wait.
+:  Wait
 
-:  Mami's boobs is pressing against me.  I can't concentrateeee!
+:  How do I concentrate when Mami's boobs is pressing against me!
 
 :  Good, that's better...
 
-:  Sakura-san?  Are you listening?
+:  Sakura-san?  Are you even listening?
 :  Yah!?
 
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-:  Of ccccourse!
+:  SURE!
-:  Now it's perfect--
+:  There, perfect—
 
 :  Wow!
 
-:  Look, Mami-san!  I got it!
+:  Look, Mami-san!  I did it.  I did it!
-:  Em, good job!
+:  Em, well done!
 
 Slips
 
 :  C-can't
 :  Waste food!
 
 ---25---
 
-:  Eh?
+
 
 :  Ahh?
 
 Fondle
 
 ---26---
 
-:  Ah-- Wait, wait!
+
 
-:  TIRO FINALE
+:  Ah— Wait, stop!
 
 :  TIRO • FINALE
 :  WOAHH
 
 ---27---
 
 Afterword
-Kyouko might look like a bad girl normally,
+
-but inside she is still the honest girl from before!
+
 Kyouko might look like a bad girl at first glance,
 but she is still that honest girl from before on the inside!
-if only she also shout "Woahhhh."  It'll be so cute!  So shout!
+
 Without realizing it, she call out "Mami-san"
-Mami-san really care about Kyouko,
+If only she shouts "Woahhhh" too.  It'll be so cute!  So shout!
-But it is the kohai that grew up in darkness that holds her tightly...
+
-Like that!
+Mami-san really care for Kyouko,
-Mami-san have so many kohai, so she can enjoy all different kinds!
+But it's the kohai who grew up in darkness that holds her tightly...
-This time around, a story about Kyouko kohai and Mami senpai.
+That's how it is!
-NExt time, let's give them a bit of happiness!
+Mami-san has so many kohai.  She gets to enjoy all the different types!
 This time is a story about Kyouko kohai and Mami senpai.
 Next time, let's give them a bit of happiness!
-Thank you everyone for purchasing this book.
+
 Finally,
 Thank you to everyone for purchasing this book.
 See you next time!