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-Tomodachi Game Chapter 7 Translation Script by Nitori
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 [081]
 Certainly... It seems like I'm the only one who heard that story upfront, but...
 Certainly... it seems like I'm the only one who heard that story upfront, but...
 
 [083]		(TS: Ignore the Kageguchi boxes)
 Both the first Kageguchi entry
 Both the first Kageguchi entries
 
 and the following one were both mine...
 and the following one were mine...
 
 Currently... The dirtiest exposures are all... mine.
 Currently... the dirtiest exposures are all... mine.
 
 1) "The one Sawaragi Shiho likes is  Katagiri Yuuichi. / And, that same Sawaragi Shiho... in the past... dated Mikasa Tenji!"
 1) "The one Sawaragi Shiho likes is Katagiri Yuuichi. / And that same Sawaragi Shiho... in the past... dated Mikasa Tenji!"
 
 I put in 1, 2, and 5.
 I put in 1, 2 and 5.
 
 All of my doing is for the sake of destroying
 All my doing is for the sake of destroying
 
 [084]
 Hey... Tenji-san, you believed that I wasn't the one who put in that entry against Yutori, right..?
 Hey... Tenji-san, you do believe that I wasn't the one who put in that entry against Yutori, right..?
 
 Then, the one who put it in... / Who do you think it is?
 Then, the one who put it in... / Who do you think is it?
 
 If even you start to hunt down the culprit, we won't be able to make amends!
 Even if you start to hunt down the culprit, we won't be able to make amends!
 
 S... Sorry.
 S... sorry.
 
 Well... Asking me that question was already within my calculations.
 Well... asking me that question was already within my calculations.
 
 Next up, I'll destroy the friendship going from Shiho-chan to Kokorogi-san as well!
 Next up, I'll destroy the friendship from Shiho-chan to Kokorogi-san as well!
 
 [086]
 However, we found out in this game that you were also in love with Yuuichi...
 However, we found out that in this game, you were also in love with Yuuichi...
 
 [087]
 Y... You're right. Sorry.
 Y... you're right. Sorry.
 
 But... / If it's true, then Yuuichi's rather pitiful... I'd say.
 But... / if it's true, then Yuuichi's rather pitiful... I'd say.
 
 Well Yuuichi... He's a pure and gentle guy, you know. I'm sure you're well aware of that as well, right?
 Well, Yuuichi... He's a pure and gentle guy, you know. I'm sure you're well aware of that as well, right?
 
 Y... Yeah.
 Y... yeah.
 
 So... I don't think Yuuichi could refuse a weak girl pleading to him like that.
 So... I don't think Yuuichi could refuse a weak girl pleading to him like that
 
 Despite there being another who truly loves him.
 despite there being another who truly loves him.
 
 [088]
 Didn't I say already? "I'm on your side!" / I don't want to see you be hurt any more. That's all!
 Didn't I say already? "I'm on your side!" / I don't want to see you hurt anymore. That's all!
 
 [089]
 A... Ah! Oh right..!!
 A... ah! Oh, right..!!
 
 Well then... What should I write next..?
 Well then... what should I write next..?
 
 [092]
 S... Sorry, Sawaragi...
 S... sorry, Sawaragi...
 
 [093]
 So she's been saying what I said, straight to Yutori..!!
 So, she's been saying what I said straight to Yutori..!!
 
 [094]
 Really... You're still going on about that, huh? / It's really something I don't want to recall... So I didn't want to talk about it, but-
 Really... You're still going on about that, huh? / It's really something I don't want to recall... so I didn't want to talk about it, but-
 
 [095]
 Is... Is that so...
 Is... is that so...
 
 However... If you're going to press on and use that as your shield to get at me,
 However... if you're going to press on and use that as your shield to get at me,
 
 [097]
 as much as how strong the connection between Kokorogi-san and Yuuichi is...
 as how strong the connection between Kokorogi-san and Yuuichi is...
 
 So women...  really do flip out when men are involved, huh..?
 So, women... really do flip out when men are involved, huh..?
 
 [100]
 Well, looks like everyone's done submitting~
 Well, looks like everyone's done submitting.
 
 Eh~ This one's kinda interesting! [heart]
 Eh, this one's kinda interesting!
 
 [101]
 ...Is... Is that true?
 ...Is... is that true?
 
 After I graduated from junior high, I enrolled in a high school different from this one now. / However, stuff happened and I dropped out... because I couldn't attend school for almost a year.
 After I graduated from junior high, I enrolled in a high school different from this one. / However, stuff happened and I dropped out... so I couldn't attend school for almost a year.
 
 Afterwards, I re-enrolled myself into this high school a year ago... so to speak. / Sorry. I didn't want to keep it a secret, but... I couldn't say it.
 Afterwards, I re-enrolled myself into this high school a year ago... so to speak. / Sorry. I didn't want to keep it a secret but... I couldn't say it.
 
 N... No... That's not something you need to apologize for.
 N... no... That's not something you need to apologize for.
 
 [102]
 Ah... Yeah, sorry.  I had no intention whatsoever in doubting you. / I told you, didn't I? That I believe you.
 Ah... Yeah, sorry. I had no intention in doubting you whatsoever. / I told you, didn't I? I believe you.
 
 [103]
 Wonderful... Now, Shiho-chan can no longer neglect my words, moreso than ever.
 Wonderful... Now, Shiho-chan can no longer neglect my words, more so than ever.
 
 [104]		(TS: Ignore the background and chart in Panel 1; I'll do it)
 Well then! The results of the gods' votes show that 61% voted Shiho-chan, so she advances five spaces, and the remaining 39% voted Tenji-kun, so he advances four spaces. All others advance one space.
 Well then! The results of the gods' votes show that 61% voted for Shiho-chan, so she advances five spaces, and the remaining 39% voted for Tenji-kun, so he advances four spaces. All others advance one space.
 
 [105]
 will be revealed here! [heart]
 will be revealed here!
 
 Depending on the result, that person will be forced to advance that many spaces at once! / In other words, you have a "special chance" to aim for a huge reversal! [heart]
 Depending on the result, that person will be forced to advance that many spaces at once! / In other words, you have a "special chance" to aim for a huge reversal!
 
 [106]
 If they're exposed now, my plan will all come to nothing!
 If they're exposed now, my whole plan will come to nothing!
 
 [107]
 But on the contrary... Shiho-sama, choosing the person you trust the most is also a valid move! / Because, by choosing a person you trust... So to speak, it's highly possible that they don't have anything to be guilty of!
 But on the contrary... Shiho-sama, choosing the person you trust the most is also a valid move! / Because by choosing a person you trust... So to speak, it's highly possible that they don't have anything to be guilty of!
 
 [108]
 Ahh... I get it... So he's trying to earn back some points after he found out that Shiho-chan doesn't undergo cosmetic surgery...
 Ahh... I get it... So, he's trying to earn back some points after he found out that Shiho-chan didn't undergo cosmetic surgery...
 
 [109]
 Okay~
 Okay.
 
 So Shibe... Is there really nothing you're guilty of..?
 So, Shibe... Is there really nothing you're guilty of..?
 
 [110-111]
 There is~ [heart]
 There is.
 
 [112]
 That's right! / He's your father, the city council member Shibe Masakazu!
 That's right! / He's your father, the City Council member, Shibe Masakazu!
 
 According to our investigations, there have been scandals where his female secretaries have been subjected to his workplace and sexual harassment. He's even accepting bribes from some businessmen and antisocial organizations. And, it even seems he handed out money during the election, and also when he was covering everything up!
 According to our investigations, there have been scandals where his female secretaries have been subjected to sexual harassment at his workplace. He's even accepting bribes from some businessmen and antisocial organizations. And, it even seems he handed out money during the election, and also when he was covering everything up!
 
 [113]
 Well... In short, / Shibe's father is a scumbag! [heart]
 Well... In short, / Shibe's father is a scumbag!
 
 Well... Those weren't his own misdeeds so I guess I can't destroy his relationships using just this, but...
 Well... those weren't his own misdeeds, so I guess I can't destroy his relationships using just this, but...
 
 [114]
 Sorry Shibe, but our relationship is over...
 Sorry, Shibe, but our relationship is over...
 
 [115]
 An honest person... would say "yes"!
 An honest person... would say "Yes"!
 
 Only a "liar" would say "yes".
 Only a "liar" would say "Yes".
 
 [117]		(TS: For the fear bubbles, use CCSpookyTooth)
 Manabu said it himself. "Even now, it seems he's handing out a hefty sum in order to cover up some big scandal!"
 Manabu said it himself that, "Even now, it seems he's handing out a hefty sum in order to cover up some big scandal!"
 
 [118]
 Wa... Wait a sec, guys!
 Wa... wait a sec, guys!
 
 Ple... Please listen to my side of the story as well!!
 Ple... please listen to my side of the story as well!!
 
 [119]
 Sorry Shibe. Even I was a bit surprised how that had a greater effect than I had anticipated.
 Sorry, Shibe. Even I was a bit surprised on how that had a greater effect than I had anticipated.
 
 "Liars" aren't the only ones to answer "yes".
 "Liars" aren't the only ones to answer "Yes".
 
 Even stupidly honest idiots answer "yes"!
 Even stupidly honest idiots answer "Yes"!
 
 [120]
 [Small Text Beside Guy] That's Shibe for ya~
 [Small Text Beside Guy] That's Shibe for ya.
 
 In this case, Shibe advances nine spaces and suddenly jumps to second place! [heart]
 In this case, Shibe advances nine spaces and suddenly jumps to second place!
 
 [121]
 Erm... There was only one Kageguchi this time~
 Erm... There was only one Kageguchi this time.