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 [個人製作][魔法少女小圓][紅藍][シャングリラ]はなむけ
 http://www.mediafire.com/?mrkc5fm2o9nzaxc
 
 [Kodou (Shangri-la)] Farewell Gift
 
 ---003---
 
 Farewell Gift
 
 ---004---
 
-At the beginning, they try to kill each other relationship.
+At the beginning, we tried to kill each other.
 
 ---005---
 
-Silly,
+So naive, all that hero of justice talk.
-Naive, speaks only of justice,
+
 I want to beat it out of her.
-I just want to beat it out of her.
+
 :  I
-:  I will
+:  won't lose!
-:  Not lose!
+:  I don't regret having used my wish for someone else.
-:  I don't regret making a wish for him.
+
 But without realizing it,
 
 ---006---
 
 I can't just abandon her.
-It became I can't abandon her.
+
 :  It's lonely being alone.
 
 ---007---
 
 : How long do you plan to stay like this?
-:  How long do you plan to sunk for?
+
 :  ... What are you doing?
-:  ... What did you do?
+:  Why are you even here?
-:  Why would you come to this place?
+
 :  W...Why?
 
 ---008---
 
 :  I just want to stay by Sayaka.
-:  I just want to stay beside Sayaka.
+
 :  ... You would die for someone like me,
 :  Are you an idiot?
 
 :  Does it matter?
-:  Why does it matter?
+
 :  I did what I want.
-:  Because I did what I wanted.
+
 :  I'll always be with you.
-:  I will stay with you always,
+:  So once you're done with crying, get up.
-:  So once you finish crying, raise your head up.
+
 
 ---009---
 
 :  I will give you snacks.
-:  I will share my snacks with you.
+
 :  Don't want it!
-:  No!
+
 ---010---
 
 :  You... you are enough.
-:  Just... you is enough.
+
 :  Thank you,
 
 :  Kyouko.
 
 ---011---
 
 Sayaka, I should be thanking you.
-Sayaka, I should thank you instead.
+
 :  Let's go.
 
 
 ---012---
 
 :  ...
 :  You are a good person.
-:  You really are a good person.
+
 :  The way you are,
-:  The you right now,
+:  Even as a magical girl, you can definitely make new friends,
-:  Can definitely make new friends, even as a magical girl.
+:  ... and make wonderful, new memories together.
-:  ... and make a lot of new memories together.
+
 
 :  So,
 :  I want you to live!
-:  I wish for you to live!
+
 ---013---
 
 :  What are you saying, idiot?
 :  Kyouko, you are always worrying about me.
-:  Kyouko, you are always worried about me.
+
 :  You always help me when I was in trouble,
-:  You come to my aid when I am in danger,
+:  Until the end. 'Even now...'
-:  Even until the end, 'But now'
+
 :  I am happy that you said my name.
 
 :  Kyouko, you saved me.
 :  Thank you.
-:  I am truly thankful.
+:  I want you to live, because you deserve it.
-:  Because of the way you are, I wish you can keep living.
+:  It's a bit more... difficult for me.
-:  For me... I'll have a little trouble.
+
 ---014---
 
 :  So, Kyouko,
 :  Live!
 :  This is my request as a friend!
-:  This is your friend's request!
+
 :  Sayaka!
 
 ---015---
 
 :  ...Sayaka?
-:  ...Sayaka.
+
 :  Hey, what happened to Sayaka!?
 
 :  She's gone... she followed the Law of the Cycles and passed on.
-:  She's gone... with the Law of the Cycles.
+:  Before the hope we wished for brings about an equal amount of misfortune,
-:  The karmiac cycle of hope and despair...
+
 :  We have no choice but to vanish from this world.
-:  Us magical girls can only disappear..
+:  You were told that, right?
-:  You understand this too?
+I can't.
-I can't, accept.
+
 ---016---
 
 :  ... Dummy!
-:  ...Idiot!
+:  Just when we'd finally become friends...
-:  We finally become friends...
+
 Once again, I am left by myself.
-Once again, I am left behind.
+
 :  So, Kyouko, live!
 ... Damn, to say something so cruel.
-... Damn, to tell me something so cruel.
+:  My request as a friend.
-:  A request from a friend.
+
 ---017---
 
 .... I get it, Sayaka.
-.... I understand, Sayaka.
+If you asked,
-If you say so,
+
 I'll definitely try to live on.
 
 ---018---
 
 Once you're done with crying, get up.
-When you finish crying, then raise your head up.
+
 ---019---
 
 :  The only way I could save you would be to make it like none of this had happened,
-:  If I want to save Sayaka, then all this will disappear...
+:  But I got hte feeling that you didn't really want it to turn out like that.
-:  But, I don't think this is what Sayaka wish for...
+Kyousuke's performance...
-Kyousuke's music...
+
 :  ... Well,
-:  ... That's right,
+:  I am a little upset about the way things turned out, but I can't be mad at Hitomi.
-:  Even though I don't want to, but if it's Hitomi it can't be helped.
+Once you're done with crying, get up, eh?
-When you finish crying, then raise your head up.
+:  She's almost too good for him,
-:  Because Kyousuke is a waste for good girls,
+:  So she'll make him happy, won't she?
-:  They'll be happy together.
+
 ---020---
 
 :  So, Madoka is a god now— 'Wow!'
-:  Madoka became a god-- 'so cool'
+:  'Nah.' It's nothing, really... 'Uehehe'
-:  'No' It's nothign really... 'uehehe'
+:  I'm sorry it turned out like this.
-:  It turned into this in teh end, sorry.
+
 :  If I could change a thing...
-:  If only I can change this ending slightly...
+:  There's Kyouko... If only we could...
-:  There's Kyouko... If only we can...
+:  ''Haha'' move on together or something, sorry.
-:  ''haha'' die together or something, or apologize.
+
 ---021---
 
 :  Maybe Madoka knows now,
-:  Then maybe the Madoka-now knows right.
+
 :  About Her family...
-:  Her family...
+:  She blames everything on herself,
-:  She blames herself for everything,
+
 :  Surviving by herself.
-:  Living her life alone.
+
 :  Maybe from now on... She can get away from this life style.
-:  Maybe from now... She can move on from this life style.
+
 :  That isn't right.
 
 ---022---
 
 :  She's rude, bad-mouthed, and very nosy,
 :  but once you get to know her, she's actually a good person.
 
 Want some?
 :  Kind too.
 
 :  So I wish for her to live.
 :  Make friends, fall in love, etc?
 Oh, but romance might be a bit too much (laugh)
 :  Let her experience youth like a typical girl,
 :  Since she has suffered so much already.
 
 ---023---
 
 :  I want her to be happy.
 
 ---024---
 
 :  Sayaka.
 :  So this is enough, Madoka.
 
 :  I will watch her carefully.
 And of course Mami-san and the transfer student too.
 :  Em!
 Of course!
 
 :  Then, let's go?
 :  Em.
 :  Oh, ya.
 
 ---025---
 
 :  Even as a god,
 : Madoka is still my bride!
 :  Eh.
 
 :  Thank you, Madoka.
 :  I like you the most.
 :  'Em'  Me too.
 Good bye
 
 ---026---
 
 :  ...
 :  Argh.
 
 ---027---
 
 :  I guess this is it.
 Heh, it's all dark.
 :  They say the end for magical girls...
 Supposely surrouned by a pink glow.
 
 You worked hard, Kyouko.
 
 :  Ma...doka?
 
 ---028---
 
 :  It's
 :  Madoka!
 :  It's really you?  'Isn't it?'
 :  'Uehehe'  Long time no see.
 :  You're so causal too.
 
 :  Ehm~
 :  How do I forget something so important...
 :  Sorry,
 :  It can't be helped.
 :  Don't worry.
 
 :  Also,
 :  That's too much-- forgetting your own friends.
 
 ---029---
 
 :  Did you forget me too?
 
 ---030---
 
 :  Sa...yaka!
 
 :  'Ah'  So you remember!
 That's good--
 
 :  Wh...
 Ha
 :  Hold up!  Why are you crying?
 Sayaka...
 :  Are you that happy~  'Eh-em'
 :  Not at all!
 
 :  I am not crying!!
 :  idiot!  Sayaka is very foolish!
 :  Ahaha!
 
 ---031---
 
 :  This time, my turn to pick you up.
 
 :  Kyouko.
 
 ---032---
 
 :  Haha
 
 :  Let's go
 :  Together!
 
 ---033---
 
 :  Thank you, Madoka.
 
 :  Em.
 
 Finally, together.
 
 ---034---
 
 Aftewards
 
 Thank you everyone for reading until the end.  This is a KyouSaya memorial.
 In the middle part, Sayaka goes to pick up Kyouko, comes from watching the ending during April.  My heart is a mess, so I want to give them a happy ending no matter what.
 So I drew it and put it on pixiv... And received various reactions.
 That's why I hurry and put together this doujin, and it became this.
 Thank goodness.  There might be some inconsistencies, but please ignore them.
 Some lines might been too complicated (like Kyousuke's performance and etc, which are dialogue from teh anime).
 Speaking of the 10th page... that's drawn using the Vol.3 manga designs.
 That's definitely what happened!  (I sure hope so)  Manga KyouSaya forever!  Imagination forever!
 Regardless of when and where, Sayaka and Kyouko will have their happy ending!
 It's good enough if you believe it!
 During drawing, I constantly loops the KyouSaya character song.  It makes me want to cry.
 I love KyouSaya the most!!!
 
 Compared to the Pixiv version, some color pages and dialogue changes.  Feel free to look for them!
 
 ---035---
 
 : Sayaka,
 Third time is the charm!!
 :  Want some? 'Or do you want me?'
 
 :  ...
 Even now...
 :  Why do you always have food with you?
 
 :  Always with that mouth, it's annoying!  Next time I won't give you any even if oyu asked!!
 :  Wooh.
 
 Stare--
 Creak Creak
 
 ---036---
 
 :  Don't leave me behind anymore.
 :  Em.
 
 :  I just want to stay by your side.  'Don't you know anything?'
 :  Em.  'Sorry'
 
 :  I want to hear you
 :  Say my name.
 :  Kyouko,
 :  ... You're heavy.
 :  !
 :  Also,
 
 ---037---
 
 : I will never let go of your hand!
 :  Oh!
 
 ---038---
 
 I wish for their happiness.