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 [個人製作][魔法少女小圓][紅藍]恋するラズベリー
 http://www.mediafire.com/?31mmwdl32z6cnto
 
 [Kodou (Shangri-la)] Raspberry Love
 
 ---2---
 
 Question
-Question:  Do you want something worn by the person you like?
+Question:  Do you want things worn by the one you like?
 Girl Talk
 
 :  Stupid question.
 
-:  Aren't those things completely normal for girls?
+:  Isn't that completely normal for girls?
-:  Girls don't wear someone else's panties on their head ---
+:  Girls don't usually wear someone else's panties on their head―
 
 ---3---
 
-:  'even though I also...' Sometimes it's not good to take something just because you want it...
+:  'Although I also...' Sometimes it's not good to just take what you want...
 Give that back already.
-:  but she gave this to me.
+:  But she gave this to me.
 :  Liar!
 
 :  Don't you want one too?
 :  Like... Miki Sayaka's underwear?
 
 :  Of course - not!
 Such things
 
-:  What I want ins't Sayaka's underwear,
+:  What I want isn't Sayaka's underwear,
 :  It's her body!
 
 ---4---
 
 :  What did you say ><   AHHHHHH
 : Sayaka!
 
 :  How can you say something so perverted with a straight face?
 
-:  Don't run-
+:  Stop running―
 
-:  What... kind of girl talk about these things.
+:  What... kind of girls talk about such things.
-:  Miss!
+:  You can't get me!
-A bunch of perverts!!
+Bunch of perverts!!
 :  Madoka, say something!?  'The transfer student did those things to you.'
 
 ---5---
 
 :  Em...
 :  Homura-chan,  'It's hard to say.'
-:  I have something I want to tell you for a long time...
+:  I have something I been wanting to tell you...
 
-You see her as a friend, buut she wears your panty on her head... It must be shocking.
+You treat her as a friend, but she wears your panties on her head... That must have shocked you.
 Poor Madoka.
 
-:  You don't wear panties on your head... 'It's embarrassing.'
+:  Wearing panties on your head is fine... 'It's a bit embarrassing though.'
-:  Eh, that's it!?
+:  Eh, it's fine!?
 
-Kaname Madoka, I... I want your panty.
+Kaname Madoka, can... can I have your panties.
-Okay!
+Sure!
-:  When I gave you my panty, you keep giving me gifts in return?
+:  You keep giving me return gifts for my panties, right?
 
-As exchange...
+In exchange...
-This should fit you well...
+This should match you...
 
 Wow~
-So fluffy, how cute~
+It's fluffy and cute~
-This time I picked a flowery one, good bye!
+This time I chose a flowery one, good bye!
 :  Ah, Homura-chan!
-:  But it looks very expensive.
+:  They look very expensive.
 
 ---6---
 
-:  I am worried that Homura-chan has been pushing herself.
+:  I am worried about Homura-chan pushing herself,
-:  ...using all her spending money.
+:  ...by spending all her allowance.
-:  Can't even afford a dessert... living a coffee-only livestyle...  * Episode 5
+:  You couldn't even afford desserts... living only on coffee...  * Episode 5
 Madoka...
 :  I don't want that...
 
-:  Let's go buy together next time.
+
-:  To care for Homura-chan's wallet.
+:  Let's go shopping together next time,
 :  to take care for Homura-chan's wallet.
-:  Not at all.
+
 :  Not at all!
 :  Madoka's warmth is enough for me.
 -> Warmth
 :  So
 :  Wasting Madoka's precious time... I can't do it.
-:  I want to go
+
-:  Shopping as friends,
+:  No, I want to.
 :  Let's go as friends,
 :  Please?
 Homura-chan!
 :  !
 :  Ma...doka!
 
 ---7---
 
-:  What kind of joke is this.
+
 :  Is this some kind of joke?
-Distance with my friend widens...
+
-:  No matter how much she likes to wear panties on her head, serously...  'not possible-'
+Gap with my friend widens...
 :  No matter how much she likes to wear your panties on her head, you shouldn't...  'No-'
 :  -----You ... won't... right?
-:  Eh?  I wasn't listening?
+
 :  Eh?  I wasn't listening.
 
 :  Wah!
 
 :  Eh?
 
-:  What arouse me is
+
-:  Sayaka's body?
+
 :  What I care about is
-:  Panties on or off doesn't really matter?
+:  Sayaka's body!
 
-:  Why are people so concerned?
+:  Panties or not, it doesn't matter.
-:  Too close!
+
-:  I don't get it at all--
+:  Why do people even care?
-:  What I don't get is what are you doing!
+:  You're too close!
 :  I don't get it at all—
 :  I don't get what you're doing!
 
 ---9---
 
-:  Everyone are awfully excited.
+
 
 :  Everyone are awfully rowdy today.
 
-:  Everyone start acting weird!
+
-:  Panties-on-head, interest in others' underwear, those are all sexual harrassment!
+
-:  Are you in the position to talk?
+:  Everyone started to act weird!
 :  Panties-on-head, questions about others' underwear, that's all sexual harrassment!
 :  Are you in a position to talk?
 
-:  ...Eh?  I am having interest... in Mami-san's underwear...
+
-She's wearing something incredible...
+
 :  ...Eh?  Am I... interested... in what Mami-san's wearing...
 Something incredible...
 :  Sayaka!?
 :  So... it's about underwear?
 
 ---10---
-:  As I expect, better pick something fitting.
+
 Miki-san is quite substantial up here.
-:  Miki-san, what size do you wear?
+:  'Mm' As I expect, you should start wearing something adequate.
-:  Ah... I don't know...
+
 :  Miki-san, what're your measurements?
-:  You should get it measured at a store.
+:  Ah... I never checked...
-:  Ah, how about let's go right now?  'I know a place.'
+
 :  You should get it measured in store.
 :  Ah, how about let's go to one right now?  'I know a place.'
 I can watch <3
 :  Eh, really!!
-:  Can I...?  How...
+
-:  Get to see Madoka's underwear...
+
 :  I...?  How can I...?
-:  Eeeeh, I'll go I'll go---
+:  I can see Madoka in her underwear...
 :  Hey~  Madoka~  Let's go underwear shopping?
----1---
+:  Eeeeh, let's go—
 
-:  How can mine get as big as you, Mami-san?
+---11---
 
 :  How can I get as big as you, Mami-san?
 :  Big or small... What's important is the shape.
 :  Then let me massage yours.
 
 Girl Mood
-:  Really, Miki-san!
+
 :  Huhu
-:  The topic was about panties, but it suddenly turn into girl talk.
+:  Come on, Miki-san!
-:  Is this the power of girls!?
+
 :  We were talking about panties, but it suddenly turns into girl talk.
 :  Is this girl power!?
 Mami Tomoe is truly terrifying!!
 
 [END]
 
 ---12---
 
 :  !!
-It ended, so I get to draw whatever.
+
 Topic
 The story has finished,
-:  The transfer student and you both really like to princess-carry!!
+so I will draw whatever I want.
 
 :  Hey, put me down!!
 :  Both you and The transfer student really like to princess-carry!!
 We are both girls!
 Quietly
-How dare you leave on your own
+
 :  Ha?
 
 How dare you leaving me alone
 in the last panel!
 Ah~?
 :  I did it on purpose.  'That's all'
 :  Don't make fun of me--
 I'm sorry, okay!
-Not cool~~~
+
 ---13---
 
 Grr~~~
 :  You...
 
 :  Huph.  Serve you right!
 :  My taiyaki!
 
 :  This is what happens when you don't pay atten...
 
 ---14---
 
 :  Tion....
 Oh!?
-:  I believe in tick for tack.
+
 :  Ohh~~
 
 :  Tick-for-tack is my philosophy.
-:  What
+
-:  Whattt
+
 
 :  Eh
 :  Ehh
 
 What did you do, idiot!
 You took mine, so it's your fault!
 Stop struggling.
-But I have seen everything, Sayaka-chan.
+
-Everyone saw it.
+
-:  I am jealous of how close they're!
+
 But I've seen everything, Sayaka-chan.
 It's all exposed.
 :  Their intimacy makes me jealous!
 
 ---16---
-:  But Kyouko-chan,
+
-:  She really care about you in this story, Sayaka.
+
 
-:  You have something to say, right?
+:  But Kyouko-chan
 :  Really cares about you in this story, Sayaka.
 
 :  You have something to tell her, right?
 
 :  Kyouko,
 
 :  Em,
 :  Thank... you.
 
 ---17---
 
 : Eh?
-:  What is this position?
+
 Ehhhh
-:  What... Don't you dislike having your panties exposed?
+
 :  What's with this position?
-:  You shoudl thank me.
+
 :  What... You hate that your panties are showing, right?
 :  I am covering it for you.
 :  You should be thanking me.
 
 :  !
-:  Let me go, sexual harrassment, pervert!
+
-:  Laughs.
+
 
 :  Let me go!  This is sexual harrassment.  You pervert!
 :  Laughs
 
 :  Kyouko-chan,
-:  I am jealous how close you're.
+
 :  You're blushing.
 
 :  I am jealous how close you have become.
 Madoka...
 [END]
 
 ---20---
 
 Meeting Kyouko-chan once more.
 
 :  I found you, Mami Tomoe!
 
 :  Now, take out your weapon!
-:  We are having a strategy meeting tea party...
+
 :  If I win, this area is mine.
 
 :  We are having a tea party to discuss battle strategy...
 :  Want to come?
-Tea...
+
 :  Are you a new magical girl?
 
-:  I don't really care, but I'll come!
+Tea party...
 
 :  It can't be helped.
-We can fight afterwards!!
+:  I don't really care for it, but I'm coming!
-Okay, then cancel your transform for now.
+
-:  Mami-san is too good...!
+
 We can fight after!!
 Okay?  So stand down for now.
-How nostalgic.
+:  Mami-san is too powerful...!
 But that was too easy!
 
 What a nostalgic moment.