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 p2
->Enrolment preparation courses?
+>Enrollment prep course?
->>first semester final tests' res[ults]
+>>first semester final test res[ults]
 >>1. Mori Asuka
 >>2. Hayashi Shota
 >>3. Miyamoto Daichi
 >>4. Hashimoto Yuka
 
 >Yes.
 >You were at the top of the last off-campus mock exam, right, Mori-san?
->"come see our high school enrolment course,"
+>They offer some guidance on enrolling into high school.
->"and if you hadn't decided on any of such courses yet, then definitely sign up for ours..." that's what they send.
+>They said that if you hadn't decided on any such courses yet, you're more than welcome to join theirs.
 
 >We're a simple municipal school, after all.
 >It might be weird for your homeroom teacher to be saying this
 >but you probably find this school's level of lessons boring, right, Mori-san?
 >Huh...?
 
 p3
 >It seems you'd be exempt from matriculation fees and some of the tuition fees.
->>invitation to the special student program
+>>Invitation to Special Student Program
->>Mori Asuka sama
+>>Miss Mori Asuka
->And they even inviting you just for the trial lessons if you have any interest.
+>You can even just take some trial classes if you're at all interested.
 
 >Heh~
 >That sounds good!
 >Why not give it a try?
 
 >Eh?
 
 >What is it?
 >Well,
 >I thought it was kinda unusual
 >for you to be so eager about something, Mom.
 
 p4
 >...True.
 >Actually, I've also
 >>sip sip
->wanted to consult with you on this matter soon.
+>wanted to consult with you on this matter eventually.
 >As for why...
 >>slam
 
->It's cos it's became too difficult for me to help you with homework.
+>It's because it's become too difficult for me to help you with your homework.
 >Ah
 >Aah
 >I see!!
 
 >Science aside, I'm completely clueless when it comes to liberal arts.
 >How long ago do you think your mother was a student?
 >>open
 >Mom~ Help me with my homework~
 >Again!?
 >>cringe cringe
 >...
->s-sorry...
+>S-Sorry...
 
 >Thanks for the meal.
->It's perfect timing, right?
+>It's perfect timing, don't you think?
 >You'll be studying for entrance exams next year after all, Asuka.
 
 p5
 >You can use this chance to get an expert on the subject to teach you.
 >...
 
 >Hmm...
->That's true.
+>You may be right.
->It'd probably convenient to be able to ask someone about something I don't know right away, but...
+>It'd probably be more convenient to be able to ask someone about something I don't know right away, but...
 
->...actually I...
+>...Actually, I...
 
 >just want Mom to teach me...
 >These lessons
 >cost a lot of money, right?
 
 >Even if they say they're waiving the matriculation and tuition fees,
 >>clang
 >there's still textbooks and all other kinds of stuff.
 
 >So I was thinking that maybe I'm just fine where I am right now...
 >>swoosh
 >Asuka.
 
 p6
 >Geez.
 >You've got rice on your cheek again.
 >>touch
 >>drop
 
->You've always been way too anxious about strangest things ever since you were little.
+>You've always been way too anxious about the strangest things ever since you were little.
 >>munch
->I'm not gonna force you
+>I'm not gonna force you,
->but if you're interested at least a bit, why not give it a shot?
+>but if you're at least a little bit interested, why not give it a shot?
 >...O-
 >>ba-dump x 4
 >Okay...
->Besides.
+>Besides...
 
 >If worst comes to worst, we've got an excellent ATM on standby!
 >We need to make good use of it!
 >>Office lady of four months - High annual salary - Single
 >Me!?
 >...I feel kinda sorry for her...
 >Akira-chan...
 
 p7
->But y'know, I'm glad to see you having something to look forward to.
+>But y'know, I'm glad to see you moving forward to achieve something.
 >>cling clang
 >>shhhh
 >Ever since Rui-chan started doing club activities, you've been secluding yourself in the house, right?
 
->So I started to worry about you a little recently~
+>Truth is, I've been a little worried about you.
->and think that It'd be nice if you could make some new friends.
+>It'd be nice if you could make some new friends.
 >>clang
 >Geez~ You're saying that too, Mom?
 >This has nothing to do with Rui...
 
 >You should try to make
 >some other friends besides me soon~
 
 >...
 >Friends, huh...
 >>chatter x 3
 
 p8
 >>Univer[
 >>Kawamoto[
 >>Kawamoto Courses
 
 >...
 >>knock knock
 >>middle school tutoring materials
 >>mathematics 2
 >...Hmph.
 
->So in this special course for high school applicants they've combined all the middle school courses up to the high school...
+>A special cram course targeted towards combined middle and high school students...
->And they've certainly gone way beyond the scoop of the middle school materials too.
+>They've certainly gone beyond the scope of the stuff they're teaching in middle school.
 >The lessons are kind of a drag, but I'm grateful for getting these top level textbooks.
 >Well.
 
 >It should help to kill some time at least...
 >>clatter
 >H-hey.
 >Look, she's leaving!
 
 >Huh? Why me!?
 >Call out to her already~
 
 >Uwah...
 >...
 >...I have a feeling...
 
 p9
->That it's always been like this since I entered middle school...
+>that it's always been like this since I entered middle school...
 >>slide
 >Better hurry back home...
 
 >Hey, hey!
 >>kyaaa
 >Wah!
 >Eh?
 >Are you the girl that's starting today?
 
 >What's your name? What school are you from??
->Isn't it unusual to enrol at this time of year?
+>Isn't it unusual to enroll at this time of year?
 >Ah
 >Um
 >Erm
 >There aren't many girls in this class, so we're glad to get a new one!
->And isn't your eyelashes kinda long?
+>Aren't your eyelashes kinda long?
->Doesn't they cover your eyes??
+>Don't they cover your eyes??
 
 >...Oh
 >Oh crap...
 
 p10
 >No wait, come to think of it...
 >>doooom
->I've never actually talked with other girls my age except Rui until now...!
+>I've never actually talked with other girls my age besides Rui up until now...!
 
 >What should I do?
 >What's the correct way to respond at a time like this...!?
 >Um...
 >I-I'm...
 >...Oh?
 
 >Might you be Asuka-chan?
 
 p11
 >...Eh?
 
 >>clang
->>after the order is ready, curtain will open automatically
+>>The cover will automatically open when your order is ready.
->>automatic curtain
+>>automatic cover
 >...I can't believe it.
 
->I never thought you'd enrol to this cram school, Asuka-chan.
+>I never thought you'd enroll in this cram school, Asuka-chan.
 >Well...
 >I'm really just kinda starting today.
 
->You've become quite the onee-san since we've been away from each other.
+>You've become quite the young lady in the time we've been apart.
->I might not have recognised you had you not spoke.
+>If I didn't call out to you, I might not have recgonised you.
->...And you are, Miyuki-senpai,
+>...Come to think of it, Miyuki-senpai...
 
 p12
->somewhat...
+>you...
 >don't seem that different at all...
 >>chuckle
 >Eh~ What does that mean?
 
 >Ah, no.
->I totally didn't mean it in a bad way...
+>I didn't mean anything bad by it...
 
 >You're still giving off that class president vibe, right?
 >It's fine.
 >I feel the same way.
 
 >Hah...
 
->Why are you being so formal, anyway?
+>By the way, why are you being so formal?
 >Speaking so casually towards a high school student at my age is a bit...
 >Huh?
 
 p13
 >It's Miyuki.
->I didn't think you had any classes today?
+>I thought you didn't have classes today?
 >Chika.
 >Manami.
 >>Good work today~
 
->There's no lessons today, so I came to self-study.
+>There's no lessons today, so I'm just studying on my own.
 >Senpai's friends...?
 
 >Huh?
 >>grab
 >!?
 
 >You've been an A student since the spring, right?
 >Don't cram more than you need to~
 >It doesn't matter what you say.
 >I'm the type who hits a stone bridge until it breaks.
 
 >>Gyahaha
 >What's the point of breaking it?
 >Alright
 >See you at school tomorrow~
 
 >...Yeah.
 >>Later.
 
 p14
 >...Hey, Senpai
->So they were from the same high school...
+>So they go to the same high school...
 
->Since when did you become such a person?
+>How long have you been like that?
 >Eh?
 
 >Always cheerful and kind.
 >Relied on by everyone.
 >Gets along with anyone really quickly.
 >Good at dealing with things...
 
 >I'm jealous that you can do everything so easily.
 >I've always been bad at communicating with others.
 >It's never bothered me up until now but
 >lately
 
->I've been thinking that
+>I've been thinking that I can't stay like this...
->I can't stay like this...
+>Or something...
 >...
 
 p15
->"It is only when man is alone that he is free".
+>"It is only while man is alone that he is free."
 >>twitch
 
 >Schopenhauer said that.
 
 >?? Show pen??
 >A man cannot reach a complete mutual understanding with others,
->but at the same time, without them, he cannot be content for an eternity all alone
+>but at the same time, without them, he cannot be content for an eternity all alone.
 
->He also said that the moment you're truly satisfied is the moment you face what's inside you...
+>He also said that the moment when you're truly satisfied is the moment you face what's inside you...
->although it is clear that if it were so easy to face, there would have been no difficulties at all
+>although it is clear that if it were so easy to face, there would have been no difficulties at all.
 >But here's what I think.
 
 p16
->You can be unsatisfied.
+>You can remain unsatisfied,
->And you can stay isolated forever.
+>and you can stay isolated forever.
->Even so, you'll want someone by your side,
+>Even so, you'll want someone by your side.
->because the boredom of loneliness couldn't even be compared
+>After all, the boredom that comes from loneliness can't even compare
->with life you'll live next to a person for whom you agreed to part with your freedom.
+>to the life you'll live with the person you exchanged your freedom for.
 
->...Hey.
+>...Hey, Asuka-chan.
->Is what you want
+>Is that truly
->really is like that, Asuka-chan?
+>what you want?
 
 p17
 >...Ah... Sorry, Senpai.
->This talk became so complicated...
+>You've been saying confusing stuff for a while now...
 
->so I don't really understa...
+>I don't really know what you're...
 >>swoosh
 
 >That's no good, Asuka-chan.
 >You're putting a lid on your true intentions.
 
 p18
->Remember this one well:
+>A word of advice.
 >You can lie to others as much as you want.
 >But
 >you must be true to yourself.
 >If you keep on lying to yourself, then eventually...
 
->it's shocking how easy it is
+>you'll be shocked by how easy it is
 >to forget what kind of person you were.
 
 >>open
 >I'm home~
 
 p19
 >Welcome back, Asuka.
 >How did cram school go?
 >>twitch
 
 >Hmm...
 >I wonder.
 
->Since it was a first day I'm still not sure.
+>Hard to say since it was just the first day.
 >Can I use the bath first?
 >Go ahead.
 
 >...
 >>pshhhh
 >I couldn't tell her
 
 p20
->that I met Miyuki-chan...
+>that I ran into Miyuki-chan...
 >Hah
 
->It's shocking how easy it is
+>You'll be shocked by how easy it is
 >to forget what kind of person you were.
 
 >...
->It was a long time ago
+>The person I am.
->since I've lost any idea
+
 >I've long since
->of what kind of person I even am...
+
->>bookstore
+>lost any idea who that is...
 >>books
 
 p21
 >Ah.
 
 >Jun-nii.
 >Hey.
 >Woah, it's been a while.
 >Or rather, what are you doing in a place like this?
 
 >This place has some good stuff.
->I could say the same to you. There's a bookstore right next to your house, right...?
+
 >I could say the same to you. There's a bookstore right next to your house...
 
->President.
+
 >Right, President?
 >Eh?
 
 >Hello, Mizuno-kun.
 >On your way home?
 
 >That's right.
 >President?
 >Perfect timing.
 >I've got business to attend to...
 >Could you escort Asuka-chan home?
 
 >Alright.
->>bookstore
+
 >>books
 >Sure.
 >Thank you.
->...What's gives?
+
 >...What gives?
 >You're pretty close with the president.
 
 p23
 >No, we're not that close. We just happened to be at the same cram school.
 >We were only picking out reference books...
 
 >...
 >Hey.
 
 >You
 >shouldn't get too involved with the president.
 
 >...Eh?