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 p2
 >Since when has the meaning of "like" changed?
 
->sfx: shining
+>sfx: lights up
 >on phone: Month Day X Thursday
 
 >Asuka, are you awake?
 >Asuka-
 >Yawn
 >sfx: beep beep
 
 
 
 p3
 >Good morning mom...
 >sfx: doze off
 
 >Good morning
 
 >Wash your face quickly and come
-The rice will get cold
+The rice [food] will get cold
 >hmm
 
->ぐにい　(wut)
+>ぐにい　(wut) [squeeze?]
 
 >sfx: spaced out
 
 >sfx: brush brush brush
 >left side top to bottom: low consciousness level high
 
 
 p4
->sfx: gloom
+>sfx: gloom
 >sfx: hiss
 >.....ah.
 >box: Recalled
->Huh? Wait a moment, what am I doing?
+
->It's not a problem of momentum and such...
+>Huh? Wait a moment, what am I doing? [what did I do?]
 >It's not a problem of momentum [impulse?] and such...
->It's not on a level of awkwardness, but the worst disinheritance.
+
 >It's not on a level of awkwardness, [at worst case I might be kicked out (of house)].
 
 box: Previously
->Mama kiss
+
 >Mama, kiss
 >Again?
 >B-but maybe if it's like a kiss, then it will be unexpectedly safe...?
-side: Yes
+
 side: Yes [gasp]
 
->It's all out!!
+
 >It's all out!! [completely out!!]
->How long are you washing your face?
+
 >How long are you washing [going to wash] your face?
 
 >???!! S-s-s-sorry I will never do it again!!
-left: Disinheritance
+
-right: only!!
+left: Disinheritance [don't kick me out!]
 right: only!! [anything but that!!]
 >I wonder if she's still half-asleep...
 
 
 
 p5
 >I-it's alright...
-It's as usual
+
 It's as usual [she's acting as usual]
->It seems that my "like" for my mom is close to so called passionate feelings
+
 >It seems that my "like" for my mom is close to so-called passionate feelings [romantic love]
 
 >Of course, mom doesn't know that.
 >Even I have no intention of breaking the current relationship by conveying my feelings.
 
 >However
 >sfx: glance
 
 
 
 p6
->physically
+
->and mentally
+>physically [both from my body]
 >and mentally [and from my mind]
 >seems to soon be at its limit
 sfx: turned on turned on
->Puberty is seriously tiresome
+
 >Puberty is seriously tiresome [annoying]
 
 >Have you taken your lunch?
 >Yep
 >And your pass?
 >Took it
 >Mom will be a little late today as well
 There's food in the refrigerator
 >Got it
 sfx: tap tap
->U-umm, mom
+
 >U-umm [hey], mom
 >Hmm?
 
 
 
 p7
 >A-am I cute?
 >sfx: chuckle
 
 
 
 p8
 >Yep
 >Today as well, you're cute, cute
 sfx: pat pat
 >As expected from my daughter ~
 
->Asuka, you have a little makeup on right?
+
 
 >Asuka, you have a little make-up on right?
 You shouldn't while you're young
 >sfx left: flinch
 >sfx bottom: gentle touch
 
 >I-i-it's just a little!!
 >I'm leaving now!
 >Okay
 >Have a nice day
->Asuka...
+
->sfx:fshhh
+
 >[That] Asuka...
->Lately it seems she suddenly turned into a woman
+>sfx:fshhh [hiss]
 
 >Lately it seems she suddenly turned into a woman [she suddenly started acting all girly]
 >I wonder if she has someone she likes?
 hehe
 >sfx: clang
 
 
 
 p9
-sfx: vsshh
+
-Buy why Asuka's Jersey?
+
 sfx: vsshh [hiss]
 But why Asuka's Jersey?
 
 
 
 p10
->What's with the "What are you talking about" sory of reaction?
+
 >How was yesterday?
 >What's with the "What are you talking about" sort of reaction?
 >sfx: munch munch
 >Yea, yea, it's fine already
 I knew it was a lie
->Wanna go to karoke next Sunday?
+
 >I won't particularly pry, but please treat your friends well.
 >Wanna go to karaoke next Sunday?
 It's free!!
 >Ah, sorry, next weekend is...
 
 >sfx: in sync
 >With mom...
 
 
->When you open your mouth it's just mom, mom. What are you Exactly to Ms. Ayako!!
+
 p11
->Because of that, to begin with I said that idea is disgusting, you mamacon!!
+
 >When you open your mouth it's just [always] mom, mom. What are you Exactly to Ms. Ayako!! [Ayako-san would be better, no?]
 >Her daughter!! Anyway, don't call her by her first name, after all I don't call her that myself!!!!
 >Because of that, to begin with I said that idea is disgusting,[it's exactly that attitude that's disgusting] you mamacon!!
 >I'm not a mamacon!!
 >sfx: mutter mutter
 
 >sfx: pant pant
 
 >Well, I guess?
 
 >Your home is a mother and child household.
 >I understand it's a bit different from the usual?
 >But you know,
 
 >as expected, with a daughter this clingly a mother would be concerned.
 >Shouldn't you be aware of your upcoming independence from your parent?
 >Mizuno
 
 
 
 p12
 >I have a consulation on the matter we spoke about...
 >Perhaps you have a little time now?
 >sfx: clatter
 >Ah- yes
 >I'm going for a moment
 
 >Independence...
 >huh...
 
 >Oh? [huh?]
 
 
 
 p13
 >Go to bed together you say...
->A highschooler daughter and a mother should be a bit more seperable...
+
 
 >I-it's okay once in a while! A beautiful Mother-Child skinship.
->Anyway, I'm sleeping here so!
+
 >A highschooler daughter and a mother should be a bit more seperable...
 (That line I'm not sure of, took my own freedom to translate what she meant by "dry")
 [A relationship between highschooler daughter and a mother should be a bit more dry ?]
 
 >Anyway, [today] I'm sleeping here so!
 I have already made a decision!
 sfx: dash
 >Ah, wait Asuka-
 
 sfx: silence \ stare (w/e you feel suits better)
 
 >left sfx: sneaky \ woosh
 >right sfx: peak peak
 
 >sfx: sigh
 
 >Guess it can't be helped... Just for today?
->I wonder why she became such a spoilder child...
+
 
 
 
 p14
 >I wonder why she became such a spoiled child...
->No, it's embarassing after such a long time.
+
 
 >Oh yea, mom
-Cheap!
+
 >...Ah....
 >No, it's embarrassing [to do it now] after such a long time.
 You're not a kid after all
 >Ehhh-
 Cheap! [meanie!]
 
 >Come on,
 >you have school again tomorrow so
 >please go to sleep already
 
 >Ok~ay
 >My "like" for my mother is sightly different from ordinary people's
 
 
 
 
->Because of that, I have to be more independent
+
 >But,
 >for example, saying, the feeling of "like" for my mother, as a mother, have disappeared
 >is not correct
 >[it's not like my feeling of "like" for my mother, as a mother, have disappeared]
 
 >Because of that,[that's why] I have to be more independent
 >I cannnot be so spoiled
 >I understand that
 >But
 
 >Then, the feelings of the other half are?
 >Good night,
 >Mom
 
 >Exactly where should these feelings
 >go to?
 
 
 
 p16
 >I don't know.
 
 >Good night,
 >Asuka
 >sfx: gentle
 
 >Mom
 >.......uhm
 
 >sfx: beep beep beep beep
 
 
 
 p17
 >sfx: click
 >grunt
 
 >turn
 
-sfx: kya~
+
 
 >I, as well, must soon
 >sfx: click click click
 >let go of my child...
 >properly...
 sfx: kya~ [squeeze gently?]