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 EX chapter: Shopping with Mama
 
 Hello to all of my 120 million fans across the nation
 
 Super Idol Hidaka Mai-chan here
 
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-A few months ago I returned to show business as a legendary idol, the strongest in history
+A few months ago, I returned to show business as a legendary idol, the strongest in history
 
 *Prerecorded video images {repeated throughout the page}
 
 For a brief time, the world was thrown into chaos
 
-In the end, my daughter, Ai, brought an end to the conflict
+In the end, my daughter Ai brought an end to the conflict
 
 I was finally able to meet a worthy rival, I can't get enough
 
-But even so, I'm still busy with everyday housework!
+But even with that, I'm still busy with everyday housework!
 
 (How many times are you going to tear up your gym clothes)
 
 (I'm sorry Mama)
 
 It's extremely fulfilling!
 
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 But there is one thing that still worries me...
 
 Ai---
 
-We both have the day off, we've been waiting for this
+We both have the day off we've been waiting for
 Do you want to go shopping with me to buy rice?
 
 <Today is sukiyaki>
 
 Ah! Yeah, I'll go!!
 
 It's been a long time since our last vacation day together, huh, Mama!!
 
-It's true, we're both so busy with work!
+It's true, we've both been so busy with work!
 
 Naturally I'm on top of my game, but how are you doing, Ai?
 
 I guess you don't have any complaints right now?
 
 Yup, I'm fine!
 
 Every day is a lot of fun!!
 
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 Hey, did I tell you? I got the lead role in a movie!!
 
 I didn't know about that! So you're branching out from singing now, huh
 
 We're almost ready to begin shooting!
 
 What's the movie about?
 
 Hmm, it's called Little Runner, it's the story of a long distance relay team!
 
-I get to play the leader of the relay team... It's the inspiring story of the athletics club's victory!
+I get to play the leader of the relay team... It's an inspiring story of the athletics club's victory!
 
 But when the shooting finally began...
 
 Alright, next is scene 25, cut 9!!
 
 This is the scene where the seniors voice their opposition to the freshman Ai becoming the captain
 Start!!
 
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 It's a waste of time, Captain...
 Even if we try, we cant possibly win...
 
 What are you saying!?
 
 Even though... Even though we've practiced so much!!
 
 Can you two stop...?
 
 You don't know anything!
 Ryou sempai, you... Moron!!
 
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 Hidaka Fire!!!!
 
 Huh?
 
 Ai-chan, what did you do!!
 Did you kill him!?
 
 I...I'm sorry!! Was that really bad!? I just used my special attack!!
 
-Just now was too hard, you only have to give him a light slap, okay
+That was too hard, you only have to give him a light slap, okay
 
 Thanks to you, Eri-chan looks completely terrified now
 
 I'm next... I'm going to be next...?
 
 Waaah I'm so sorry!!
 
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-You ended up making mayhem during shooting again!
+You ended up causing mayhem during the shoot again!
 
 Honestly Ai, why do you always put so much force into everything!
 
-After that there was a canned soda CM yesterday...
+After that, there was a canned soda CM yesterday...
 
 Alright, then, all three of you
 
-You have to open the cans at the same time and say the words together about how tasty it is
+You have to open the cans at the same time and say how tasty it is, together
 
-Wah Juice is so tasy!! I can drink it all day!!
+Wah Juice is so tasty!! I can drink it all day!!
 
 A...Ai-chan, you shouldn't shake it so much
 
 Here we go
 
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 "The refreshing taste of summer"
 
 "Ban-Nam Soda"
 
 Ai-chan, what are you doing!!
 Didn't anyone ever teach you not to shake carbonated soda!?
 
 But I thought you're always supposed to shake juice before drinking it!!
 
 That's only for fruit juice
 
-Look, thanks to you Eri-chan is traumatized again
+Look, thanks to you, Eri-chan is traumatized again
 
 It'll be me tomorrow
 It'll be me tomorrow...
 
 Waaah, I'm so sorry!!
 
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 It was another exciting scene!
 
 The three of you at 876 Pro really get along, huh
 
 Ah, you mentioned 876 Pro!
 
 Manami-san visited the office the other day
 
 Hello Ai-chan!
 
 I brought cake for everyone!
 
 Wah It's Manami-san, it's Manami-san!! Why are you here today!?
 
 I had a job nearby so I came to visit!
-And I kind of wanted to see Ai-chan and everyone's faces...
+And I kind of wanted to see Ai-chan and everyone else's faces...
 
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 Since it might be a while
 
 Before I can see everyone again...
 
 Ai-chan... Is it okay if fate carries me far away...!? You won't forget me, right?
 
 Huh!? What are you saying, Manami-san!?
 Manami-san!!
 
 What was she talking about, Mama... Did you ask Manami-san to do something...?
 
 Not really
 
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-From what I've heard it sounds like you've been having a lot of fun, huh
+From what I've heard, it sounds like you've been having a lot of fun, huh
 
 Yeah! Even when I get in trouble it isn't depressing!
 
-Ryou-san revealed that he was actually a boy and now he's started working as a male idol
+Ryou-san revealed that he's actually a boy and now he's started to work as a male idol
 
-Eri-san has started laughing more and become more cheerful than when she started, too!
+Eri-san has become more cheerful and started laughing more than when she started, too!
 
 And when I mess up or don't know something
 
 All of my sempais are always giving me encouragement and advice...
 
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 I think
 
 I'm really glad I became an idol!!
 
-Mama, you can try to get revenge anyday you want
+Mama, you can try to get revenge any day you want
 
 Hey, don't say that
 What if you end up regretting it later?
 
 You're in for a world of hurt at the next song program
 
 Geez!! Why do you have to go on the same one!?
 
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 Alright
-It seems like I forgot to buy some something important
+It seems like I forgot to buy something important
 
 Ai, go pick them up from the neighborhood home center!
 
 Huh, what do I have to buy?
 
-I wrote the list down on paper for you! So, if you please
+I wrote it all down on a list for you! So, if you please
 
 Yes!
 
 What do I need to buy from the home center?
 
 She mentioned sukiyaki, so maybe we need a pot?
 
 Or maybe it's a new apron....
 
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 [Mai's list]:
 Golden Arrows
 Warp Drive Unit
 Devil Engine
 Hydraulic Arm
 Repair Kit
 
 I wonder what Mama is trying to make
 
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 Geez
 
-What's up with Ai! Telling me about all the fun 876 Pro is having!
+What's up with Ai! Telling me about how 876 Pro is having all this fun!
 
 She doesn't have to taunt me like that
 
-Now I feel all lonesome
+Now I feel lonely
 
 Well, whatever...
 
 My solar battleship will be ready soon
 
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 Get your ventilators ready, 876 Pro
 
 Mai-chan is about to cause a storm
 
 Hidaka Mai, the Legendary Idol
 
 <Steel is so heavy!!>
 
 Who is also a single mother!
 
 I won't hold back, even against my daughter
 
 I just felt a chill for some reason...
 Am I catching a cold?
 
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 Short Manga 1 - How to Make Piled-up Taro Rice
 
 First take a bowl and wooden spoon
 
 The rice should be cooked already and still warm
 
 Spoon out the appropriate amount
 
 Pile it on
 
 Cut the nori in the shape of the eyes and mouth
 
 And you're finished
 
 <Tasty!>
 
 <You're going to need seconds, huh>
 
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 Short Manga 2 - Scenery of a Certain Day
 
 Huh, the three of you were in here? I didn't notice since you were so quiet
 
 Ah, President
 Shh!!
 
 It seems like the last job was tiring...
 
 She seems so peaceful...
 
 Oh my
 
 I guess it can't be helped, could you guys go find a blanket?
 
 Yeah!
 
-Your jobs tomorrow
+For your jobs tomorrow
 Do your best...!!
 
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 Hello again, Sakano here!!
 We've finally reached the last volume!!
 
 Thank you very much to everyone who read until the end!
 
 Looking back on the series, a lot has happened
 I was often faced with my own inexperience
 
 <My art sucks...>
 
 <I came here to cry in the hopes that a friendly sempai would appear>
 
 I faced my inexperience again
 And then I faced my inexperience some more
 
 <Don't eat my computer cord!!>
 
-But somehow I was able to pull through to the finish line all by myself
+But somehow I was able to pull through and cross the finish line all by myself
 
 <Got you covered>
 <gleam>
 
 <What's with that face>
 
-Of course I wasn't really working alone since I was able to pester Kurose-sensei and Reiichi-sensei
+Of course I wasn't really working alone, since I was able to pester Kurose-sensei and Reiichi-sensei
 
-We often ended up net-chatting with each other
+We often ended up chatting with each other online
 
 I wish you were Doraemon
 
 I wish you were Doraemon (Reiichi)
 
 Whatever (Kurose)
 
 After walking beside her for so long, I feel like I can really relate to Ai-chan
 
 <Good work>
 
 <Good work>
 
 I hope I can keep supporting the idols of 876 Pro in the future! Thank you, iM@s DS!!