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 Manga Time Kirara Magica
 Volume 4 One-Shot
 
 Snow Rabbits and Pleasant Friends
 
 by Ryuno Suke
 
 ---1---
 
 Zzz...
 
 
 :  Ugh...
 
-:  Oh!
+:  Ugh!
 
 :  ...
 : ...
 
-:  ... Ugh
+:  ... Oh
 
 :  .. Crap
 
 
 ---2---
 
-New battlefield!!
+New Arrival!!
-In a snow day, the magical girls gather today to...!?
+In that snowy day, the magical girls gathers together for...!?
 
 Snow Rabbits and Pleasant Friends
 by Ryuno Suke
 
 ---3---
 
 :  ...
 
-:  So slow...
+:  She's taking forever...
 
-:  That's it!! She's a hour late and not answering her phone!!  What's she doing!?
+:  I can't take it anymore!!  She's a hour late and not even answering her phone!!  What's she even doing!?
-:  Calm down, Sayaka-chan!!
+:  Stay calm, Sayaka-chan!!
 
-:  'Sigh...'  Just leave first if you don't want to wait anymore.
+:  'Sigh...'  Just leave first if you feel impatient.
-Break it up, you two
+Noe keep your distance
-:  Kyouko will manage to find us somehow.
+:  Kyouko can find us somehow.
 
-:  We already waited so long for her, we can't just stop now!
+:  We already waited for her for this long.  No way we can stop now!
-:  I can't calm down if I don't give her an earful about this!
+:  I won't settle down until I give her an earful for this!
 Oh really
-:  I never plan to abandon her...
+:  We haven't planned to abandon her in the first place...
-:  Yeah!
+:  Right
 
 ---4---
 
-Miki-san has been acting out lately...
+Miki-san has been rather feisty lately...
-Acting out?
+Feisty?
 
 :  Yo
 :  Ah, good morning Kyouko-chan---
-: Good moring.
+: Good morning
-:  morning, everyone.
+:  Morning girls
 
-:  that one... over there..
+:  And... that one over there..
 
 So slow...
 That one ->
 :  Is that my fault?
 :  Em, probably?
 Scary
 :  No, definitely.
 
 ---5---
 
-:  Well... let's start moving.
+:  Well... let's get moving.
-:  No need to waste more time...
+:  No reason to waste more time...
 
-:  Wait, Kyouko...
+:  But Kyouko...
 
 :  Is right here!!
-And so casual too!
+Acting so carefree!
 :  Yo
 :  Go to hell!!
 
-:  Seriously! Being late is one thing, you even text us a warning!!
+:  Seriously! Being late is one thing, but you didn't even text us anything!!
-:  Hey, why aren't you answering any calls!?  I rang so many times!
+:  Hey, why aren't you answering my calls!?  I tried so many times!
 
 :  ...
 That phone purchase was a waste...
 :  Sigh, forget it.
 
 ---6---
 
 :  More importantly, Miss Kyouko.
 :  When did we agree to meet up at?
-:  10... 10-ish...
+:  Ten... Ten-ish...
 :  And what time is it?
-:  ... 11?
+:  ... Eleven?
 
-:  It's 11:30!! 11:30!!
+:  It's 11:30!! 11:30 already!!
-That's not a small mistake!!
+That's not a little mistake!!
-:  Look at that long hand!
+:  Do you see that long hand!
 :  Look at it!!
 
-:  Its' fine.  Does it really matter?  Didn't we plan for Kyouko to be late in the first place?
+:  Forget it.  Does it really matter?  Didn't we plan for Kyouko to be late from the beginning?
 
 :  Statistics says Kyouko will be late 100% of the times.
 :  She always was.
-Hah
+Hehe
 :  Have some remorse!
 
 ---7---
 
-:  Sayaka-chan, do you play the lottery a lot?
+:  Sayaka-chan, do you join a lot of sweepstakes?
 
-:  Not often, I just try it online once a while.
+:  Not really, I just try online ones every once a while.
-:  I got lucky and won...
+:  I got lucky and actually won...
 
-:  I always wanted to watch this movie!  A romance between man, hunted by the Yakuza, and his star-crossed lover (etc)
+:  I been wanting to watch this movie!  A romance between a man with Yakuza past and his star-crossed lover (etc)
-:  And it's the director's cut premiere...  Thank you, Miki-san and your good luck!
+:  And this is the director's cut premiere too...  Thank you, Miki-san and your good fortune!
 :  No.. no problem...
 
-:  Then hurry and pass everyone their tickets, so we don't have to hurry about at ticketing...
+:  Well, hand out the tickets already, so we don't have to rush about at ticketing...
 
 :  Oh-- okay, okay
-:  Ah-- it's a card-type ticket, so you don't need to split it...
+:  Well-- the ticket is a gift card, so you don't need to split it...
 
 :  ... Ehh?
 
 :  Ehh?
 
 ---8---
 
-:  ... You forgot?
+:  ... Don't tell me you forgot?
 Kyouko syndrome?
-:  Hey..  Hang on!
+:  Hey..  Hold on!
 
 
-:  AAAAAhh!? I had my wallet in here first.. Then I move it to purse to be safer...
+:  AAAAAhh!? I left it in my wallet originally.. Then I move it to purse for safekeeping...
-:  Ah.. Then it felt too awkward so I moved it to the binder...
+:  Ah.. But it felt awkward there, so I moved it to my binder...
-:  Then...
+:  And then...
 : ...
 
 :  ... I
 Panicking...
-:  I'll go back!
+:  I'll go back and get it!
-:  It's too late, the show's starting soon...
+:  You won't make it.  It's starting soon...
 
 :  Where's Mami and Homura?
-:  Rest...  Restroom?
+:  Eh... Restroom?
 
-:  ... Ah
+:  ... I see.
 
 ---9---
 
-:  R-right!  There's plenty of other places we can visit here... maybe a game center?
+:  W-well!  There's plenty of other places we can visit around here... maybe a game center?
-:  ... Nobody is blaming Sayaka-chan, right?
+:  ... Nobody is blaming you for it, Sayaka-chan.
 
-:  Really...  Akemi-san lectured me hard...
+:  Really..?  Homura lectured me quite a bit hard...
-Honestly...  And you're complainting about Kyouko...
+Honestly...  And you're just complaining about Kyouko...
 N-no big deal.  Don't worry about it.
-:  And you can see the disappointment on Mami-san's face.
+:  And you can just see the disappointment on Mami-san's face.
 :  ...
 
-:  Sigh--- really--- What am I doing...
+:  Sigh--- Really--- What was I doing...
-:  Went and invite everyone but end up forgetting to bring the tickets.
+:  Went and invite everyone, yet can't even remember to bring the tickets.
 
 :  ... Sayaka-chan
 
 : !?
 
 :  OUCH...
 
 :  What...
-:  Was that!
+:  Was that for!
 
 ---10---
 
-: Can't we just hang out right here
+: Can't we just hang out here instead
-:  And have a snow fight
+:  And have a snow fight or something?
-Huhu~
+Fufu~
 
-:  Don't decide everything by yourself!
+:  Don't go and decide everything by yourself!
 :  I don't have any money on me, so no gaming center for me.
 :  Isn't a snow fight just fine?
 Come on
 
-:  We can't watch the free movies anyways--
+:  Not like we have a free movie to watch anymore--
-Pissed off
+:  .... Okay...
-:  .... Ah...
+
 
 :  Wait... Hey!! That's against the rules!! That'll really hurt!!
-:  Wait... Hey!! That's against the rules!! That'll hurt!!
+
 
 : ... What happened here?
-: ... What happened?
+:  Ah... Well... Kyouko-chan... wants to get Sayaka-chan's mind off things, probably...
-:  Ah... Em... Kyouko-chan... wants to get Sayaka-chan's mind off things, probably...
+
 :  ... That's difficult to believe, watching this...
-:  ... That's hard to believe, watching this...
+
 ---11---
 
 :  Hey, you guys!  Quit dazing off!
-:  Hey, you guys!  Quit dazzing off!
+Over here-
-Over here--
+
 :  What now!?
 :  Hey, don't decide the teams on your own!
-:  Hey, don't split the team up on your own!
+
 ---12---
 
 It's eatable?
 Taste like icee...
-Like a snowcone...
+
 
 ---13---
 
 Keep it up~~
-Keep at it~~
+
 
 Go on
-Go
+
 
 ---14---
 
 :  Ah-... It got cold all the sudden.
-:  Ah-... It got cold.
+
 :  Well, snow is a good insulator.
-:  That's cause snow is a good insulator.
+:  And we have such a think layer too...
-:  And it's so thick too...
+
 :  You learned that from Mami-san just now, right?
-:  You just heard that from Mami-san, right?
+Too bad-
 Yeah
 :  Busted
-:  It's not that great-... Laying so much snow...
+
 :  Isn't it great-... Having so much snow...
 :  Oh?
-:  We end up just hanging out in a park. I'm really sorry--
+
-Since we're talkign about igloos
+:  We just hanging out in a park in the end. I'm really sorry--
-:  But since we're chatting, I'll start with the first topic.
+:  Let's talk about something, I'll start.
 Since we're inside an igloo...
 
 ---15---
-:  Hehe, playing around is fine...
+
-: To be honest, I don't really like... snow...
+:  Hehe, playing a bit is fine...
 : To be honest, I don't really enjoy... the snow...
 
 :  Eh?
-:  You're really enjoying it...
+
 :  You're really into it...
-:  I said, playing around is fine?
+
 :  Like I said, a bit is fine?
-: And it's cold..
+
-:  Sigh, I bet you're all quite cold given what you're wearing.
+:  And it's cold...
 :  And what you're wearing don't look very warm.
-:  ... besides the snow..
+
-:  A night like this... This atmosphere... can be..
+:  ... Not just the snow...
 :  A night like this... This mood... can be..
-: Atmosphere?
+
 :  Mood?
 
 :  ... The city...
 
 ---16---
 
-:  It gets rowdy... restless..
+
 :  It's rowdy... restless..
-:  How should I say... make you hard to calm down...
+
 :  How should I say... make it hard to stay calm..
 
 :  ...
 :  That's why...
 
 
 :  Em... That's why...
 :  It's hard to... what is it..
 :  Hard to explain
 
 :  ..
 
-:  If you add some sugar, she should be fine.
+
 :  She should be fine with a little sugar.
 
 ---17---
 
 :  Why are you always treating her?
-:  If you keeps let her have whatever she says
+
 :  If you give in every time she claps her hands and begs
 :  "Pretty please-!!"  ... At this rate...
-:  it's only some soft drinks...
+
 :  it's only a soft drink...
 
 :  Oh...
 
 
 :  Ah!!
 
-:  It's hard to control... yea
+
 :  It's hard to handle.. yea
 
 ---18---
-:  Oh?  What is it...
+
-:  Isn't that an intergoration...
+:  Oh?  What is this...
 :  Feels like an interrogation...
-:  Not really.. It's relaly nothing related.
+
 :  Oh, nothing..  It's relaly nothing in particular.
 :  What?
-:  Because... i fyou think about it
+
-:  In the circumstance we're in it's only natural to feel...
+:  Because... if you think about it
 :  In a situation like this, it's only natural we feel...
 
-:  What is it?
+
 :  What's that?
 
 ---19---
 
 :  Wah!
 
 ---20---
 
 :  ...
 
 :  Ah..
 :  S-sorry!
 :  I tripped!  It's all my fault!  Ah!  I was careless..
 
 Haahaha
 Hahaha
 
 :  Eh?  What happened?
 :  Eh?
 
 :  You okay?
 :  Yeah, I'm fine.
 
 :  Sayaka?
 :  No worries.
 
 ---21---
-:  Hey... The park lights are coming up, all the way to the station?
+
 :  Hey... They already have Christmas Lights setup in the park already.  The train station too, right?
 :  ..
 
 : ... Kyouko?
-:  Ah.. Sorry.  You.. were saying?
+
 :  Ah.. Sorry.  What... were you saying?
 
 ---22---
-:  You don't like dealing with it?
+
-:  Times like this
+:  You have a hard time with it, right?
 :  This season.
 
 :  Ah.. No..
-:  Hehe, ah, right...
+
-:  Next week, let's have a christmas party at Mami-san's apartment.
+:  Hehe, oh yes...
-:  Don't be late!
+:  Next week, we're having a Christmas Party at Mami's apartment.
 :  You better not be late this time!
-:  Eh?  What pa...
+
 :  Eh?  What par...
 :  Madoka!!
-:  I-I didn't hear about it either!
+
 :  Nobody told me about it!
 
 ---23----
 
 :  It fine, right?
-:  This restless feeling.
+
 :  That restless feeling.
 
-:  It's... not bad...
+
 :  I guess... it's fine...
 
 ---24---
 
 :  Ah, yes.
 
 :  ... Speaking- of- which
 
-:  What kind of presents will Kyouko-chan get us in exchange?
+
 :  What kind of presents will Kyouko-chan give us in exchange?
-:  ... A snow rabbit
+
 :  ... a snow rabbit
 :  What, that sucks!
 :  Screw you
 
 * END *