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 PAGE 2:
 
 1: Wait!! // Vifir!
 2: Calm down and listen to what I have to say…!
 3: Huh?
 4: What you have to say? // Do you really think…
 5: you’re in the situation to be saying that?!
 6: Do you?!
 7: Uwah!!
 8: I’m sorry, it was my bad!
 9: … // Oh? // So you actually understand that it was your fault.
 10: ...Yes.
 
 PAGE 3:
 
 1: Then… // don’t you ever…
 2: ignore me again!!
 3: I-I’m sorry…
-4: I was talking to you so much!
+4: I've been talking to you so much!
 5: I was really sad, you know?!
 6: ...Yes. // I’m really sorry…
 7: Also.
 8: It kind of feels like you’ve been
 9: avoiding looking into my eyes lately.
 10: Don’t you think so?
 11: Uu…
 
 PAGE 4:
 
 1: Like last time…
 2: We did it, Bel! We took them all out!
 3: Yeah…!
 4: Yay!!
 5: High five!
 6: Um… // I’d prefer if we didn’t…
 7: What the hell did you mean by that?!
 8: Urgh!!
 9: Be happy about completing our mission with me!
 10: I was happy, though…
 
 PAGE 5:
 
 1: And there was that time before that, too…
 2: I’m sorry...
 3: Geez… // Do you just hate me or something…?
 4: N-No!!
 5: That’s… not it…
 6: Then why…?!
 7: Um… // Well…
 8: When I look into your eyes…
 9: I get all...
 10: hot and bothered.
 
 PAGE 6:
 
 1: Huh? // Hot and bothered?
 2: I mean… // You know! // Like with your clothes, and all that skinship!
 3: Like how your breasts are always touching me and stuff…
 4: I tried really hard not to be too conscious of that stuff, you know?!
 5: But your breasts are just too amazing!!
 6: And that’s why it kind of looked like I was avoiding you…
 7: I’m really sorry…
 8: Bel…
 
 PAGE 7:
 
 1: What do you mean by
 2: hot and bothered?
 3: ...Huh?
 4: I don’t understand.
 5: Hmm…? // Uh… What do I mean?
 6: How do I say this… // It’s like… I get too conscious of you and my emotions start building up…
 7: I see…
 8: It’s like… I’m having trouble holding back my desires, I guess…?
 9: Ah… Ahh!!
 10: I felt that, too!
-11: I was getting hot and bothered, too!
+11: I was getting hot and bothered too!
 12: When you first came to the Dragon Village… // Maybe it was because you were the first human I’ve seen, but…
 13: I felt an emotion I’ve never felt before with the other dragons…
 
 PAGE 8:
 
 1: I think that’s a little different…
 2: And I was filled with…
 3: this desire…
 4: to just jump on you and go at it…! (popping out) Uhehehe <3
-5: Oh… Yeah, maybe that is hot and bothered.
+5: Oh… Yeah, maybe that is "hot and bothered."
-6: I see~ // So you were feeling hot and bothered about me, too…!
+6: I see~ // So you were feeling hot and bothered about me too…!
 7: Well, yeah…
-8: I see <3 // …
+8: I see. <3 // …
 9: Then why were you ignoring me?!
-10: People don’t like to get hot and bothered!!
+10: People don’t like to get all hot and bothered!!
 11: Even though we’re both getting hot and bothered?!
-12: That’s only because I didn’t know you were, too… // From now on…
+12: That’s only because I didn’t know you were too… // From now on…
 13: I won’t ignore you. And… I won’t avoid your eyes, either.
 14: You promise?
 15: Promise.
 
 PAGE 9:
 
 1: Fu…
 2: Fufufu…
 3: Thank goodness...
 4: Wah…!
 5: Ah?! // Hey!!
-6: S-Sorry, it was just on reflex…
+6: S-Sorry, it was just a reflex…
 7: Then…
 
 PAGE 10:
 
 1: How about this?!
 2: Ubwah!!
 3: Now… // you can’t avoid my eyes.
 4: Yeah…
 5: Wah!!
 6: Sorry… Did you not want me to touch it?
 7: ...No, // I was just surprised, that’s all…
 8: Go ahead.
-9: Touch it as much as you’d like <3
+9: Touch it as much as you’d like. <3
 
 PAGE 11:
 
 1: Haah… // Haah…
 2: Fuu…
 3: Fuu… // Fuu…
 4: Fuu <3
 5: Fuu <3 <3
-6: rub
+6: Rub
-7: rub
+7: Rub
 8: Haah <3 <3
 9: Haah <3
 10: Hau <3
 11: Hauu <3 <3 <3
 
 PAGE 12:
 
 1: Haah…
 2: Haah…
 3: Fuu…
 4: Mm…
 5: Fuu…
 6: Mm…?!
 7: Haah…
 8: Haah…
 9: What was that…
 10: ...just now?
 11: A kiss.
 12: I guess it’s… // an act of love…?
 13: Hmm…
 
 PAGE 13:
 
 1: Mm <3 <3
 2: Nfu <3
 3: Fuu <3
 4: Haah… // Haah <3
 5: Hah <3 // Hafu <3
 6: Mm <3
 7: Fu <3
 8: Mm <3
 9: Mm?!
 10: Mm!
 11: Mm!
 
 PAGE 14:
 
 1: Pwah <3
 2: Haah // Haah…
 3: Uwah…
 3: What’s wrong…?
 4: My boobs… // must look pretty weird
 5: to a human, right…?
 6: They look perfectly fine!
 7: T-Thank goodness…
 
 PAGE 15:
 
 1: Haah <3
 2: Haah <3
 3: Wait…! // Hie…!
 4: Hieee <3
 5: Ah!
 6: Haah!
 7: Wha…?!
 8: Haah
 9: Haah
 10: Ah…!
 11: Haah
 
 PAGE 16:
 
 1: Haah <3
 2: Ah! <3
 3: Ahh! <3
-4: squish <3
+4: Squish <3
-5: squish <3 // squish <3
+5: Squish <3 // Squish <3
-6: squish <3
+6: Squish <3
 7: Bugii <3
 8: Uwah! <3 <3
 9: Uuu!
 10: Ahm <3
 11: Mmmm <3 <3
 12: Mm <3
 
 PAGE 17:
 
 1: Fuu <3
 2: Fuu <3
 3: Mm! <3 // Mmm! <3
 4: Mm! // Mmmm! <3 <3
 5: Mmmmm <3 <3
 6: Pwah!
 7: Ahhh <3 <3
 8: Fwaaah <3 <3
 9: Haah <3
 10: Haah <3 <3
 
 PAGE 18:
 
 1: You’re going to…
 2: put this thing…
 3: inside of me…?
 4: ...What is this?
 5: It’s a human male’s… reproductive organ.
 6: ...Oh?
 7: I really want to // put it… inside you.
 8: You really want to put it inside me…?
 9: ...I see.
 10: Then…
-11: ...Go ahead <3
+11: ...Go ahead. <3
-12: Since you really want… <3
+12: Since you really want to… <3
 
 PAGE 19:
 
-1: A- // All right…
+1: A- // Alright…
 2: I’m going to put it in, okay?
 3: Okay.
 4: ...Okay!
 5: Mm…!
 6: Mmm <3 <3
 7: Mmmm <3 <3
-8: squish <3
+8: Squish <3
-9: squish <3
+9: Squish <3
 10: Haah…
 11: A…
 12: Haah…
-13: squeeze <3
+13: Squeeze <3
-14: squeeze <3
+14: Squeeze <3
 15: Amazing…
 
 PAGE 20:
 
-1: You’re really… // inside me <3 <3
+1: You’re really… // inside me. <3 <3
 2: Haah… // Haah… <3
-3: squeeze <3 x2
+3: Squeeze <3 x2
 4: Ehehe <3
 5: Huh?! // You’re going to take it out…?
-6: But we went through all the trouble of-
+6: But we went through all that trouble to-
 7: Oh…!
-8: squish <3
+8: Squish <3
 
 PAGE 21:
 
 1: Hah!
 2: Huh?!
 3: Hah!
 4: Hah!
 5: Hah! // Hah!
-6: squish <3
+6: Squish <3
 7: Huhhh?!
-8: squish <3
+8: Squish <3
 9: Ah! <3 <3
 10: Ahh! <3
 11: Uwahh! <3
 12: Uwaahh <3
 13: Kuu <3
 
 PAGE 22:
 
 1: Uu! <3
 2: Kuu <3
-3: Does this… // make you feel good, too?!
+3: Does this… // make you feel good too?!
 4: Yeah.
-5: Thank goodness <3
+5: Thank goodness. <3
-6: We’re feeling good together <3
+6: We’re feeling good together. <3
 7: Ehehe <3 // It’s like I’ve become one with you!
 8: I’m so happy! <3
 9: Vifir!!
 10: Wah?!
 
 PAGE 23:
 
 1: Wait…!! // Bel?!
 2: Hah! <3
 3: You’re being so rough…!!
 4: Hah! <3
 5: Hah!
 6: Hah! <3
 7: Wah!!
 8: Nyooh <3 <3
 9: Ah! <3
 10: Hii! <3 // Hin <3
 
 PAGE 24:
 
 1: Haah! <3
 2: Uwahh <3
 3: Oh…! Ahh <3
 4: Bel!! // I…
 5: I’m going to break…! // Uu!!
 6: Mm <3 <3
 7: Mmmm <3 <3
 
 PAGE 25:
 
-1: squirt <3
+1: Squirt <3
-2: squirt <3
+2: Squirt <3
 3: Mmm <3 // Mmm <3
 4: Ah…! // Ah…! <3
 5: Ahhh! <3 <3
 6: Ahhh! <3 <3 <3
 7: Ah! <3 // Bel! <3 <3
 8: Bel! <3 <3
 9: Ahh! <3
 
 PAGE 26:
 
 1: Hii! <3
 2: Hiii! <3
 3: Uwah!!
 4: Ahhh <3 <3
 5: Haah
 6: Haah
 7: Haah
 8: Haah
 9: Haah
 10: Haah
 
 PAGE 27:
 
-1: squish
+1: Squish
 2: Haah…
 2: Haah…
 3: Haah…
 4: Haah…
 5: Haah…
 6: Bel. // Next time you feel hot and bothered, // make sure you tell me, okay?
 7: Y-Yeah.
-8: I’ll connect with you anytime you want <3
+8: I’ll connect with you anytime you want. <3
 
 PAGE 28:
 
 1: This monster sure was persistent, huh?
 2: It was pretty strong…
 3: ...Oh, // Vifir.
 4: Hmm?
 5: Here.
 6: Huh?
 7: Ah! <3
 8: END
 
 PAGE 29:
 
 Afterword
 
 It was fun drawing them all lovey-dovey.
 This turned out to be a lot different than the initial thorn girl draft, but it WAS just a draft, so I hope you’ll understand…
 
 Thank you so much for reading!