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-Well, somehow it appears you are destined to do something great, otherwise you'd probably be dead before this even began. You are driven by some reason to make ends meet, or to make ends tear in the end of the world, or perhaps even conquer the end over all the odds, and maybe even the world. In the wide world of Amaranth currently, there is quite the number of events all piling up to bring about the end of time, and as a mercenary, you're up for hire, and plenty of people need your assistance! Currently, you folk are in the province of Oakran, helping the Holy Knights hunt down an unholy abomination that has been plaguing the city of Ysmirath from the woods and corrupting the beasts within. Large cracks have appeared in the ground, covered in an odd dark purple liquid that seens to be corrupting the land.
+Name: Muket Lukienta
 
 Race: Porak
-Name: (What's your name?)
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 Equipment: A large ball & chain, claymore,
-Race: (What are you?
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 Artifacts: Cube thing that turned into a ball for my ball and chain, explosive warhammer, ring that makes weapons and what I'm carrying weightless, nose ring that gives me trap awareness, MYTHERIUM ARMOR SKIN,
-Religion: (Who's your holy/unholy lord, if any?)
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 Age: 27
-Magic: (Do you have epic mind powers?)
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 Personality: He is, like the rest of his race, a brute. He rushes into battle, loving battle, etc.
-Equipment: (Talk to DM)
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 What is your goal?: His goal is to become the strongest alive, and crush all who oppose him.
-Artifact: (None unless DM gives consent, but you can come up with your own and suggest.)
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 Appearance: He stands at 7'6, wearing very little clothing except something to cover his nether region. Beyond that, he is a general Porak; bull head/horns, weird gazelle legs, etc. He has brown fur(assuming he has fur), and chocolate brown eyes.
-Age: (Dependant on Race)
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 Backstory: Muket has spent his whole life trying to go up the ranks of the army of Elinus(whatever that is). He fought 10 of those monster things. Yeah. He trained in his two weapons; his primary, the ball & chain, and then secondary, the greatsword. Along with this, he has practiced, slightly, in wrestling. After the adult hood trial(whatever that is), he abandoned the army in favor of becoming a roaming mercenary.
-What is your goal?:
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 Location: Eingrot
-Appearance: (what do you look like)
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 Skills (You get 6 points) (There are certain disadvantages to putting too much points into something, as well as advantages, depending on your race and your personality.)
-Backstory: (what is your life story?)
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 Magic: 0
-Location: Ysmirath, Oakran.
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 Strength: 6
-Skills (you have 100 points)
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-Wisdom: 0 (How effective your spells are)
+Dexterity: 0
-Intelligence: 0 (How many spell uses you have and general knowledge check)
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-Vitality: 0 (How durable you are)
+Charisma: 0
-Faith: 0 (How much your god loves you)
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-Endurance: 0 (How long until you tire.)
+Luck: 0