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 p1
 >Hey, does your family
 >not have a dad?
 >...
 
 >It happened so long ago that I don't remember what prompted me to ask
 >but
 >it's been sleeping in the corner of my mind even to this day.
 
 p2
 >It's a sweet
 >and slightly salty memory.
 
 >By Ayako-san, you mean...
 >That Kisaragi Ayako-san?
 
 >Yeah.
 >She's Mori-san now, though.
 
 p3
 >I happened to run into Akira-san the other day.
 >She said Ayako-san's looking for a full-time pharmacy job since her kid is entering elementary school.
 >My dad's getting to that age so... It's perfect timing, don't you think?
 >I see.
 
 >Still, it's surprising.
 
 >That Kisaragi Ayako-san's kid is already in elementary school...
 >>blink...
 >Time goes by so quickly.
 
 >I remember her well. She was quite the celebrity back then...
->You could even call her a goddess.
+>She was even called a goddess, I think.
 >Indeed. Although thinking about it now, it's like "what the heck?".
 >Brings back memories. Her underclassmen were all such big fans.
->The bars were all filled with tears when they heard she got married... It was quite troublesome.
+>They cried they eyes out in the bars when they heard she got married... It was quite troublesome.
 >>rub
 
 >She was beautiful and had great grades, and she had quite the expression after she got married...
 
 >But man, karma's a bitch.
 >In addition to losing both of her parents so quickly...
 
 p4
 >she lost her husband too.
 >It was really so sudden.
 >...
 >...Indeed it was.
 
 >So, about her daughter, Asuka-chan.
 >I was thinking she could stay over during spring vacation.
 >What are they talking about...?
 >sneak...
 >That sounds good. Those two haven't come over here before, after all.
 >She'd be worried about leaving her home all day, right?
 
 >Ayako-san is such a worrywart, though.
 >Hah
 >I'm not sure how to convince her.
 >You could say it'd be good if she could become friends with Rui, who's the same age as her.
 >Besides...
 
 p5
 >Our Onii-chan over here
 >is very reliable.
 >!
 
 >>hide
 
 >What are you smirking about?
 >It's creepy.
 >>smile smile
 >Oh, nothing.
 
 >...
 >Onii-can, huh...
 
 >I was very much a gullible and obedient kid back then.
 >Wow, you're so cool, Jun-kun.
 >>shopping
 >I would always get carried away with my Dad's cajolery.
 >That's our Onii-chan!
 >Hey, greatest in Japan!!
 
 
 p6
 >Okay!
 >Here I go!
 
 >Swings
 >There!
 >Noooooooooooooo!!
 >!!!?? (Jun)
 
 >Seesaw
 >>Up and down
 >Aaaaaah
 >>flail flail
 >Ooooooooh!?
 
 >Asuka-chan, let's go to the jungle gym next!
 >Nooooooooooo!
->>drag
+>>drag drag
 >Uwaaaah! Wait wait wait!
 
 >Th-Th-Th-This is bad. At this rate it's gonna turn into a serious accident before I know it!
 >>grip
 >What should I do? Maybe I should tie Rui to that tree over there...
 >*Skipping rope
 >Huh?
 
 p7
 >>clatter clatter
 >Can't you get down, Asuka-chan?
 >Oh dear.
 >I'm too late...!
 
 >C-C-C-C-C-C-Calm down! Just calm down!
 >You're the one who needs to calm down, bro. (Rui)
 >It's okay, don't move, I'll come help you...
 >>slip
 
 >Ah!
 >>fall
 
 >Aaaaaah!
 
 p8
 >Gyu...
 >>sob sob...
 
 >!
 >squelch
 >...
 
 >Ooh, nice catch, bro!
 
 >Being an onii-chan
 >was really tough.
 >Welcome home, everyone!
 >Woah, Jun-kun. You're covered in dirt.
 >Alright, snack time!
 
 p9
 >>irritated irritated
 >...It's all...
 
 >>snooze
 >this girl's fault...
 >She's asleep
 
 >>glance
 >Changed clothes.
 
 >>space out...
 >...
->For some reason...
+
 >It seems like...
 
->She seems different...
+
 >she is a little strange...
 >She was screaming with tears when she was being dragged all over the place by Rui...
 >But now I have no idea what she's thinking...
 
 >What's...that?
 >Hm?
 >Ah, it's sakura mochi.
 >You never eaten one before?
 >>stare...
 
 >Aah
 
 >!
 
 >...
 >I guess she likes it...?
 >Maybe she's actually easy to read, after all...?
 >>nom nom
 
 p11
 >...
 >The leaf is coming off
 
 >Hey.
 >Does your family...
 >>snooze..
 >Mmm
 
 >not have a dad?
 
 >...
 >>astonished
 
 >Hah
 >Oh crap...
 
 p12
 >Did I just step on a landmine...?
 >Is she gonna cry...!?
 
 >..
 >A dad...
 
 >What's a dad again...?
 >I've heard of it
 >Eeh...?
 >I have to start from there...?
 
 >Erm, a dad is...
 >A dad is like the person who's not your mom... A guy...
 >Ah, you don't have two of them to begin with, is there...?
 >Hrm
 >How do I explain this...
 >>chop chop
 >The person who's not my mom...
 >Two of them...
 
 >You mean like Akira-chan?
 >Akira-chan?
 >Who's that??
 >Yeah.
 >Akira-chan is...
 
 p13
 >Someone who lived with us before.
 >Heh.
 >>puff puff
 >She made a really big castle.
 >But then she tried to kiss Mom so now I kinda hate her.
 >I-Is that so?
 >Ayako-san's boyfriend, perhaps?
 
 >Hmm, but Akira-chan is a girl, so...
 >She's a girl...?
 >This Akira-chan sure is a mystery.
 
->I guess I do have a dad.
+
 >Maybe a dad is that person.
 >Huh? Is Rui-san asleep?
 >Yep.
->That
+
->person in the photograph.
+>The one
 >on the photo.
 
 >?
 >I don't really get it, but...
 
 p14
 >You don't seem lonely.
 >?
 >How come?
 
 >How come, you ask... Wouldn't you normally be lonely?
 >Hmm...
 >I don't know... I mean...
 
 >I've never met this Dad person even once in my life.
 
->He's a stranger who I can't meet
+
->so why would I be lonely?
+>Why would I be lonely
 >if I can't meet a stranger?
 
 p15
 >Besides
->I have...
+
 >For me...
 >Asuka.
 >Sorry, I'm late~
 >Ah!
 >Mom!
 >step step
 
 p16
 >Have you been a good girl?
->Hey, I went to the park just now!
+
 >Hey, hey, I went to the park just now!
 
 >>snicker
->You can tell me all about it on the way home.
+
 >You can tell me all about it slowly on the way home.
 >>dumbfounded
 
 >Thank you, Satoshi-san.
 >Sorry to do this during the holidays...
 >Don't worry about it.
 >Asuka-chan is a good kid so she didn't cause any problems.
 >See you soon, Asuka-chan.
->Thank you for today too, Jun-kun.
+>>smile
 
 >Thank you too for today, Jun-kun.
 >Hah
 >Ah.
 >It was nothing.
 
 >Come on, Asuka.
 >Won't you say goodbye to the onii-chan who played with you all day?
 >Okay.
 
 p17
 >Thank you, Onii-chan.
 >Bye-bye.
 
 >Mm...
 >>blink...
 
->>sit up
+
 >Bro...?
 >>rub
->The pain I felt in my heart at that moment
+
 p18
 >The little pain I felt in my heart at that moment
 >was probably
 >because the smile she gave wasn't directed towards me.
 >...
 
 >>open
 
 >Oh.
 >Welcome back, bro.
 
 >...Yeah.
 
 p19
 >What's with the pissed off expression?
 >Did you get dumped?
 >Well excuse me for being pissed off.
 >My expression was always like this.
 
 >Well, I have no reason to tell you to begin with.
 >>sit
 >If you say I got dumped, then I got dumped.
 >If you have to laugh, then laugh.
 
 >Hmm...
 >How should I put it...
 >Asuka is stubborn like that too.
 
 >>bump
 
 p20
 >...
 
 >Was I being too meddlesome?
 
 >...
 >...No.
 
 >In fact
 >I feel kinda refreshed.
 
 >...I see.
 
 >What do you want for dinner tonight?
 >....
 >...Mapo tofu.
 >Roger.