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 1 x 1/2 ch8
 
 p2
 >I can't change the past.
 >I can't turn back the clock.
 >I can't undo the crimes I've committed.
 >I...
->don't know anything about that person before she became "Mom".
+>didn't know that person before I became "Mom".
 
 >Wah!
 
 p3
 >Oh crap! Oh crap! Oh crap!
 >>step step step
 >I'm gonna be late!
 
 >Why didn't you wake me!?
 >I warned you, didn't I?
 >I wasn't going to wake you up if you overslept.
 >>chop chop
 
 >You're way too unforgiving!
 >>panic panic
 >Geez.
 >It's because you're so bad at mornings.
 >Aren't I always telling you to go to bed early...?
 
 p4
 >Mom.
 
 >...
 
 >Now that I think about it, I get the feeling I allowed something outrageous to happen...
 >Was this really for the best...?
 
 >Ah.
 
 >Oh yeah.
 >Come here a moment, Mom.
 >?
->>beckon
+>>beckon beckon
 >What is...
 
 p5
 >>tug
 
 >Thanks for the meal!
 >~~~~...!!
 
 p6
 >Okay!
 >I'm off!
 >>shut
 >...Geez.
 >Where did she learn that...
 
 >>peek out
 >Ayako~?
 >>flinch
 
 >Wh-What is it?
 
 >Where's the coffee maker again?
 >>step step
 >Ah.
 >That should be...
 
 >It should be in this closet...
 >...
 
 p7
 >>sip...
 
 >Are you reading the news on that?
 >Yep.
 >It's pretty convenient.
 
 >Heh...
 >Ah
 >That reminds me...
 
 >Are mother and father doing okay?
->Asuka got a fever over New Year's, so I haven't been able to pay them a visit.
+>Asuka got a fever over New Year's, so I haven't had time to pay them a visit.
 >...
 >Ah...
 
 p8
 >Yeah.
 >They're both doing fine.
 >...I see.
 
 >Well then, I better get to work.
 >Eh?
 >>slam
 >You're leaving already?
 
 >C'mon now.
 >Why don't you just take it easy?
 >It's finally just the two of us and we've got so much to talk about, right?
 >Don't use that tone with me.
 >I don't really have anything to talk about.
 
 >Hmm? Well I have something in mind.
 >>twitch
 >Ayako.
 >Tell me.
 
 p9
 >What did you do
 >with Asuka?
 
 p10
 >...Wh-
 
 >What are you talking about...
 >Oh? Trying to hide it?
 >That hurts. And we're so close and everything.
 >...
 
 >>snicker snicker
 >...But still, that "you-know-what" of yours
 >>blush
 >proved to be effective even against your own flesh and blood.
 >That's surprising.
 
 >I guess even you couldn't turn down your own daughter, huh?
 >Or maybe...
 
 p11
 >You're actually serious about this?
 >Huh!?
 
 >What are you saying?
 >There's no way that could be! She's my daughter!
 >Is that so?
 
 >Or rather, let me join in next time.
 >I've always wanted to try out a mother-daughter threesome at one point.
 >Akira.
 >>shick
->Keep taking your jokes too far and I'm really going to get mad at you.
+>You're taking your jokes too far. I'm seriously getting angry.
 
 >......I'm sorry.
->>hand up
+>>hands up
 >Where did you get that from?
 >...I'm just gonna say this once...
 >It's a paper knife.
->If you ever look at Asuka in that way,
+>If you ever look at Asuka in that way
 >I'll see to it that you'll never set foot on our doorstep ever again.
 >This one's gone off the edge too...
 
 p12
->I don't mind if it's me, though.
+>I don't really mind if it's me though.
 >You're okay with that!?
 >I'm already used to it.
 >That's pretty cold in its own way!!!
 >And put that away already!!
 
 >More importantly...
 >If you've managed to notice it, then tell me what I should do.
->This is your specialty, right?
+>This is your specialty, right?
 >I'm not really good with these kinds of things...
 >Just what the heck do you think of me, Ayako?
 
 >Hmm, but still...
->This is a pretty big problem.
+>That's a pretty big problem.
 >That girl...
 
 p13
 >Her tenacity is just like Atsushi's.
 >...
 
 >I mean, her face is pretty much identical to his to begin with.
->But why the heck is she falling for the same woman as him...
+>But to think that she's end up falling for the same woman as him...
 >Hm?
 >>vrr vrr
 
 >>beep
 >Ah yes. This is Mori. If it's nothing important, please call back once my vacation is over.
 
 >Asuka is...
 >to Atsushi-kun...?
 
 p14
 >Eeh!?
 
 >You went to Mom's workplace, Akira-chan!?
 
 >...
 >Yeah, I did.
 
 >No fair!
 >No fair, you say... It's not like I was going over there to play or anything.
 >It was just a greeting. We're in the same trade, after all.
 >It's still not fair! Going there while I was stuck at school...!
 >It's a student's duty to study, right? Put some effort into it.
 
 p15
 >...Hey, you guys.
 >Could you please be more quiet...
 >>ache ache
 
 >It's not fair that you get to see a side of Mom that I don't, Akira-chan!
 >Huh!?
->You get to spend 365 days a year with Ayako and that's still not enough for you!?
+>You get to spend 365 days a year with Ayako and that's still not enough for you!?
 >I haven't seen her for two years so you could at least cut me some slack!!
 >>snap
 
 >>grab
 
 >>toss toss
 >>Mori
 
 >Eh?
 
 p16
->A-Asako...?
+>A-Ayako...?
 >Me too...?
 >Why don't you two go cool off your heads
 >until dinner is ready, okay?
 >>smile smile
 
 >.....
 
 >...Okay...
 >>FamiRes
 >>Value lunch
 >>Pasta Fair
 >>24-hour parking
 >>Gourmet Set - 980 yen
 >>Value lunch
 >Welcome!
 >Please sit wherever you'd like.
 
 >...
 >...Look here...
 
 p17
 >Quit sulking and cheer up already...
 >>sulk
 >Mom scolded me.
 >This is all your fault, Akira-chan!
 >...No.
 >That was 200% your fault.
 >>slurp slurp
 
 >Hah
 >...Geez.
 >Fine. Order whatever you want.
 >Just make sure you leave room for dinner...
 >I don't wanna get told off afterwards.
 
 >Eh?
 >You're sure?
 >Excuse me. I'd like everything from here to here, please.
 >Listen to me!
 
 p18
 >It's fine. The food Mom makes goes in a different stomach.
 >...
 >I see...
 >>carefree
 >These damn eternal mother-daughter newlyweds!
 
 >...Well, whatever. This is good timing.
 >There's something I want to ask you.
 >>chomp chomp
 >You...
 >?
 
 >laid a hand on Ayako, didn't you?
 >!?
 >>snap
 
 >>cough cough
 >How did you know, Akira-chan...!?
 >...
 
 p19
 >Why...
 >didn't you wait two years?
 
 >Eh?
 >>drip...
 
 >>slice
 
 p20
 >Ow...
 >>flinch
 
 >>drip...
 
 >>...
 
 >>lick
 >...Asuka
 >certainly does
 >look like Atsushi-kun.
 >That goes without saying, right? He's her father.
 >But...
 >Is that really all it is?
 
 p21
->Atsushi-kun is...
+
 >Atsushi-kun was...
 
 >...Eh?
 >What? What do you mean by "two years"...
 >Exactly what it sounds like.
 >How old are you right now?
 
 >I'm... sixteen.
 >That's right.
 >Now answer me this.
->What do you intend to do if things become awkward with Ayako?
+
 >What do you intend to do if things become awkward with Ayako?
 
 p22
 >Being as you are right now,
 >if something like that were to happen,
 >would you be able to take responsibility?
 
 >Th-That's true, but...
 
 >Don't get me wrong, here.
 >I'm not saying this because you're mother and daughter.
->shouldn't be doing it with Ayako.
+
 >shouldn't be doing Ayako.
 >>blush
 
 p23
 >S-
->Stuff like doing it or not doing it...
+
 >Stuff like doing or not doing...
 >>slam
 
 >Quit saying stuff like that!
 >Mom is not just some thing!!
 
 p24
 >Hah
 >Hah
 >H-Huh?
 >Could it be...
 >that's she not just trying to piss me off...
 >...
 
 >Hey.
 >Akira-chan.
 >...What is it?
 
 >Akira-chan, do you...
 >love Mom?
 
 p25
 >For me...
 
 >not even a lifetime would be enough
 >to earn the right to be in love with Ayako.
 
 >I
 >proably
 
 p26
 >don't know a single thing
 >about Akira-chan
 or Mom.
 
 >Eh?
 >You're leaving?
 
 >You don't have to leave so early in the morning...
->Are you saying that everyone will be all lonely without me?
+
 >I was told that everyone will be all lonely without me, so
 
 >I've gotten pretty tired of playing with Asuka too.
 >Ah, crap. It's freezing.
 >...
 
 >...Hey, Akira.
 >I've said this many times before already, but...
 
 p27
 >What happened
 >wasn't your fault.
 
 >I know that!
 
 p28
 >Thanks,
 >Ayako.
 
 >>open
 >I'm home.
 
 >Ah
 >Mom!
 
 >Geez!
 >Where'd you go at this hour?
->There was noone around when I woke up.
+
 >There was no one around when I woke up.
 
 >Huh? Where's Akira-cha...
 
 p30
 >Heh?
 >M-Mom...
 
 p31
->Is it really neccessary for me to know?
+
 >Is it really necessary for me to know?
 
 >>pomf
 >>badum badum badum
 >Right now,
 >Mom is here.
 >That's all I need.
 
 p32
 >...Welcome home,
 >Mom.
 
 >Right now, everything else
 >doesn't
 >even matter.