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 before ;
 
-        note : a letter to me before I read your form?
+        note : im kind of new to this applyfic bandwagon and so im pretty (actually very) sure i might do something wrong. i really love the plot of this story and i hope it ends up successful
 
-        favorite colour : optional , but it would be helpful for something
+        favorite colour : purple
-        (i don't want Black and White to appear here)
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 review ;
 
         username : AExNel
-        username : your wattpad username
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         password : jaeno, renle
-        password : look at the rules
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         slot : carnation
-        slot :
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         backup slot : fuschia
-        backup slot : just in case
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         face claims : @99_0990
-        face claims : i'll help you once the question box is out
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         backup face claim : @kkmmmkk
-        backup face claim : ^
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 basics ;
 
        name : Huang YingYing
-       name : based on the slot
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        other name : n/a
-       other name : if she's mixed
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        age + d.o.b : 21 + 15.01.1997
-       age + d.o.b : stick with the slot
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        nickname (s) : Eagle, YiYi, Small Giant, Squish
-       nickname (s) : optional, but helpful
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        ethnicity : Chinese
-       ethnicity : asian is not an ethnicity, once again, stick with the slot
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        birthplace : Guangzhou, China
-       birthplace : stick to the slot, thank you~
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        hometown : Shanghai, China
-       hometown : ^
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 personal :
 
        personality : YingYing is quiet and observant. She’d rather stay in the shadows listening to others’ conversations than voice out her opinions unless necessary. Though she is the plan maker, she tends to forget about her position at times and let the others take control. Sometimes, it seems that Ying has an alter ego who pops out whenever shes stressed or feeling overworked. It acts like a child and it may be the exist because of her bad childhood (?) YingYing also get some easily attached and would actually die if someone very dear to her would leave her life.
-       personality : help yourself with the
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-       slot description, min, 5 sentences.
+       background : Her parents weren’t one of the nicest people. They’d place their work over their own daughter (since she was the pure age of 6) and mentally abused her. Spitting insults and showing her that she worthed nothing. Then, she received a little brother who was showered with love and happiness which made her blood boil. Each night she’d plan ways to get rid of him so that she could get the same attention. YingYing’s parents had wanted a son ever since they got married and that’s why their son was treated with utmost respect unlike his sister. Ying was on the verge of breaking until she had met her first love in her second year of high school. He was everything she wanted, that was until he opened his mouth and treated her exactly like how her parents did. At first, she didn’t mind it and carelessly threw away her pride and followed him everywhere. Yet her psychotic side has not showed before her heartbreaking rejection and him slowly wakling towards a handsome guy. She couldn’t believe it and nearly killed her first love’s boyfriend but she was caught and handled by officials.
 
-       background : make it interesting, min. 5 sentences.
+       likes :
 - being alone
-       likes : min. 5 - max. 11
+- the darkness
 - anything purple
-       dislikes : ^
+- thinking of happy thoughts
 - planning of ways to escape the asylum
-       habits : min. 2
+- having someone to rely on
 
-       flaws : min. 2
+       dislikes :
 - betrayal
-       hobbies : min. 5
+- spiders
 - the sun
-       special conditions : are the
+- love
-       intolerant/allergic to something?
+- open doors
 - cutting her nails too short
-       trivia : give me fun facts, it can be helpful~
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        habits :
 - dazing off into space
 - cracking knuckles
 - looking into dark spaces
 
        flaws :
 - being quite noisy with her alter ego
-       height : please be realistic
+- breaking things
 - not answering questions
-       weight : ^
+- clean freak
 
        hobbies :
 - planning everyone’s deaths
 - sleeping
 - drawing
 
        special conditions: allergic to ginger and can’t stand alcohol
 
        trivia :
-       love interest : based on the slot
+- won many boxing awards (it helped with her anger)
 - one of her eyes is black whilst the other is a light brown to hazel
-       his first impressions of her : min. 4 sentences
+- wants to live a happy life in Spain after escaping the asylum
 - can speak mandarin, korean, spanish and basic english
-       her first impressions of him : min. 4 sentences
+- has quite a deep voice for a girl ( I get that a lot too so…)
 - wants to adopt a dog since it’s on her bucket list
-       his reactions towards her : min. 3 sentences
+- still wants to say sorry to her first love
 
-       her reactions towards him : min. 3 sentences
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 looks :
 
        height : 159 cm
 
-      closest to : pick a slot + explain
+       weight : 49 kg
 
-      farthest to : pick a slot + explain
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 she looks like a normal college student who’s very short for her age
 
 
 
 
 
 runaway ;
-      extra : did i forgot something? if no, leave blank
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        love interest :jung yoonoh
-      suggested scenes : this is optional, but it's
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-      really recommended and it would help me very much~
+       his first impressions of her : jaehyun actually wishes to know why yingying was even in the asylum the first place. he thought she looked too innocent to be locked up in such a place where cruel people abide in. jae was actually too afraid to approach her at first since she didn’t seem to talk that much and would rather isolate herself than socialise.
 
        her first impressions of him : she didn’t really like him at first. his face and smile reminded her of her first love. she avoided him like the plague and would stick closer to the others than him since her mind was filled with pictures of her love and his lover.
 
        his reactions towards her : once he went up to yingying, she ended up bursting into tears in front of the others and ran away (to isolate herself again). all the other girls got quite mad at jaehyun since it was quite rare for their eldest to show any signs of emotions. he wondered what he did to make her suddenly burst and made it his mission to bring a smile onto ying’s face.
 
        her reactions towards him : as he ended up speaking face to face to her, she ended in tears as it had greatly reminded her of the bad past she had. once in her small confinement, she had ended up breaking everything that was able to be broken and grabbed the hidden phone she brought into the asylum. she stared at the remaining picture she had of her family and her arms ended up with bruises.
 
 
 
 
 
 wanna know ;
 
       closest to : hisbisuc + even though they may seem like they have nothing in common, the both have serious trust issues. yingying doesn’t often talk to her but they’ll always know what the other is thinking of and relate on a serious level sometimes.
 
       farthest to : bergenia + ying is easily scared of her and doesn’t like how bergenia gets easily pissed since she thinks she’ll be hit. also, her alter ego seems to be really loud and yingying had ended up with a hard slap on her cheek.
 though she’s very thankful for all the self sacrifices, ying thinks bergenia should get some anger help.
 
 
 
 
 
 after ;
 
       extra :
 
       suggested scenes : I would actually really like if every character had a background scene and how they ended up in the asylum.
 
       my message to you :
       hello there you precious hooman~ thank you so much for applying
       for this applyfic that might flop~ i wish you good luck to be accepted~
       remember, the more detailed and interesting your character, there is a big
       chance that your form will be accepted~ thank you so much again!