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 To grant everyone's dream!
 
 Producer
 
 (The concept and stage composition that Konomi-san stayed up all night to plan...  It will be presented to us today.)
-(The concept and stage composition that Konomi-san had stayed up all night to plan.... will be present to us today.
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 Producer
 
 (The conclusion that Konomi-san has reached...what will it be, I wonder?)
 
 Konomi
-(The conclusion that Konomi-san had reached...what it will be, I wonder?)
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 Sorry to make you all wait, everyone!  ...and sorry to make you all worry about me, but I'm alright now!
 
 Konomi
 
 Surprise!!  The live composition that include everyone's ideas is complete!
-Sorry to made you all waiting, everyone!  and sorry to made your all worry about me.  but I'm alright now!
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 Mami
 
 Ehh!?  Our ideas...didn't all of those get rejected?
 
 Konomi
 
 It's true that we couldn't use all of those ideas as they were...
 
 Konomi
-Ehh!?  Our idea...  didn't all of those got rejected?
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 But they all have aspects of them that are possible to realize!  ...It took me some time before I could find the common ground though.
 
 Producer
 
 (Konomi-san...that must be very tiring, but she looks so satisfied right now!)
-It's true that we couldn't use all of those idea as it is
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 Konomi
-It's true that we couldn't use all of those ideas as is...
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 First, Minako-chan.
 
 Konomi
-But they all have an aspect of them that is possible to realise!...it took me sometime before I could find the common ground though.
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 While the dinner show is impossible...  How about opening the "Special!  Satake Restaurant!" booth in the shop area instead?
 
 Minako
 
 I see, so I just have to serve food only to anyone that wants is♪
-(Konomi-san...that must be very tiring.  But she look so satisfied right now!)
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 Minoko
 
 Well then, I'll think of a menu that could be easily eaten even in the live hall!  Like a spring roll, or pork buns!
 
 Producer
 
 I see...  Since the fans would burn the calories off during the live for sure, you could put a bit more lard into it!  I'll leave it to you, Minako!
 
 Minako
-While the diner show is impossible...  how about open the "Special! Satake restaurant" booth in the shop area instead?
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 Roger!  I'll be sure to make them extra large calories!
 
 Konomi
 
 Next, about Hinata-chan's idea of "Live with a lot of flowers"...
-I see, So I just have to serve the food only to anyone that want it♪
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 Konomi
 
 We had decided that it will be very difficult to prepare the flowers, right?
 
 Hinata
-Well then, I'll think of menu that could be easily eat even it the live hall!  Like the spring roll, or the pork buns!
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 Yes, that's right, since the real flowers are very expensive... So I've given up.
 
 Konomi
 
 Then, how about instead of real flowers, we let flower shaped confetti fall from above the seats in the audience?
-I see...And since the fans would be burn the calories off during the live for sure, you could put a bit more lard into it!  I'll leave it to you, Minako!
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 Hinata
 
 A flower shaped confetti...?...  Wah~, that would be really beautiful!
 
 Producer
-Roger!  I'll be sure to made them extra large calories!
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 I see...  Since it's paper we don't have to worry about the cost or keeping them fresh, and if we use lots of colors it'd be like a flower field...!
 
 Konomi
 
 ...and since it wouldn't have any smell on its own, I've asked Karen-chan what her recommended aroma is.
-Next,  About Hinata-chan's idea "Live with a lot of flowers"...
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 Hinata
 
 Konomi-san...  Thank you for thinking about my idea so seriously.
 
 Hinata
-We had decide that it will be very difficult to prepare the flowers, right?
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 Confetti with an aromatic smell, I'm sure the fans will be surprised.  It sounds like a really great idea!
 
 Producer
 
 I agree.  it's a nice idea, Konomi-san!
-Yes, that right.  since the real flowers is very expensive...  So I've give up.
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 Konomi
 
 Fufu...that's a leader's job after all♪
 
 Konomi
-Then, how about instead of a real flower, we let a flower shaped confetti fall from above the audience seat?
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 The next is about Iku-chan's proposal, the "live full of animals"...
 
 Konomi
 
 We really couldn't bring animals to the live after all.
 
 Iku
 
 Yeah...  I know...
-I see,  since it's a paper we don't have to worry about the cost or keeping them flesh, and if we use a lot of color it would be like a flower field...!
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 Konomi
 
 But I've an idea...
 
 Konomi
-...and since it wouldn't have any smell on it own, I've ask Karen-chan what her recommended aroma.
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 Doesn't it sound like fun if we talk like animals as a mini-corner in between the songs!?
 
 Konomi
 
 In other words, we will become the animals ourselves!
-Konomi-san...., thank you for thinking about my idea so seriously.
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 Iku
 
 Wah...!
 
 Iku
-A confetti with an aroma smell, I'm sure the fans will be surprised.  It sound like a really great idea!
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 That sounds like it could be fun!  Ehehe, I want to become a cute animal~.  I'm really looking forward to it!
 
 Producer
 
 Me too.
-I'm agree.  It's a nice idea, Konomi-san!
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 Konomi
 
 Ufufu... me as well♪ and about Iku-chan's other idea, "reaching even the audience at the back"...
 
 Konomi
-fufu..that a leader job after all♪
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 I have found a hint about how to realize it from Mami-chan's idea!  That's right, "space"!
 
 Mami
 
 Ehh!?  Konomin, you'll also use Mami's idea too!?
-the next is about Iku-chan's proposal, the " lives full of animal"...
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 Konomi
 
 Of course!  It's an idea from an important member, after all.
 
 Mami
-We really couldn't bring an animal to the live after all.
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 ...Konomin, thank you~!
 
 Mami
 
 But...how would you realize the space idea~?
 
 Konomi
 
 It is with...wire action show!!
 
 Everyone
 
 ...Wire action show~!?
-Isn't sound like fun if we talk like an animal as a mini corner during the song!?
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 Konomi
-Does it sound like fun if we talk like animals as a mini-corner in between the songs!?
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 That's right, we will hang in the air with the wire, and fly around the audience's seats. ...like a space walk!
 
 Producer
-In another word, we will become the animals ourselves!
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 I see, so we could do it that way too!  We could indeed reach even the fans in the back seats like that!
 
 Mami
 
 Uwah~...!  That, that!  That makes Mami really excited~!
 
 Konomi
 
 Fufu!  isn't it, Mami-chan!
-That sound like it could be fun! Ehehe, I want to become a cute animal~.  I'm really look forward to it!
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 Producer
 
 You really did unite all those ideas beautifully.  As expected from you, Konomi-san!
 
 Konomi
 
 This is an adult's leadership!....ufufu.  I'm glad that everyone seems to like it.
 
 Producer
-Ufufu...me as well♪ and about Iku-chan's another idea, "reaching even the audience at the back"...
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 ...Hm, just a minute.  Konomi-san, is this really all of everyone's ideas?
 
 Minako
 
 Ah...!  I...it's true that this plan has everything that we want to do...but isn't it still lacking Konomi-san's wish?
-I have found a hit to realise it from Mami-chan's idea! that right, the "space"!
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 Konomi
 
 Fufu, it's alright, Minako-chan, Producer.  I'm already doing what I want to do.
 
 Konomi
-Ehh!?  Konomin, you also will use Mami's idea too!?
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 What I want to express is the adult me...  In other words, the leadership of an adult!
 
 Everyone
-I'm not sure if stacking "also," with "too," in the same sentence is preferable, but I think, grammatically, it scans just fine.  At 3 AM it just doesn't sound quite right is all.
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 ...The leadership...of an adult...!?
 
 Konomi
-Of course!  It's an idea a from important member after all.
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 To lead everyone and create a live that all could enjoy!  That's what I want to do the most.
 
 Konomi
 
 That's why this is really a live that has all of our dreams in it♪
 
 Producer
 
 (Konomi-san has given us a plan that she could enjoy herself and made all the members shine at the same time.  I'm really sure it'll be a success...!)
-but, how would you realise that space idea~?
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 (Skip to the rehearsal of PSL)
 
 Producer
 
 (Mixnuts is rehearsing for Platinum Star Live right now.  After that day, everyone has been practicing the concept that Konomi-san gave us really hard...)
 
 Mami
 
 Nii-chan!  Mami's rehearsel for the wire action is really fun~!  It's just like being in an amusement park, this looks like it'll become a really exciting live~!!
 
 Producer
 
 That's good!  If you could also enjoy performing it yourself I'm sure this will become a live that all of the fans could enjoy as well!
-That right, we will hang in the air with the wire, and fly around the audience seat.  ...like a space walk!
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 Mami
 
 Really!?  Alright~, Mami will deliver joy to the fans!  Hey, can Mami do the rehearsal one more time~?
 
 Producer
-I see, so we can do it that way too!  we could indeed reach even the fans at the back seat like that!
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 Haha...  I'm glad that you have fun but...  You will have to fly around until you're sick of it at the actual live, so let's not overdo it right now...okay?
 
 Iku
 
 Producer-san!  I'm also enjoying the rehearsal too!
-Uwah~...!  that, that! that make Mami really exited~!
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 Producer
 
 Ohh, Iku.  You don't feel nervous?
 
 Iku
-fufu! Isn't it, Mami-chan!
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 Not at all!  I usually feel really nervous at times like these...but I'm alright today!
 
 Hinata
 
 Me too.  It must be because I'm with everyone today.
-You really did united all those idea beautifully.  As expect from you, Konomi-san!
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 Hinata
 
 When I'm with everyone it make me feel as secure as if I'm with gramps and grams.
-I like sasuga, though.
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 Minako
 
 That's right, I'm also feeling it too♪  I feel like I could do anything if I'm with everyone!
-This is an adult's leadership!...ufufu.  I'm glade that everyone seem to like it.
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 Producer
 
 Everyone...you all are doing good!  I'm sure we will succeed!
 
 Producer
-...Hm, please wait a minute.  Konomi-san, is this really all of everyone's idea?
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 (It seems that everyone's become close with each other during the Platinum Star Live.  ...and it's all because Konomi-san did her best as a leader.)
 
 Konomi
 
 Look, Producer.  Look at the smiles of those kids.  ...just by seeing those smiles, it's made me glad that I'm a leader.
-Ah....!  I..it true that this plan have everything that we want to do...,  but isn't it still lack Konomi-san wish?
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 Producer
 
 ...Konomi-san.  It's still too early to get all sentimental now.
 
 Konomi
-Fufu, It's alright, Minako-chan and Producer.  I'm already did what I want to do.
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 ...I know.  We still have a live to do, after all.  ...but there's nothing we have to worry about.
 
 Producer
 
 Well, that might be true, since everyone looks so confident and don't feel nervous at all.
-What I want to express is the adult me...  in another word, the leadership of an adult!
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 Konomi
 
 That's right.  That's why it'll be alright.  ...Looks like it's time.  Everyone, please gather here!
 
 Konomi
-...The leader ship..of an adult...!?
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 Well...  It's time now.
 
 Konomi
 
 ...I don't have anything special to say here and now, since I'm sure that all of my feelings have already reached everyone.
-To lead everyone and create a live that all could enjoy!  That what I want to do the most.
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 Konomi
 
 ...Producer, don't you have something you want to tell everyone?
 
 Producer
-That why, this is really a live that have all of our dream in it♪
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 ...Yes.  What I want to say is...
 
 Choice
 
 >Have fun with the live
-(Konomi-san have give us a plan that she could enjoy it herself and made all members shine at the same time.  I'm really sure it'll be a success...!)
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 >Have fun with the live
 
 Producer
 
 Have fun with the live!  Today's live is what everyone has created together after all!
 
-(Mixnuts is rehearsal for Platinum Start Live right now.  After that day, everyone had practice the concept that Konomi-san give us really hard...)
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 Of course~!  If we couldn't have fun ourselves there's no way we could entertain all of the nii-chans and nee-chans!
 
 Minako
 
-Nii-chan!  Mami's rehearsal for the wire action is really fun~!  It's just like being in a amusement park, this look like it'll become a really excited live~!!
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 Hinata
 
 If you don't mind, you could also go singing and dancing together with us too.
 
-That good!  if you could also enjoy performing it yourself , I'm sure this will become a live that all of the fans could enjoy it as well!
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 No...I'll have to decline to that...but thank you, everyone.  I'll enjoy the live myself too.  Let's do our best together!
 
 Konomi
 
-Really!?  Alright~, Mami will delivery the joy to the fans!  Hey, can Mami do the rehearsal one more time~?
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 Producer
 
 Roger, and good luck!
 
-Haha...  I'm glade that you have fun but... you will have to fly around until you're sick of it at the actual live, so let don't overdo it right now...okay?
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 (Platinum Star Live 4 has finally begun...!  I believe in Mixnuts and all of its members...!)
 
 
 >feel some pressure
-Producer-san!  I'm also enjoy the rehearsal too!
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 Producer
 
 Looks like everyone is feeling really relaxed right now...but if might be better if you all feel some pressure.  You could do better with a right amount of pressure after all.
 
 Iku
-Ohh, Iku. you don't feel nervous?
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 It's hard to feel pressure all of a sudden though...
 
 Mami
 
 That's right~!  And you always told us to just relax~!
-Not at all!  I usually feel really nervous at these time...  But I'm alright today!
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 Hinata
 
 They said that just imagine the audience as vegetables if you feel nervous.
 
 Hinata
-Me too.  It must because I'm with everyone today.
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 Does that mean...we just have to do the opposite if we want to feel pressured...?
 
 Mami
 
 Hmm!?  Like imagine vegetables as people?
-When I'm with everyone, it's made me feel secure as if I'm with gramps and grams.
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 Mami
 
 ...Uauaa~!  It sounds so gross~!?
 
 Producer
-That right, I'm also feel it too♪ I feel like I could do anything if I'm with everyone!
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 Hmm~...  Not even a shred of pressure...
 
 Minako
 
 But that's what we...the Mixnuts , are, Producer-san♪
-Everyone...you all are doing good!  I'm sure we will be succeed!
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 Producer
 
 Minako...  ...You're right.
 
 Producer
-(It's seem that everyone become close to each other during the Platinum Start Live.  ...and it all because Konmi-san do her best as a leader.)
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 You all are really just fine the way you are right now.  Go and enjoy the Platinum Star Live!
 
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