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-there's a lot in this one.
+second revision pass
 
 Mixnuts E07
 As an adult, as an idol...
 
 Producer
 
 (Konomi-san whose taking a break from Mixnuts' all of a sudden.  she said she is in this rome in our phone call...)
 
 (Konomi-san took a break from Mixnuts lessons all of a sudden...  In the phone call she said she's in this room...)
 
 Producer
 
 (For now, let just take with Konomi-san first)
 
-are you sure this is right?  I don't really understand the sentence but it seems like there's a lot more nuance and words and shit
+(For now, lets just talk with Konomi-san first.)
 
 (Door opening)
 
 Konomi
 
 Hmm~...   If it this composition, I've to find a way to bring everyone's cuteness out more...
 
-Uuuhhhh...  If it's this composition, I have to find a way to bring everyone's cuteness out more...
+Uuu...  If it's in this formation here, I have to find a way to bring everyone's cuteness out more...
 
-isn't there a ここ　in here
+
 
 And here, Mami-chan's main song...
 
 I could use a double check on this one
 
-or something like that
+
 
 (I see... So Konomi-san try to plan live composition all by herself)
 
 Is that so...  Konomi-san is trying to plan the live's composition by herself.)
 
 Producer
 
 (Look like she so concentrated, she didn't even notice me enter the room...)
 
 (It looks like she's so focused she didn't even notice me enter the room...)
 
 Konomi
 
 Then, how about use this song first...hm?
 
 Then...  This song is used first... Hm?
 
 Konomi
 
 ..Wah!...Producer.  When did you get here...?
 
 ...Waa!...  Producer, when did you get here...?
 
 Producer
 
 Just now.  I'm sorry, since you look so concentrated, I'm don't want to disturb you...
 
 Just now.  I'm sorry, since you looked so focused I didn't want to disturb you...
 
 Konomi
 
 No, It's fine.  Anyway...sorry to made you worry.
 
 No, it's fine.  Anyways...sorry for concerning you.
 
-isn't worry only 心配？  google translate doesn't know and neither do I, but I do know enough to know that 気をつかわせて -> "sorry to make you worry," doesn't seem quite...right.  Sorry to make you upset?  Sorry for concerning you?
+I think this is pretty good but a triple or quadruple check or whatever we're on at this point wouldn't hurt.
 
 Producer
 
 ...Since you just disappeared all of a sudden everyone at Mixnuts is worry about you, you know?
 
 Since you just disappeared all of a sudden everyone from Mixnuts is worrying about you, you know?
 
-mfw I can read the entirety of that last sentence, kanji and verb conjugation included.
+
 
 I guess so...  Look like I'm does those kid wrong.*
 
 *Or "Look like I'm own those kid an apologies" if that sound more natural
 
 That might be so...  Looks like I owe those kids an apology.
 
-That might be so...  Looks like I owe them an apology.
+
 
 But we don't have any time now.  ...We can't show the fans everyone's charm like this.
 
 Producer
 
-But there's no longer any time.
+
-OR
+
-But we're out of time
+
-OR
+
-But we don't have any time
+
 
-followed by ...We can't show the fans everyone's charm like this.
+
 
 I apologize, but I thought I had to think about it thoroughly; what kind of live Platinum Star Live should be...
 
 Konomi
 
 As a leader of Mixnuts, and as an adult..., It's my responsibility!
 
 As the leader of Mixnuts, and as an adult...  It's my responsibility!
 
 Producer
 
 Konomi-san...
 
 Producer
 
 (Look like Konomi-san really troubled by it.  Here, I'll..)
 
 (Looks like Konomi-san has been thinking about it hard and still hasn't found a way.  Here...)
 
 Choice
 Let's go drink together
 Let's think together
 
 >Let's go drink together
 
 Producer
 
-google translate thinks that it should be "Konomi's, seems to have gone long languishing" which is also not that correct either, but between the two maybe
+
 
-(Konomi-san has seems to be really suffering from it.  Here...)
+Ne, Konomi-san, would you like to go out for a drink now?  It'll be my treat.
 
 Konomi
 
 ...Eh?
 
 Konomi
 
 W...what did you just say?  I've a duty as a leader... There no way I have anytime for that...
 
 W-what did you just say?  I have a duty as a leader...I don't have any time to drink alcohol...
 
-Ne
+
-OR
+
-Hey
+
 
-I prefer leaving it as ne, but whatever people think is better will be better.
+But there's no way a good idea could come out like this, right?
 
-Konomi-san, would you like to go out for a drink now?  It'll be my treat.
+
 
 never forgot to have fun together with the fans...  Isn't that what we, 765PRO live theater are?
 
 Never forget to have fun together with the fans...  Isn't that what 765PRO live theaters are?
 
 Producer
 
 If you just worry about it like that, there no way you could think of a fun idea!  You have to relax more!
 
 If you just worry about it like that there's no way you could think of a fun idea!  You need to be more relaxed!
 
-She said お酒(I think?  the kanji are tiny, but I definitely heard it) and 飲んで so I think I'm fairly close?
+
 
 E..even so...!  We don't have luxury to just take it easy and talk about relaxing or enjoying...!
 
 E..even so...!  We don't have the luxury to just take it easy and talk about relaxing or having fun...!
 
-I don't know how to interpret the 出 there.
+
 
-But there's no way you could think of a good idea like like this, right?
+
 
 Producer
 
 (Konomi-san really have a strong sense of responsibility...  She worry about about unit's members more than herself...)
 
-Never forget to have fun together with the fans...  Isn't that what 765PRO lives are?
+(Konomi-san truly has a strong sense of responsibility...  She worries about the members more than herself...)
 
-live theaters?  Whichever is most close, I can't read these kanji.
+
 
 It's true that we don't have much time.  but there no use in become desperated.
 
 It's true that we don't have much time, but there's no use in getting desperate.
 
 Konomi
 
-or something like that
+
 
 N..no use?  Are you not worried about those kids, Producer?
 
 Producer
 
 ...Of course, I'm worry about everyone.  But, those girls aren't the only one I'm worry about.
 
 ...Of course, I'm worried about everyone, but those girls aren't the only one I'm worried about.
 
 Producer
 
 ...Konomi-san.  I'm also wish for you to shine on the stage as well.
 
 ...Konomi-san.  I'm also wishing for you to shine on the stage as well.
 
-(Konomi-san truly has a strong sense of responsibility...  She worries about the unit's members more than herself...)
+
 
-I don't see the word unit written as ユニート or anything but that's probably what one of those kanji are right?
+
 
 Producer
 
 It's true that you're a leader, the one who have to take care of everyone, and an adult.  But...
 
 It's true that you're the leader, the one who has to take care of everyone, and an adult.  But...
 
 Producer
 
 To me, you are also one of the important idols that I have to protect at all costs as well!
 
 Konomi
 
 ...one of the idols?
 
 Producer
 
 If an important idol I'm in charge have a troubled against a obstacle...,  even if I can't do anything, at least I want to worry and relax together with them...
 
 If an important idol I'm in charge of has trouble against an obstacle...  Even if there's nothing I can do, at least I want to worry and relax together with them...
 
 Producer
 
 If I can't do even that, I will be a failure as a producer...!
 
 Konomi
 
 Producer...  ...Thank you.
 
 Konomi
 
 I have thought, that as an adult, I've to become someone who everyone can depend on..., that I've to be an adult before idol...
 
 I've thought that, as an adult, I have to become someone who everyone can depend on...  That I have to be an adult before an idol...
 
 Konomi
 
 And Producer is also busy with taking care of the other younger idols...
 
 Konomi
 
 I thought that, as an adult, at least I've to lead everyone by myself...
 
 I thought that as an adult I had to lead everyone by myself...
 
 Producer
 
 Konomi-san...
 
 Konomi
 
 But...I see.  To you, I'm also an idol like those kids...
 
 Producer
 
 Of course...!  I'm 765Pro theater's Mixnuts'..., and an idol Baba Konomi's producer after all!
 
 Yes.  I'm 765PRO theater's, Mixnuts'... and idol Baba Konomi's producer after all!
 
 Konomi
 
 ...Then, c..can I also depend on you, or show my weaker side to you...?
 
 ...Then, can I also depend on you, or show my weaker side to you...?
 
-And Producer is also busy with taking care of other younger idols...
+
 
 Of course!  You don't have to worry about being the oldest, please rely on me anytime you want.
 
 Producer
 
-I thought that as an adult I have to lead everyone by myself...
+
 
-I think?  I don't know, something doesn't seem like it quite lines up.
+
 
 Konomi
 
 ...Producer, Thank you.
 
 ...Producer, thank you truly.
 
 Konomi
 
 ...I'll pretend I didn't hear you almost say "small".
 
 Producer
 
 Uh...so you hear it...
 
 Uuu...so you heard it...
 
 Konomi
 
 ...But for this time, I want to think about it all by myself.  No matter what.
 
 ...But, still, this time, I want to think about it by myself.  No matter what.
 
 Producer
 
 Konomi-san...you don't have to holding back, you know!?
 
 Konomi-san...you don't have to hold back, you know!?
 
 Konomi
 
 It's alright, I didn't holding back.  It's just that...
 
 It's alright, I'm not holding back.  It's just that...
 
 Konomi
 
 I thought that the one who know the best about what kind of unit Mixnuts is, and what kind of stage they want to make, is me.
 
 I thought that the one who knows the best about what kind of unit Mixnuts, and what kind of stage they want to make, is me.
 
 Producer
 
 ...Konomi-san.
 
 Konomi
 
 ...It's alright!  Since while it might be tiring to be serious with those kids, It's also fun.
 
 ...It's fine!  Since while it might be tiring to be serious with those kids, it's also really fun!
 
 Producer
 
 ...Understood.  If you really sure about that, Then...I'll believe in you.
 
 ...Understood.  If that's Konomi-san's word, then...  I will believe in you.
 
 Konomi
 
 Just leave it to me!  Fufu, I've someone to depend on...  Just by knowing that, My heart is feel so much lighter♪
 
 Yes, leave it to me!  Fufu, I have someone to depend on...  Just knowing that my heart is feeling so much lighter♪
 
 Konomi
 
 I'll be sure to depend on you when I'm really can't do it all alone.
 
 I will rely on you when the time comes that I can't do it alone, ok?
 
 Producer
 
 That what I'm here for after all.  I'll help you anytime so please don't worry about anything and just think.
 
 That's what I'm here for after all.  I'll help anytime, so please don't worry about anything and just think.
 
 Producer
 
 ...Then, I'll return to Mami and everyone now.
 
 (Door open)
 
 Producer
 
 ...Hm?  There is a plastic bag hanging at the door knob.  It's not there when I'm arrive here...  What in it?
 
 ...Hn?  There's a plastic bag hanging on the door knob.  It wasn't there when I arrived here...  What's in it?
 
 Producer
 
 ..............
 
 Konomi
 
 Producer?  what wrong...?
 
 Producer?  What's going on?
 
-I will rely on you when the time comes I can't do it alone, ok?
+
 
-I could use a double check but I think that's what the the ね？ and stuff are.
+
 
 ...Konomi-san, it looks like I'm not the only one who wants to support you.  Here.
 
 Konomi
 
 What is this?  ...a snack, a bento, an apple, a drink...even a side dish.
 
 What is this?  ...A snack, a bento, an apple, a drink... even a side dish.
 
 Konomi
 
 and, is this...a letter?  but from whom...?
 
 And...what's this...a letter?  but from whom..?
 
 Mami
 
 It's lonely here without Konomin~!  Mami have thought about a lot of prank that can cheer Konomin up~,  so hurry up and return here.  Mami really love Konomin!
 
 It's lonely here without Konomin~!  Mami has thought about a lot of pranks that can cheer Konomim up~ so hurry and return here.  Mami really loves Konomin!
 
 Hinata
 
 Konomi-san,  I'm sorry that I've troubled you a lot.  I'll give an apple from gramps' farm, so that you won't overdo it and catch a cold.
 
 Konomi-san I'm sorry that I've troubled you a lot.  I'll give you an apple from gramp's farm so that you won't overdo it and catch a cold.
 
 Minako
 
 We always helped by Konomi-san who good at taking care of everyone!  If you want to use the home delivery service just give Satake restaurant a call!  We will delivery it to you free of charge~♪
 
 We're always helped by Konomi-san who's good at taking care of everyone!  If you want to use the home delivery service just give Satake restaurant a call!  We'll deliver it to you free of charge~♪
 
 Iku
 
 Even though we have the same height, I'm respect an adult Konomi-san!  When I'm grow up, I want to be like Konomi-san!
 
 Even though we're the same height, I respect adult Konomi-san!  When I grow up I want to be like Konomi-san!
 
 Konomi
 
 ...everyone...*sob*...  ...Ufufu...Thank you!
 
 ...Everyone... *sniff/sob sound* ...Ufufu...thank you!
 
 Konomi
 
 Alright!  I'm feel really great now!  Well then!  big sis will give it her all now~!
 
 Ok!  I feel really great now!  Let's go!  Big sister will give it her all now~!
 
-It's lonely here without Konomin~!  Mami has thought about a lot of pranks that can cheer Konomim up~ so hurry and return here.  Mami loves Konomin a lot?
+
 
-Really loves Konomin?  I don't know what that のこと does to the sentence.
+
 
 (Looks like Konomi-san is feeling better now, that's a relief.  Let's just leave silently now, so that I don't disturb her...)
 
 Producer
 
 (Me, and all members of Mixnuts are believe in Konomi-san...  Konomi-san, please do your best...!)
 
 (Me, and all the members of Mixnuts, are believing in you Konomi-san...  Konomi-san, please do your best...!)
 
 >Let's think together
 
 Producer
 
 Konomi-san,  can I think about the live composition together with you?
 
 Konomi-san, can I think about the live's composition together with you?
 
 Konomi
 
 ...Thank you, Producer.  But it's alright.  You have more important work to do, right?
 
 ...Thank you, Producer, but it's fine.  You have more important work to do, right?
 
 Konomi
 
 I've heard from Kotori-chan.  because we couldn't decide on our concept, the paper work for Platinum Star Live is falling behind the schedule...
 
 I heard it from Kotori-chan.  The paperwork for Platinum Star Live is falling behind schedule because we can't decide on our concept...
 
 Producer
 
 Uuh...!  I..It's true that I have a lot of important works to do...
 
 Uuu...!  I...it's true that I have a lot of important work to do...
 
 Konomi
 
 Right?  I will be fine on my own.  I'm a leader after all.  I can handle this much!
 
 Right?  I'll be fine by myself.  I'm the leader after all.  I can handle this much!
 
 Producer
 
 ...About the other works, we have Otonashi-san and the president so we will manage it somehow.  Ritsuko will also help us too.
 
 ...About the other work, we have Otonashi-san and the president so we will manage somehow.  Ritsuko will also help us.
 
 Producer
 
 But even more important than that...
 
 Producer
 
 Right now, I've a work I must do as an producer.  It's to support a troubled idol in front of me...to support Konomi-san with all my might!
 
 Right now, I have work I must do as a producer.  It's to support the troubled idol in front of me...to support Konomi-san with all my might!
 
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