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 Title:Chi-chan & Suzuno no Mousou Kanetsuchuu!
 
 
 
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 1. I'm home.
 
 2. Sorry for the intrusion.
 
 3. Oh, Chiho-dono.
 
 4. Welcome back, your majesty.
 
 5. Hey, hey, how do I make Karaage? How do I make Karaage?
 
 6. ...Uh, // Huh? Suzuno-san?
 
 7. Y-you were really here.
 
 8. I am, but... is something wrong?
 
 9. N-no.
 
 
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 1. Sorry we're always bothering you, Suzuno.
 
 2. Always?
 
 3. Hmm?
 
 4. Umm... // Suzuno-san, come here for a bit...
 
 5. Uh... Okay.
 
 6. I wonder what happened?
 
 7. Su-Suzuno-san!
 
 8. D-don't you think you're being too careless? // Coming to a house with three men, all by yourself.
 
 9. But Chiho-dono is here too, right?
 
 10. Ah... // Uu...
 
 11. Well, it's true that I have celestial force, but he is the devil, after all.
 
 12. Now, I got used to it, but at first... I was...
 
 
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 1. I was prepared to be toyed around with when they found out.
 
 2. Toyed around!
 
 3. Mm! // Mmph!
 
 4. Mmph!
 
 5. No! // Mmph!
 
 6. Su-Su-Su-Suzuno-san, // the Kanji for that word has a woman in between two men, you know.
 TL note. 男=Man 女=Woman 嬲=Kanji in question.
 
 7. I know, but what are you trying to say?
 
 
 
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-1. I-I can't believe she came here being prepared for something like that! // I-I understand how she thought they were enemies who would do terrible things at first, but still.
+1. I-I can't believe she came here prepared for something like that! // I-I understand that she thought they were enemies who would do terrible things at first, but still.
 
 2. Uu!
 
 3. S-stop...
 
 4. Stop!
 
 5. That means... something like this.
 
 6. Please make sure to // entertain us from now on.
 
 7. Nguh! // Ngh!
 
 8. T-there's no way, but still.
 
 9. You-you know? H- huh?
 
 10. Huuuuh?
 
 11. I wonder what's going on in Chiho-dono's imagination?
 
 
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 1. But... Suzuno-san told me that... she's been through countless wars.
 
 2. I can't hold back anymore.
 
 3. Mm! // Mmbhu!
 
 4. Mmmph!!
 
 5. Maybe she experienced something like that, // and expected Maou-san and the others to be like that.
 
 6. Ah! Urushihara, you bastard!
 
 7. Mph! // Mmph!
 
 8. It's fine, isn't it? We got all the time in the world.
 
 9. Could they be...
 
 10. Mph! // Mph!
 
 11. Mmph!
 
 12. You're... God damn it...
 
 13. Mph!
 
 14. forcing her to...
 
 15. Are you feeling good already?
 
 16. Mmbhu!
 
 17. You're twitching every time I poke you a little.
 
 18. Mmph!
 
 19. Mbhu! Mph! // Mmph!
 
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 1. do all sorts of things?
 
 2. Ah!♥
 
 3. Ah! Ah!♥
 
 4. No more!♥ Ah! Aah! // Stop poking- Aah! Aah!♥
 
 5. Come on, Suzuno-san, your mouth is empty. // That's no good. Well then, I'll be using this side...
 
 6. Oh? Are you cumming?
 
 7. Huh? What are you...
 
 8. Things that I don't know // and can't even imagine
 
 9. N-no way...
 
 10. within this old apartment?
 
 11. Aaaah!
 
 12. It's-it's coming- // Aah! Ah!
 
 13. Oh, // she's squeezing so hard.
 
 14. Nooo!
 
 15. Ah!♥
 
 16. This side is very tight as well.
 
 17. Does that feel good? Your voice changed, you know?
 
 18. Ah!♥ Aah!♥
 
 19. Ah!♥ Ah!♥ Ah!
 
 
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 1. Well... There's absolutely no way // that could be true, but still...
 
-2. Ah!♥ Aaah!♥ // I'm getting so full!♥♥ Ah! Aah!♥
+2. Ah!♥ Aaah!♥ // I'm filled up!♥♥ Ah! Aah!♥
 
 3. Hey, hey, you'll be coming tomorrow too, right?
 
 4. Ah~♥
 
 5. We'll give you all sorts of training.
 
 6. Ah!♥ Ah~~~!♥
 
 7. We'll toy with you a lot again.
 
 8. But... // I can't believe she went as far as being mentally prepared for something like that.
 
 9. ?
 
-10. Cooking. Courage. I feel like I lost to her in so many different levels.
+10. Cooking. Courage. I feel like I lost to her on so many different levels.
 
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 1. Ah... but still,
 
 2. if it's about becoming Maou-san's Dutch wife... // then...
 
 3. What? // Dutch wife?
 
 4. Ma- // Maou-san
 
 5. Even I can do-
 
 6. Ah! // No! Please wait a-
 
 7. all sorts of things, if it's for Maou-san...
 
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 1. Maou-san, // like this?
 
 2. Okay... Use my mouth even more, right?
 
-3. Doing anything he tells me to do...
+3. Doing everything he tells me to do...
 
 4. L-like this?
 
 5. Ah... // Maou-san.
 
 6. And...
 
 7. I can take whatever he wants to do to me...
 
 8. Mmph!
 
 9. Uh! Mph! // Ah! Ah!
 
 10. Ah!
 
 11. ...as well.
 
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 1. Ah!♥
 
 2. Well, I'd be a dutch wife,
 
 3. Fuaah! // Ah!
 
 4. Ahng!♥
 
 5. so I'm sure he'll be rough with me. // He'll be forceful, as if he's raping me...
 
 6. You're too rough! // Aah!
 
 7. Ah!♥ // Ah!♥
 
 8. Aah!♥
 
 9. Aaah!♥
 
 10. as if he's trying to get me pregnant...
 
 11. Fuah! It's coming-!♥
 
 12. Ah! Ah...♥ // Aah~~!♥
 
 13. -Dono. // Chiho-dono.
 
 14. Chiho-dono.
 
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 1. Ah! I'm sorry, Suzuno-san.
 
 2. Aah, I'm so relieved. I was wondering what you were thinking about... // ...Hmm? Dutch wife? Toyed around?
 
 3. Toyed around!
 
 4. Wha... // W-w-wha...
 
 5. Wha...
 
 6. What are you thinking of! // Who the heck is a dutch wife! Who the heck is getting toyed around! I-I've never been through such-
 
 7. B-but that's because you said something like toying around out of the blue!
 
 8. E-even then, that's preposterous
 
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 1. H-hey, // why don't you stop arguing and come back inside already?
 
 2. Ah! // Maou-san!
 
 3. A-also, // I wouldn't... do such a thing, so...
 
 4. BL. Ah...
 
 5. BL. Ah...
 
 6. BL. Well... that's true...
 
 7. Y-y-y-y-you see, Maou-san, // you got this all wrong. She said, umm...
 
 8. T-t-toying around, or something out of the blue, and...
 
 9. I-I didn't say that in that kind of context!
 
 10. Yeah, yeah, I get it. Just come back inside.
 
 
 
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 Afterword
 
 Thank you so much for picking up this book.
 This book is about Chi-chan and her delusions.
 
 I enjoyed anime regardless of what happened.
 There's no way those three would do something like this, and Chi-chan wouldn't think about something like this, but this is a doujinshi, so it's fine...right?
 
 Sumiya