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 Neue Green Chapter 15:
 
-Note: As always, I kept honorifics due to consistency with the previous chapters, though I am not a
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 1-0 (left part) You've been completely tamed, Ryou-kun
-fan of them. Additionally, English is not my first language. Feel free to correct inconsistencies or
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 1-2 Ryou, we got good news
-phrasing that sounds "iffy"
+1-3 You've been chosen to be regular character in a drama series
 	There's talks to make you a heroine in primetime show
-Notes about this chapter:
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-Most of it is straightforward. I have added alternatives as always where I am unsure. As for Azusa,
+1-5 Yeah, we've received two offers to do a commercial and
 	there's already a photoshoot planned
-I was unsure how her verbal ticks tend to be translated.
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-I'd appreciate some proofread.
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 1-8 No, wait.
 1-9 Prez!
 1-10 I have something important to talk with you about!
 
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-1-3 You've been chosen to be regular character in a drama (series)!
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-	There's talks to make you a heroine in "月9" show (Getsuku? Gekku? Moon 9? Primetime?
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-http://wiki.d-addicts.com/Getsuku_%28Fuji_TV%29 It seems to be a sort of prime time (Mondays at 9pm)
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 3-1 No No No! No way!
-for Japanese Drama but I wonder if it means something different within im@s, can someone check?
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 3-3 Are you serious about giving up on being a girl?
-Otherwise, I'd personally suggest "Primetime" or "Monday Primetime")
+	You're absolutely dead serious?
 3-4 Of course!
-1-5 Yeah, we've receive two offers to do a commercial and
+3-5 W-Why... You're already a top idol, aren't you!?
 3-6 But you specifically promised me that if I could become a top idol
 	You'd allow me to redebut as a guy, did you not?
 3-7 Ugh...
 
 Proofreader's note: There seems to be dialogue missing from this page? Bottom two panels seem to be missing?
-1-10 I have something important to talk with you!
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 4-1 But think of the fans. They have all created several layers of delusion based on you.
 4-2 Like the Little Sister
 4-3 Good daughter
 4-4 A nice girlfriend to be engaged with!
 4-5 That's the way your male fans think of you!
 4-6 (Ryou shouting) Kyaho!/Yahoo!
 4-7 Your sister is now a brother!
 4-8 Your daughter turned out to be a son!
-	You absolutely dead serious?
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 4-10 Your relationship has completely changed into something perverted!
-3-5 W-Why... You are already a top idol, aren't you!?
+4-11 The fallout would leave so many people suffering, with it affecting their work and studies...
-3-6 Yet you specifically promised me that if I could become a top idol
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-	You'd allow to have a debut as a male, did you not?
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 5-1 (outside) The effects on Japan would be...
 5-2 Now you are exaggerating
-4-1 But think of the fans. They all have created several layers of delusion based on you.
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 	With your influence right now, it could become that big of a deal!
 5-4 Please don't do anything stupid without thinking it through!!
 5-5 You have always been a female idol
 5-6 You should just continue to give people hope as one
 
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 6-1 NO WAY!!
 6-2 I understand what you mean but
 6-3 But I have my own dreams that I want to fulfill!
-4-11 The fallout would leave so many people suffering with it affecting their productivity on their
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 6-5 Everyone told me "you're just like a girl" all the time
-jobs, studies...
+6-6 Nobody would ever seriously treat me like a guy...
 
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 7-1 "But if I were to become an idol
 7-2 Even someone like myself should be able to become manly", or so I thought.
 7-3 And I still want to become the person I aimed to become.
 7-4 It's not that I'm ungrateful towards the fans who allowed me to come so far
-	With your influence right now, it could become that much of a deal!
+	And I know they might feel betrayed if I stop acting as a girl.
 7-5 Even so I want a chance!
 7-6 Just once, I want to have the chance to become who I always wanted to be!
 
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 8-1 If you still refuse
-6-1 NEVER/NO WAY!!
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 8-3 ...
 8-4 Understood.
 8-5 If that's how it is, I want you to show me one last thing.
 8-6 "Akizuki Ryou"... Show me that the development of your female idol persona's "Charm" has finished
-6-6 Nobody would ever seriously treat like a guy...
+8-7 If you manage to pass the next audition I will seriously consider giving you the opportunity to debut as a male idol.
 
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 9-1 For real!?
 9-2 Yeah
-7-3 And I still want to become the person I strived to be.
+	Although it's an audition that gives us no advantage and I had no intention of actually accepting it
-7-4 It's not that I am not grateful for the fans who allowed me to come so far
+9-3 It will be your final obstacle, so I have no objections.
-	And I know they might feel it as a betrayal if I stopped acting as a girl.
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-7-5 Even so I want get a chance!
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 9-5 If you are able to do this, then I will reluctantly concede
 9-6 Please have no hard feelings if you end up losing.
 9-7 It won't come to that.
 9-8 Prez, I...
 9-9 am really really glad that I started working here!
 
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 10-1 Wha- Why did you suddenly
-8-6 "Akizuki Ryou"... Show me that development of your female idol persona's "Charm" is finished
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-8-7 If you manage to pass the next audition I will seriously consider giving you the opportunity to
+10-3 Well, we didn't know if it would really work out
 10-4 I am also glad that we stumbled across an idol such as you.
-debut as a male idol.
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 10-6 Right!
 10-7 Music coming in 3, 2,
 10-8 Right
 10-9 You are listening to Yayoi Takatsuki-san's "Shiroi Inu" on "Ryou Akizuki's News"
-	While it is an audition that gives us no advantadge I had no intention to actually accept
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+11-1 A big welcome to our guest Azusa Miura-san
-9-3 It should be your final rival, so I have no objections.
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 11-3 "Shiroi Inu" is such a cute song, don't you agree?
 	I absolutely love it
-9-5 If you are able to do that I will reluctantly concede
+11-4 Ufufu, I actually also really like it and let Yayoi-chan sing it to me.
-9-6 Please have no hard feelings if you end losing.
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 11-6 Aah speaking of which, Azusa-san, I have heard that you actually really love dogs, but I wonder
 11-7 What kind of dog race do you like?
-9-9 am really really glad I started working here!
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 11-9 She's an accomplished and recognized top idol.
 11-10 As far as female idols go,
 	no, rather
 11-11 As far as women in general go, this person has an outstanding charm to her, one you don't normally see in idols.
-10-3 Well, we did not know if it would fail ahead of time
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 12-1 If you are able to surpass this girl, then
 12-2 Ryou-chan?
 12-3 Ah...
 12-4 We are already live again, so please don't end up daydreaming.
-10-9 You are listening to Yayoi Akitsuki-san "White dog/Shiroi Inu" on
+12-5 Awawa! That's not it!
-	"Ryou Akizuki's news" (actually, seems to be a pun on his name, lit. "Cool Moon News")
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 12-7 Is that so?
 12-8 Well, Inumi-chan is pretty amazing as far Hibiki-chan's animals go
-11-1 A big welcome to our guest is Azusa Miura-san
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 12-10 A kid can just get on him and ride away.
-11-3 "Shiroi Inu" sure is a cute song, don't you agree?
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 12-12 Great job, everyone.
-11-4 Uhuhu, I actually also really like it and let Yayoi-chan sing it to me.
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-11-6 Aah speaking of, Azusa-san, I have heard that you actually really love dogs but I wonder
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 13-2 Yeah, when I was first brought here
 	I immediately thought that I'd become a repeat customer
 13-3 Oh right, Azusa-san, you recently saw Yumeko-chan.
 	How was it? How is she...
 13-4 Same as ever, she was still in low spirits
-11-11 As far a women in general go, this person has an outstanding charm to her, one you don't
+	She is also refusing meals nor saying anything other than
 13-5 "My dream is dead"
-normally see in idols.
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 13-7 Umm
 13-8 Azusa-san, do you have a "dream"?
 
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 14-1 A dream?
-12-4 We are already live again, so please do not just suddenly daze off.
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-12-5 Awawa! That was not it!
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 14-3 Like the reason you became an idol to begin with
 14-4 Yeah
-12-8 Well, Inumi-chan is pretty amazing as far Kyou-chan's animals go (Can someone check this phrase
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 14-6 If...!
-again?)
+	If you had to sacrifice everything you already achieved in order to reach that dream, would you still...
 14-7 Do you believe one could still fulfill it?
-12-10 A kid can just get on him and ride on him.
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 14-9 However
 14-10 I believe that it is possible to fulfill it
 
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 15-1 My dream, is something I would not exchange for anything in the world, no matter how important.
 15-2 The truth is, today's audition was just one step towards achieving that dream
 15-3 What?
-13-3 Ah right, Azusa-san, you recently met Yumeko-chan.
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 	But even so, if I just stopped I would not be able to change anything.
 15-5 So in order to gather the courage I need to fulfill the promise I made to a certain person
-	She is also refusing meals nor saying anything but
+15-6 I tell myself "If I am able to pass the next audition...
-13-5 "My dream is dead/extinguished"
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 15-8 That's...
-13-7 Uhm
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 16-1 I also...
 16-2 I also intend to take on my dream in the next audition
 16-3 Is that so
 16-4 Ryou-chan, you also have a dream dear to you?
 16-5 Yes,
-14-3 Like the a reason you became an idol to begin with
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 16-6 Azusa-san, I know we are here as rivals
 16-7 I really want you to give it your all.
 16-8 I entrust these feelings to you!
-	If you had to sacrifice everything you have achieved to achieve that dream, would you still.
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-14-7 Do you believe once could still fulfill it?
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 17-1 Yeah, I expect the same from you.
 17-2 Let's give it our best.
 17-3 Yes
 17-4 For the sake of our dreams
 17-5 (small) Mine's just juice though.
 
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 18-1 Welcome to the Road to TOP IDOL Auditions
 
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-15-5 so in order to gather the courage I need to fulfill the promise I did to a certain person
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-15-6 I tell myself "If I am able to pass the next Audition...
+19-2 And for my own dream, I will challenge Azusa-san in this audition
 19-3 Even if that means
-15-8 That's about it...
+19-4 That one last time
 19-5 I have to get
 19-6 on stage and become
 
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 20-1 The perfect girl
 
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 23-1 Seems his emotions won him this one
 23-2 This kid has matured in so many ways.
 23-3 Hoho
-16-8 I entrust these feelings to you! (literally he's just saying "Pleased to meet you" but you get
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 23-4 For his manager to put forth any objections.
-the idea in context)
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 24-1 Ryou-chan, congratulations!
 24-2 Ah!
-17-2 Let's give our best.
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 24-3 You were really cute and magnificent
 24-4 Ah...
 	Thank you very much!
 24-5 Azusa-san...
 	could it be that you...
-18-1 Welcome to the "Rord to Top Idol" auditions (probably meant to mean "Road to"
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 24-7 I actually became afraid
 24-8 Both of what would happen if I won, or what would happen if I didn't.
 24-9 It's quite troublesome you know. Every time it really counts, I cannot gather my courage.
-19-2 And my own dream, I will challenge Azusa-san in this audition
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-19-4 That for one last time
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 25-2 Ryou-chan
 25-3 I entrust Yumeko-chan's troubles to you.
 25-4 Huh?
 
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 26-0 (right part) For my dream I'll go anywhere! As long as I have my dream, I can do anything!
 26-1 Right!
 26-2 Just take it to its final conclusion
 26-3 Though it's not like there is anything that could stop you, ain't that right?
 26-4 Akizuki Ryou-kun
 	How far are you willing to go?