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 1 x 1/2 ch3
 
 p2
 >Just when was it that my definition of "like" changed?
 
 >>light up
 >>X Month X Day Thursday
 
 >Asuka~ You awake yet?
 >Asuka~
 >Fwah...
 >>beep beep
 
 p3
 >Mornin', Mom...
 >>sleepy sleepy
 
 >Good morning.
 
 >Hurry up and wash your face.
 >Your breakfast is gonna get cold.
 >Mm...
 
 >>squirt
 
 >>spaced out
 
 >>brush brush brush brush brush
 >>High - Consciousness level - Low
 
 p4
 >....
 >>gloom
 >...Ah.
 >Remembered.
 
 >Eh...? Hold on a minute. Just what was I doing...??
->It's not a matter of impulse or whatever... What am I supposed to do if she founds out...?
+>It's not a matter of impulse or whatever... What am I supposed to do if she finds out...?
 >>What happened last time.
 >It's long past the point of just being awkward. At the worst, I might get disowned...
 
 >Mama, kiss~
 >Again?
 >B-But... Maybe just a kiss on its own is unexpectedly safe...?
->I used to do it a lot when I was little.
+>I used to do it a lot when I was little!
 >Hah
 
 >Like hell it is! I'm a high schooler already...!!
 >That's a straight-up out!!
 >>peek
 >How long does it take you to wash your face?
 
 >!!?? S-S-S-Sorry, I won't do it again!
 >>Flinch
 >?
 >Just don't
 >disown me!!
 >Is she still half-asleep...?
 
 p5
 >...I-It'll be fine...
 >Mom probably didn't even notice it...
 >Just act like normal!
 >>badum badum badum
 >It seems my "like" for Mom is closer to what you'd call "romantic affection".
 
 >Of course, Mom doesn't know anything about that.
 >Even I wouldn't just push my unreasonable feelings onto her to the point of destroying our current relationship.
 
 >However...
 >>glance
 
 p6
->My desire the keeps growing stronger every day,
+>My desire that keeps growing stronger every day,
 
->both materially
+>both physically
->and emotionally.
+>and emotionally
 
 >is soon approaching its limit.
 >>turned on
 >...
->Just why does she have to look so sexy every single day...?
+>Just why does she have to look so sexy every single morning...?
 >Puberty is really tough...
 
 >You got your lunch?
 >Yeah.
 >Bus pass?
 >Got it.
 >I'm going to be late again today.
 >Dinner's in the fridge.
 >Roger.
 >>step step
 
 >...U-Um.
 >Mom.
 >Hm?
 
 p7
 >A-
 >Am I cute?
 
 >>chuckle
 
 p8
 >Yup!
->You're very cute today!
+>You're very cute today too!
 >>pat pat
 >You're my daughter, after all!
 
 >...Oh?
 
 >Asuka... You put some make-up on, didn't you?
 >You're still too young for that.
 >>flinch
 >>touch
 >!!
 
 >...It's just a little bit!!
 >I'm heading off!
 >Okay.
 >Take care.
 >>slam
 
 >That Asuka...
 >>shhhh
 
->She's been acting a lot more girly recently...
+>Suddenly she's been acting a lot more girly recently...(Recently she became a lot more girly all of a sudden)
 >>clang clang
 >I wonder if she's found someone she likes?
 >Fufu
 
 
 p9
 >Ayako.
 
 >It's been a while since I've had a weird dream like that...
 >But why was he wearing Asuka's tracksuit?
 
 p10
 >....So?
 >How'd it go yesterday?
 
 >Don't give me that "what are you talking about?" look.
 >>munch munch
->I know you're lying.
+
 >I knew you were lying.
 >Yeah yeah, whatever.
 >I don't intend to pry, but you should treasure your friends more, y'know?
 >Wanna go to karaoke next Sunday?
 >It's free!!
 >Ah, sorry. Next weekend I'm...
 
 >with mom...
 >>Harmonized
 
->Your mom again!? Every time you open your mouth it's mom this and mom that. Just what are you to Asako-san anyway!!?
+
->I'm her daughter!! Also don't call her by her first name! Even I don't call her like that!!
+>Your mom again!? Every time you open your mouth it's mom this and mom that. Just what are you to Ayako-san anyway!!?
 >I'm her daughter!! Also don't call her by first name! Even I don't call her like that!!
 >I'm telling you that way of thinking you have is gross, you damn mothercon!!
 >I'm not a mothercon!!
 >>mutter mutter
 
 >>hah hah hah hah
 >...
 
 >...I guess?
 
 >Yours is a fatherless household, after all.
 >I understand that it's a bit different from the usual.
 >But y'know...
 
 >It's still worrisome that a daughter is that clingy with her mother.
 >It's about time you started thinking about becoming independent, don't you think?
 >Mizuno-san.
 
 p12
 >There's something I need to discuss about our earlier conversation...
 >Do you have a moment?
 >>clatter
->I'll just be a bit.
+
 >I'll be away for a bit.
 
 >...
 
 >Become independent...
 >huh...
 
 >Huh?
 
 p13
 >You want us to sleep together...?
 >How old are you...?
->...I-It's fine once in a while, isn't it!? It's beautiful skinship between mother and daughter!!
+
 >...I-It's fine once in a while, isn't it!? It's a beautiful skinship between mother and daughter!!
->A high school daughter and her mother would be a bit more dry, wouldn't it...
+
 >A relationship between high school daughter and her mother should be a bit more dry, shouldn't it...
 
 >Anyway, I'm sleeping here tonight!
 >I've already decided!
 >>dash
 >Ah, wait! Asuka!
 
 >>silence
 
 >>woosh
 >>peek peek
 
 >Phew...
 >...
 
 >Alright, then... Just for tonight, okay?
 >>shine
 
 
 p14
 >I wonder why she's acting like such a spoiled child...
 >Maybe I raised her the wrong way...
 
 >...Ah, oh yeah. Hey, Mom.
 >?
 >I want you to do that thing you always used to do!
->No, that's a bit embarrassing to do it now.
+
 >No, that's a bit embarrassing to do now.
 >You're not a kid anymore.
 >Eh~
 >Cheapskate.
 
 >Come on.
 >You've got school tomorrow.
 >Go to sleep.
 
 >Okaay.
 
 >The "like" I feel towards Mom is a little different from other people.
 
 p15
->saying that they way I "like" Mom, as a mother, has disappeared or something
+
 >saying that the way I "like" Mom, as a mother, has disappeared or something
 >isn't really accurate.
 
 >That's why I have to become more independent.
 >I can't just act so spoiled all the time.
 >I know that very well.
 >But...
 
 >What about the other half of my feelings?
 >Good night,
 >Mom.
 >Just what am I supposed to do
 >with those feelings?
 
 p16
 >I don't know.
 
 >Good night,
 >Asuka.
 >>blush
 >Mom.
 >...
 
 >>be-be-beep be-be-beep be-be-beep
 
 p17
 >>click
 
 >Mm...
 
 >>tug
 
 >>snooze
 
 p18
 >...
 >I should also
 >>click click click
->>kiss...
+
 >>squeeze...
 >learn to let go of my child...
 >pretty soon...