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-MONSTER HUNTER: Your character is just now discovering that they are qualified (and forced into) a secret society based around hunting monsters! Good for you.
+Name: Juviale Zeal
 
 Age: 16
-Name: Your name
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 Appearance: He stands at 5'4, having black hair and dark brown eyes. Along with this, his skin is actually rather dark, just bordering on making him look mexican. He also has a scar along his right hand, the result of a failed trap training with his father.
-Age: The universal age for a monster hunter to learn of their fate is 16.
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 Personality: He's actually rather intelligent, thinking things out before he acts. This, however, can be a bad trait if he's in the heat of battle or something and he has to do split-second decisions. However, if someone is in danger, he will act on instinct to protect them.
-Appearance: self-explanatory.
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 Which member of your family is in the society: His father was the one in the society. Along with this, he had an older brother go into the society. However, nobody talks about him because he disappeared one day, and he has not returned yet. However, his mission was declared a success...and nobody declared him dead. Anyways, about his father.
-Personality: So I know what I'm dealing with and won't kill myself.
+His father pressed hard on him, pushing him to learn more, get better, etc. His father, in the society, is an advanced trapper, and can, off the top of his head, recite most forms of traps used, as well as most trapping items, and most monsters. He drove his son to be the same, causing Juviale to develop an inferiority complex. This, however, just drove Juviale to do better, break that streak of inferiority to others. His father would have given him some basic trapping materials, along with two special trapping objects(idk if this is k but here). Along with this, he would have given him some kind of large gun, and some moderate-sized melee weapon, in case things got difficult. He is trained in all of these.
 
-Which member of your family is in the society: Detail their skills. The job of being a slayer is handed down through family bloodline.
+Background: Juviale has worked hard his whole life, brought up by his single father with one older brother and one younger brother. His older brother was 10 years older than him, his younger 3 years younger. When he turned 8, his brother, 18 at that time, went on a mission and never came back. From then on, Juviale was determined to not follow in his brother's path. Along with this, he gained a want. A want to protect others, mainly his younger brother. This will, obviously, cause some problems.
 
-Background: Your character is going to become a monster slayer JUST TODAY. In other words, youre a normal American teenager.
+Note: The brother is something you could do something with if you wanted. Idk.