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 [個人製作][魔法少女小圓](きしゃー)アルティメットマミさん[全员]
 http://www.mediafire.com/?48d4b9qa4n1k9kk
 
 [Yoshiwo (Kanikama)] Ultimate Mami-san
 
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 Ultimate Mami-san
 
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-This doujin is for Ultimate Mami-san, so I'll leave this regular-sized Mami right here!
+This doujin is about Ultimate Mami-san, so I'll leave a regular-sized Mami right here!
 
 Ultimate Mami-san
 
 :  Tiro  •  Finale
 
 ---003---
 
-:  Mami-san has become a god!
+:  Mami-san turns into a goddess!
 :  She is the
 :  Ultimate Mami-san!
-:  Nice, Mami-san!
+:  NICE, Mami-san!
 
-:  Huhuhu... I have worked hard to get my second job.
+:  Huhuhu... I worked hard to get my second job.
 :  Second job only becomes available at LV 50!
-:  Is it okay to turn this into a game concept!?
+:  Is it okay to make this concept into a game!?
 First Job     --->   Second Job
 Shooter              Goddess
 
 ---004---
 
-:  Without any friends, Mami is bored and lonely, so she grind levels everyday after school!
+:  Mami is bored and lonely without any friends, so she grind levels after school everyday!
 :  Tiro  •  Finale
 BOOM
 LV UP^
 
-:  I have become an abstraction.  As a god,
+:  I have become a concept.  As a god,
 Float
 :  I can change the laws of the Universe!
 
 :  I wish all magical girls ♥ can become good friends ♥
 
-:  Hey, Mami-san, don't!  I hate this guy.
+:  Hey, Mami-san, stop!  I hate this guy.
 :  I don't like you either.
 :  Madoka is enough for me.
-:  Em.  If Sayaka or such wants to befriend me, I will have to consider.
+:  Oh.  If Sayaka really wants to be my friend, I will have to consider.
-:  Everyone please listen to Mami-san and get along--
+:  Everyone, please listen to Mami-san and get along--
 
-:  Sorry, Mami-san-
+:  Sorry, Mami-san—
 :  I refuse.
 
 ---005---
 
 : If everyone don't get along,
 : Then you must all die!!!
 
 :  Oh, Mami-san!
-:  Look at how nice we're too each other.
+:  Look at how nice we're to each other.
-:  Mami-san is invinsible as a concept... How troublesome.
+:  As a concept, Mami Tomoe is invinsible... How troublesome.
 :  This was how I died in the anime.
-:  And I was the one that took her out.
+:  And I had to take her out.
-Ah
+Ah!
 
 ---006---
 
-:  Ah..
+:  Well,
 :  Since Mami-san said so...
-:  Yea...
+:  Yea,
 :  It can't be helped.
 :  That's right...
-:  Since Mami Tomoe said so, then we should become more intimate...
+:  Mami Tomoe said we should become more intimate...
 :  Eh..
 :  Homura-chan?  Something is just not right..
 
 You finally understand  ♥
-Now all 5 of us together in LOVE & PEACE ♥
+Now all 5 of us can be together in LOVE & PEACE ♥
 
 Alone
 :  Kyouko, you're too close.
 :  Madoka Madoka Madoka Madoka
 Intimate
 Intimate
 
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-:  If I am by my lonesome,
+:  If I am by alone again,
 :  Then you must all die!!!
 
 :  Mami Tomoe!
 :  Mami-san!
 :  Mami-san!
 :  Mami!
 
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 :  Mami's power has become a problem...
 
 :  Madoka...
-:  I feel... I feel the power of the gods!
+:  I feel... I can become a goddess too!
 :  Eh?
 
-:  I feel I can make it!
+:  I can feel it!
-:  Feeling?  That's too cruel, Sayaka-chan!
+:  Feel?  That's bad luck, Sayaka-chan!
-:  Cruel, Sayaka-chan!
+:  Bad luck, Sayaka-chan!
 
-:  Her magic power is increasing!
+:  Her magical power is increasing!
-:  Is she really!
+:  Can she really!
 
-:  HaaH!
+:  Haa!
 
 ---009---
 
-:  My final form...
+:  This is my final form...
 :  Ultimate Sayaka-chan!
 
-:  Sayaka-chan... You didn't become a god, you turned into a Witch.
+:  Sayaka-chan... You turned into a Witch instead of a goddess.
 :  Ehh!
-Hurt
+Strike
-:  Shame.
+:  Bad luck.
 :  Ehh!
 
 --010---
-:  Transforming like this just for a power up, that doesn't change at all...
+:  Transforming just for a power up, that doesn't change anything at all...
-:  Pssh.
+:  Pssh!
 :  You sure are stupid...
-:  I really am an idiot!
+:  I am such a fool!
 :  Wait, who are you anyways?
 
 :  Be careful, Miki-san.
 
-:  The job of a goddess is to remove a magical girl before she turns into a witch...
+:  The job of a goddess is to remove magical girls before they turn into witches...
-:  If you stay this way you'll to taken away by the Laws of Cycles.
+:  If you stay this way, you'll be taken away by the Law of Cycles.
 :  What the heck is the Law of Cycles!
 
-:  You still have your humanity, so you're still wavering between magical girl and witch.
+:  You still have your humanity, so you're wavering between magical girl and witch states.
 :  Once you lose it, you'll be cycled!
 
 --011---
 
 :  Sayaka!  Hurry!  You'll be cycled!
-:  Eh!?  Can I really turn back!?  Wait, Kyouko!  Don't force it, my jaw will break!
+:  Eh!?  Can I turn back!?  Wait, Kyouko!  Don't force it, my jaw will break!
 :  And what is the Law of Cycles!
 
 :  Stop!  It's too big!
 :  Ahh ♥
-:  You have to, you have to!
+:  You have to.  You have to!
 :  Stopppppp!  I'm going to break!!!
 
 :  Phew...  I thought we won't make it.
 :  You almost got cycled.
-:  Don't show your tail.
+:  Your tail is showing.
 :  I am such a fool...
 
 :  Next Commandment!
 Shock
 
 ---012---
 
-The 5 of us will have tea party daily ☆
+The 5 of us will have tea party every day ☆
-Argh... This person is so annoying!
+Argh... This person is annoying!
 
 :  Ah!  That's wonderful, Mami-san!
 :  Madoka-!
-:  You don't have to agree with Mami-san's words!
+:  Don't agree with what she says!
 
 Law of Ending!
 
 
 ---013---
 
 Afterword
 
 Nice to meet you for the first-timers.
 And nice to see you again, my old friends.
-This is Kishaa Yoshiwo.
+This is Yoshiwo of Kishaa Circle.
 
-Unexpectly after the anime finish, merchandise increase rather than decreased...
+Rather than decreasing, there're more peripherals than ever after the anime finished...
 Then the movie edition starts.
 
-This is a story about Mami turning into a goddess (Ultimate).
+This is a story where Mami turning into a goddess (Ultimate form).
-But things she do is the same as before...
+But the things she do are the same as before...
-this is the sotry.
+... It's that kind of story.
 
 More importantly this is a November-only doujin.
-At this rate I won't make C81!
+At this rate, I won't make C81!
-This book came out around this time.
+This book finished around this time.
-If I can hurry and come otu with something new for C81 it'll be great.
+If I rush, maybe I can have something new for C81.  That'll be great.
 
-I am very thankful that this got to you.
+I am very thankful that this doujin got to you.
 
 
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 Ultimate Mami-san