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-Name:
+Name: Emilia "Glasmacher" Kirchner
 
-Appearance:
+Appearance:
 
-Age:
+6' 5" 1/2
 
-Personality:
+Emilia is a tall, lithe figure. No real astounding curvatures, being rather flat chested, and with no real hips, or thighs. Her skin is a pale, pale white, almost as a porcelain. She moves very unnaturally, rather like a doll. Her arms, and legs, more rotating, then they are organically moving, stiffened, even to the touch, and quite cold.
 
-Homeland:
+Her head is rather rounded, with a soft, thin, relatively unnoticeable nose, light features, with the same, pale white skin, only slightly opened up with a bit of warmth on her cheeks and nose, and light freckling under her eyes. Her eyes are wide, and glistening, almost appearing translucent like glass, with a hazy... pearly white rather than normal white. The colors of her eyes are completely black, making her appearance itself rather creepy, and blank as she rarely ever twitches.
 
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+She always wears a heavy make up on her face, glazed over her as a thin layer of glass perpetuated by her magic. It's mainly a heavy eyeliner and eyeshadow, in shiny glass like color that shifts as a prism rainbow. Her eye is in the center of a thin, harlequin diamond. Then the eye liner trails off to the sides. Over her face as a whole, is a thin glass like mask, making it appear shiny, though more movable like make up, though still clear enough to see her freckles. On each cheek, as well is a small dot of rainbow as her eye make up.
 
 Clothes:
-Any training in the Arcane arts?:
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 She dresses in a large, victorian-like dress, though more in sweet-lolita fashion, a large skirt that spreads out from her hips and down just below her knees, in three layers. Each layer is rather stiff, appearing more as a piece of glistening glass than a piece of fabric, though still moves to the touch, each fiber reflecting light separately. The top layer is a pastel pink, in a rather matte color, the middle the same reflecting rainbow, then a layer of white. Under her skirt, she wears white, linen stockings, with crosses stitched into the pattern, and lacing down the sides, with frills that reveal themselves just under the skirt. One her feet are a pair of glistening, clear, glass slippers, with a reflectively bow on top.
-Read: http://pastebin.com/nLvw8T9x for more details on the magic of this world.
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 Her top is a pink corset, tied with elaborate, sparkling white with a pink trim bowed. On top of this she wears a, frilly, poofed out coat, that hangs from her sides, with frills that lightly trail behind her into her skirt. Her shoulders are large frilled poofs, that counter into cross lacing down her arms, then into a larger frilling goes over her hand. Underneath, she wears a pair of sparkling, white gloves, with diamond openings over each finger, then into a gold cloth at each tip that taps when she touches something. Her neck is then covered up to her jaw, in a white, and pink neck piece, that keeps her head in place, from which she doesn't mind, instead never moving it out of sheer habit. The piece itself appears as a white, porcelain like glass, with a slight speckling of gold.
 
 Age: 30, though appears to be more like 20
 
-Background: Compile all you've written into a feasible background. BY THE WAY READ THIS ONLY NECESSARY PASTEBIN IN THE WHOLE ROLEPLAY: http://pastebin.com/d79dJBi9
+Personality: She is rather silent, though when she speaks, it is often dismissive, calling into question a person's very integrity. She speaks lightly though, very softly, with a royal arrogance about her, though also monotone, and emotionless. She moves more like a doll, than a person, and tends to stare or not even move when she doesn't want to, scaring off many people from her.
 
 	<Abilities>
-Artifacts
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 Thaumaturgical Essence: Glass
-Below this you will keep track of your current artifacts.
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 Artifacts: Crystal Well: A small crystal that can store the essentia of glass, or rather the stained glass that Emelia uses. All she has to do to refill it is break down material, rock, or glass, and store the energy into the well for later use.
 
 Glass Magic: By drawing out the essentia, she can quickly weave it into beautiful forms by the flick of the hand, utilizing it's energy through her very body, and simple motions that most can't see with their eyes.
-Thaumaturgical knowledge: For later/if you begin as a Thaumaturge.
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 -Common Applications-
 
 Mirror Wall: A large, mirror of glass that reflects energy or projectiles backwards at their thrower. The harder the hit however, the greater of a chance for it to break, however, it can still act as a temporary shield.
 
 Angel's Wings: The creation of large, rainbow, stained glassed, shard wings for flight, defense, and offense. The pieces can be thrown out as well as a thrown weapon at the cost of the wings.
-The dominant race is human.
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 Spear of Glass: A simple spear of glass, each time as it's own, exquisite piece of art.
-If you do not want to be human, discuss with me.
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 Glass Armor: A near invisible armor of glass that helps speed her movement, as well as acting as a last line of defense.
 
 Person in a Bottle: A bottle that can store an object, shrinking it down to fit. An unconscious person, or willing person can be shrunk down, but to escape they only have to break the thin glass wall itself.
 
 	<Background>
 
 Homeland: Malkan
 
 History:
 	Raised by a wealthy family that pilgrimaged to Malkan a few hundred years ago. They built an elaborate church at the top of a mountain. Her parents raised her to be an ideal daughter, never speaking out of line, to be seen rather to be heard. She was given a top notch education, with teachers imported in to teach her literature, poetry, painting, sculpting, song, and dance. When she was 17, about to be married, her parents were killed in a conflict with the war, leaving her orphaned. Calling off the marriage herself, she dedicated herself to thaurmaturgy, both as vengeance, but as well to seek the perfection she was raised to aspire towards.