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- Novice Review:
- Sooooooo aside from the skull spam, i think theres a few things you should work on before you can rank up x3
- The terrain is a bit flat in some places, so try and add more hills mountains or what have you, to make up for that.
- The structures are interesting, but theyre all done in different styles and dont match with the plot. Try to keep to a single theme and go from there. The structures that are on the plot though, are flat and dont have much detail. Try to add layers to the walls of the houses to create depth, and detail appropriately them with slabs, stairs, fences etc.
- The trees are decent, but theyre all the same size, so try to give them more variation by adding more that are different sizes and such.
- Lastly i want to talk about your Unicorn Cow Chicken Dragon.... ehm. okay so.. Smooth it out more, add some color to it, make the wings less 2D and give it a real head...
- mkay
- Good luck!
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