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- Hallo there Deveede021, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing you Novice plot....
- Structure:
- This is anything from houses to towers to castles. Your structure is missing some depth. Depth is the layers within a building/structure. You can add depth to a build by adding trap doors, fences, buttons, slabs, and stairs. You can add onto the slabs design you have, but make sure it fits in instead of trying to force it when it wont work. If you need a visual on how to do depth, visit /warp depthtutorial. this shows you how and how not to add depth to a building. Be creative and make your own instead of looking up a video or copying someone else's.
- Organics:
- This is anything living, like trees and animals. Your plot has really good organics, so I will not comment here. Great Job!!!
- Terrain:
- This is also good, so I will not critique here either. Great!!!
- Add depth and you are good to go!
- Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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