[IMPLEMENTED] Miscellaneous Fixes 4: (no) Salvation

If you request the Sand Mother to bolster and send out cum witches.
>You already convinced her to add more cum witches to her harem so that they might experience a little freedom.Many of them are prowling the desert sands even now,
Missing space.

Cum witch scene.
>laden with white witchseed
Missing space.

Carpenter buying wood.
>Do you buy the wood?You hand over 500 gems. “I’ll have the caravan deliver the wood to your camp as soon as you leave my shop,” he says.
It doesn't properly clear out the first sentence here.

Naga codex.
>It is possible to track the origin of any given Naga just by looking at the color of his tail..
Uncapitalize "naga" and remove the second period.

Corrupted Witch sex button [Grow a penis] should be capitalized as [Grow a Penis].

The secretarial succubus, omnibus overseer, and incubus mechanic all have 80 corruption when it should be 100. One could say the secretarial succubus is too pure for this world.

You can move from Zetaz's room to the one south of it without unlocking the door, but not the other way around. It also doesn't present the option to remove the bolt on the door anymore.

The living statue in Lethice's Stronghold has 100 corruption when it's not actually alive and simply animated marble. Change it to 0.

Incubus mechanic in the stronghold only has 80 corruption, change to 100.

The incubus drider could use a [Let Go] option as your choices consist of either fucking or killing it. Same for the faggot minotaur king. This only takes a sentence or two at most if you look at how the succubus gardener or the demon centaur have it outside.

Minitaur mob submit.
>your muff.The beast-men remove
Missing space.

>another brother.I can
Another missing space.

Phoenix bad end.
>[say: Hasta la vista, baby!]
Somehow, this is not silly mode. Then I remember this is Revamp's work and the world makes sense again.

Losing to Minerva.
>After healing your wounds, Minerva helps you up and holds toward you a freshly picked peach.
She doesn't actually heal your wounds. It would be a nice touch if you recovered 20% or so of your health.

Bimbo Sophie.
>(She probably gives great head...)
This feels really out of place. Most narration of this kind is pretty shit.

Imp horde camp.
>you moan and shake in pain.Finally the corrupt
Missing space.

Lottie.
>Do you take her up on the offer, or is it easier just to be exercise buddies?
This sentence could do with being on its own line to emphasize the choice.

>The pork-girl nods, albeit rather hesitantly — the last time you gave her something to try out, it certainly changed her figure
I've never given her anything.

>You ask her if she wants to meet you in the sauna for some 'stretches' — emphasising the last word heavily whilst making exaggerated quotation marks with your fingers. “Haha, I’m sorry [name], but to tell you the truth, my butt still hurts from the last time we stretched.
She says this even when I never fucked her in the ass. Also, "emphasizing".

>Her pace picks up while she bounces upon you, squeezing and squashing her perfect ass until one final lift in the air is met with her plunging your length up into her hot interior.
The rest of the whole scene up until the end I was questioning if it was her ass or pussy. A mention of it actually being her pussy would be welcome here.

Kelt being a faggot.
>I said stand up, fucker!]
Nice bracket.

Sheila.
>Sheila to the dry grass as you paint her body white.Both of your orgasms finish up
Missing space.

>You place one finger at the entrance to her pussy, dragging the wet fabric around h
Sentence cut off. No one still knows why.

Beating the bee girl.
>The sweet scent oozing from between her legs is too much to bear, arousing you painfully, and you see an easy way to relieve it..
Either add or remove a period.

Lizan rogue.
>The lizan raises his hands in defeat and you celebrate with a victory dance. You wonder what you should do to the lizan.
I REALLY dislike this.

Ass parasite.
>You and start masturbating intensely,

>You and then spontaneously ejaculate before you can even touch

>where it will eventually end up in the Bog.Maybe that’s where you got infected in the first place?
Missing space.

Release scent.
>The lizan rogue definitely seems to be enjoying the show. (7)Turn: 4
Might want to have it display something besides the default Tease text. Also a space after the lust damage.

For Mothman:
>Feeling her writhe in ecstasy below you brings you to the breaking point, and with one last violent thrust, you hilt yourself in her and erupt. The normally quiet moth manages to let out a full-fledged scream as she cums with you, quivering and thrashing in the throes of her orgasm.
A climax that drops off like a cliff.

Ceraph's camp text.
>What will you do with your slave?
This redundant text is appended in bold in her intro when you select her. It's also the only piece of text you have to scroll for.

Kid A Helspawn scene.
>Seldom get more than a single word from her at a time, how remarkable.
It's missing a "you" either before or after "seldom".

Camp.
>Valeria the goo-girl is currently lazing about camp. When she notices you looking her way, she extends a new arm out of her body mass and gives you a happy wave.
It says this even though I'm wearing her.

>You collapse, too turned on to fight any longer. Valeria’s on you in a heartbeat, her gooey greatsword pressed to your throat.
>“Do you yield?” she asks, not unlike a knight.
>You nod emphatically.
>“Tsk,” she sighs, shaking her head. “Only reason I tagged along with you is I thought you might actually have a chance, Champion. If you can’t beat little old me... Oh, whatever am I going to do with you?” she chuckles. “Well, since you’re so... eager... I might as well get my daily fluids while we’re here.”
(I removed spacing to put these sentences on the same line.) It says this after you use Wait several times when fighting Valeria and she has you covered in slime. Nothing happens, though, and the fight goes on as normal. It doesn't even have any effect on stats, and lust isn't maxed either.

If you buy something from Lumi it puts you back into her main menu instead of the shop one.

Bimbo Sophie bothering Izma at camp.
>`The drugged orange herm groans and drips another sticky bead of lust from her maleness.`
She's red, not orange.

Fucking plant Holli.
>It slithers in and out of you, pumping you inside, burrowing pleasure into your center even while stroking you from without.
"within", not "without".

Jojo leaving camp because of Holli.
>(Jojo is no longer a companion!)
This is glued on to the end of the previous sentence. Put this on a new line with a blank one above it.

Amily trying to leave camp because of Holli.
>[Make up Something]
Change this button name to something like "Think Excuse".

Tentacle beast loss.
>3 thorny tendrils appear and pierce your breasts and groin.
"three", not "3"

>The beast rears up to reveal a beak-like maw. It opens its massive jaws to reveal a tongue shaped like a large cock while its tongue, like any tentacle, immediately seeks out your defenseless pussy.
Weird sentence.

>Your hymen is torn, robbing you of your virginity. Your cunt is now a little loose.  Your body betrays your resistance
Double space.