ngmiller1 Plot Review

Hello ngmiller1!!!

My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. Let's start by talking about your structure.

As of now, the only structure on your plot is a huge tower. The abd thing about your tower is that it is lacking depth and detailing. It basically has plain walls with nothing on them. Try to use other blocks maybe relating to stonebrick/clay to add detail and depth to your structure. For reference, go to ./warp depthtutorial.

The organics that are on your plot is the serpent and one tree. I would like to see more trees on your plot due to the fact that u have so much extra space on the bottom. Try to work on improving to too by adding big roots, branches, and maybe air holes for realism. You serpent is pretty guud for an initiate but it needs some more smoothing and detail. If you were going for a draghun, it should have wings (oriental draghun being the exception). Try adding stuff like whiskers, spikes, arms, more detailed tail, etc.

Your terrain is ok. The arch needs some smoothing, try adding a variety of different blocks to the terrain besides just grass blocks, and detail the bottom of your river by making using sand/sandstone.

I believe that you need to work a little bit more on your plot, so i will be denying your plot. Good Luck and I hope you have better chances with your next submission! :D