Tayter_Kat

TENNENT2

Aug 16th, 2015
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  1. Hello TENNENT2, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your initiate plot...
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from houses to towers to castles. You have a decent house, but it is missing the depth needed. Depth is the layers within s structure. You can add depth by incorporating slabs, stairs, fences, trap doors, and buttons. If you need a visual example of depth, visit /warp depthtutorial.
  5. Organics:
  6. This is anything living, like animals and trees. You have a tree and it is decent but there is one thing I would change about it. I would add more leaves onto it to make it look more real. also, the leaves do not have to be in a specific shape, like a sphere. make it a bit random without going crazy.
  7. Terrain:
  8. This is anything involving the ground, like hills and cliffs. You have a decent cliff, but the bottom part is very flat. I would add more terrain, like hills and craters all around to fix this. ALso, you have two different block choices for the terrain. I would change one to match the other so it still fits the theme.
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  10. Fix the thing mentioned above and your good to go! Good Luck<3
  11. Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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