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Ashley JP Horror json Review 2

Mar 7th, 2021 (edited)
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  2. [textBlack:・Apparently there's something strange behind the school]@[textBlack:・People have heard strange voices]@[textBlack:・Might be a "power spot"?]@[textBlack:・There's an old shrine there] --> In the 1st line, "school" gets cut off; add another line break before "school".
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  5. (line break suggestion)
  6. Ashley: It's telepathy...right? Speaking directly to our@heads...?
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  9. Mysterious voice: 'Yes yes, but there's still one left, isn't there?@What do you think that means?' --> I think this line is supposed to be surrounded by quotes instead (since the voice's other lines were).
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